kahir88 Posted October 3, 2018 (edited) A mercenary's story: Part III If you missed, here is the previous parts: A mercenary's story: Part I A mercenary's story: Part II We left the young boy's story, when he entered the local prison, after he was captured after stealing. The guard escorted him in to the barracks courtyard, where another guard escorted him onward. The door opened, the darkness, the scent frightened the boy, but the guard tossed him inside, and down the stairs. - Move on! - shouted to him the jailer. - If you were brave enough to steal, don't be afraid from the dark... The door was locked, and Conrad was locked up, with other criminals. Thiefs, svindlers, murderers, all of them was locked away in this prison, until the sheriff came to town, to judge the criminals of the town. Conrad was never so afraid like now. He wished he wouldn't left his home. He missed the good old memories, when he played and made pranks, with his friends. Fortunately the others didn't bothered him, they took only the food from him, he was starving for days. The days passed slowly, but the final day draw near. Conrad almost lost hope, he was thinking, when he some way gets out of here, he will find the nearest churche, and sign up to be cleric, or a priest. It was the last day befor judgement. The others tired to catch the rat, to have a little fun, Conrad was sitting next to the iron bars. Suddenly the upper door opened and footsteps can be heard. The jailer was also surprised he didn't expect for anyone. He readied his weapon, and waited for the mysterious visitor. Could be he the sheriff, or some one else, who can redeem the boy and the others? To be continued... Spoiler Sorry, this is a bit short part of the story. But I not yet finished the next build for the story. To compensate here are some funny pictures: / Edited October 21, 2018 by kahir88 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mccoyed Posted October 3, 2018 Love the little details in here. The rathole, the studs above the jail bars, etc. All good stuff. It's unusual to see a large printed piece like that wall piece you have. Most AFOLs swear that stuff off, but I think they can work in the right build. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zoth33 Posted October 4, 2018 Nice little build. The prison is neat with the rat hole. I like the wall part above the prison and the arches. Nice job. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
W Navarre Posted October 4, 2018 I like the bonus details! And I don't think that's the sheriff . Although you never know! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
halixon Posted October 5, 2018 Very interesting parts usage! I like the architecture of the dungeon. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tezclatipoca Posted October 5, 2018 Nice little build, I like the arches with the lanterns, good job ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Last of Nergoue Posted October 5, 2018 i like the staircase! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Grover Posted October 9, 2018 Very nice! I love the chasing the rat. The story is great and I'm really interested to see how things turn out. I like the incorporation of some of the new elements (such as the small pyramid elements) as decoration. Very nice use of bricks to convey a very clear scene without too much confusing detail. Great job! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Muakhah Posted October 10, 2018 I like this origin story and look forward to seeing how he becomes a mercenary. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
soccerkid6 Posted October 15, 2018 Well done capturing the dismal atmosphere of jail with both the build and story. Brilliant incorporation of a rat's hole, and it's great seeing the prisoners trying to catch him and lure over the watchdog with key Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Henjin_Quilones Posted October 28, 2018 Nice little jail! I again appreciate the use of those studs above the gate, and the half-arches to hold the lanterns are also nice. I don't really like the inclusion of the printed panel in the back, but it does serve to break up the wall a bit. The little scenes of the inmates trying to get the dog and the rat are very funny, and well done! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites