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I noticed that two. But I dont think it is worth it now to take them out and re-take all of the pictures.

Your welcome AL FREDDO. I hope my feedback helps you. LegoKing

You clearly did not read the rules. Medium PTV contest entries can only be as big as 16 x 16 studs and no bigger. You MOC is 16 x 32 studs. This entry would be disqualified and belongs in the large contest area. You have to either change it back to 16 x 16 studs or ask Mister Phes if he can change your tile to "Castaway Pirates - Large".

I like your little teaser picture. Idea You could have calamari eating people and have skeletons come out of the see.

Opinion This is a great MOC Paul cantu. The battle that is going on in front of the governor's house looks very brutal. The little monkey that is standing on top of the mansion is funny. The cannon manned by the pirate looks like it can demolish the governor's house in a couple of shots. Another thing that I noticed that I liked is that you put coconuts on the palm trees. That is the first time I have ever seen someone do that. There is lots of blood in your MOC, which I like. Possible Improvements 1) I think you should put some black tiles on the roof. 2) Possibly, you could put some green and gray tiles on the ground if you have enough. Overall- I have looked at your MOC since the beginning and you have made some good improvements. I personally think your first picture is the best. Some little things I would fix. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion This is a good PTV large contest entry Deathdog. I like the pirate chugging down the wine. I think the pirate bathing in the barrel is funny. At the same time, he is eating chicken. I like that one of the pirates looks so drunk that he is going to fall over soon. Those pirates look like they are stealing more than they can carry. Possible Improvements 1) It would look nicer if you were to put some tiles on the ground of your MOC. 2) You could have a battle scene between a pirate and a villager. 3) Have a dead villager somewhere in your MOC and have some blood around him because you are in lack of blood. 4) Put some mean and cruel faces on some of your pirates because most of them are too standard. Non-Brick Related 1) To start off, I think your first picture should be an overview of your entire MOC because the first picture is always the most important one. Overall- You have done a great job creating your MOC Deathdog. There are some things I would fix in your MOC. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion You have a very original idea here. Pirates going onto an island and searching on it for something the pirates don't have. In your first picture, I like how you added the ocean and sky background. It makes your MOC appearance look even better. The battle on the island looks really gory and bloody. The rock formation you have made looks like a giant skeleton head. The table with the Islander being separated looks pretty messed up to me. I like how you made the crabs using pirate hats as the bodies. The Islander on the little boat is funny because he is the last one and does not look like he is going to escape from the pirate ship. Possible Improvements 1) Have a shark or a dolphin in the water. Non-Brick Related 1) Not to be mean, but those sails are not the best. I would go to the sail library and print out a sail. If that does not work, just use plain white paper. Overall- You have done a great job creating your MOC and you are not lacking blood at all. Actually, I like that blood stream that leads into the water. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion This is a very creative MOC Infomaniac. I like your idea of the pirates whipping the red coat to get revenge. The barrels are a nice use for a wooden log. I like how you have a red coat torso with a hat on it resembling the red coats uniform. I like the Indiana Jones whip you have used in your MOC. The base plate you have made out of tan and brown bricks looks like this is the middle of a ship. I also like how you have pirates on the lookout tower scanning the waters for enemies. Possible Improvements 1) You could have some transparent red pieces right under where the red coat is being whipped. Non-Brick Related 1) Have a longer story explaining how the pirates got the red coat in the first place. Overall- I really like your idea of a red coat being whipped. You have used really good minifig face expressions in your MOC. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion Wow, SirNadroj, this is an amazing MOC! There is so much detail, fighting and pillaging. Neptune’s rock formation looks really real. I really like the pirate ship a lot. It kind of reminds me of the Black Seas Barracuda in a way. How you made the houses so smooth and neat looks really nice. Also, I like how you have each cannon firing a cannonball with a trail of smoke following it. I really like the red, yellow and white tower because it sticks out so much in your MOC and it looks like it is the most important part. The pattern you used for the tiles on the ground is magnificent! I can keep going and going about how much detail you used in your MOC. Possible Improvements 1) All I have to suggest is that you put some pirates or a monkey on the deck of the pirate ship because the deck looks empty to me. Overall- SirNadroj, I think you have done a very terrific job on creating your MOC. You have used a lot of detail in your MOC. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion Capt. Kirk, I really like the pirate MOC that you have created here. The front doorway you have made is really nice. The balcony with the pirates forcing the officer to jump off into the barrel of water is very creative. I like how you have the pirate on the ground waiting for the officer to jump to his death. The colors that you used to make your MOC mostly consist of the old Imperial fort colors. They are yellow and white. It looks like an Imperial guard had already jumped and missed the barrel of water. Possible Improvements 1) The Imperial guard lying dead on the ground, add some blood around him since his legs are separated. 2) Change the minifig face expressions on your minifigs because they are too standard. For example, give the Imperial officer a frightened or screaming face. 3) On the ground, I see you have not completely covered it with tiles. I would advise that you finish that up. 4) Have a monkey or rainbow parrot in the tree. 5) You could have an Imperial guard and a pirate fighting on the ground. Put some blue bricks in the barrel to make it look like there is water in it. Non-Brick Related 1) Your background does not look the best. I would re-take all of your pictures with a white background. Overall- This MOC of yours is a great idea. I like that you have the pirates making the officer walk the plank and jump into a barrel of water. I also like how you substituted a barrel of water instead of having the ocean. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion 74louloute, I have not seen a MOC about someone dreaming about pirates. I like how you made Young Ned sleeping in his little bed, while he is having a dream about a pirate chasing him. I also like how you created the little clouds leading up to his dream. That is very clever 74louloute, and I give you credit for doing that. By the bottom of the bed, I like how you have the pirate hat and sword in that position. The door you have created is also very nice and I like how you made the doorknob. Possible Improvements 1) Some thing caught my eye, the first bubble is white and the other two are white. If you have a white one of that piece, I would change it. 2) If you would like to make your MOC funny, add a monkey climbing up into the bubble. Non-Brick Related 1) You can include a picture just of the minifigs used in your MOC. Overall- You have done a very nice job on your MOC and looks like it took you a long time to create. The thing that first caught my eye was that your MOC is very smooth and nice looking. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion Well Guss, you have done a great job creating you small PTV contest entry. I like how you continued the story of Michael, from your large PTV contest entry. The idea of Captain Zuloo getting killed is great! (Not you, only your Sigfig) I like how all the villagers are terrified of Michael. It is funny how one villager is so scared that she is on her knees. I like how you made the blood drip down Captain Zuloo's body and also how you have his head on a stick, dripping with blood. Another thing that I really like is the awning that you made. Possible Improvements 1) The only thing I have to suggest is to put tiles on the top of your MOC. Overall- You have done a marvelous job on your MOC and have included lots of detail for its size. I wish you the best of luck Guss! LegoKing

Opinion I like your idea very much wouwie13. I like how Captain Green Hair tries to burn a pirate, but Mother Nature does not approve of this and changes the wind, causing the tree to catch on fire. Next to the tied up pirate, I liked all the skeleton heads and bodies. To the left of the tied up pirate, you have quite a nice variety of plants, almost making a forest. In the mists of the forest, I like the battle between the Islander and the pirate. Another thing that I like is that you have two Imperial guards hiding behind the bushes. My most favorite part in your MOC is the pirate’s hideout in the rocks. Possible Improvements 1) I would put some green tiles on the ground to make your MOC look nicer. 2) Have some snakes or monkeys crawling around in the forest. 3) Add a pirate on top of the rocks looking at what is going on. Non-Brick Related 1) Your third picture looks really bright. I would re-take that one. 2) Some spelling/grammar mistakes. I would always read over my work. Overall- This is a great large PTV entry with lots of fighting. As I said before, my favorite part is the pirates little hideout in the cave because it was a clever idea and you created it well. There are some minor things to fix that I recommend you do. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion You have a good idea here Nich Artri. Now I have not seen a pirate woman committing an evil sin so far. I like the girl that had already been attacked by the evil pirate woman with blood spilling everywhere. The little white house looks like a nice place to stay and watch the fight that is going on. One thing that I noticed is that the evil woman's legs are from the mummy minifig in set #5958. That is a good use of minifig legs. I also like the little frog that is sitting on the lily pad under the dock. Possible Improvements 1) I would put red tiles on the roof and fill in the spots on the ground with no tiles. 2) Maybe you could have the other girl's hair on the ground with blood on it. Non-Brick Related 1) Some of your pictures look blurry including the first one. I would retake most of them over and I would especially re-take your first one because that is the most important one. 2) Have the words before you pictures in bold. Example, Yoink!, Watching in horror..., and Dramatis Personae. Overall- You have done a good job creating your MOC, but it still looks a bit too plain for me. Try to add some more detail into it. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion To start off my review, I like how you put your MOC description into a little scribe. The big fight that is going on the beach looks very intense. My favorite part in your MOC is cave. This is because you have put little slanted tiles on the gray pieces to make it look nicer. Another thing that I like is that little entrance to the cave that the pirates are using to steal the Islanders treasure. The little Islander huts that you made are very nice. And how you made them out of green pieces to make it look like leafs. Possible Improvements 1) I would add some gold coins into your MOC because all you have is gold crystals and plates 2) I would use transparent red pieces for the blood stream because it looks better than plain red. 3) The beach looks a bit empty. Add some crabs or crocodiles. 4) You could possibly add a shark’s fin sticking out of the water. Non-Brick Related 1) I agree with Zorro3999 and Erdbeereis1, zoom in on the first picture since that is the most important one. Overall- You have done a great job on creating your MOC, especially with the smoothness. I like the walrus that is swimming in the water. Some minor improvements to fix, but other than that, it is great. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion SidNadroj, another fantastic PTV contest entry! I can see you have included the new pirates into your MOC which is great. There are a lot of things I like about your MOC, but I will start on how good your MOC looks. There are a lot of tiles which gives your creation an even smoother effect. The house is well created and I really like how you made the porch handrails uneven. Also, how you have the pirate on the second floor pulling the rope, killing the Imperial guard. On the ground, I like how you used red minifig arms and a red pirate hat as blood. Possible Improvements 1) The palm tree looks like it would need some more palms on it to have a fuller look. 2) Maybe you could put a monkey on top of the palm tree. 3) On the porch, you could add a treasure chest with spilled gold everywhere since the porch is lacking detail. Non-Brick Related 1) If you could expand your story, it would be better. Overall- Well, you have done a good job on your MOC SidNadroj. A couple things I really liked about your MOC: that your creation is really smooth, how you put a rubber band on the pirate’s sword to make it look like there is blood on it and including the rainbow parrot! I wish you the best of luck SidNadroj. LegoKing

Opinion Paul cantu, you have created a very well done MOC. You have well executed your idea into Lego very well. I like how the Islanders have stumbled upon a fellow arch enemy, the pirates. I like how you have the pirate beaten down to the ground, legs torn off and blood pouring out everywhere. Just to make it even better, you have a crocodile eating him up. Also, the Islander that is stabbing the pirate is also a nice addition. The crocodile that is in the water is also very cool. I like how you used green flat 1 x 1 studs as the crocodile’s spikes. The monkey in the tree is always something good to have in your MOC. It just gives it a more pirate effect. Possible Improvements 1) I would have the grass two studs higher than the beach, and the beach one stud higher than the water. 2) Possibly, you can put tiles on the grass, beach and water. 3) I would move the frog onto a lily pad in the water. 4) Change the pirate that is getting eaten by the crocodile to a screaming face expression. Overall- Paul cantu, you have a great idea and have done a great job putting your MOC together. I can say that you have enough blood and don't need to add any more. There are some things you can improve on. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion I like your idea of a simple house being turned into a brutal battle field. One of many things that I like about your MOC is that you describe each level of your MOC with a sentence or two explaining what happened right there. On the ground floor, how you have a sneaky little pirate stealing a villagers treasure. I see that you used Anakin Skywalker's minifig face for the villager lying on the ground. Now that is a nice use of minifig face expressions. My two favorite levels are the second and third floors. I like the second floor because it shows the house burning. While on the third floor, you have a pirate disturbing someone’s bath. I like that you have added humor into your MOC. The last picture that shows the front of your MOC is really well done. It shows the fighting that is going on and the fire coming out of the house. Possible Improvements 1) If you were to put tiles on all or some of the floors, it would look much nicer. 2) I would have the treasure chest open that the pirate is stealing to show what is inside of it. Non-Brick Related 1) Your pictures can be no bigger than 800 x 600 pixels. Overall- This is a terrific small PTV entry will lots of detail. I think the guy in the bathtub is hilarious. There is not much for me to recommend. I think this is my favorite small PTV contest entry so far. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion I like your creation Davy_Blocks. It gives a forest type theme and I like how the pirates made this shack out of the wreckage of their ship. On your pirate shack, I like that you have a mix of rocks and wood to create the shack. Also, I noticed that the roof is very well done by having leafs as the roof. In your first picture, I can see a monkey climbing the tree to get some bananas I assume. In your second picture, I like the little weapon storage barrel. Possible Improvements 1) The faces on your minifigs look to standard. Give them a mean, grunting face expression. 2) Put some tan tiles on the ground to give your MOC a smoother effect. 3) Since you have limited space in your MOC and you have no blood at all. Why not have a pirate and an Imperial guard fighting on the roof. Or have a dead guard with blood pouring out of him. 4) Put a treasure chest in place of the bench inside your shack. 5) If you have a monkey in your creation, you must have a rainbow parrot in there too! Non-Brick Related 1) Your pictures can be no bigger than 800 x 600 pixels. 2) In your fifth picture, it seems too dark. Try backing away and zooming in on it. This way the flash will get inside of your shack. 3) Some spelling/grammar mistakes. For example, don't have the word easily capitalized in the middle of your sentence. Also, I would re over your description you have so far. 4) It would be nice if you had a story to go with your MOC. Overall- You have done a great job and I like you idea of a shack made out of a pirate ship. There are some things I would fix in your MOC. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Very good design. I like it a lot!

I am ready for this!

This is much better. I like the improvements and the minifig face expressions are much better than the old ones. Great Job! LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium My Brickshelf My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

Some nice improvements you have got here. I can tell that the pictures are better than the old ones.

That is a good question Erdbeereis1. My guess is that they will be watching you and you will not have to post that you have completed the 20 posts.

Count me in! That is very smart. But will it affect your status in the creative critic contest if you leave all your feedback in one post? I also have a question about the mini contest. For the paragraph, does that include suggestions or only your opinion? LegoKing