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This is a very good review on set 1380. I like how you showed what the functions of this set are. Great Job! LegoKing

I think this is a coool little creator set. My PTV Entry- Medium

Welcome to Eurobricks Nannon. I think you will really like it here. If you need anything, you can ask me or anyone on the website.

This is a really good MOC. I like how you made the broken ship and the little island. Great Job!

Opinion I like your whole idea of pirates invading a fort in the middle of the night, smart thinking. You have used good minifig face expressions. I like how you put ladders on the pirate boats so the pirates could climb up the wall. The water and sand are well created. I like how you have your wall, but rocks extend from it making your MOC look even better. I like how you mixed the colors of the rocks and made them: light gray, gray, and dark gray. In the water, I like how you have pirates swimming towards land to attack the Imperial Armada. Possible Improvements 1) You could possibly make the beach a brick higher than the water level so it is easier to distinguish. 2) On the wall on the Imperial Armada's side, you could give those guns and add a cannon or two. 3) On the beach and water, you could put some crabs crawling on the beach and some sharks in the water chasing the pirates. 4) You could add some more blood to your MOC. Maybe by the soldier that has just been shot. Non-Brick Related 1) You could add some more pictures to your topic because all the pictures in your MOC pages cannot be graded. You have to pick the six best pictures and post them in your topic. 2) Your pictures can be no bigger than 640x480. 3) You always look over what you write because I can see that there are a lot of grammar mistakes. Overall- This is a great large contest entry and can see you have put a lot of time and effort into your MOC. You have some very minor improvements to do on your MOC. Other than that, it is great. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing My Moc Page My PTV Entry- Medium My Brickshelf

Opinion I like the improvements that you have made from last time. The blood pouring out of the head is a really good touch to your MOC and makes it look gorier. But it is mostly the same as the last contest entry. Possible Improvements they are mostly the same as what I said before. 1) You could change the head with pouring blood out of it to a screaming head. I think you still need to do some improvements on your MOC. LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium

Opinion I really like your improvements from when you first started. How you made you MOC taller and added some more pirates and a little boat. I think you did a great job creating the beach. Where the water hits, you put tiles down to give it a smooth effect and how you made the water. I like how you created the wave and how you also included some white water in your MOC to make it look more like the ocean. Down inside of the pit, I liked how you added a few skeletons, along with a lot of treasure chests. I also think you used a good choice of pirate minifigs. Possible Improvements 1) I think the pirate faces are too original. Maybe you could add a mean look on the pirates faces. 2) On the top of your MOC, it looks too plain. You could add a monkey or crab crawling across the sand. 3) Down in the pit, you could add some blood next to the skeletons since there is lack of blood in your MOC. 4) On the wall of the pit, you could add a skeleton on the side of the wall that tried to get out long ago, but failed. You could also put some torches on the wall to have something other than gray there. 5) To add some color, you could have the captain holding a rainbow parrot. Non-Brick Related 1) You don't have much of a story plot. Be creative and explain what is happening in your MOC and why the pirates are there in the first place. 2) Some minor spelling/grammar errors: "The studs are mini-fig footprints" and "My friend who loves anything and everything in SNOT design complained about my beach but I had an answer ready this time." It could be; "The studs on the yellow bricks represent the minifig footprints" and "I have a friend who loves everything to do with SNOT design complained about my beach I created for my MOC. Luckily this time, I already have the right answer." Overall- This is a very good MOC and I can see you have spent along time creating it. A few minor grammar errors you have to watch out for. Some minor improvements for your MOC, but other than that, it is great. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium

This is awsome. Can people in the US enter this contest?

I think the Imperial Armada has the best outposts.

I think brown would look the best because on the black seas barracuda, brown goes really good with the ship.

I would want to black seas barracuda un-opened. That would be worth a lot of money.

These are some good LDD creations. I like how you made the front of the ship have a skeleton face apperance. Nice Job!

I can't wait for the clone battle pack to come out!. I would buy 10 of them so I would have 40 clones to add to my army.

This is really amazing. The bricks on the building are reall well built. This person must of spent a lot of time putting this MOC together. He has done a great job!

The set that your MOC reminds me of in a way is lego set 7119. Here is what it looks like: 7119. LegoKing

This is a really cool space buggy. I can see you have used a rebel helmet for the space travelers hat, very smart. You are a very creative person. Keep up the good work. LegoKing

You have quite an army there zorro3999. I wish I had your army. I only have a few soldiers.

You have a lot of pictures and they are very well taken. I think you could make you descriptions for your pictures a little bit longer and add an Overall at the end of the review. Other than that, you have done a great job! LegoKing

It would be awsome to be an Islander Boy. You could live in paradise everyday!

Another great MOC Dr. X. I asume you light using gray lego pieces to make spaceships. Keep up the good work!

You have done a great mini review on this set. Good Job!

I like your MOC and how you included Anikin and his padwan. I really like your background. How you included the sand and white texture. Nice job!

This is a really cool space MOC. I can tell you have put a lot of effort and time into your MOC. Great joba and keep up the good work.

I like your story plot and how you put it together. Nice Job!

This is a really good MOC. This reminds me of a Star Wars set, but I forgot the name.