Commander Beltar Posted July 17, 2015 (edited) Location: A04, Myndernis Tags: Military, Spaceship, Land Veichle ============================================================================================================================ Begin Log, Chapter 1, Part: 009: “THAT BACKSATABIN’ IDIOT! Paul: Sir, We are breaching the upper atmosphere, the windshield cannot withstand this amount of pressure at the speed we are coming in. Also, some form of acid is melting off the grey plating. We have got to pull up! B: I can land this hunk of junk. I gotta. She’ll hold together. YOU’D BETTER HOLD TOGETHER! PauL: The windshield is cracking. Sir! SIR! B: Ah SHUT UP AND LET ME FLY THIS THING … PauL: SIR, PULL UP! *Boom* *The cockpit of the Heart of Aesomnium slides across the rugged terrain on Myndernis* B: Ughh---That. Was fun. Really reminded me of the old days. BUT SERIOUSLY, WHY DID WE END UP HERE? PauL: I…kzkkk..don’t know. B: So, we gotta pass the time somehow. How are you today? PauL: Sir, I’m ‘jammed’, I can’t get out of the socket. B: That’s..great…Ship Status Report? PauL: Engine is shot black, almost out of reserve power, 96.4% of the controls are broken, and a lot of other functions are broken. B: Wonderful. Any idea when rescue is coming? PauL: Assuming they have a base on this planet, within the next 24 Hours. B: Okay. Wait. One sec, I gotta move. B: Alright, all better now. PauL: Sir, I would not advise sitting on that ground. B: I’LL BE FINE! GOT IT? PauL: Siryessir. Mysterious Figure: Oh ho! What iz zis? A fine specimen! B: WHO ARE YOU, GET LOST, AWAY YOU MANTIS SCUM? Mysterious figure: Oh nono! I am none of this Mantis thou speak off! B: WHAT DO YOU WANT? Mysterious figure: Allow me to introduz myzelf firzt! Robinhood: I. Am ze Robinhood! Beltar: What. The. H*** You’re a…fairy tale character? Aren’t you? Robinhood: Oh no no! I was one of the original astronauts sent to map this galaxy, but I went missing on purpose due to the lack of thou fair pay! And you can call me Robin! B: Then what do you even want? Robinhood: Well, stuff! Iz rare to find good free ztuff around! B: Let me see what I have around. B: Alright, this is all I got, a sword and a drill. Robinhood: Oh, thank you! Not that nice little robot though? B: Well. He’s mine, and he’s ‘jammed’. Robinhood: Oh PauL: Sir, I’m not ‘jammed’ but I really am jammed! B: Yeah yeah yeah. Hey Robin, isn’t that a Kawashita cycle? Robin: That? Oh no no! I got this…Awhile…ago…From a group of people that gave it to me. B: Alright. Leave. Now. Robinhood: Alright thou friend! Beltar Wait. Where was that settlement that you got it from? Robinhood: Oh, about 4 clicks north! Bye now! B: WAIT WAIT WAIT WAIT WAIT WAIT! Robinhood: Till we meet again friend! I will always take stuff to give to the aliens! B: F*** This is even better PauL: That cycle was clearly Kawashita property sir. B: I know I know, I didn’t wanna fight a real Robinhood. After that crash. I’ve probably got a broken rib right now, and a couple others. B: Alright, let’s get you unjammed. PauL: Wait. Sir. That’s not- PauL: Necessary…If I was a human. That would’ve really hurt. B: Why? PauL: I find this form very…demeaning. It’s too small. And well, I quite liked it in there because I didn’t have to worry about the…lava. PauL: Alright. Now let’s just sit here. B: You got it. PauL: You know this reminds me of a mission I did for the company I worked for before Kawash- That’s not a…very…..interesting story. Beltar thought: “Wow. He’s lying for once…” B: Alright. You gotta tell me about it later though. If later means in the afterlife. Cause I don’t…see..any ship coming for..miles… Epilogue: Pilot: This is Rouge Four, I’ve found them. I repeat this is Rouge Four, I’ve found them. Pilot: This is Rouge Four coming in for a landing. Beltar: Iss…that… PauL: Rescue. Pilot: Come on in, you’ll be taken to a hostpital for a short while. Then redeployed. Beltar: Fuunnn.. PauL: I really need a recharge. Beltar: Lets go…’home’…PauL.. PauL: Si-? Pilot: By the way, friends, out scavengers will be here shortly, so fear not, we have not lost all of the HoA! Medical Record: Dr. SF: Oh wow, again. At least its not Project Paradise again. Hm…Not bad. He should be ready for redeployment in…less than 24 Hours. PauL: To where? Dr.SF: First, to help our dear Koro, then he will be placed on Terrial Major for the rest of the week. While you receive repairs and get transferred back into your normal body. Beltar: Thh—eee--_Fiileesss____ Dr.SF: What is he saying? PauL: Probably…something. ‘random’ Dr.SF: What’s your truth setting? PauL: ‘98%‘ And of course. That was a lie. Close Log, Chapter 1, Part 009 ============================================================================================================================ More pictures in the spoiler! (Because I take too many! ) Crash Details Terrain Overview 2 The Cycle 1 The Cycle 2 The Boat The Ship 1 The Ship 2 Minifigs Thanks for reading this chapter in Beltar’s story! How many times did PauL lie? And should I bring back Robin in future builds? Yes, this was a very large story set up build if people think that I should continue with those. Hope you enjoyed! C and C welcome! ~Beltar Edit: Also this is the prequel to Koro's and Mediumsnowman's build. Edited July 17, 2015 by Commander Beltar Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
shmails Posted July 17, 2015 Great story! I love Robinhood's cycle, and the crash scene is very well done. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mediumsnowman Posted July 17, 2015 Excellent! The cycle is very nice. I quite like the Robin Hood character, he should definitely return! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LittleJohn Posted July 18, 2015 Excellent build! I like how the ground is black and that cycle is great Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
narbilu Posted July 18, 2015 Excellent story again Beltar Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mike S Posted July 18, 2015 Great reproduction of the cockpit from NuckElBerg's build! Also great landscaping and story! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blackhawk STX Posted July 18, 2015 Great cycle! And I like the crash debris... well done! Looks like Blackhawk isn't the only one to crash into things... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Big Sal Posted July 20, 2015 Ha, fun story! The cycle and landscape are great! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Commander Beltar Posted July 20, 2015 Thanks everyone! I guess no one figured out Hal PauL 9000? (Why did Hal go crazy? Hopefully you know...) Great story! I love Robinhood's cycle, and the crash scene is very well done. Thanks shmails~ Excellent! The cycle is very nice. I quite like the Robin Hood character, he should definitely return! Thanks man! I'll see what I can do in future stories with him, I had some neat ideas! Excellent build! I like how the ground is black and that cycle is great Thanks John! Excellent story again Beltar Thank you narbilu-sama! Great reproduction of the cockpit from NuckElBerg's build! Also great landscaping and story! Thanks Mike! I was halfway through creating the cockpit when I realized that I was off, then I got it, then I realized there was a backside to the ship, and basically I had to redo it like 4 times. Great cycle! And I like the crash debris... well done! Looks like Blackhawk isn't the only one to crash into things... Well, Beltar didn't crash into something...He got shot down and...erm...The ground crashed into him! Ha, fun story! The cycle and landscape are great! Thanks Sal! The cycle was real fun to make! ~Beltar Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NuckElBerg Posted July 20, 2015 Thanks Mike! I was halfway through creating the cockpit when I realized that I was off, then I got it, then I realized there was a backside to the ship, and basically I had to redo it like 4 times. The first thing I thought of when reading through this was actually how closely you've managed to reproduce the cockpit (and micro-PauL! ) from The Heart of Awsomnium, great job! Sorry you had to redo it so many times, it actually looks quite simple on the outside, but has a (relatively) complex interior (especially if you include the retractable landing gear ). Anyway, great build... nice looking terrain and cool cycle. Keep ut the good job (and tell us about Lauren, I have those files waiting for you)! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Andromedas Gates Posted July 22, 2015 The judges awarded you 4 points. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
