Captain Genaro

Thank you, I'm very pleased with the way the foliage came out (probably my best effort to date). I have to agree, the galloping shot is something I had in my mind and I think it came out well. Glad you like it as much as I do. That's very kind of you. I'm glad you like the story. I believe that it's often minor details that can make a MOC look much better, even if it is as simple as a broken cart or changing a minifig's pose between shots. It's good to hear that others appreciate it as well. As for the story, it's about time Oleon got a little internal conflict going on. Nothing crazy like you greenies, but enough to keep life interesting. Sweating over profits, board meetings, the sun... perhaps Veleianders just sweat a lot. I'm glad you like the details and atmosphere. I'm really not an expert when it comes to lighting, but I had fun playing around with it and my camera settings to make it appear bright. Oh dear, your death would be bad enough, but bad puns will surely be the end of me, too.

Previously: New Arrivals and Old Rivalries Lavalette Bakery The Beginning of the End I decided that I've neglected the dear captain long enough and I also wanted to try to build a RNTC building in the style of Kolonialbeamter's homes in Lavalette. Didn't quite turn out how I was hoping, but it was fun to build and I enjoyed creating the street paving scene in front (just a little something to show the young town under construction). Comments and criticism are most welcome. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ "I've told you, sir, our orders are to allow no one in without the Major's permission" replied the private for what seemed like the hundredth time. An Unexpected Reunion by Capt. Genaro, on Flickr "And do you understand that I have a ship that needs refitting and I have no intention of wasting my afternoon because some mercenary refused to let me carry out my duties!" roared Captain Anthony Genaro. "And if you don't step aside this instant," but before Anthony could finish, the door swung inwards. After a brief pause, two RNTC soldiers exited through the door, closely followed by an officer who, despite his seemingly confident posture, was constantly eyeing everyone with a suspicious look and glancing into the shadows as if expecting something. The RNTC soldiers quickly passed through the street-pavers as Anthony, still fuming from his exchange with the sentry, entered the Hall of Science, his lieutenant following behind him. An Unexpected Reunion by Capt. Genaro, on Flickr Upon entering, Anthony looked around, hoping to see a sign that could point him in the right direction when his lieutenant politely coughed. "First door on the left, sir." "Yes, yes, of course, thank you, Jean,' replied Anthony. "I fear I'm still heated from that exchange and my wits haven't quite returned," continued Anthony as he knocked on the door. A muffled voice replied, asking for a few moments which Anthony and Jean spent in the hallway, Genaro examining a globe while Jean seemingly stared into the abyss. An Unexpected Reunion by Capt. Genaro, on Flickr "Lieutenant? Lieutenant Anthony Genaro?" cried a voice from the door. "Why of course it's you!" Turning, Anthony's face lit up when he saw who it was. "Seamus Byron" Anthony exclaimed, butchering the pronunciation of the Corrish name. "Why, my friend, what ever are you doing here?" After a quick kiss on both cheeks, one of the Oleander customs that Seamus still found uncomfortable after many years, Genaro continued. "But I must correct you, it's Captain Genaro now. Has been ever since the year thirteen. Allow me to introduce my lieutenant, Jean Gascon," and, allowing a brief how do you do (fortunately for Seamus, no kissing this time), Genaro turned to Jean and said "Seamus here was once the finest schoolmaster in the fleet. Oh, yes, I remember the way he taught those mids back on Le Royale. Practically had them reciting sines and cosines for months on end." "Yes, but I warrant not one of those young gentlemen will ever have trouble navigating by the sun and stars," replied Seamus giving the Captain a friendly smile. "Come in, come in," he said guiding the pair into his office, a large room with shelves and tables filled with every conceivable rock and mineral you might find on the western half of Stephanique. An Unexpected Reunion by Capt. Genaro, on Flickr "I see you've given up the sea life" said Anthony as he looked at a pile of maps and geological charts strewn about "and apparently your sense of order and cleanliness." "You must excuse the mess," said Seamus. "I'm sure you saw the company's major on your way in. He just came in here demanding that I tell him if some flower is native to the island. As if I'd know, being a geologist in my youth" Seamus said to Jean. "I told him the botanists were examining the plantations and that he'd have better luck there, but he demanded that we go though every book and map as if Von Miller made reference to flora in Essential Minerals. I tell you, that man must be mad." Seamus briefly paused to put shuffle some papers before turning back to Anthony. "But you must forgive me, here I've been monopolizing the conversation and with nothing to offer to drink!" apologized Seamus. An Unexpected Reunion by Capt. Genaro, on Flickr "Not at all, my friend, think nothing of it," Anthony replied waving off the matter. "And though I'd love to catch up with you, I fear now is not the best time. I simply stopped by to pick up the geological report and any mail for Breshaun, but now I must be off to the blacksmith to see what he can do about our rudder." "Of course, of course, perhaps dinner then, if you're free this evening. And of course mister Gascon and your officers are all welcome" said Seamus. "I should like nothing less, but this evening I fear I have an engagement with the governor. Perhaps tomorrow though," suggested Anthony. "I shall hold you to it," replied Seamus, shaking Anthony and Jean's hands before seeing them to the door. An Unexpected Reunion by Capt. Genaro, on Flickr Additional Pictures:

Not bad. It's nice to see some smaller settlements getting some attention and I like that you've included Order, which really underdeveloped. The clerics watching the students line up for class is a nice touch, too. For future builds, you might consider adding some details that are unique to the building you're portraying. For example, a flagpole with a large yard or some classrooms with students at rows of desks might be appropriate for this. It might also help if you add a few more details to the walls. Even something as basic as adding some studs to the side can add great details to a building's façade. I look forward to your next build.

You did a really nice job with this build. The sand green accents look very clean and are a great choice for the grey and black color scheme. The exterior is very well done, and I particularly like the small details such as the microfigs on the railings/columns and the railing on the roof. The interior is nicely done, too. All the rooms have a purpose and the furniture, especially the various bookshelves, is quite nice. Two suggestions. I would consider moving the balcony's door to the center windows to make the build symmetrical, and moving the attic windows out one stud so that they are in-line with the rest of the house's windows. Of course, that could just be a personal preference, and if you like the way it currently is I wouldn't worry about my suggestions.

Haha, great idea and one which will surely keep the masses entertained during the next great BOBS showdown. The cart's details, notably the kernel popping, really bring this build to life, and you put some good effort into the path and vegetation. I like the idea of a cutoff building in the corner, but right now it doesn't really look the part. Perhaps adding a little more to it, such as a few more studs to allow for a window or door, would help. Glad to see ships aren't the only thing you build.

I like it. You did a good job capturing a mule train moving along a rocky, mountain path. I really like the extra packs on Old Jesse and might have to copy that some day. The landscaping is pretty good as well. There might be some places where you can add some brown or additional rocks along the path, but overall your build does a good job illustrating the subject.

A neat, unique little vessel. I haven't seen too many lateen rigged ships which makes this a nice addition to BOBS' fleets. The rigging is a great addition that really improves the masts. In the future, you might consider adding some stern galleries onto your ship. They are certainly not a requirement and many ships did not have them, but I think, especially when you have a great cabin, they are a nice addition.

Until such a time as the dishonest blackguards unite to create such an organization, you must be content with the RNTC. And for those who are unable or do not want to purchase stock on the open market, the company will sell stock to builders who wish to support the company's efforts. Please note that the seller is required to inform the RNTC of the transaction. Otherwise they will continue to be listed as the shareholder and will receive the dividend and all other benefits from owning the stock.

A simple but nice build. You did a nice job with the transition from water to grass and the partially connected blue tiles make the stream appear very swift. I would recommend adding some additional details to the banks, perhaps some rocks or changes in elevation, but other than that it's a fun little build.

Gorgeous, absolutely gorgeous. The angles are fantastic as is the texturing on the walls (both interior and exterior). The details, such as the company's seal over the gate, the tree stumps surrounding the walls, and various buildings in the courtyard really bring this build to life. While the Mayor appreciated the dedication ceremony, he did feel that the sun was too bright, that everyone spoke too loud, and that there was a general lack of liquor between breakfast and lunch.

That's a fine little build. A good variety of foliage and plants create a nice, untamed jungle atmosphere, and I like that you incorporated some rockwork into the jungle. You might consider adding some 1x1 tiles and plates as stones or rocks along the path. It could add some nice texture.

Representatives of the RNTC tend to be very busy during the day, but they do try to answer all complaints in a timely fashion. You are in fact assuming that the RNTC incurred an expenditure, or several expenditures for the 2.5K amount, something the company neither confirms nor denies.

As a general rule, the RNTC will purchase assets; real property, licenses, insurance, port access, receivables, and securities, when the company's officials deem it to be in the company's best interest. Currently, the RNTC has a surplus of cash and very few assets. I can also assure you that the RNTC will disclose all major acquisitions in its quarterly reports. Further inquiries into the RNTC's operations can be addressed in the RNTC thread.

Previously: New Arrivals and Old Rivalries Lavalette Bakery Hopefully a mildly entertaining story. Comments and criticism are welcome. The steady clicking of the galloping horse, interspersed by the animal's hard breathing and the rider egged his steed on broke the otherwise tranquil jungle morning. "Faster, faster now!" exclaimed the breathless rider as his destination, the now sprawling brickworks of Lavalette, came into sight. After a few hundred more yards, the jungle completely gave way as massive open fields filled with drying bricks each separated by a myriad of kilns and the immense warehouse filled what had, as recently as three months ago, been a pristine jungle. P1110221 by Capt. Genaro, on Flickr "Halt! Halt and identify yourself!" roared a sentry as he lowered his musket. Then, recognizing the rider, he shouldered his weapon, snapped to attention and crying "Major, Sir!" saluted the rider. Pausing to take a few deep breaths, the Major patted his horse's neck, then quickly dismounted and hastily returned the salute. "What is this?" panted the Major. "Sir, I don't quite follow." "What is the meaning of this!" demanded the Major, his breath returning. After a brief quizzical look, the sentry hesitantly responded. "It's a brick factory, sir. You see, clay, sand, shale, and other ingredients are stored and mixed in the warehouse there. Then, workers fill barrels with the mixture and take it out to drying fields where frames are laid out and filled with the mixture," "Yes, I know that," snapped the Major. "Why was I called out?" "A raid, apparently. All I know is the sarge, I mean Sargent de Vele ordered us to fall out and when we got here the fields were a mess. But sir," continued the sentry, "I believe the factory manager can tell you more." P1110228 by Capt. Genaro, on Flickr Ordering the sentry to watch his horse, the Major departed and headed for the warehouse's entrance. As he walked closer past a workman refilling a crate with coal that had spilt and aggressive, tense soldiers, the Major felt a rush of excitement. His whole life, his whole career, he had been left to listen to others tell war stories. Even as his comrades marched of to fight in the Juniper War, his regiment had been reduced to mere watchmen after some idiot duke convinced the King that St. Vele, a city that hadn't been captured, much less invaded in over three hundred years, needed additional troops. But now, walking among the wreckage of half-dry bricks, the Major felt hopeful. Even a mere Indian raid seemed exciting to him, especially since valor and distinction here could do much for his career in the RNTC. P1110229 by Capt. Genaro, on Flickr "Major, so glad you could come," cried the factory's manager, a thin, sweating man (everyone from Vele seemed to sweat profusely in the jungle climate) as the Major approached. "Disaster, absolute disaster! An entire day's work ruined! Ten acres, ten acres of brick reduced to nothing more than bits and pieces!" "Calm yourself, man" replied the Major. "Calm down and explain what happened." "Look around, can't you see what happened" exclaimed the manager. "The workers arrived for their shift and as soon as we got here absolute ruin and not a soul in sight. Major, security is your responsibility and I demand that you bring the culprits to justice." "But no damage to the buildings or kilns, just the bricks that lay out in the open?" questioned the Major. "Rather peculiar, is it not? I mean, wouldn't a native at least attempt to enter the warehouse or destroy a kiln?" "How am I supposed to know what a savage thinks?" the manager replied. "Just get me results! Someone must pay for destroying two and three-fifth doubloons of inventory!" Sighing, the Major said "Very well, as you can see my men are already on patrol. Now, if you could please provide me with your report, form 23-FB5 I believe, I will bring it to town and return with troops to search the area. No, no, this will never do. You've given me 34-FB2, which only applies to extreme weather conditions, and this supplement, ah 4-2 does not include the name of the assistant manager. I'm sorry, but you must do this all over." If there was one thing the Major learned from his time guarding St. Vele, it was that businesses could be just as bad as bureaucrats when it came to paperwork. P1110231 by Capt. Genaro, on Flickr The manager disappeared inside to fill out the proper forms while the Major decided to wait and watch the workmen. After a few minutes, however, he couldn't help but feel uneasy. Every minor rustling in the trees made him feel uneasy and he couldn't shake the feeling that he was being watched. Still, no harm could come, right? After all, there was a platoon of men here with him now, not to mention the workmen and a heavy, easily barricaded oak door behind him. The Major was convinced that a voice was whispering his name, beckoning him, calling him to, do something, but what? "Must be the heat, must be the excitement and the heat, yes that's it" the Major told himself. "Major, Major" the voice continued. The Major continued to look around, but unable to see anyone the Major was left meekly whispering "who's there?" "We know what you did," replied the voice seeming all around him. "We know, Major, we know your secret. Now, repent or die! Repent or die!" the voice roared from behind the Major. Drawing his sword, the Major cried out and hastily turned to face his opponent. But looking around, there was nothing. Nothing, that is, except for a single, solitary flower. "Hades' Shade" whispered the Major to himself as he felt his knees start to give and his head spin. For ever Oleander knew the stories, often told by older siblings to frighten young ones. Yes, Hades' Shades were often used to decorate cemeteries and temples, as it was believed that the bright red flowers would help open an entrance to the underworld so the dead could continue their journey to Styx. But the flowers also had a far more sinister meaning. Legend states that the Priests of Hades, the Order's assassins, would use a single red flower to mark their next victim, helping to prepare the soul to depart, thus ensuring an easy kill, and as an added bonus, psychologically tormenting the victim. P1110235 by Capt. Genaro, on Flickr The Major soon heard footsteps and bent down to pick up the flower. Placing it inside his coat, he stumbled back before leaning on the warehouse's wall. "Search the jungle," stuttered the Major. "No one's here, sir" said a private after peering about behind the warehouse. "Nothing here but a few trees and a couple hundred yards of open brick fields." "But the voice, you must have heard it. Someone has to be here," replied the Major. The soldiers looked around, awkwardly before a workman spoke up. "No one heard anything, Mister Major, sir. You sure you feeling quite right in the head?" "That's impossible, surely..." began the Major before his words trailed off. "Private," continued the Major, some strength returning. "Private, tell the manager to have his men send the report, and gather the men and escort me back to the fort at once!" P1110237 by Capt. Genaro, on Flickr Overview P1110223 by Capt. Genaro, on Flickr

That is a very nice ship and certainly embodies the style of classic pirate ships. Your choice of colors is nice and your paint scheme looks fantastic. I really like the printed sails; they are well done and add a unique element to this ship. I might suggest adding some additional cannons to the upper decks (perhaps just in front of the windows).

We're certainly willing to let you spend your DBs here. Thank you. Seeing as the settlement is young and relatively undeveloped, I believe a simple building is most appropriate. That is very kind of you, thank you. I am glad you like it. Thank you. I can't wait to see what your bakery looks like.

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Correct.

Any build that is educational. It could be the traditional school or university but you could likely claim that a build showing naturalists exploring a new forest, the office of a cartographer, an astronomer's observatory, or midshipmen learning the ropes would qualify as educational builds. Perhaps showing an apprentice adjusting to a new career could qualify, too. Personal judgment is required, but as long as you are reasonable (don't try gaming or abusing the system) and your build is focused on obtaining, recording, or sharing knowledge, you shouldn't have a problem. If you are in doubt about a specific build or idea, ask your faction leadership for advice.

That's a nice little build. You really captured the crowded, bustling nature I'd expect to find in a marketplace. I like that you incorporated some variety in the cobblestones, too. As for suggestions, perhaps you could make the cobblestones a little less uniform. Some plates or square tiles could help break it up if you want a more worn appearance. The stalls could use a little more work. Perhaps some curves and additional colors/patterns for the fabric covers could help.

Fantastic job. I love the way you've incorporated the jungle into the build to show how the settlement is just starting to carve our its place in the jungle. The house is great as well. Lovely brickwork, and the overall design, Spartan by Oleon's standards, looks great for simple housing for the common worker. And the boy being chased by chickens made me smile. I might suggest adding some tree stumps to better illustrate the jungle being pushed back to make room for the settlement, but that's a minor point that doesn't distract from the rest of the build.

Yay and yay on both accounts.

Welcome aboard! It's very nice to see new faces arriving in Oleon, and I can't wait to get better acquainted with your character. Please don't hesitate to ask if you have any questions or need any help in getting started.

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Excellent job all around, Bregir. The ship, err yacht, is very well done with a clever technique for the hull. Her lines are nicely done as well, but it does appear that the brown lines below the black and red stripe are too straight compared to said stripe (hopefully this makes sense). The rigging is well done, too, and even though it may not be the most complex ever, it truly does tie the ship together. The rest of the build, notably the water, is nice as well. And the angled quay is a nice touch that helps to improve this MOC. Can't wait to see where Don Montoya ends up next.