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I did read the terms and conditions Mister Phes. I must have gotten confused with something different. Sorry.

Opinion This is a very interesting MOC you have here Nich Artri. I like the idea of two evil pirates using a poor villager chained up and covered in chicken for kraken bait. How you made the kraken's nest by having a bone yard and a sunken ship really makes it look good. Possible Improvements 1) The pirates face expression on the right looks too standard. It might look better if you were to give him a laughing, evil face. 2) On the sea floor, it would give your MOC a smoother effect if you were to put some black tiles down. 3) Have a treasure chest or some gold coins scattered on the sea floor. 4) Maybe you could add some crabs or sea life on the ocean floor. 5) You could possibly have a shark jumping out of the water, over the little boat. Non-Brick Related 1) Three of your pictures have a glare. I would retake those that have the worst glare and try to get rid of it the best you can. 2) Some spelling/grammar mistakes. An example; I would not abbreviate Imp Skellie's. I would put Imperial Skeletons. Overall- I think the kraken bait is a great idea. I like how you are continuing The Seven Deadly Sins pirate in your medium PTV entry. There are some minor improvements that can make you MOC even better. Other than that, your MOC is great. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium My Brickshelf My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

oDDerFisken, your improved MOC looks much better. You can see what I mean by putting tiles down. It gives it a much smoother effect. Also, I like that evil pirate standing there, looking at the poor villagers. I am glad that you have liked my idea on adding an evil pirate. The snake that you added to your MOC gives more detail to it. The storage room for the weapons and ammunition is a good use of space. You have made some good improvements oDDerFisken. Keep up the good work! LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium My Brickshelf My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

Opinion Very nice MOC and I like how you used the new pirate and guard in your MOC. The skull pit mostly explains that this pirate has got some problems and takes no prisoners. In your MOC, I like how you have skeleton parts hanging around in different places. Possible Improvements 1) Add a rat or rodent on top of the skulls. 2) Have some more blood pouring out of the guard’s body and have some blood on the ground. 3) On the bottom where the skulls are, maybe you could put some gold coins to give a better effect. Non-Brick Related 1) I would turn the guards head around so you can see his face. 2) It would be nice if you have some sort of story or an explanation. 3) I recommend that you take all the pictures over again because the background is not the best. You can try using white pieces of paper for a background. Overall- Even though this only took you five minutes, it turned out pretty good. I liked that you included the new pirates in your MOC. I have suggested some things to fix and I would recommend that you do some of them. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium My Brickshelf My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

Opinion This is a great example of betrayal and cannibalism. The pirates own captain, going to kill him and eat him because he is hungry. I also think the captain has chosen a great time to kill his crewmate without being noticed. Possible Improvements 1) Instead of having the water so shinny, you could have it a darker blue color with tiles. 2) Maybe add a shark fin sticking out of the water. Non-Brick Related 1) It would be nice if you had more pictures of your MOC at different angles. Overall- This is a great MOC with a terrific idea. Just a few things you need to fix, but other than that, it is great. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium My Brickshelf My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

Opinion A very good idea indeed oDDerFisken! How you made the fuse using rope is very smart. The wall color fits your MOC scene very well by the gloomy effect. Also, how the cannon is on a rotating plate. Possible Improvements 1) I would put tiles everywhere to give your MOC a smoother and nicer look. 2) Maybe you could add an evil pirate laughing. 3) The expressions on the minifig faces look to standard. I would change them to a screaming face. Non-Brick Related 1) Some spelling/grammar mistakes. An example; simpel. Should be simple. Overall- You have a very good idea and would probably the first thing a real pirate would do to his victims. Some minor improvements to fix, but other than that, you have done a great job. I wish you the best of luck! legoKing My PTV Entry- Medium My Brickshelf My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

Opinion Yet another good PTV entry involving the pirates attacking the Imperial armory, but the pirates struggle to get in. I like the big battle that is going on the beach. Especially that cannons with a head in it that is getting ready to fire at the armory walls. Possible Improvements 1) This is kind of small for a PTV large entry. Maybe you could expand and make your MOC bigger. 2) I don't see any blood at all, but there is a big fight going on, with dead soldiers. Put some blood on top of and around the dead soldiers. I also see that there is a head hanging out of the cannon. You could possibly put some blood dripping from the cannon. 3) To make your MOC look nicer, you could put some tan tiles down to give it a smoother affect. Also, put some gray bricks as rock. Non-Brick Related 1) Most of your pictures are fuzzy. I would retake them. Overall- You have done some nice work Nich Artri and it looks really good. There are some little things I would fix and your MOC would look better if you had more detail. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing url="http://www.eurobricks.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=22160"]My PTV Entry- Medium[/url] My Brickshelf My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

Nice improvements. The pictures look much nicer. Sorry about saying that you need to change you minifig face expressions. I did read it and I had to just say that. But forget that, the pictures are much clearer and look much nicer.

I have a star wars magnet set and Boba Fett came with it. I would like to take off his helmet, head and legs. But I can't because of the magnets. Is there any techniques on how to remove the magnets without destroying the minifig? I would rather not breck this one because it is the only one I have. Thank You for your help LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium My Brickshelf My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

Opinion This is a very intense battle between the Imperial guard and the pirates. Even a monkey has joined to help fight. I like that there is a lot of action and fighting going on in your MOC. The rock formation that extends out into the water is well done. I like how you have the officer stabbed by a pirate with a pickaxe. In the water, I like how you have the frightened guard trying to swim away. I also like how you have the guards getting prepared for battle behind barrels and how you have a guard in a barrel. Possible Improvements 1) Maybe you could have a pirate walking out of the water onto a beach? 2) Put a shark eating the dead guard in the water. 3) It would look much nicer if you put down brown tiles on the dock. 4) I would change Admiral Martins face expression to a more unhappy/screaming type. Non-Brick Related 1) Your first pictures should be the best because that is the most important one. 2) Your last picture has a flash glare, I would retake it. Overall- I like your idea of pirates invading the Imperial guard, but I have seen a lot of this idea. You have good detail and lots of fighting. You have done a great job creating your MOC. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium My Brickshelf My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

Opinion I think this idea was even better than a torture chamber anyway. I think you have made the room well put together with lots of little details to make it look better. I like the fireplace the best is because of how you used swords as decoration and how you have an Imperial officer torso to make it look like it is clothes. Also, the bed is good and I like how you have a shark hanging above it. The pirate cutting a head off through a window is a good idea. Possible Improvements 1) I am not sure how the head could have rolled that far away from the bed. Put the head closer to the bed. 2) I would not have the blood included as tiles. Just replace the blood spots with tiles and put blood on top of the tiles. 3) Maybe you could put some white tiles on the bed cover along with some blood stains as well. 4) Put some sort of fire in the fire place since it is a fire place. 5) You could have his wife walking into the room screaming. 6) Inside the room, you could have a flower in a little flower pot to add some color. Non-Brick Related 1) Your pictures can be no bigger than 640x480. 2) Your last picture looks a little blurry. I would re-take that specific one. Overall- This is a great idea by having a coward pirate kill his enemy. I really liked how you did the chimney. I have one question, is that a troll sword the pirate is holding? Some little things to fix, but everything else is great. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium My Brickshelf My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

The new pictures you took are even better. They are clearer and show more detail. Good job! My PTV Entry- Medium My Brickshelf My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

Opinion Wow, this is a first. Does this take place inside a ship? If so, the deck is put together really good and I like the pattern. I like how you have blood pouring out of the villagers arm. You used good face expressions and I like the skeleton lying down in the corner. The bath tub is made good because black makes blood stick out more. I can see you are not lacking any blood. Possible Improvements 1) You could have a rat on top of the skeleton. 2) You could have a chain around one of the Prisoners. Non-Brick Related 1) You could expand your story and explain why the captain's name is Bloodbeard. Overall- I like how the captain is a sick, twisted fellow that likes to bath in blood. Your MOC expresses the true meaning of the PTV contest. You have a great idea and it was made well. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium My Brickshelf My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

Opinion I like your inspiration from "The Pirates of the Caribbean" movie. Good face expression use in your MOC. Is that an Exo-Force head? If so, it looks really good with your MOC. The palm tree looks like it took the longest to make and it turned out really good. I like how the pirate is eating the villagers arm. Possible Improvements 1) I think you should put some yellow tiles down on the sand to give it a smoother effect. 2) I don't think the pirate could have eaten that villager so fast. You could have a normal torso and leave the rest skeleton parts to make it look like the pirate has already eaten the body parts. 3) Have something floating in the water so there is not a plain look. 4) You could have a rainbow parrot sitting in the tree or vultures waiting to eat the leftovers. Overall- I really like how a movie inspired you to create this MOC and it has come out great. I think you have a great job creating your MOC. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium My Brickshelf My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

Opinion I have not seen an idea of pirates destroying the Imperials armory. I like the fuse that you have created by having black studs to create it. The roof you created using black tiles is well done. The little armory house is also well created. Possible Improvements 1) Take those gray tiles away and put brown tiles all over the ground. 2) You could have an Imperial officer running out of the armory. Non-Brick Related 1) Some spelling/grammar mistakes to fix. I would always read over what you write. Overall- Your whole idea is well created. I like the fuse burning into the little house. Some little things to fix, but other than that, you have done a great job! I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium My Brickshelf My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

Opinion I like your theme of a little house being invaded by the Imperial guard? The house is nicely made with good detail. I like the roof tiling patterns that you have made combining red and dark red. The steps you have made leading onto the grass is well created. I like the little beach you have created that leads onto the grass. The dock you have made is good. Possible Improvements 1) I would put some green tiles on the grass, tan tiles on the sand and blue tiles on the water. 2) You could have floating pieces of a ship in the water. 3) The two guards that are running away with the treasure chest, I would open the treasure chest up to show what their stealing. 4) I would move or take out that cannon sitting in the middle of the water. 5) Add some more blood to your MOC by have a brawl between a pirate and an Imperial guard. Non-Brick Related 1) Have some more angles of your MOC. 2) Have some sort of story explaining what is going on in your MOC. Overall- I think this MOC could have some great potential if finished. You have done a great job so far, but until you finish your MOC, I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium My Brickshelf My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

Opinion Lord King of Everything, you have created a great pirate ship with lots of detail. I like how you put the MTT Trade Federation and Troll Warship pieces to make a very good pirate ship. I like that you have a skulls head in the back of the ship and the skeletons arm towards the front of the ship. Do you have another skull arm on the other side? I think you have done a great job with the sails. The yellow piece that you have included in your pirate ship gives it an even better appearance. Possible Improvements 1) I would put in some more pirates onto your ship. 2) Have some water or some sort of base plate. 3) You could add a plank so when pirates have prisoners, they could be forced to walk the plank. 4) Add a rainbow parrot to have some more color to your MOC. Non-Brick Related 1) I would have some sort of story or plot. 2) Take some close up pictures of the ship and add different views of the ship. 3) Your pictures can be no bigger than 640x480. 4) Your sails are great, but I would switch lined paper to plain white paper. 5) Have a better background for your pictures. Overall- Your MOC is very nicely executed with lots of detail. I really liked that you have combined two non-pirate sets to make a terrific pirate ship. Some minor improvements to fix, but other than that, it is great. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium My Brickshelf My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

Opinion This is a fantastic MOC with lots of detail! The rocks beneath the fort are well made with a light gray and gray to give it an even better appearance. The thing I like about your fort is the white appearance mixed with yellow bricks. The firing cannons are a nice touch to add to your MOC. I like how you have your rifles neatly set up next to each other. Your pirate ship that you also made is well done. Possible Improvements 1) There are fights between the Imperial Armada and the pirates, but no blood. I would add some blood since this is the Pillage The Village contest. 2) I noticed that there is a guard just standing there, while pirates are dumping treasure off the side and taking treasure out of the house. Don't just have guards standing around, have them interact and fight each other. 3) The size of your MOC, I would add some waves or floating wood in the water, so it would not look so plain. 4) I can't really distinguish what is what on your pirate ship. I would add some more detail to it. Maybe add a couple of rainbow parrots to add a multi-color affect. 5) I don't think your sails are too good. I would go to the sail library and print some sails out. Non-Brick Related 1) I would have a better background for your MOC. 2) Take some other pictures of your MOC. 3) Have some sort of story. Overall- I think your MOC is very well done to perfection. The thing that I like the most about your MOC is that it is neatly done and has lots of tiles. Some things you could improve on, but other than that, it is great. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium My Brickshelf My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

How and where did you get the new pirate sets? They are not supposed to be released until 2009.

How did you get this set?

spaceship building contest.

I really like the mini battle a lot!

Nice MOC!

Did you make that helmet because it is really good?