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RocketBoy

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  1. The first Era Build! How exciting. I'll leave more feedback later, but a great job from everyone.
  2. Yeah! Yima has a bit of a complicated past (not all the people who wanted independence from the Republic were evil, but that doesn't mean he has no regrets from the war). I'd love to explore more of it later on. Thanks for knowing the characters!
  3. Great stuff! Wonderful use of space. I love that each level has something different going on, and that front facade is stunning.
  4. Yeah, I see what you're saying! I thought of the "roof" as a section of street, with the lower section being just a lower tier of the city. But I definitely get the feedback. Thank you!
  5. *Your entry has earned 28 XP* The Clone Wars rage across the galaxy, bringing fire and fury to a thousand worlds. Among them; the ancient sanctuary moon of Jedha, where a Republic Retrieval Squad charges through the teeming streets of the Holy City in pursuit of a Separatist agent. Captain Yima is a key leader in the uprisings on Hijo, his capture is vital to undermining the Free People's Army. Commander Owl's patience grows thin. How hard can it be to catch one man? MORE PHOTOS Thanks for looking!
  6. Dude, that's giant! I'd love to see more angles, if there are any. And some close-ups! If you upload your photos to Bricksafe you can post as many as you want without them clogging up any of your feeds.
  7. *Your entry has earned 14 XP* PHOTOS Thanks for looking!
  8. Brilliant setup. Welcome to the Fold, it's an honor to have you!
  9. Love the background texture and the yellow lines in the floor! C&C: The snow is a bit chunky, and I'm not sure that greebling wouldn't have been better where those transblue tiles are? I could see this with a little more dimension, like turned at an angle to show off some perspective, and maybe with a taller wall and something going on above? Man, a second catwalk above with another fight would be really cool. But I'm not gonna judge this based on what isn't there. Rad clones, your texturing is great, and the repeated elements in the wall gives it cohesion. Nice job
  10. The Resistance Y-Wing set is one of my favorite ship sets, it owns. But you really managed to bump up the level of detail and visual interest, and not in a "this is now very messy ugh" way. Somehow it looks just the right level of complex. I think that's down to you just having really good building instincts, as each of your builds so far has shown. Somehow clean and messy at the same time, ain't that just the WAY. Tasty. Also your desert looks dope, so smooth but with the right amount of bits and pieces. (I'm gonna dock ya a point on landscaping because you and I both know the rock situation, but it still looks good. That's a nice boulder. So just the one point.) Oh wow, look at that lime droid, didn't even see him there. that's a great color choice nice job Edit: I forgot this was for the Followers! Thank you! May the Force be with you and all that! I appreciate the help!
  11. Updated and reorganized. Added Tragedy on Ilum and a couple of one-shots.
  12. Cool terrain, and good color work! The edges are a little jagged and squared off, maybe some wedges or SNOT that's at the same plate level as the main surface would fix that. It'd be good if there was another element with the ground, maybe one of those termite mound-esque things, or a Geonosian statue, or some battle debris. Aren't quarter rounds just the best? Love those things. Edit: I like the story here, it's personal and evocative, even if the logic of a clone being allowed to work alone seems strange. (Weren't they raised ready to lose each other when they're deployed?) Still, there's more emotionally going on than with most clone stories, and it's cool to see.
  13. That would be awesome. I'll DM you a Discord link, in case you want to hop in and workshop ideas.
  14. Thanks! I did have a smaller probe designed to stick on as a head, or a hermit-shell like shoulder pad, but it felt like it detracted from the build over all.
  15. Thank you! The turret both rotates and can aim its guns! :D I completely agree with your feedback. Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Thank you guys! The turbolaser is an amalgam of lots of different ideas from various people's takes on it, I'm standing on the shoulders of giants with that one. Gosh, I'd love to see what you'd do with it. I've thought about eventually giving you Ilum! (But I'd only give you enough IP to make sure we'd all still get to see you do a build there...) It's a really compelling planet. I wonder if there's anywhere else the Empire made trenches? I agree with your feedback, some orange would've really made it pop.
  16. Great stuff, I love the texture on the left side. It would have been cool to see this at kind of an angle, rather than straight on, but that's personal preference I guess! Honestly, maybe tweaking that Stormtrooper in the back right so he's facing the table would do the trick.
  17. Nice characters and build! Maybe put the build photo first next time, and the character shots underneath? I especially like that pipe and cables. It's a little hard to tell what kind of room this might be, with the little ledge, the engineering pit, and the holotable, but I get wanting to include lots of elements in the one scene, totally cool.
  18. Beautiful! you're really nailing rockwork at this point.
  19. This is still just great. The only C&C I've got is that the black ladder looks out of place, but besides that, wonderful design.
  20. Fantastic sprawl. Such a bustling town, and really creative building designs with nice details. It's obvious how much work went into each and every wall and vehicle and bit of greebling. The exposed studs I'm going to treat as a stylistic thing, this thing is gonna score reeeealll well
  21. Little hard to see, but great figbarf! Big fan of the sand blue field commander.
  22. Incredible build. I wish there were more angled tiles on the struts between the body and the engines, but I get that's probably down to availability.
  23. Shriv! My man Shriv! Shriv: A Star Wars Story please.
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