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marvelBoy123

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  1. *Your entry has earned 24 XP* The Jedi temple of Eedit on the planet Devaron had been abandoned during the imperial era but since the empire had fallen, the Followers of the Force had returned to the temple, acting as its guardians in the hope that one day Jedi may once again return to the temple. Most of them were local farmers, their families had inhabited the lands by the temple for hundreds of rotations and had lived in peace and harmony with the Jedi of the temple. Now the Jedi were gone, the Followers of the Force continued to tend to their lands but occasionally met in the temple for prayer and reflection. Usually it was just a small group of them but sometimes pilgrims would come from across Devaron and the Galaxy, hoping to find wisdom, peace and purpose...
  2. Massive improvement on the landscape - the smaller pieces make it feel far more natural and the little patches of rock work well too! The tree, vegetation and campfire are great too - this really captures the feel of being out in the wilderness. I think the story is great too and a nice length - you've maintained a lot of detail about the characters but it is a slightly shorter read. One thing to possibly think about is the use of the 1wide brown tiles: I'd always associate them with wooden floors so maybe two wide tiles or breaking it up a little with quarter round tiles would make it even better!
  3. Really nice build! The layered terrain looks great, the vines growing up the building are cool and both buildings feel very realistic but the circular doorways still help to keep it within the star wars aesthetic. The only nitpick that I have is that the Faction isn't really obvious from the build itself - a Pentastar flag flying from one of the buildings or some characters with an obvious pentastar allegiance (e.g. off duty stormtroopers) would really have perfected the scene from my perspective.
  4. Nice build - some good colour choices and realistic vegetation.
  5. Love the homestead and the story. Th character designs are great and the narrative really helps to expand on that. The landscape could use some work but it in an improvement from some of your past ones.
  6. A nice build and cool representation of the concept art. I would have loved to see a hole in the ships side though - that would have given a lot of potential for different textures etc.
  7. Love how you have worked with forced perspective - a very cinematic appearance to the lone figure in the cave!
  8. Love that landscape and the ship looks really star wars-y
  9. The roof and tread bike are both really good!
  10. A nice little micro landscape!
  11. A nice TIE fighter - really like how you have given it that weathered effect!
  12. Really nice build - love how much detail you managed to get in such a small space!
  13. Love how you well you have captured the action in this build - a lot of builds at this scale lose the feel of a classic star wars dogfight but you have captured that so well!
  14. A nice little build and a cool speeder!
  15. Love all the different plants that you have incorporated.
  16. Some really nice figures and I love how you have spread stuff out. The little patches of landscape have really enabled you to make the most of the space without having to find lots of pink bricks for landscaping. The animal is great too - making creatures that look organic is really difficult but something you always do really well!
  17. A really nice build with a lot of cool aliens!
  18. As others have said, the crash feels very convincing - the smoke, angle and bits of the ships frame really give the crash a lot of atmosphere.
  19. A nice little scene and the devaronians are nice but I do wish lego would make some better expressions for them...
  20. The trees are really cool and the TIE wing is great. You have managed to capture a lot of action within the build!
  21. The trees look great and the facility design is nice. I would have loved to see the Y-wing engine better integrated into the landscape though - doesn't seem to be much in the way of a crater despite the fact that it has failed from the sky.
  22. Love the AT-ST wreck - you have made some really great builds for this LTC
  23. Really cool technique for the ground around the crash - definitely one of the builds for this LTC that integrates the crashed vehicle best. I think it could have looked cool with some smoke perhaps but an amazing build nonetheless.
  24. A nice little build and your characters narrative is really interesting - nice to see a CFS character who isn't a peaceful farmer type...
  25. Really like the Karkarodon. The TIE wreckage is good when you know what it is but perhaps not immediately obvious!
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