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I like your comic. But why did you scribble on one of your clones? I think you ruined it.

That is very funny Captain Zuloo. I will be sure I do that.

Thank you all for your opinion. I will fix my MOC and upload the pictures tomarrow.

Vig. 26d Updated Welcome to my first pirate MOC. I have put a lot of effort into my MOC. So here we go! The Imperial Armada has created a secret base on an island called Kuwaka. The pirates have interrupted the plans of the Imperial Armada and have unleashed a secret attack on the Imperial Armada. Now the Imperial Armada must fight back with all they've got and try to defeat the pirates. Overview Imperial Armada vs. Pirate Here, an Imperial guard and pirate are fighting to the death. Who will win the fight? Skeleton Pirate This is a dead pirate that tried to take the Imperial Armada down with his other friend that is hanging by the chains, but they have failed. This picture shows an Imperial officer that has been buried by the pirates not to long ago. Well, that

Opinion This is a good little small MOC. I like how you have created your MOC and use the guillotine. I like how you think. You have added blood and a chopped off head on the ground. That is always good to have. Also, I like how you created the guillotine. Possible Improvements 1) First thing is that you should get some of your facts straight. 2) I don't really understand what this has to do with pirates at all. This is what villages did you people in the old days that have commited a crime. Pirates did not do this. 3) Put some tiles down on the ground. 4) Your are only allowed to have a max of 6 pictures in your contest entry. Pick which ones you want to be graded and deeplink them to your topic. Overall- I don't really find this a good entry for this contest, but it is a good MOC. I think you should change your theme. I wish you good luck! LegoKing

Opinion Captian Zuloo, your have created a funny pirate scene. I like how you created the table using skeleton legs. The chair that the cheif pirate is sitting in is very good. I like how you put a skeleton head ontop and a pirate flag below it. The dinner tray that the other pirate is holding is funny. The heads as food and hands too? That must not taste so good. On the ground, I like how you put yellow tiles down to make the floor have a smooth surface. Possible Improvements 1) Your second and third picture are blurry. I would retake both of them. 2) On the dinner tray, you could actually add some reall food made by LEGO. Overall- This is a great small division entry. Some minor improvements to do, but other than that , your MOC is the best looking one I have seen for this category. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion I like how you created your MOC, cruel and very evil. The postioning of the cannon ontop of a chamber with a dead skeleton is very good. How did that skeleton get there in the first place? I like how you put he blue armada soldier's head in the cannon, while the pirate is about to light the cannon and the armada soldier's head will blow up soon. You added some plants, which is good. Good choice of pirate minifigs. I really like the one with the really long beard. Possible Improvements 1) If your trying to create a beach scene, add some yellow tiles next to the plants. 2) I think you could add some blood by the skeleton. 3) You also could add a rainbow parrot to your MOC just to have some color in it. Non-Brick Related 1) You could add a story to you MOC and describe what is going on in your picture. 2) You could take some more pictures of your MOC. It is always better to have more than one picture. Overall- This is a great MOC. I like how you made the scene by the beach. There are a couple minor improvements to make your MOC better. Other than that, your MOC is great! I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion I see you have made some major changes and created a whole new MOC. You have made your entry much better than your first one. You changed the theme from stuck on an island to a pirate collecting villagers heads. I like how you thought of more gory and nasty things this time. You have added a good amount of blood, which is good. You tiled the floor with brown pieces. I like how the pirate is holding the villagers head while he is cutting it up and getting ready to add it to his collection. The bars that hold the heads are also very nice. In his head collection, I like how you made the ones at the top nomarl heads, but at the bottom, you have skeleton heads. Possible Improvements 1) You could add a description on what is going on in the picture. 2) You could add another picture looking down at his head collection. Not much else to say. Overall- You have made some major improvements and your new MOC is much better than your old MOC. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Great job guys! Congrats!!

Opinion I like your MOC very much NewRight. I can tell you have put hours into your MOC and it has paid off. I can see that there are a lot of dead villagers on the ground. I like that one of the villagers is being hung. In the second picture, I like how the fire is pouring through the walls. Also, to the left of the giant fire, you put a treasure chest and other wood pieces next to the fire. I also like the plants and spilled gold you added. I see you used brown and gray tiles for the ground, nice job. The walls you made look very hard to make. I like how you have that villager trying to escape through the sewers. In your third picture, is that a custom sword that the pirate is holding? If so, I like it very much and great job creating it! Possible Improvements 1) I don't see much, actually, any blood by the dead bodies. You should add some to your MOC. 2) What does the Jester have to do with this story? I would take it out because I really don't find a use for it in your MOC. 3) You could have a fighting scene. Maybe a pirate stabbing a villager and blood pouring out of him. Non-Brick Related 1) Your pictures should not be bigger than 640xx480. 2) There are a few grammar mistakes in your description. For example, "A nice Port town that isn't so magnificent so more." You could say, a nice Port Town that is not so magnificent any more because of the accursed pirates. Overall- This is a terrific MOC. You could fix some small improvements to your MOC. After that is done, your MOC will be even better. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Ok, I get it. Sorry Captain Zuloo.

Opinion Nice MOC JimButcher! Great use of blood and pillaging. I like your whole idea of pirates attacking a village square and killing every villager in their sight. Your story fits your pictures very well. I like the villager towards the back that is on fire. Nice touch! I like how you put a pirate pushing a villager into their own fruit crates and spilling their guts everywhere. I like how you have villagers stabbed on the ground with blood everywhere. Is that a bomb in the air or a cannon ball? I see you have used a lot of Jedi torsos in your MOC. Did you use Jedi torsos because your were short on other torsos or you just wanted to? Possible Improvements 1) On the left side of your MOC, there are tiles on the ground. I would take them off or cover the base plate entirely with them. 2) I have seen too much clear pieces and I would take the bomb and clear piece away from your MOC. 3) In the center of your MOC, there is just empty space. You could add a barrel or crate that is on fire. Overall- This is a great MOC. There are a few minor improvements, but other than that, it is great! I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion Wow, nice job on your MOC Thrash! I can see you have put a lot of time into this MOC, along with a lot of detail. I really like how you made the soldier getting blasted by that cannon ball and how you made it come out of his back with lots of blood. I like how you have three levels. The one I like the most is the second level because it has the cannon and it also has the blue armada guy getting blown up! I like how you added that pirate hanging down from the ceiling just when the Governor's daughter thought she was safe, but she was not. On each level, I like how you you put tiles down. Your story fits your MOC very well. Possible Improvements 1) I don't think you should have that pirate flying in the air. I think he should be ontop of the tower fighting the Imperial Guard. 2) I think you should take that purple jug away because I don't know what is has to do with your MOC at all. Overall- This is a great MOC and I can see you put a lot of time and detail into your MOC. A few minor improvements, but when you finish them, your MOC will be great! I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion I really like your MOC and how you fit all of this into a small entry. Great use of dialogue in your story description. There are some very good details in your MOC. Now this is a first, I have not yet seen a Indian minifig included in a pirate entry yet, nice use of minifigs! On the second level, I like how a pirate is hanging a villiger. On the first floor, it looks like to me that this is some sort of chamber. Any way, you have used a lot of detail down in the chamber. The dead skeleton to the spilled treasure on the ground. Very well done LuxorV! Possible Improvements 1) You could possibly add a desk that had been knocked over by the pirate since your MOC is an Inn. 2) I am not really sure which side the Indian guy is on, pirates or villagers? Non-Brick Related 1) I noticed that there were a few minor grammar mistakes like, "What a bad luck: only peasants here." You could say, What bad luck, there are only peasants here. Overall- This is a very detailed MOC and looks like you put a lot of effort into it. When you have edited your MOC, I think it will look great! I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

I know that you were joking, but I still would post it. Just keep it to your self.

Opinion Nice MOC! I like the whole island effect. I can see from the first picture that there is a lot of detail. The last time I have looked at your MOC, there was a crashed bi-plane. I see you have taken that out and have replaced it with a pirate on a boat with a cannon. Nice improvement Lego12! I like how you made your MOC very bloody and gory. In the water you have sharks eating people and as we come onto land, you have the Islanders fighting the pirates. I like how you made Rock mountain and the islander getting hung. I see there are lots of plants on your island. The cage with the indian trying to stab the guard, very nice. I like the monkey that is standing ontop of the tower holding an islander head and a pirate flag. He has chosen the right side to fight on. Behind the cage, I like how the pirate is burning the bodies so there will be no witnesses. Possible Improvements 1) I see that there a so many different trees in one place. Try to have most of the trees the same kind. 2) For the blue base plates, I don't really like how you connected them. Either put blue tiles over all the blue base plates or don't connect them, just push them together. 3) For your Rock Mountain, you have black pieces, I would change them to grey instead. 4) I think you should take away those neon light green pieces by the water because they don't really fit your MOC very well. 5) Try to have your pictures 640x480 next time. Minor- Some pieces are dusty like the inside of the red cannoe, try cleaning them. Minor- In the beggining, you say there is no time for a story. I think you atleast need a plot overview of what is going on or how this fight began. Overall- I think this is a very good example of a gory entry. I few more improvements to go until this is a wonderful MOC. Until then, I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion I like your idea of a girl stranded in the middle of the ocean. I also like how you made the mast of the ship, but on the other hand, mostly all the other parts of the ship are sunken. It must of been hard to postion Mary Ellis on that mast only using chain. I like how you made your base plate. Putting the blue bricks sideways, smart thinking. Mary Ellis's face fits the scene very well. Possible Improvements 1) I see you tried to make a shark fin pop out of the water, but it is in the shape of a triangle and a sharks fin is not a triangle. I would just put a shark there instead of having a triangle. 2) You could try to finish the mast by adding a sail to it. 3) Maybe you could add a rainbow parrot or a crow sitting ontop of the mast. Non-Brick Related 1) You could add a shot of your MOC from behind it or a birds eye view of it. Overall- This is a good MOC, but if you do some improvements, this will be a wonderful MOC. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Your not very nice Captain Zuloo. Something wise, don't say people are dumb, it is not such a smart thing to do.

RichardAM, the reason for blood is because this is a contest, (Pillage the Village), where pirates kill loot and steal. Thus, you would need blood from all the killing. Opinion Nice first MOC. That is a pretty big tower to fit on 16x16. I like how you can see into the tower on the other side. I like how you put tan tiles on the base plate to give it a beach effect. Also, the palm tree you made is very well done. I like how you added some humor to your MOC. The pirates with the treasure chest look very happy, while the armada on the roof is shacking hands. This must of took along time to make because I see you put major effort into making the tower. Possible Improvements 1) You could add some blood to your MOC. 2) On the top of the tower, you could add an armada flag. 3) You could make your MOC a little more gruesome. Overall- This is a very nice MOC. If you fix some minor flaws, this will be a great MOC. One more thing, the pirates will not get away. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Mister Phes and Erdbeereis1 are right, you need to deeplink your photos to your post. The folder is not yet even public yet. Suggestion I can't say any thing yet, but you can only have a max of 6 pictures and cannnot be bigger than 640x480. Not much to say until I can see your pictures.

Opinion Wow, this is an amazing MOC. I don't know how any one else can beat this. I really like how you made the tower crumble. This must of been really hard to make. This is an example of art. The detail in your MOC is so great, I don't know what to say. The boat with the pirates getting ready to go on shore. The water is amazing. The walls are terrific. I really like that cannon. The crane is really good. On the tower, I like how you made gray lego minifigs part of the tower. The other two houses are really good. I like how the black one is on fire and also how you placed the fire on the house. I think the pirate sliding roof to roof while the others climb up them. I think the pirate with the little boat with all the treasure is funny. The fight that you have starting on the dock going into the village is terrific! You used enough blood. Possible Improvements 1) Maybe you could add some pirate flags to the pirates boat. 2) Your could also add a blue armada flag to your castle. Overall- This is a terrific MOC. I would say you have a pretty good chance at winning this contest. You had the perfect amount of detail. There are basically no improvements to make except for adding flags. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion This is a pretty good entry Snake. I like the idea of the blue coat getting his head blown off by a cannon ball. Also, I like how you made Billy's arm flying into the air while holding his gun. Billy's face perfectly fits the scene. His arm is getting blown off! . The blue coat that got his head blown off is grunting. Nice choose of heads! I liked how you related to gears of war in your MOC. Possible Improvements 1) I can't really tell that is a beach. You could possibly smooth it down with some tan tiles. 2) The tree is not too tall. Maybe you could your tree taller by using a palm tree instead of the piece your using in your MOC. 3) The guy that just got his head blown off, you could add some blood behind him. 4) You could possibly add a crab crawling across the beach to make your MOC look more like a beach. 5) There is lack of detail. Try to add something creative. Non-Brick Related Improvements 1) I saw that there were a few minor grammar mistakes. Before you submit your entry, just take some time to go over it. 2) You should have your pictures no bigger than 640x480. Overall- There are a few minor errors, but I think if you fix them, this will be a great entry. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Genaral armendariza, I told you this would look much better if you used blue coats instead of reds.

Opinion Nice MOC. I like the cannonball effect. This makes your MOC twice as much better. The British vs. the pirates is smart thinking. Nice use of blood, especially the pirate's head pouring blood into the water (that's pretty cool). I like the pirate in mid-air with the cannonball smashing through the wall. Another great thing is the British soldier falling in mid-air down the steps. You used a good amount of blood in your MOC. Another thing that I like about your MOC is the shark eating the pirate. Possible Improvements 1) You could have a longer story plot. 2) You could get the dust off of your blue base plates. Maybe you could just run some water over it. 3) When I am looking at this MOC, I see the base plate is made up of different colors: dark gray, light gray and a little bit of green. Try to have your base plate one color intead of multiple colors. 4) On the dock there is a British soldier stabbing a pirate. Maybe you could have added some blood under him. Overall- This is a great entry. If you do some minor improvements this could be a great MOC. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

This looks like a fun contest to enter. It will be hard, but I think I can pull it off.