[O10 - Gorse - CE] Sector 17

[Professor Thaum]

*Your entry has earned 7 XP*

Gorse, at the foot of a landing pad, somewhere on the planet libration area. Contaminated area, Sector 17 limit.

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As everywhere the civilisation in accordance with nature leaves its mark.

Technology and environment in perfect symbiosis.

: C'mon Orel, let's dump the other and we're done. It's soon going to begin to get chilly right there !

 

***

Raint : We are lucky, you sent us a mandalorian ship on Mustafar director, it seems that we loose the corvette.

K. Kaas : I'm not director anymore, my boy, here and for now I'm lord Krakoo Kaas !

Raint : Lord Krakoo Kaas ? What happ...

K. Kaas : We works with Mandalorian Clan Eldar now, and they are fond of nice titles. Congratulation Raint,
you are now Lieutnant, "Ver'alor" for the Mandalorians...

Raint : But the Guild ?

K. Kaas : Forget the Guild, we are now proud warriors. You have, however, a lot to say about your trip, haven't you ?

: Sure, dir... Err, Lord Krakoo Kaas.

*** THE STORY OF RAINT ***

After losing all com with Chorlian III and my probes above Mustafar, I was soon chased by imperial TIEs.
The SSO being a mining exploration shuttle, I lacked the speed to shake the TIEs and I was shot despite desperate maneuvers.
I succeed in a crash landing, fortunately I was far enough of lava pits and lakes and close enough to a native village.

As they retain some grudge against imperials, the native provide me a lava flea and I could escape the AT-ST which were closing of the SSO wreckage.
With the Flea, I could reach the factory, were I was supposed to have my period.

But the imperial patrols were so numerous that I had to change my plans.

I traveled no far a ransacked stronghold, that the native were running scared about,

and there... I "heard" the voice.
Something really disturbing that was calling me in my mind.

: How very interesting it is !

: I enter the place, following "the voice"

It leads me to a cave, far beneath the stronghold, were it was hard to breath.

Finally I arrived in a bigger cave with a small lava pit, and the thing who called me.

 : And it was ?

  : You'd better have a look to my helmet visor recorder, it's so crazy to explain.
That was a big bronze head emerging from lava, crowned by a kind of spider, I've never seen before.
And the spider was carrying a metal helmet.

I don't fully remember the conversation with that "thing", but it was about what I need and what I want. Or what is needed or wanted.

But I'm not sure it was rather what it needed and what it wanted. Anyway, the spider gave me the helmet and I left.

I finally get out of the cave at the foot of the castle...
But it was just to came face-to-face with an imperial patrol of stormtroopers.
The "voice" order me to run and I realized that it came from the helmet rather than the spider, or the bronze head.

I was running to escape the patrol when Koko came to rescue and burnt the patrol down.

K. KAAS : And you bare handed stopped a laser shot during that showdown.

RAINT : Yes, as Koko and I already explained to you by hypercom.

 

C&C welcome as ususal. The vador castle pics being from wookiepedia, it has not to be judged (of course ) I choose not to display my micro here to avoid being branded as copy-paster, as my build was close enough of what we could find on the web.

some bonus pics under the spoiler :

 

Spoiler

 

it was inspired by that picture :

The Eye of Webbish Bogg :

 

Edited April 18, 2021 by goatman461

[caiman0637]

Nice story, cool builds!

[deraven]

Nice all-around, but that drippy, gunky stuff in first couple pictures feels so gross... it's great!  

[caiman0637]

1 minute ago, deraven said:

Nice all-around, but that drippy, gunky stuff in first couple pictures feels so gross... 

Yeah, it's great... that really caught me.

[Stuartn]

That looks great. I love the micro-scale mustafar. And the insect creature reminds me of the thing from the concept art of ep. IX

[MKJoshA]

Some nice builds here. Love the hefty building in your first pictures. The red drips from the drain are a great touch. I also love the microscale building. Do you want these all judged together or do you want to make 2 topics?

[Professor Thaum]

@MKJoshA

I think you may judge the whole together.

[marvelBoy123]

A nice build with some good textures (especially some drips from the drain). The mustafar builds are really nice too, though it seems strange to have so many of them on a build for Gorse.

[Professor Thaum]

EDITED by Prof. Thaum

 

[MKJoshA]

4 hours ago, Professor Thaum said:

Could the judges explain the score ? With all details !

@goatman461, @MKJoshA, @Darth Bjorn, etc, the whole gang.

 

Please be very precise.

 

Yeah, I'm sick over it !

 

 

Anyway, Never mind.

 

It's hard to judge multiple builds in 1 entry. If you had submitted them separately I think you would have gotten a higher overall score. For the builds themselves, there's a lot of brick stacking going on. I'd experiment with more SNOT work.

[Nicotoa]

Nice reference to the Vader comic series !

And I love that microscale Mustafar build.