Kwatchi Posted March 11, 2016 (edited) February 2016 MCRA Official Result: Escort went off without a hitch ==== “Captain, the convoy leader is signalling to make sail” “Well then raise sail Mr. Moore and take our station. I’ll be in study and I’d trust you’ll not disturb me unless it be an absolute necessity.” “Captain, the convoy has reached our first port!” “Quit your yappin and let me get back to what I was doin’.” “Captain, the convoy has engaged a ship!” “I SAID I WAS NOT TO BE DISTURBED, YA FECKLESS INGRATE!” “Captain, the Poseidon’s Wrath has just foundered in the storm!” “zzzz” “Captain, the convoy has reached our second port of call!” “That’s fine Mr. Clarence. Send for the cabin boy and Mr. Axel." "Axel, my long time friend, I finally found the clue I have been searching for all these long years. It was hidden in the first accounting of Bishop Millars' prophecies. Have a gander and tell me what you think.” ”CAPTAIN! This is madness! You can’t follow this course. It’s unconscionable. It goes against all that the worship of the Patheon stands for. I can’t be a part of this!” “Are you sure of this Mr. Axel?” “Emil, I’ve known you for over 15 years. But if you are set on doing this, we’ll need to part ways. I'm sorry.” “I see. Well, fair thee well then.” “Boy, fetch the bosun an tell him to have this mess heaved over the side. Then inform Mr. Moore to signal Captain Amara to come aboard.” “But Captain, Amara’s ship went down in the hurricane three days ago.” “Did it now? Well, then… Mr. Moore! Set our heading back towards whence we came and collect that luckless harpy Amara. She and I need to be having a discussion on a venture I have in mind.” "AND FETCH ME SOME MORE RUM!" ==== Story so far: Introduction The Donatus The Propehcy [by Gulagurag] The Poseidon's Wrath [by Gulagurag] Edited September 12, 2017 by Kwatchi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TitusV Posted March 11, 2016 lovely story! I really like the idea of the interior-cabin, and well executed! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tezclatipoca Posted March 11, 2016 Oh ! A pirate that is not afraid of killing his own friends ! Frightening ! Good idea this cabin interior, I like the scene where the captain is asleep. Good job ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
blackdeathgr Posted March 11, 2016 Excellent story that a very nicely built MOC accompanies! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Captain Braunsfeld Posted March 11, 2016 Kablam! This is actually the first pistol I see with a bayonet attached Oh those sea rats... You already have three of those new books? Makes me envious Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kwatchi Posted March 12, 2016 My kids own those books. I just happen to 'borrow' them while they're asleep. ;). My wife does think I have issues as a result though. As matter of fact, my son was complaining about my appropriating Axel for the last few weeks as my big hulking side kick, so I wrote him out of the story. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Captain Dee Posted March 16, 2016 Clever story and neat build to go with it. That interior looks great and the dialogue is well written. Speaking of which, you "wrote him out of the story" alright. Just like the pros, eh? Keep it up. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
