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I like the Indian flying in mid air and the flowers are nicley done.

I would love to help out. I can build anything you want me to.

Opinion Well, I like see that you have a lot of detail in your MOC and I like it. I really like the red, white and yellow building because you are trying to make your building look like one of the old ones from the 80's. By the water, I like how you have the pirates putting the stolen treasure on the little boat. I think you have done a very well job on the prison cell. In you're forth picture, I like how you have the Imperial officer hiding from the pirates. Possible Improvements 1) I think the faces are too standard. I would change them to better expressions. 2) In you're forth picture; there is a piece I would change to 1x6 instead of 1x8. 3) I would add a fighting scene and there you could put some blood since your lacking it. 4) In your last picture, there is a villager holding a broom, I would take that out. Non-Brick Related 1) It you be nice if you were to add a story to your MOC explaining what is going on. 2) Some spelling/grammar mistakes to fix. Overall- I think your MOC is great and I really like that you fit so much detail into a medium MOC. Some minor things you have to change. I would also recommend that you read over what you write. Other than that, I think your MOC is great. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium My Brickshelf My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

Opinion I like your idea on pirates killing villagers by burring them in their own treasure. Your MOC expresses a new way on killing people and I have not seen this idea yet. Nice use of treasure in the hole. I like how you have the pirates standing on top dumping more treasure into the hole. Possible Improvements 1) Your faces look to standard. Change the faces up and give the villager that is being buried in treasure a screaming face. 2) You could have the pirate on the right holding a rainbow parrot to add some color. 3) I think it would look nicer if you put some brown or black tiles on your MOC to make it look nicer. Non-Brick Related 1) Most of your pictures are a bit blurry. I would retake the ones that look the blurriest. Overall- I really like your idea of killing villagers by burring them in treasure. It is a great idea and you have done a very good job. Some minor improvements to fix, like minifig face expressions, tiling and more. But other than that, your MOC is great. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium My Brickshelf My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

Very well done! You have done a great job!

can you give the pricing of each set?

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I like the video.

I like it a lot.

I like the tan clone trooper the best.

Yeah, mine too. I think TLC should fix this problem.

Nice MOC! I like the Republic Troopers.

Jango Fett! Please don't tell me lego is releasing Jango Fett.

I am not sure who I would give my Lego collection to. If I gave it to a future son, I would tell him not to ever sell my Lego collection and don't lose any pieces.

I like the game!

Opinion I like the whole market idea and pirates stealing from a helpless woman. Your MOC really does look like a market with the food in the crates and the guns and maps hanging on the wall in the back. The roofless market looks like something you would see in person. Possible Improvements 1) Change the expression on the pirates faces because they are too standard. 2) Instead of having different color stones for the ground, just replace them with tiles. 3) I don't think the pizza fits in with a market. 4) As zorro3999 and xpatriot720x said, your entry might benefit from some real cruelty, PTV isn't about happy pirates. It is about pirates killing and fighting. Non-Brick Related 1) Your pictures are a little blurry. I would retake all of them. Overall- I like the idea of pirates robbing a market, but you need to have some fighting or something else in there. Some things to work on, but if you fix up your MOC, it will look great. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

Opinion Great job Matn! I really like the idea of that once the pirates killed every entire living thing in the village; there is still one thing left to do, kill the governor. I like how you made the desk, and how you put a pen, gold and mail on it. The thing that makes you MOC look really good is that everything is smooth and has tiles. Possible Improvements 1) I think you could change the governor's face to a more scared expression. 2) Give the governor an epaulette. Overall- Your idea of killing the governor last is a great idea. I like that you have made everything smooth so it makes the appearance look much better. Some very minor things left to fix, but other than that, great job! I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

Opinion I like you’re heading a lot, "Needs More Salt." Now I know why it is that is because the pirates are cooking an islander. I like that you made your MOC with looks of rocks and ledges giving it a better appearance. The palm trees are nicely made and I see you have added a rainbow parrot on top of the tree. I like how you made the bridge by snapping Lego pieces on string. I also like the bats that you added hanging on the rocks. Possible Improvements 1) I would put some brown and green tiles on the top of your MOC where the pirates are standing. 2) In the pit where there is a dead explorer, you could add some other skeleton parts on the plants and in the water. 3) You could have another Islander fighting a pirate to try to free his king. Here, you could add some blood. Non-Brick Related 1) Spelling error: "Heres a soldier who plunged to his death rather than be cooked up by King Kahuka." It should be: "Here is a soldier that plunged to his death, rather than being cooked by King Kahuka." Overall- You have done a terrific job on your MOC, making it hard to find improvements. I think you did a great job, just some very minor things to fix. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing My PTV Entry- Medium My small PTV contest entry is coming soon!

I would buy the the 2 smaller ones.

I wished TLC had something like that in New York!

I like the design a lot.

Nice spaceship!

Nice MOC, but I would add some color.

Nice review!

Wow, I never knew anyone would ever make transformer Lego, but you did. Great job! But what did you name your MOC?