Jeff of Clubs Posted December 13, 2021 (edited) This is meant to serve as my intro MOC for Oleon in BoBS. I will update my photo after I have my 10 compulsory posts in. 8:30am Local Time. The private office of Marshal DuQuesne (retired): DuQuesne: "Ah, Gabriel! I trust you found your stay in the dungeon...formative. Through my considerable largess, I have sprung you and reinstated your comission as a lieutenant in this man's army." Duquesne: "I want an invisible hand to discover what those Corries are up to. They say they want peace. BAH! I buy it not, sir! Sergeant!?!" Sergeant Hobbes: "SAR?" DuQuesne:"Brandish my saber towards those Correy knaves!" Sargeant Hobbes:"YES SAAAR!" DuQuesne:"Aaahh. That's a fine brandishing. Take your orders and get out of my apartment, Lieutenant. A man will knock those Irons off of you and provide a uniform at the door." Thanks all. SIGFIG: I think I submitted a proper free-build document? License submitted for a small residence in Fort Arltrees. Edited December 15, 2021 by Jeff of Clubs Licensing update Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Spud The Viking Posted December 13, 2021 Super first build and intro - wecome to BotBS! Loving the characters already, Gabriel looks like a mean so-and-so! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Professor Thaum Posted December 13, 2021 Yep, that's a nice entry, which fits well for an intro and a free property. Welcome to BoBS. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
evancelt Posted December 13, 2021 Nice intro build and welcome! The armless reveal is funny The final whole-MOC shot looks nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CapOnBOBS Posted December 13, 2021 Fine brandishing indeed. Great start! Sleeves are a sign of weakness. Fun character, looking forward to having him and you on the team! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jeff of Clubs Posted December 13, 2021 Thanks everyone! Stoked to get started. I got your messages and will be working on them today! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Garmadon Posted December 13, 2021 Great introduction to a character I'm looking forward to seeing more of! The general having lost both his arms definitely took me by surprise too - hilarious, and great little twist there! I'm intrigued by the hint at the background story too, and a warm welcome to BoBS! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ross Fisher Posted December 13, 2021 14 hours ago, Jeff of Clubs said: DuQuesne:"Brandish my saber towards those Correy knaves!" Brilliant. This is gonna be fun to read. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NOD Posted December 13, 2021 Interesting story, first released from prison and then appointed as a lieutenant. The Marshal's office looks fine. I like the elaborately built wooden wall, in which the rifle stand and a Drinks cabinet integrated. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Brickwolf Posted December 14, 2021 Great intro build! License it as a property! Welcome to Bobs! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bregir Posted December 14, 2021 Very interesting build, kicking off what could be a very interesting story! I shall be looking forward to potentially hunting that damned spy through the streets of Jameston, or whatever becomes relevant In all seriousness, I really like the idea of some sort of shadow organisation employing soldiers on the fringe of society for more unsavoury tasks - this will be interesting to follow! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Professor Thaum Posted December 14, 2021 7 minutes ago, Bregir said: I really like the idea of some sort of shadow organisation employing soldiers on the fringe of society for more unsavoury tasks - this will be interesting to follow! To hang the whole on the Sea Rats shoulders ! That's gross !!! I have to protest strongly ! Spoiler It gave me some horribles ideas gnerk gnerk gnerk ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jeff of Clubs Posted December 15, 2021 Thanks folks. I have no idea what his orders say so I'm just running with it and a few of your ideas... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Captain Braunsfeld Posted December 18, 2021 Welcome to BoBs. Only, the thing to do is to join Eslandola.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
