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Mr Man

MOC Order 66

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On the distant planet of Felucia Jedi Bob (RGS 7163) meets his end at the hands of Commander Dorn of the 327th Star Corps, and his Captain Morn and troopers AF-71 and LS-63.

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'Commander Dorn execute order 66'

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'Captain Morn Kill Him'

'Arrgh'

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Ahhh! My eyes... pictures...so...big... computer....can't...process them...Will ignore...user... until... he... reads posting rules :thumbdown:

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I'd have to agree with def, your picturesque definitely need a bit of a resize.

As for the MOC, its ok, but it leaves alot to be desired. I'm usually not a fan of photoshopped backdrops but it actually helps in this case. There is so little to the MOC, the background helps to hid that fact.

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Hopefully sorted the sizes. the MOC is sparse because it was built with the last of the loose bricks I had lying around from another MOC.

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I can see you had a limited selection of bricks available. The backdrop does really help, I guess the one part I like is the speeder the Jedi is riding, and the BARC is pretty nice, considering you apparently used only pieces from the Clone BP.

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That's a mighty big speeder that clone's got... still, I would have to agree that you've made the best of a limited inventory. The use of the old megaphone blasters are also nice.

You've got a 91st trooper overhead and... a clone with yellow arms. Which corps does he belong to?

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Yeah, Id have to agree with what the others say, the backdrop helps, and you do need more detail in this.

A promising start though!

CF

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Hello Mr Man,

I must say that's a pretty decent MOC considering our assumption that you have limited parts. I can see what you're driving at and the message is well-conveyed enough. If you have the right amount of parts, you might consider improving your speeder and putting additional Felucia plant-life. That's a already good start and I really like the photo-editing you did in the last pic. Pls. do take our criticisms constructively and hope we'll see improved MOCs from you in the future.

- KDM

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You've got a 91st trooper overhead and... a clone with yellow arms. Which corps does he belong to?

I'm guessing he ran out of Star Corps troopers.

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Yes I did run out of them, They are engaged at another conflict somewhere else.

I am working on some felucian plant life and a proper tower for the clones.

Thanks for the C&C. when the next of my big MOC's breaks I will have enough pieces to build a proper diorama.

BTW the other MOC's are big space ones.

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Yes I did run out of them, They are engaged at another conflict somewhere else.

I am working on some felucian plant life and a proper tower for the clones.

Thanks for the C&C. when the next of my big MOC's breaks I will have enough pieces to build a proper diorama.

BTW the other MOC's are big space ones.

These other mocs sound good, you should post them some time. :sweet:

CF

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Thanks CommanderFox I might post them at some point, they would have to be on the si-fi forum though. The big one ,a moon base, is on display somewhere so I would have to wait for that to come back first.

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