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TheBeeze

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  1. You’ve been awarded ( 8 ) points. Judges’ comments… So the biggest thing here was your use of the red plants for explosions as others have pointed out. Quite awesome really. Glad you did a custom mashup up with the (2) Sanctums so we did not have to flag you there. I also really liked the simple divider pieces you created, they just look great. I am curious if all the vehicles are your design ground up or some modification to others? Great job here though. For a build so detailed I would only suggest maybe cleaning up some of those sidewalk studs a bit. PROS: Beautiful battle scene with building and vechicles and lovely story with the scinentist. Many times there is a beautiful build but with a poor decription and α incomplete story. Also, even if you used a ready Lego model (Dr.Strange's hous) I loved how you compined two of them and make a beautiful corner building. My favorite part is the Mexican standoff between the two tanks CONS: in the road plates, you left the studs uncovered and that SUGGESTION. You could cover the studs in the road plates with light gray tiles, and the create damages on them and put some scattered ruins and trush Be Sure to Update Your AARs. Thanks for playing!
  2. You’ve been awarded ( 7 ) points. Judges’ comments… Another user of the horizontal landscaping technique very well done. Also, another build showing various parts to build on the story. Suggestions would be maybe show a little more of that helicopter, didn't really get to see it. Also the Scud Truck felt a little cramped on that size board, you could have really benefitted from the build being a bit wider. Scud truck was nicely done. Great job. PROS: The SNOT use of the small rock piece is great. Even if it is much flat, it reminds me the big slippery rocks in the shores. Also the MILP have many small details that shows the efford you put on it. And the design of the large Zodiac is noticeable CONS: The mix of the colors in the rocks distrract the attention SUGGESTION: Try to use single color for rocks, tan for sand and dark tan for wet sand Be Sure to Update Your AARs. Thanks for playing!
  3. You’ve been awarded ( 9 ) points. Judges’ comments… Awesome job. Everything here looks perfect. The perspective of being under the rail bridge is super cool. Great job in building in the frame of the bridge to the landscape. Pictures look awesome and well planned. The little drone was nice touch too. Great! PROS: I like the addition of the rare red bushes as explosion effect. Never saw some, just heard of them. Also the unique design of the ISUV is notable and of course the three dimensional build with the pendulous train rails CONS: The mountain pattern seems al little scrambled deppendng the colors and angles SUGGESTION: Building rocks, try to use solid colors , usually dark gray (or tan-dark tan in desert enviroments). The BURP (big ugly rock piece) is perfect for mountain sides, but need to be in solid color and with the addition with differend sizes slopes to brake the flat sides Be Sure to Update Your AARs. Thanks for playing!
  4. You’ve been awarded ( 8 ) points. Judges’ comments… Great Build(s). The microscale naval spots were very well done. Particularly loved the missiles off the cruiser and the drone off the flight deck. Regarding your full size build, this was nice too. A few points to work on here: Capturing the darkness a little bit better- the images were a little hard to make out so play with your picture editing settings. The helicopter looked a little bit squished and we did not get to see too much of it proportionately from the photos. Overall, very well done! Pros: -microbuilds and minibuilds are nice, especially the aircraft carrier -You used well the map information in your story. -The "GLA was here" sticker is a nice touch following the landmark of the map Cons: -There is just one picture with normal light. The others are too dark (i understand you wanted to show night) -The ground is kind of empty. -The helicopter is probably a nice build, but there is no picture where we can see in complete Suggestions: - When you want to show night, do the opposite. Just one night photo (reduced visibility or green from night vision gogles) and all the other photos in normal light so to show as more as details you can from your build - Even in a desert ground, try to use some plates in same colour (2x4, 2x6) scattered around and many 1x1 plates in same and in one or two similar colors. In this case, you could use dark tan and reddish brown Be Sure to Update Your AARs. Thanks for playing!
  5. You’ve been awarded ( 8 ) points. Judges’ comments… Awesome job here with the tunneling technique. That never gets old. Before reading the build and looking at the pictures, it almost looked Indiana Jones like and then....well haha. Great work! Be Sure to Update Your AARs. Thanks for playing!
  6. You’ve been awarded ( 9 ) points. Judges’ comments… Great perspective in the layout of your build here. There is a clear depiction of which way the battle is flowing with the details wrapped around everything through out. Very nicely done! Be Sure to Update Your AARs. Thanks for playing!
  7. You’ve been awarded ( 8 ) points. Judges’ comments… Another great example of your free flowing border technique. Particular attention to the terrain and bunker here. Awesome job! Be Sure to Update Your AARs. Thanks for playing!
  8. I saw this has been floating around instagram today. Kind of unfortunate as it looks like a decent kit. I'm not into technic personally, but I can still appreciate the work that goes into the design.
  9. Ohhhhhh that SCUD Truck definitely gave me some ideas!
  10. Nice! I always struggle finding the right size wheels and tires for my vehicles I design. These fit!
  11. Glad you made it over here. They've developed a lot so far so I'm hoping it continues.
  12. Updated first post with new stuff. Scope it out.
  13. Yea, the red bush use is cool. I really like the overhead rail thing too. Nice Job!
  14. Island Rush has been extended until July 26th! Plenty of time for people to jump in!
  15. Proportions might need a little adjusting Nice!
  16. People. Please carry on with a sensible discussion from here on out. The amount of calling out, reporting, and back and forth is totally unwarranted. Consider this a friendly reminder to keep it all civil in here.
  17. Hey Man The grab on them is great so far, even with a little interchanging. No glue needed. I am fearful about constantly changing the front ends and stocks on the rifles though because the clutch is so good I feel like they could snap.
  18. You’ve been awarded ( 2 ) points. Judges’ comments… First off welcome again! I'll start by saying you should consider looking into a photo hosting site like flickr so you can hotlink more quality photos instead of posting images direct to EB. That said, it looks like this was a decent sized build, but we can't really see too much of it due to the photos. Try to always have at least 1 image showing your entire build so we can see everything. Another suggestion for your photos is to maybe take them with some great lighting whether outside or just in a well lit room, it makes a world of difference. Apps like Snapseed on a mobile can do wonders for you editing brightness and making your images pop. From what we could see, I did really like the transport truck that you built. That looked like quite a bit of work went into it. I look forward to see more stuff from you in the future! Be Sure to Update Your AARs. Thanks for playing!
  19. You’ve been awarded ( 3 ) points. Judges’ comments… This is an interesting build to do. I think someone did a weapons test build very early in the game and haven't seen one since. It is clear that the tank is the focus of the build here. The tank is really great and a nicely planned build. The rest of the build feels like it may have been in a very short time. Some little things that could have added to that may have been covering some of those studs on the ground with tiles or working on the little blast bunker a bit. Great start and look forward to seeing more from you! Be Sure to Update Your AARs. Thanks for playing!
  20. You’ve been awarded ( 1 ) points. Judges’ comments… This is a very small and basic build. I'm going to treat this more as an intro build as there really isn't much to score. Be Sure to Update Your AARs. Thanks for playing!
  21. You just have to get close. You can imagine what you want. (Though that is just a port with cranes and no tower) May I suggest viewing the map that was posted in the BBN showing everything without the overlay? https://www.flickr.com/photos/132410925@N08/49875272723/
  22. Original post updated with new accessories.
  23. Of course you can, but it obviously won't count towards the current campaign as that is on Burke Atoll. You could do as many side builds as you want with this.
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