Brickdoctor

"There's Lord Vader's flagship. Deploy fighters, and scan the area for the Millennium Falcon. This is your first test, loyal Imperial soldiers and pilots of Nar Eurbrikka. Do not let anyone leave the system!" "The Sentinels are ready for launch. We'll make contact with the Executor to obtain an update on the situation. All troops, prepare for assault. Spread out and establish checkpoints througout the city once your entire squads are clear of the dropships." "Troopers, you'll be carried in on the freighters and start in the lower levels. Pilots, launch the freighters as soon as we revert from hyperspace. Commander Piranha's fighters will be arriving just before we do, so you'll already have a fighter escort ready. Get as many civilians as you can out of the city. To your ships!" "The freighters are away." "All wings, report in. Lock S-foils in attack position." 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I do like the angles that you've incorporated into this vig; they fit the setting well. It resembles the style of the Avenger's bridge. Might try some tiles and some grilles in the floor to complement that, and perhaps some sort of control console somewhere? Do you want this MOC to be judged?

Sounds like you did a good amount of research, and it shows, because I love the bland, practical look of the room I think some kind of detailing in the walls and floors might make it 'pop' more, especially when dealing with a monochromatic style like this. Some grilles, some small sloped supports — little things like that that look Imperial in style, but aren't too obvious, just there to give some variation and avoid big stretches of flat grey. Also, it's fitting and hilarious that Star Wars bunk beds have no rails. Do you want this free build to be judged?

Looking good. Tatooine style of architecture is there, and I like this presentation better than that of your last vig, though the photography's a little dim still. I think the sand would look better if it was more three-dimensional, with small dunes and lumps of sand throughout the street. (Especially around corners and objects embedded in the sand where the sand can get caught and piled up, sheltered from the wind and/or prevented from eroding by objects in the sand.) One question: Why is there a tree in the middle of a street on Tatooine? Oh, do you want this MOC to be judged?

I like the smooth floor. Definitely something that helps the Death Star feel: a shiny black floor, along with those sloping supports Good job on the amount of background objects, too: enough to make it look like a busy hangar, but not too much, and pushed up against the wall, very Imperial in arrangement. I kind of wish that the wall was as smooth as the floor, maybe even with some exposed piping and an inset window. Oh, do you want this MOC to be judged?

Good start. I would like to see more storyline involved in this, and combined into one bigger diorama, as has been said. Maybe a little more solidified color scheme too: yellow trim on grey is good, red highlights on grey is good, but the yellow and red together look very CW-ish, and I would pick one or the other to be used sparingly with more greys.

Baelanith - Poisoned (1 Damage) Lord Lawrence Boomingham - Tome of Affluence (+10 Gold) Baelanith collapses as the Poison continues to take over his body. "You...are...victorious. "Ainonya, avatyara rohtanya..." You all gain XP, and Throlar levels up. The enemies drop one Elven Sword. The Party: Nerwen Calmcacil (Chromeknight) 262 year-old female elven Shaman Level 20.67 *Restoration* *Immune to Sealed* *Immune to Water* *Party Leader* Power: 35 (Level 20 + WP: 15 + Power Bonus: 0) Defense: 3 (SP: 3) Health: 40/40(Base HP: 9 + Level bonus: 19 + Class bonus: 9 + Artifact bonus: 3) Ether: 30/30 (Base Ether: 5 + Level bonus: 19 + Class bonus: 1 + Artifact bonus: 5) Gold: 106 Equipment: Magical Staff (WP: 15; Water-, Darkness-elemental; staff), Robe of the Archmagi (SP:3; Max Ether +5; Immune to Sealed; bodywear), White Cloak (Max HP +3; backwear), Barbarian’s Boots (Restoration; footwear) Inventory: Mourning Star (WP: 10; Fire-elemental; inflicts Fragile-effect; mace), Spider Leg (WP: 8; doubled vs. Flying enemies; spear), Bent Crowbar (WP: 8; 3x damage to Mechanic enemies; hammer), • Shackles of War (prevents anyone fleeing; accessory), Crocodile Handbag (Max Ether +2; Immune to Water; accessory), Lens of Speed Reading (Allows a scroll to be read in addition to a normal action; suitable for scroll users; accessory) • Diamond • Scroll of Sleep, Scroll of Sealing, Scroll of Blindness, Scroll of Weakening, Scroll of Confusion, Scroll of Frailty, Scroll of Armor Sundering (SP: -5; 50/50 chance of success), Scroll of Poisoning (Grants target’s weapon the Badly Poisoned-effect; costs 5 Ether), Scroll of Luck (Lucky; costs 10 Ether) • Grand Tonics (3), Tonic, Potions (2), Elixirs (3), Remedies (3), Phoenix Essences (3), Phoenix Incense, Essence of Sorrow (50% assassination chance on non-immune target), Venom, Fire Bombs (2), Ice Bombs (2), Lightning Bombs (2), Water Bombs (2), Dirt Bombs (2), Air Bombs (2), Bone, Milk (restores 15 HP and 15 Ether), Carrot (restores 5 HP, 10 to rabbits), Bright Polish, Raw Meat (Max HP +5), Double Rainbow, Dragon Scales (2) • Shovel, Bedroll, Magnifying Glass, Lord Lawrence Boomingham (Zepher) 46 year-old male human Paladin Level 26.67 *Counterstriking* *Immune to Fragile, Sleep, Weakened, and Blindness* *Encouraged* Power: 42 (Level 26 + WP: 11 + Power Bonus: 5) Defense: 12 (SP: 7 + SP: 5) Health: 49/49 (Base HP: 10 + Level bonus: 25 + Class bonus: 11 + Permanent bonus: 3) Ether: 25/25 (Base Ether: 0 + Level/Class bonus: 25) Gold: 13 (Owes 128 Gold to Arthur Justus Regulus VII [Flipz], 1 Gold to Bartholomew Docken [brickdoctor], and 75 Gold to Sorrow [Endgame]) Equipment: Scupperer (WP: 11; Darkness-, Fire-elemental; inflicts Bleeding and Badly Poisoned; great sword) Round Metal Shield (SP: 7), Counterstrike Gloves, Heavy Armor (SP: 5; Immune to Fragile), Tome of Affluence (+10 Gold if equipped for the entirety of a battle; Immune to Sleep, Weakened, and Blindness; accessory), *Pseudo's Blessing's Blessing (+4 Power; not an artifact)* Inventory: Frozen Saber (WP: 9; Light-, Ice-elemental; inflicts Stunned; great sword), • Marksman's Monocle (Misses are rerolled), Hood of Belthazar Bluehood (Power +4; Ether -6; headwear), • Garnet, Sapphire, • Scroll of Blindness, Scroll of Weakening, Scroll of Fragility, Scroll of Sealing, • Meads (5), Mulled Wine, Fire Brandy (Encouraged, Immune to Ice), Emerald Lamp of Summoning, Hamantasch (Lucky, Blessed), Admantite Shard (1/4 of a piece of Adamantite), Tonic, Milk, • Bedroll Throlar Wineghilm (Lord Duvors) 134 year-old male dwarven Knight Level 2 Power: 5 (Level 2 + WP: 3 + Power Bonus: 0) Health: 11 (Base HP: 10 + Level Bonus: 1) Defense: 2 (SP: 2) Gold: 7 Equipment: Mace and Chain (WP: 3), Round Shield (SP: 2), Jester's Hat (Wearer may choose to gain one immunity from targeted enemy; headwear) Inventory: Potion • Bedroll Party Leader, divide the loot: Elven Sword (WP: 5; longsword) - This elvish metal sword was standard-issue for the armies of Lord Keveak.

You check under all the tables, behind all the pillars, and in all the shadows, but you can see no one.

QM Note: Ah, you're right. I'll edit the posts for the Rounds I've already done, and then I'll end the battle in a couple hours when my computer is at a place that has internet. You can see no traps in either the throne or the banner. The throne appears to be just a seat with no malicious funtions, and the banner appears just to be one of a victorious conquering army, hung carelessly on the wall.

Yes, they're pictures of near-finalized sets shown to retailers through a product catalog. The sets are subject to change between the printing of the Confidential watermarked photos and the release of the set, but the set is real. (Although as with plenty of graphics, it is possible to fake the watermark in Photoshop, so you can't call it a complete guarantee that a set is real. But there's usually a good chance that it is.)

It's just the rank improvement, and XP does not get deducted after you rank up; you need 15 XP to get from the (actually it's the second, counting the starting rank) second rank to the third.

It means that if you want to build something that's completely ridiculous and/or blatantly breaks the rules of free builds, then that MOC won't be judged and won't be considered a part of the canon storyline, no matter how good it is and no matter whether or not you want it to be one of your four judged free builds. The rule was added with the thought that players might want to explore the Shadows of Nar Eurbrikka setting outside of what their character experiences.

I use a Phoenix Essence on Hybros before attacking Avery from the Back Row with my Darksteel Crossbow.

Results of Round Ten of the Brawl in the Dragon's Head: Throlar Wineghilm vs. Baelanith - Critical Hit ((3*2)+1-1=6 Damage) Nerwen Calmcacil vs. Baelanith - Special Damage (Elven Harming; No effect) Lord Lawrence Boomingham vs. Baelanith - Damage (No effect) Baelanith - Poisoned (1 Damage) With Barty and Throlar's shield protecting you, you all charge forwards, Baelanith's counterattacks being blocked and rendered harmless as he takes damage. The Enemies: Baelanith Humanoid *Poisoned* Level: 5 Health: 0/12 Defense: 1 Special I: Elven Harming - Baelanith's elven reflexes and precision allow him to find a weak spot in the target's defenses, and he deals 10 Damage. Special II: Elven Healing - Baelanith's elementary knowledge of elven healing techniques allows him to restore 5 HP to himself. Drops: Elven Sword Note: Specials alternate. Baelanith's broken fingers decrease his current HP and his ability to wield a sword effectively. If healed to full HP, his Level will increase back to 5. The Party: Nerwen Calmcacil (Chromeknight) 262 year-old female elven Shaman Level 20.5 *Restoration* *Immune to Sealed* *Immune to Water* *Party Leader* Power: 35 (Level 20 + WP: 15 + Power Bonus: 0) Defense: 3 (SP: 3) Health: 40/40(Base HP: 9 + Level bonus: 19 + Class bonus: 9 + Artifact bonus: 3) Ether: 30/30 (Base Ether: 5 + Level bonus: 19 + Class bonus: 1 + Artifact bonus: 5) Gold: 106 Equipment: Magical Staff (WP: 15; Water-, Darkness-elemental; staff), Robe of the Archmagi (SP:3; Max Ether +5; Immune to Sealed; bodywear), White Cloak (Max HP +3; backwear), Barbarian’s Boots (Restoration; footwear) Inventory: Mourning Star (WP: 10; Fire-elemental; inflicts Fragile-effect; mace), Spider Leg (WP: 8; doubled vs. Flying enemies; spear), Bent Crowbar (WP: 8; 3x damage to Mechanic enemies; hammer), • Shackles of War (prevents anyone fleeing; accessory), Crocodile Handbag (Max Ether +2; Immune to Water; accessory), Lens of Speed Reading (Allows a scroll to be read in addition to a normal action; suitable for scroll users; accessory) • Diamond • Scroll of Sleep, Scroll of Sealing, Scroll of Blindness, Scroll of Weakening, Scroll of Confusion, Scroll of Frailty, Scroll of Armor Sundering (SP: -5; 50/50 chance of success), Scroll of Poisoning (Grants target’s weapon the Badly Poisoned-effect; costs 5 Ether), Scroll of Luck (Lucky; costs 10 Ether) • Grand Tonics (3), Tonic, Potions (2), Elixirs (3), Remedies (3), Phoenix Essences (3), Phoenix Incense, Essence of Sorrow (50% assassination chance on non-immune target), Venom, Fire Bombs (2), Ice Bombs (2), Lightning Bombs (2), Water Bombs (2), Dirt Bombs (2), Air Bombs (2), Bone, Milk (restores 15 HP and 15 Ether), Carrot (restores 5 HP, 10 to rabbits), Bright Polish, Raw Meat (Max HP +5), Double Rainbow, Dragon Scales (2) • Shovel, Bedroll, Magnifying Glass, Lord Lawrence Boomingham (Zepher) 46 year-old male human Paladin Level 26.33 *Counterstriking* *Immune to Fragile, Sleep, Weakened, and Blindness* *Encouraged* Power: 42 (Level 26 + WP: 11 + Power Bonus: 5) Defense: 12 (SP: 7 + SP: 5) Health: 49/49 (Base HP: 10 + Level bonus: 25 + Class bonus: 11 + Permanent bonus: 3) Ether: 25/25 (Base Ether: 0 + Level/Class bonus: 25) Gold: 3 (Owes 128 Gold to Arthur Justus Regulus VII [Flipz], 1 Gold to Bartholomew Docken [brickdoctor], and 75 Gold to Sorrow [Endgame]) Equipment: Scupperer (WP: 11; Darkness-, Fire-elemental; inflicts Bleeding and Badly Poisoned; great sword) Round Metal Shield (SP: 7), Counterstrike Gloves, Heavy Armor (SP: 5; Immune to Fragile), Tome of Affluence (+10 Gold if equipped for the entirety of a battle; Immune to Sleep, Weakened, and Blindness; accessory), *Pseudo's Blessing's Blessing (+4 Power; not an artifact)* Inventory: Frozen Saber (WP: 9; Light-, Ice-elemental; inflicts Stunned; great sword), • Marksman's Monocle (Misses are rerolled), Hood of Belthazar Bluehood (Power +4; Ether -6; headwear), • Garnet, Sapphire, • Scroll of Blindness, Scroll of Weakening, Scroll of Fragility, Scroll of Sealing, • Meads (5), Mulled Wine, Fire Brandy (Encouraged, Immune to Ice), Emerald Lamp of Summoning, Hamantasch (Lucky, Blessed), Admantite Shard (1/4 of a piece of Adamantite), Tonic, Milk, • Bedroll Throlar Wineghilm (Lord Duvors) 134 year-old male dwarven Knight Level 1 Power: 4 (Level 1 + WP: 3 + Power Bonus: 0) Health: 10 (Base HP: 10) Defense: 2 (SP: 2) Gold: 7 Equipment: Mace and Chain (WP: 3; Poisoned), Round Shield (SP: 2), Jester's Hat (Wearer may choose to gain one immunity from targeted enemy; headwear) Inventory: Potion • Bedroll Party Leader, choose the order of actions. All combatants, choose your targets and the Row you want to fight in. Also mention if you want to try to flee, move, heal, cast a magic spell, use an item instead of attacking, or attempt something else outside the box. Any enemy not targeted will get a Free Hit on the party after everyone has acted.

QM Note: Attempting to run a Round from a phone... color hex codes memorized, BBCode committed to heart, *deep breath*, hopefully I don't make a mistake and have to sift through the code of this post later on this tiny screen. Results of Round Nine of the Brawl in the Dragon's Head: >Throlar Wineghilm vs. Baelanith - Sentinel (Party is immune to Damage next Round.) Lord Lawrence Boomingham vs. Baelanith - Guardian Angel (Party immune to Damage and effects next Round.) Nerwen Calmcacil does nothing. Baelanith - Poisoned (1 Damage) Throlar, you decide to raise your shield again, seeing your more powerful allies coming in to attack. But not to be outdone, Boomingham, out comes you angel instead; Barty taking Throlar's place in front of the party as if to say, 'This is what immunity looks like, newbie.' The Enemies: Baelanith Humanoid *Poisoned* Level: 5 Health: 7/12 Defense: 1 Special I: Elven Harming - Baelanith's elven reflexes and precision allow him to find a weak spot in the target's defenses, and he deals 10 Damage. Special II: Elven Healing - Baelanith's elementary knowledge of elven healing techniques allows him to restore 5 HP to himself. Drops: Elven Sword Note: Specials alternate. Baelanith's broken fingers decrease his current HP and his ability to wield a sword effectively. If healed to full HP, his Level will increase back to 5. The Party: Nerwen Calmcacil (Chromeknight) 262 year-old female elven Shaman Level 20.5 *Restoration* *Immune to Sealed* *Immune to Water* *Party Leader* Power: 35 (Level 20 + WP: 15 + Power Bonus: 0) Defense: 3 (SP: 3) Health: 40/40(Base HP: 9 + Level bonus: 19 + Class bonus: 9 + Artifact bonus: 3) Ether: 30/30 (Base Ether: 5 + Level bonus: 19 + Class bonus: 1 + Artifact bonus: 5) Gold: 106 Equipment: Magical Staff (WP: 15; Water-, Darkness-elemental; staff), Robe of the Archmagi (SP:3; Max Ether +5; Immune to Sealed; bodywear), White Cloak (Max HP +3; backwear), Barbarian’s Boots (Restoration; footwear) Inventory: Mourning Star (WP: 10; Fire-elemental; inflicts Fragile-effect; mace), Spider Leg (WP: 8; doubled vs. Flying enemies; spear), Bent Crowbar (WP: 8; 3x damage to Mechanic enemies; hammer), • Shackles of War (prevents anyone fleeing; accessory), Crocodile Handbag (Max Ether +2; Immune to Water; accessory), Lens of Speed Reading (Allows a scroll to be read in addition to a normal action; suitable for scroll users; accessory) • Diamond • Scroll of Sleep, Scroll of Sealing, Scroll of Blindness, Scroll of Weakening, Scroll of Confusion, Scroll of Frailty, Scroll of Armor Sundering (SP: -5; 50/50 chance of success), Scroll of Poisoning (Grants target’s weapon the Badly Poisoned-effect; costs 5 Ether), Scroll of Luck (Lucky; costs 10 Ether) • Grand Tonics (3), Tonic, Potions (2), Elixirs (3), Remedies (3), Phoenix Essences (3), Phoenix Incense, Essence of Sorrow (50% assassination chance on non-immune target), Venom, Fire Bombs (2), Ice Bombs (2), Lightning Bombs (2), Water Bombs (2), Dirt Bombs (2), Air Bombs (2), Bone, Milk (restores 15 HP and 15 Ether), Carrot (restores 5 HP, 10 to rabbits), Bright Polish, Raw Meat (Max HP +5), Double Rainbow, Dragon Scales (2) • Shovel, Bedroll, Magnifying Glass, Lord Lawrence Boomingham (Zepher) 46 year-old male human Paladin Level 26.33 *Counterstriking* *Immune to Fragile, Sleep, Weakened, and Blindness* *Encouraged* *Guardian Angel* Power: 42 (Level 26 + WP: 11 + Power Bonus: 5) Defense: 12 (SP: 7 + SP: 5) Health: 49/49 (Base HP: 10 + Level bonus: 25 + Class bonus: 11 + Permanent bonus: 3) Ether: 25/25 (Base Ether: 0 + Level/Class bonus: 25) Gold: 3 (Owes 128 Gold to Arthur Justus Regulus VII [Flipz], 1 Gold to Bartholomew Docken [brickdoctor], and 75 Gold to Sorrow [Endgame]) Equipment: Scupperer (WP: 11; Darkness-, Fire-elemental; inflicts Bleeding and Badly Poisoned; great sword) Round Metal Shield (SP: 7), Counterstrike Gloves, Heavy Armor (SP: 5; Immune to Fragile), Tome of Affluence (+10 Gold if equipped for the entirety of a battle; Immune to Sleep, Weakened, and Blindness; accessory), *Pseudo's Blessing's Blessing (+4 Power; not an artifact)* Inventory: Frozen Saber (WP: 9; Light-, Ice-elemental; inflicts Stunned; great sword), • Marksman's Monocle (Misses are rerolled), Hood of Belthazar Bluehood (Power +4; Ether -6; headwear), • Garnet, Sapphire, • Scroll of Blindness, Scroll of Weakening, Scroll of Fragility, Scroll of Sealing, • Meads (5), Mulled Wine, Fire Brandy (Encouraged, Immune to Ice), Emerald Lamp of Summoning, Hamantasch (Lucky, Blessed), Admantite Shard (1/4 of a piece of Adamantite), Tonic, Milk, • Bedroll Throlar Wineghilm (Lord Duvors) 134 year-old male dwarven Knight Level 1 *Sentinel* Power: 4 (Level 1 + WP: 3 + Power Bonus: 0) Health: 10 (Base HP: 10) Defense: 2 (SP: 2) Gold: 7 Equipment: Mace and Chain (WP: 3; Poisoned), Round Shield (SP: 2), Jester's Hat (Wearer may choose to gain one immunity from targeted enemy; headwear) Inventory: Potion • Bedroll Party Leader, choose the order of actions. All combatants, choose your targets and the Row you want to fight in. Also mention if you want to try to flee, move, heal, cast a magic spell, use an item instead of attacking, or attempt something else outside the box. Any enemy not targeted will get a Free Hit on the party after everyone has acted. QM Note: I'll autoroll in about fifteen minutes if you haven't posted actions. Want to make sure the posts won't merge, because if I make a mistake, I don't want to have to edit the post on a phone when there are two Rounds in a post.

"If you fall in battle, soldier, a hundred recruits from the Rim and officers from Carida will take your place. Now if only they could learn to shoot decently..."

Post them in the main forum; announce it in "Redemption". (See the 'Where to Post What' section of the Core Rules.)

QM Note: He wouldn't gain any since he wouldn't be on a winning side, just surviving having done nothing. If he attacks Baelanith, I'll let him switch over to the party's side and he can get XP.

I'm not completely sure as to what GoH's rules are now. For Shadows of Nar Eurbrikka, read over the rules regarding what is appropriate for free builds in the Core Rules, post the build in a new topic in the main SW forum, you can announce it in your faction's roleplaying topic (Redemption for you), and then you should state in the MOC's topic whether or not you want it to be judged.

And when Chrome TC-14 came out last year, I bought only the Kingdoms Joust, and I got the promo without any problems despite a "Star Wars purchase" being mentioned, so, anybody's guess...

Being careful to avoid being seen together, the three of you make your way towards the Meeting Hall. The Party at the Meeting Hall: Ellaria Arbour (Sandy) 22 year-old female human Druid Level 22.33 *Invisible* *Immune to Sealed* *Lucky* Power: 35 (Level 22 + WP: 10 + Power Bonus: 3) Defense: 3 (SP: 3) Health: 37/37 (Base HP: 9 + Level bonus: 21 + Class bonus: 7) Ether: 34/34 (Base Ether: 5 + Level bonus: 21 + Class bonus: 1 + Artifact bonus: 5 + Permanent bonus: 2)[/font] Gold: 25 Equipment: Ignis Fatuus (WP: 10; Fire-, Lighting-elemental; staff), Black Bandana (Power +3; pirate lingo; headwear), Robe of the Archmagi (SP:3; Max Ether +5; Immune to Sealed; bodywear), Spirit Robe (Wearer is invisible for the first 3 Rounds of battle so they do not take Free Hits; backwear) Inventory: Unlucky Horseshoe (WP: 13; inflicts Jinxed; throwing weapon), Sylvania's Crossbow (WP: 7; Wood-elemental; crossbow), Wizard's Staff (WP: 1; Fire-, Wind-, Water-, Earth-elemental; staff), • Tricorne (SP: 3; headwear), Sterile Gloves (Immune to Poisoned and Badly Poisoned; handwear), • Scroll of Inspiration (Inspired; costs 10 Ether; 50/50 chance), Scroll of Sealing, • Potion, Grand Potions (2), Health Cores (4), Tonic, Grand Tonics (6), Ether Core, Elixir, Remedy, Neutralizer, Tiger Balm, Phoenix Essences (2), Mead, Nostrum, Soma, Deadly Venom, Smoke Bombs (2), Flash Bomb, Fire Bombs (3), Ice Bomb, Lightning Bombs (2), Water Bombs (2), Holy Bombs (2), Bones(2) • Bedroll, Pickaxe, Telescope, Magic Compass, Magnifying Glass Arthur Justus Regulus VII, a Hero Who is Actually Worth Something (Flipz) 21 year-old male human Mystic Knight Level 26.33 *Immune to Poisoned, Badly Poisoned, and Fragile* *Lucky* *Encouraged* Power: 38 (Level 26 + WP: 12 + Power Bonus: 0) Health: 26/41 (Base HP: 5 + Level bonus: 25 + Class bonus: 7 + Permanent bonus: 4) Ether: 31/31 (Base Ether: 5 + Level bonus: 25 + Class bonus: 1) Defense: 10 (SP: 5 + SP: 5) Gold: 454 (Owed 128 Gold by Lord Lawrence Boomingham (Zepher) and 70 Gold by En Sabah Nur (Jebediahs) Equipment: Sir Roderick's Sword (WP: 12; longsword), Arm Shield (SP: 5), Duke's Coat-of-Arms ( SP: 5; Immune to Poisoned, Badly Poisoned, and Fragile; suitable for Knights, Dragoons, Skirmishers, and Regulators; bodywear), Zap-Tap Badge (1/2 chance to deal Electric-elemental Damage to an opponent who has dealt Damage to a hero, equal to the hero's level; accessory), Overkill Gloves (+1 gold for every point of Damage extra when defeating an enemy; handwear) Inventory: Staff of the Cultist Battlemage (WP: 7; 50% chance of Fleeing upon being KO'd; staff), Hollow Blade Dagger (WP: 6; Hollow Blade [Mulled Wine]; dagger), Staff of Ennon (WP: 5; Light-elemental; +2 Ether on rolls of 2, 3, 4), Healing Staff (WP: 5; Healing effect), Ammit (WP: 6; +5 Ether for each kill; great sword), • Scarf of Misfortune (Wearer deals the Jinxed effect on every third round; accessory), Shackles of War (Prevents anyone from fleeing battles; accessory), Cloak of Deception (Free Hits against the wearer have a 1/6 chance to be redirected to a random opponent; backwear), Ancient Crown (First successful strike of battle deals Cursed-effect; headwear), Sticky Gloves (Increases the amount of gold stolen by 50%, suitable for Rogues and Beast Warriors; accessory), Stingy Gloves (Prevents enemies from ever stealing gold from the wearer; handwear) • Opal, Amethyst, Topaz, Diamond, Garnet, Sapphire, Emerald • Scroll of Recklessness (Encouraged and Fragile; costs 5 Ether; 50/50 chance), Scroll of Blindness, Scroll of Sleep, Scroll of Weakening • Grand Potions (11), Remedies (8), Elixirs (4), Nostrums (5), Smelling Salts (3), Meads (5), Jinxy Juices (2), Ether Core, Noxious Venom (Badly Poisoned and Confused; 3 Rounds), Zoot's Plaything, Chaotic Bomb (100 random elemental Damage), Tesla Bomb (20 Lightnng-elemental Damage), Tonic, Grand Tonics (12), Double Rainbow (Encouraged, Lucky, Confused, and Poisoned), Bright Polish, Ambrosia, Exterlate, Phoenix Essences (2), Emergency Essence, Grating Stone, Smoke Bombs (5) • Bedroll, Telescope, Shovel, Magnifying Glass, Pickaxe, Magic Compass Ahvialyn (NPC) Female elven Rogue Level 17 Power: 37 (Level 17 + WP: 20) Health: 23/23 (Base HP: 7 + Level bonus: 16) Defense: 3 (SP: 3) Gold: 10 Equipment: Mythril Dagger (WP: 20; may be used as a melee or a throwing weapon), Elven Plate Armor (SP: 3; bodywear), Cloak of the Elven Spy (Wearer may examine enemy stats before a battle; backwear) Inventory: Backup Dagger (WP: 5) • Health Core, Grand Potion, Potion, Elixir, Remedy, Smoke Bomb, Venom, Deadly Venom • Bedroll When your knocks are not answered, you push gently on the doors of the hall, and the creak open easily. The hall is about a hundred studs in length, built in the same style as the Dragon's Head Tavern was, with wooden pillars down the length of its central hallway. At the end of the hallway, you see a large stone chair set against the wall. Almost throne-like in appearance, the chair is flanked by a pair of small tables and a pair of pedestals. One of the pedestals supports the remains of a statue of a knight that has since toppled over and now lies in pieces across the stone floor; the other is now being used as a stand for a keg of some beverage. Down the length of the hall run some long tables improvised from doors and planks set on short stools. An elven coat of arms and banner hangs askew above the chair, and chandeliers hang from the rafters, half of the candles lit, half of them smoldering. Bottles and goblets lie strewn across the floor and tables. The hall is conspicuously devoid of people, and, save for the occasional crackle of candles, silent. "Once, the wealthy merchants who founded R'kilf fancied themselves knights-errant and protectors of the village. With lances in lance-racks, old bucklers, lean hacks, and a greyhound for coursing, they held court in this hall. Whenever they were at leisure, which was mostly all the year round, they gave themselves up to reading books of chivalry with such ardor and avidity that they almost entirely neglected the management of their property."

"He tended to spy even on his fellow elves, taking advantage of his cloak that could make him invisible, letting Lord Keveak know ahead of time of what other elves had planned so that Lord Keveak could beat them to it and take credit for the idea. It made him annoying and impossible to trust."

This looks pretty good. I like the idea of a smaller door in the base leading to skinny wooden bridges scattered across the swamps, like the path through the Dead Marshes, and I like the basic color scheme and shaping. I think I would go with a brick-built solution for the bridge instead of the pre-fab piece; brick-built solutions pretty much always look better than pre-fab solutions. And maybe some color variation in the swamp with some trans pieces so it's clear that it's a swamp and not a grassy plain. You didn't specify, so I will ask: do you intend for this free build to be judged or not?