Legoking

This is a really cool Star Wars MOC. You have done a great job creating this. I really lik the custom Luke Skywalker you have made.

This looks like a really good train MOC. I can see you have put a lot of effort into this and it has came out great!

I think this kinda looks like the Imperial Star Destroyer in a way. Anyway, this looks like it took a really long time to make and he must of put a lot of effort into making this.

You have done a very good job creating your MOC. I don't think this is too big at all. It is just the right size. Maybe you could expand your lego city in the future.

This is a really cool coca cola truck. I like how you made it look like the original trucks that coca cola has today. Is that coca cola logo a sticker or did you print that off the internet? I think you did a great job! LegoKing

This is a good MOC of the Star Wars AT-AT. It looks like you have put a lot of time and effort into it, but the sides of the body and the head look plain to me.

This is a pretty good town MOC. I like how you made every thing really small. Even the cars are tiny. Nice job. Keep up the good work!

This looks like a great entry. I like the whole spooky tree with skeletons under it. Although you could give something that the skeletons to hold.

It looks like you just put two Imperial Dropships together.

You have done a great job on your review. I like how you showed step by step and also how you completed this set. Great Job!

Opinion I like your MOC and the water over the cave is pretty cool. I really like how you created the waves on top of the under water cave and how you added a floating leaf. Also, how you added white into the blue water to make it look like waves are crashing. I like your whole idea of a calm water scene, but something gruesome and gory is under it. Inside the cave is pretty well made. Possible Improvements 1) In your first picture, were the water ends, you could put some blue tiles to make it look nicer. 2) What did Harry Potter do to you? I would change the minifig face to a more unhappy face expression. 3) Around the head, you could put some blood around it with a rat or spider eating it. 4) In the cave, you could also add a skeleton lying down. 5) On the top of your MOC, you could add some more sand and a little less water. On the sand, you can put a pirate flag with a pirate sleeping under it. Non-Brick Related 1) In your first picture, it is a little yellow and there is a shadow. You could possibly take another one with some more natural light. 2) For your story plot, you could expand it saying, "A screwed up pirate has villager’s heads in his cave." You could add something like that. Please don't copy what I wrote. Overall- This is a good MOC. Some minor improvements to do, but when they are done, it will look even better. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion This is a very good MOC and I can see you made a side of a pirate ship, very creative. I think you did a terrific job creating the side of the pirate ship using pieces that give it a wood effect. I like how you have a villager tied up to the center of the mast. You used good minifig face expressions for the right jobs of the pirates. I like how you made the cannons on the side of the ship. I think you did a very good job tiling the bottom of your MOC to make it look better. You added a good amount of treasure chests. I can see you put a lot of time and effort into making your MOC. Possible Improvements 1) I think you could add some blood into your MOC. 2) The water and the land are the same level. I would just raise the water level a tiny bit higher than the land. 3) You could also make the mast higher or semi-finish the mast. 4) To make your MOC more gruesome, you could add a dead villager floating in the water or have a villager being chained up to the side of the ship. 5) On the left side of your ship, I would put some brown tile so it would be smoother. 6) As Erdbeereis1 said, you could change the torsos of the pirates on the right side to pirate torsos because they look like knight torsos. Non-Brick Related 1) You could add some more pictures of different views. 2) You could add some more of a story plot as of why the pirates are there stealing treasure. 3) In your story description, I would take out the minifig faces. Overall- You have done great job creating your MOC. A few minor improvements to do, but of then that, it is great. Keep up the good work. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion When I first took a look at your MOC, it was wonderful. Your whole theme of Red Beards son finding a map and attacking a wealthy village, that was very smart. The battle scene in the middle of the village in very gruesome and well created the yellow house you made is very nicely made. I really like how you made the crumbling wall. It is very nicely made. On the top of the wall, I like how you made the Imperial guard firing a cannon at the pirate ship. It is funny how you made the pirates head flying up into the air. I can see you have spent a lot of time creating that pirate ship and your MOC. Possible Improvements 1) On the blue base plate, you could put blue tiles on it to make it look nicer. 2) I don't really find how the skeleton on top of the skeleton horse relates to your whole story plot. 3) On the yellow building, the bottom right of the roof is not would complete. I would complete the roof to make the house look better. 4) There is a bunch of dead pirates and guards dead, but with no blood around them. I would add some more blood to your MOC. 5) Your pirate ship looks really good, but the sails are made out of lined paper. I would go to theSails Library and print out some of those sails and use those for your pirate ship. 6) The door way to were the generals are hiding, I would fix the doors to make them look better. Non-Brick Related 1) Some minor spelling errors like, "Thats a crumbling wall from the cannon of the pirate ship." I would change it to, "This is a crumbling wall from a cannon being shot at it." Overall- You have done a very good job creating your MOC. There are some improvements to make, but when you fix them, your MOC will look even better. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Thank you for your opinion Guss. Yeah, about the waves, I just wanted to see how everyone liked them and what their opinion would be about them.

Opinion I really like how you thought of using white sand instead of yellow or tan. The way you made the slopes making it look even more like a beach was very creative. Also, the tree that you made is very good. Is that a brown dragon tail being used for a tree trunk? If so, that is really smart thinking. You also put a good amount of leafs on your tree which is good. You used good minifig faces for the expressions. I like how the pirate stabbed the Imperial guard in his stomach. I also like the flag that you used. Is the rubber band that is around the Imperial guard to hold the flag in place? Possible Improvements 1) In your MOC, the Imperial guard is getting stabbed; I think you should put some blood under the sword. 2) Towards the top left of your flag, it is dirty or tearing. I would change that to another one if you have or find another flag to put in its place. Non-Brick Related 1) I would just add some more pictures from a couple different angles. Overall- You have done a very good job making your MOC. I can see that you put a lot of effort into it. Just some small minor improvements to do, but other than that, it is great. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

I have updated my MOC. These are the things I have changed: I have made the beach a level higher than the water, tiled the water, switched skeletons, moved the sitting Imperial guard, put some sand around the buried officer, changed the leafs on the tree, changed a lot of the minifig faces, added some more waves, took some pieces out and put some tiling on the Imperial Fort. I would like to thank all of you for your input, but I would especially like to thank: Erdbeereis1, JimButcher, zorro3999 and Adam. I hope you liked my updated MOC! LegoKing

Opinion I like your theme for your MOC, making a girl dance. Good expressions on all of the minifigs faces. The Inn wall you have created is good. It is funny how you see a villager trying to escape by diving into the water. I like how you only included the minifigs legs so you’re giving the effect that the villager is diving under water, nice thinking. The way you made your dock is nice. I see you made each brown tile a little uneven. Possible Improvements 1) I really don't like how you created the water. Just make it one color of blue, instead of adding neon blue and having different colors of blue in your MOC. 2) The injured sailor's arm, if you are trying to have his arm be completely bloody, you should also have the hand red. Next to the sailor's arm, you should also put some blood next to him. Overall- You have made a great MOC and your story fits you MOC very well. You have done very well Adam. One thing, you wall for your Inn is fine as it is because in the 1700's and 1800's, usually the color of Inns wall was brown and tan. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

This is good. I like how you made the X-Wing fighter. They must be a neat thing to own.

This is really good. I like how you made the clones talk instead of having a description under it.

I would use acrylic paint. That is what I use. Take a look at mine. If you want, I can tell you how I made them and can walk you through the process. My custom clone troopers LegoKing

Guss, I see you have made some very well improvements on your MOC. Very good!

I am running a little behind so the new pictures will be uploaded saturday. sorry

That is really cool. I see you used AT-TE legs. I can't believe how many clones you have! Where do you buy all your clones?

That is really good how you made the AT-TE flexible. Nice Job!!!

Nice army. I will upload my droid, clone or republic army soon.