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You can talk like a pirate, but there was some grammar mistakes that I said in my other post. Definitely, it is ok to talk like a pirate

I think it would be better to be the Imperials.

Nice review!

By the way SirNadroj, that video you made was pretty good.

Sorry, I did not see them before, but now I see them. I like how you put a little tile on the sharks fin.

Opinion That was the greatest story I have every seen Davy_Blocks. Your story really ties into your MOC very well. I like how you made the beach and the water because they are both very smooth. I also like how you included some little plants to give it an even better island effect. The minifig expressions you used for the young lady and the pirate are great! Possible Improvements 1) For the young lady, I would put her arms in the air while she is running to give her a more frightened look. 2) Your MOC is 6 x 8 studs. I would use those two other studs with wise to make your MOC bigger to add a palm tree. Non-Brick Related 1) Your pictures have too much of a green background. Try using white paper as a background. 2) Some spelling/grammar mistakes. Example; Anyways here's The Story I be Providing ye with today. It should be; Anyway, here is the story I will be providing you with today. Another example of capitalization at the beginning of a sentence; he knew. It should be; He knew....... Overall- I think this is a great little MOC you have got here Davy_Blocks. You have done a good job putting down tiles to give you MOC an even smoother look. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

I like that you added some plants, a guard house and some blood. But I would still put some more tiles on the ground and put some blue bricks in the barrel to give it a better effect. One thing, when you update your MOC, you dont have to write that much. All you need to do is post the knew pictures with what you did and thats it.

Hope you like Eurobricks.

Welcome to Eurobricks. I think you will really like this site.

That is a detailed MOC!

I think you will really like Eurobricks Fine Tooth a lot.

Does this include old knights as well?

This looks like to me a more Aqua Raiders MOC.

This is a cool MOC. I like the shape a lot!

Odd, but I like it. Are you going to purchase it?

Hmmmmm. This is an interesting MOC you have got here.

This is going to be cool, but are there any pictures yet?

Make a space/pirate ship and have the pirates wear space gear also.

I think there is a difference between TLC builders and MOC'ers. I do think a lot of people expect too much from the Lego Company. For example, if I worked for the Lego Company and made a new version of Jango Fett, everyone would criticize on how bad of a job TLC did on it. But if I made it as a MOC'er, people would look at it differently and not be as harsh and cruel. But everyone has different opinions on this.

This is a good custom landspeeder. The only thing I don't like about it is that you made it too long in the front.

This is pretty good CopMike.

Your right, chrome is awsome!

Great job putting this train into Lego. It must of been hard and must have taken a long time.

I like free stuff. Count me in!

Opinion I Scream Clone; your work has paid off by creating a wonderful MOC! This looks much better instead of when it was just the calamari and land. I like how the evil skeletons are against the pirates and Imperial Armada. I am surprised that the pirates and Imperial Armada are teaming up, since they both hate each other. The beach is really well done and how you made the beaches geography different in different places. The thing that is funny is that one of the pirates is using sheep as a weapon. The house is well created and the roof is terrific! I also like how you included a little jail cell in your MOC. The calamari attacking the tower is my favorite part. Possible Improvements 1) Put tiles on the ground to cover it completely if you have enough pieces to do so. 2) Maybe it would look cooler if you had a monkey fighting against the evil pirates. 3) In the middle of your water, it looks empty. Possibly you could have a pirate in a little boat firing a cannon at the calamari. 4) Put a guard on the top of the tower that the calamari is attacking. Non-Brick Related 1) Some grammar mistakes. Example; Pirates and Navy are quick....... It should be Pirates and the Navy are very quick....... Overall- I Scream Clone, your hard work has paid off and your final product is great! There are some tiny things that I suggest that you fix. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing