[MOC] Adventure Half-Track

[Dorino]

Hello everyone!

Before my dark ages Johnny Thunder was one of my favourite lines. Here is my half track based on that line. This is my first non-technic moc since very long time. Thanks :)

IMG_0508 by Wiktor Boroń, on Flickr

IMG_0506 by Wiktor Boroń, on Flickr

IMG_0507 by Wiktor Boroń, on Flickr

IMG_0509 by Wiktor Boroń, on Flickr

IMG_0510 by Wiktor Boroń, on Flickr

IMG_0504 by Wiktor Boroń, on Flickr

Edited March 28, 2018 by Dorino

[deraven]

Nice.  Great setup on the flat railcar, too.  I think it could use a windscreen, though- perhaps just a 1x4x1 trans-clear panel where the last stud of that 2x4 tile at the top of the hood is (directly behind the steering wheel and clipping on top of the brackets for the mirrors, or it might be more keeping in character for the vehicle to use a 4625 finger hinge tile with the 1x4 trans-clear windscreen piece so it can be flipped down.

Regardless, it's really nice.  The way you did the track and the fuel tanks on the undercarriage look really good, and nice shaping overall.  

[iammac]

I could say, welcome back from the dark side.  Your halftrack looks really good! I agree with deraven about the windshield though. So do you have any other mocs in the works? perhaps this will be a right-old Henty style battle train!

[sander1992]

That is a nice car.

I love the use of Tan and new pieces in the car.

When I look at the back of the car, it feels unfinished. Perhaps you can make it more like a truck based on 5988 or 7622.

I love the pallet with crates and the flat train car.

[LegoMathijs]

Nice halftrack! 

[Dorino]

Thanks everyone for suggestions! I added the windshield and redesigned back. I also added spare wheel :)

20180128_140959 by Wiktor Boroń, on Flickr

20180128_140943 by Wiktor Boroń, on Flickr

20180128_140938 by Wiktor Boroń, on Flickr

Edited March 28, 2018 by Dorino

[ArchitectureFan]

Fine vehicle. The redesign is a good improvement!