[OL - FB] A Chance Encounter Pt 2

[merc]

Previously

A Chance Encounter Pt-1

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...And Mere, in April the lad and I........

 

 “That trip was fun. Aye sir” 

“Lyle.”

 “Yes Sir?”

“Shut it”

We approached the tavern that I had been staying at for the past few months.

 “Jean, a letter arrived for you while you were away”

 “Hm the letter has the seal of the RNTC?”

Spoiler

Dear Sir or Madam,
We am happy to inform you that your application for a share of stock has been approved. You are now the proud owner of 1 share of preferred stock in the RNTC.
Secretary to the Undersecretary to the CEO

“Well then, I guess not all is lost. Ms. Chloe two glasses of Brenshaun’s best. One for me and on for my....."

“I’m only ten”

“One glass for me and ju...”

“Water...”

"And water for the lad”

“You’re really bad at this you know”

“Lyle”

“Yes sir”

Off in on of the corner tables a crowd had grown.

“And there it was, just through a waterfall. The most beautiful flower you had ever seen. I was a small climb and not an easy feat mind you.” The man with the blue feathered hat explained.

He seemed to be a dashing man for very close to him were two young maids looking at him with hearts in their eyes. And the crowd around him was a large group of men and women, there to listen to his tale.

“And if you thought it was difficult getting there, try carving your way back to Jamestown. It was a harrowing experience. We encountered many different creatures like the silent and cunning.......panther”
“Oh!” The crowd stated. The one of the women clenched his arm tightly.

“The panthers teeth were.......”

“Oi, that’s me fiancée, get yer han off her” two sailors stumbled toward the man with the blue feathered hat.

“My good sir, I would not have.....”

“I dun’t car if yur mum wouldn’t hav. Your asking for a head smashin” the crowd had seemed to open up so that this drunken man and his friend could come through.

Not wanting to see another fight break out, the barmaid went over to come them down.

“Gentlemen please..

“Get uf me” the sailor responded and pushed her to the ground. No sooner had she been push that both the man in the blue feathered hat and I jump up to our feet. I rushed over for I had grown fond of the barmaid.

“Excuse me but you just disrespected the owner of this fine establishment.  I think you owe her and apology.” I said as I helped her up.

…I wish I could tell you that I didn’t cause a fight, Mere, but the faith states that a child should respect his parents. I threw some punches and let’s just say that the drunken sailors learned their lesson. And additionally, the man in the blue feathered hat was impressed.

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Thanks for viewing. Thanks to @blackdeathgr for use of his character in my story. The build is a simple one to move my character along. Under the spoiler is an additional view of the build from the other side. 

C&C is welcome. 

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Edited August 11, 2018 by merc

[Kwatchi]

Who says chivalry is dead?

That was a fun little scene.  It's a pity you had to make the portraits so small as it is hard to pick out details of the minifigs, but I can see there'd be space issues otherwise. Maybe a 250 or 300 pixel wide pic of your protagonists at the top, as a sort of header, would be a good idea.

 

[Fraunces]

This one was better than part1, good story

[blackdeathgr]

And that's how you pick girls at a bar!! Thanks @merc for showing off Hugo and I had a great time reading the story and viewing your moc, especially the super duo!!! 

[Bodi]

The tavern looks great with its blue wall, great writing too, can't wait to see where this goes.

[merc]

On 8/11/2018 at 3:52 PM, Kwatchi said:

Who says chivalry is dead?

That was a fun little scene.  It's a pity you had to make the portraits so small as it is hard to pick out details of the minifigs, but I can see there'd be space issues otherwise. Maybe a 250 or 300 pixel wide pic of your protagonists at the top, as a sort of header, would be a good idea.

 

What can I say i am an old school guy ,

Thank you for the idea I had seen that done before but never though much about it. I like the idea and intend to try to implement it in the future

On 8/12/2018 at 6:27 AM, Fraunces said:

This one was better than part1, good story

Thank you. Out of curiosity what part was an improvement? I am trying to improve builds, photography, presentation and story.  

On 8/12/2018 at 5:32 PM, blackdeathgr said:

And that's how you pick girls at a bar!! Thanks @merc for showing off Hugo and I had a great time reading the story and viewing your moc, especially the super duo!!! 

Thank you I did the best to portray a fellow Olean as a chivalrous as possible. Thank you on the duo i don't know how I came up with it but I really like where I can go with this.

On 8/12/2018 at 8:38 PM, Bodi said:

The tavern looks great with its blue wall, great writing too, can't wait to see where this goes.

Thank you. I cant either. 

[Fraunces]

19 hours ago, merc said:

Thank you. Out of curiosity what part was an improvement? I am trying to improve builds, photography, presentation and story.  

Well first of all the presentation was much better thanks to the story which was very humoristic and nicely set-up. The story of the first part was a bit, mwa I would not say boring but long to read. This reads much better (with pictures)