Commander Beltar

Please Judge this Freebuild Edit: AHHH! Just realized a part fell off before the photoshoot...Please imagine its there! Or Imagine it broke in a fight, and that's what the Imperial Patrol is for The story so far: First Day Aboard the Avenger At The Table-Before The Storm Rescue Mission Reassigned Eliminating The Competition Target Practice “Here we go again…” Evac Escape A Quick Transaction "Black Sunshine" After having missions involving the Black Sun, Beltar finally clocked in enough hours to get some alone time on his home, Coruscant. Beltar’s grandfather was a wealthy political figure in the Republic, but he had got involved in various crime syndicates over the years, he left a bulk of his possessions to his son, including a nearly mint BNTLY-1948 air speeder, one of the rarest, commonly used among the Skull Crime Syndicate back in the day, Beltar assumed this is how this one came into his possession…But first, he had to stop at his old friends, Mak’s, garage shop to pick her up… Mak: Back on Coruscant, eh old friend? I kept ‘er in the best condition I could…Was a trouble to find the parts you was missin’ Beltar: Ha! Good to see you too, always nervous, weren’t you. I’ll give you a check for all those pieces you had to acquire later, the salary of a medical officer in the empire at my level isn’t the best! Also…how many times did you taker her for a spin Mak…? I know you would… Mak: Your salary is probably better than mine down here, in these parts… And uh… Perhaps more than once… It’s a long story, but the thing is that she’s alright right now…! I was surprised that it was in the good condition that you brought it to me in! Beltar: Yea, well my good ol’ grandad loved his air speeders. Sometimes more than us. But, he got involved in some bad people, after the air speeder was shot down, he was killed, by a Corouscant gang, but surprisingly the thing was left in okay condition! Mak: You know the gang’s used to call these babies Black Sunshine’s back in the day, my father told me about it. Because apparently the Black Sun controlled the BNTLY Speeder Inc, and they sold modified ones to their partners, and rigged ones to their rivals… Beltar: I guess I learn something new every day, whether it be how to save a life or something about the Sun’s. Anyways, I should get going, vacations don’t come often! Mak: Aight ol friend! Perhaps later, I can buy you a drink! Same time as before? Beltar: Of course! Later than day while Beltar went for a ride on some familiar streets that he hasn’t seen since he joined the academy… He drove by the Falcon district, near the Eagle Bar… Something clicked in Beltar’s head. This area was controlled by the Skull Crime Syndicate, and the crate he shipped earlier this month…had the symbol of the Eagle Bar, a known hangout of the Skull C.S… As he noticed this, he spotted an air speeder out of the corner of his eye, and of course, they noticed him. And another light went off in his head, he then remembered he had seen one of them while delivering the crate, he must’ve been there to spy on the Imperials… “Gotta warn Sarge later,” Beltar muttered under his breath. And suddenly, shots fired, a chase started. Beltar knew he had to lose the Skull’s somehow, since the BNTLY-1942 was one of the smallest models built from BNYLY Speeders Inc., he saw a slight chance of fitting into the street, and he could get into alleys easier this way… Beltar: “Just a little lower, come on…” “COME ON BOYS, SHOOT HIM! YOUR AIMS IS WORSE THAN STORMIES!” “Yea, yea, yea, bossman, we got this!” “You’re all idiots….Keep firing…” “Aw, almost got him! Watch out for pedestrians though!” “SERIOUSLY? WE CAN”T LET HIM GET AWAY!” “Why bossman?” “That’s the Imp I saw on N.E.! And that’s Mr. Beltar’s BNTLY somehom!….Ha, coincidences! Lovely, lovely thing!” "Yea! We'll get 'im!" “Run! Run for our lives!” “Move! Outta my way!” “No respect for bystanders!” “THAT VIOLATES 11 CODES!” Sarge: “Wait. Is that Beltar?” “Maybe Imperials? Gotta run!” Shortly after this event, Beltar managed to lose the Skull’s through a tight alley maze, the engines where almost shot, and Beltar knew he was going to have to get this speeder fixed again. Hopefully the Skull’s don’t come looking for Mak’s Garage…or Beltar… This time, I tried to write far more than my other freebuild, because that wasn’t the best build or story wise at all. I also get better photographs! Anyways, hope you liked the build and story! C and C welcome! ~Beltar

Location: D04 Magrathera Tags: Military, Civil The moment that all some have been waiting for (part II)! Continuing basically where we left off… ============================================================================================================================ *static* Begin Log, Chapter 1, Part 016, Nu’q: I’m…sorry. *Gunshot* (Note, real gun, not blaster, thus blood) Beltar and his friends were forced to retreat….being pursued by Madame Kawashita. Nu’q activated a com beacon for any Kawashita Guards around to converge on their Location…Kawashita Dark Ops was very, very close by. Jeb: Come on, come on! Quickly now! Dang, Dark Ops! Beltar; Yeah, yeah yeah, my arm is gushin’ out blood if you haven’t noticed! Robin: Shoot. Kraig: We are surrounded! Jeb: Everyone stop. Just wait. All of them would be branded criminals in Kawashita…if they weren’t already. Jeb: I’m sorry, but- *Poof* Beltar: Screw Octan. And Mantis. And Kawashita. Lauren: That sonuva- Robin: Look my friends, a mustache-man approaches. Beltar: Doctor Markam, and your little slave, Mr. Petere. Markam: Silence. I helped save your life! The LEAST you can do is respect me! Beltar; Like that’ll happen. Markam: Disarm them. All of the guards near them grabbed all of their equipment and threw it in a pile… Markam: Madame, would you please remove Lauren from this… disturbance. Madame Kawashita: As you wish. Lauren: Wait, wait! WAIT! Sonja! Beltar! BELTAR! Sonja: … Beltar: NOOOOOOOO! You’re a monster Markam… Markam: I know. Lauren: BELTAR! Markam: Time for Kraig. Kraig: What, what, what, Doctor, we can work something out? Hehehe? Markam: You will be reprocessed. And perhaps re-brainwashed. Kraig: …Si-… Beltar: Please…Spare him. Markam. NO, you know what, now I need to set an example. ARCHER, on your knees. Robin: No need to push mate! Beltar: No. You don’t have to do this Doctor. Markam: You have pushed me to the extremes. Robin: It was a…memorable journey to say the least my friend. Good-bye. Beltar: Ah screw my life. Good-bye. *Blaster Shot* Beltar looks at the body, wondering if he is next…. Markam: Alright come on you fool. You’re going to finally await trial… Sonja: I…I’m sorry….I…didn’t realize what would happen…Forgi- Beltar: I will never forgive you. Rom. Or even Rod. Nu’q gave a nudge because of a datachip in his hand… Nu’q: Beltar, keep moving. Beltar: ….Thank you…..my....friend… Nu’q: Move along. That chip could be Beltar’s way out. Markam: Get someone to clean that up fool! Dark Guard: As you command. Close Log, Chapter 1, Part 016 kszzz ============================================================================================================================ Back to extra pics! Thanks for reading this new installment in Beltar’s story. Basically, Beltar is screwed right now, every ally except Nu’q is gone….I can't believe I just 'killed' Robin... Hope you liked the build and story. I’d like to say that some of this story included what Nuck character would actually do in this situation (No, he did not suggest killing Robin.). As always, C and C welcome! ~Beltar

This is just....awesome and amazing! I was basically speechless when I saw it on flickr, it's just lovely! I love all the parts of the build, especially the ships, the walker, and that hanger door in the last picture! Also, great minifig posing, it has lots of motion to it, and nice touch with the moving fan in the Mandalorian encounter room. I could go on with more amazing details (there are so many!) ...but I'll pass on that. ~Beltar

Looks great! Very odd choice for a ship shape, but the greebles and engines do complement it! Nice interior for the small space too, it looks like there is more to it down the ladder, is there? ~Beltar

Wow, great build! Love the taxi, and the building, sidewalk design is a neat addition too! I also have to say that I really like the format of your build, with the 'opening scroll' and all. ~Beltar

Great build as always Goatman..., I love the metal skeleton! I really like how you layered the rocks, and the foliage looks great! ~Beltar

Great little build as an introduction to SoNE! I like, (as Josh said) the last picture where part of it is blurry. I also like the floor with the mix of smooth and studs! ~Beltar

Well, my entry is done, there are some great entries even with there being very few!

Great build and story in this freebuild, cant wait to find out what happens next! I really like the walls you created, I need to try that technique sometime, also those computer panels and the not completely smooth/not all studded floor looks great! ~Beltar

Nice little build! It's been cool watching you go from a very limited part supply for builds, to having more parts to create something like this! I like the computer panel area, and how you added patterns on the bottom walls so it's not just plain. ~Beltar

Amazing entry! I love the odd shape of the terrain and landing platform, and the shuttle and speeder look great. You captured lots of movement in the build! ~Beltar

Great build especially for its size! I like the holotable and the lights as MontyPython pointed out. ~Beltar

The story so far: First Day Aboard the Avenger At The Table-Before The Storm Rescue Mission Reassigned Eliminating The Competition Target Practice “Here we go again…” Evac Warning: Pic Heavy! Welcome to Jon’s Spaceport! Home of the original Spacewaffle! (In atmosphere) Air Space Patrol: State your business. Sarge: Look, I'm sure your busy, we need a quick landing to deliver a some medical supplies. Air Space Patrol: What kind of supplies? Sarge: Look, my friend is 'hurt' and he needs some help. Air Space Patrol: Alright, but before you land I have some more questions. Sarge: Look, I don't feel like answering anymore questions. But we will be landing at Jon's spaceport, send the local police if your so worried! And bill the Empire to make up for it! Ugh. Air Space Patrol: Will Do. Sarge:Your Funeral Air Space Patrol: What did you say? I can have you shot down! Sarge: Nothing. Just shut up please and let me land. Sarge: Let’s get this over with! Flying literally half a Gozanti is slow! The 3 disguised Imperial medical officers walked over to a guard to show their landing permit to before completing a quick transaction... Sarge: Alright, alright, here’s our landing permit! And a couple credits to buy us some time…Or else…. The guard took a quick glance at it, scanned it, and let them on their way. As the three medical officers approached their client, an Imperial Officer stopped them. IAA Female Officer: Good, you boys are here. Dajyra the Hutt upset…your behind schedule. By FOUR hours! Boris: We had t- IAA Female Officer: I don’t wanna hear it! Move along now! Sarge: Understood Sir. The officer was clearly upset, so they quickly walked over to the Hutt. Beltar and Boris where startled at what they saw as a guard approached them... Nemoidian Guard: Halt! State your business before approaching the illustrious Dajyra the Hutt! Sarge: We are here for your Master’s… “Medical Supplies” according to my transaction papers. Beltar and Boris where almost speechless at the age of the Hutt...Almost... Beltar: By the Emperor…They raise ‘em real, real young… Dajyra: Silence before I have your head! Give me the transaction paper. Leave the crate. And be done with it! Sarge: Excuse my friend… Here you go your highness…We will be leaving now before the local police arrive…. The transaction was very quick and painless but they had to move fast before someone noticed the obvious Black Sun Transport... Sarge: See Beltar, that over there is top notch bargaining practice. But, scum are scum, so not here. Alright boys, let’s go now…oh come on! BORIS! COME ON! Beltar: Ha, gotta try some of those things you told me about on this planet someday.. BORIS! Boris: Uh, Coming! Sarge thought they where in the clear, but then the officer started to approach again. Hopefully she wouldn't blow their cover... IAA Female Officer: I will file this report ASAP, the Emperor wishes to know. We will leave through a different port to leave little trace. Drop the Black Sun Transport off at Mustufar, and take a shuttle to Coruscant. Sarge: Understood. Let's move out! Beltar, remove the crate ASAP! Beltar: Right. Boris: Fun stuff... Beltar unhooked the crate and Boris ignited the engines and they where off to Mustufar for their next mission on Coruscant... The Hutt began to approach his item... Dajyra: Mwahahaha! Those fools! IAA Female Officer: Alright, let’s get off this planet quick. I never want to come back here again. IAA Male Officer: This planet sucks. Jon: Spacewaffle? Both IAA Officers facepalmed. ===================================================================================== Side Stories Within the Build/Details Extra Pics Below! Stop by for our original spacewaffles anytime! ===================================================================================== So many images so little time…. I added lots of little details so I hope you looked through all of the pics one of my favorite details I added was the partial black sun logo on the top of the ship, as seen in one of the SW:TCW episodes on a Gozanti cruiser. Also, since I used natural lighting, there are some pics where light reflected of the lens so it looks a little weird. Hope you liked this build and story! C and C welcome! ~Beltar

Please Judge this build! The story so far: First Day Aboard the Avenger At The Table-Before The Storm Rescue Mission Reassigned Eliminating The Competition Target Practice “Here we go again…” Er, photography on this build was terrible…But I must get this done! Somewhere on one of the Northern Ridges on Rishi’s Moon: TK-1313: Sir. *Cough Blood* Do you…re-really think anyone is…is coming? Commander Weisson: Well…I don’t really know…Stay with me soldier. Later: Boris: Found ‘Em! Hurry Up! Ha! We beat ol’ Scout! Beltar: Jace! Er, Commander! Sarge: Wait, son, might be some Rebe- Boris: Let ‘im have this sir… Sarge: Fine, but I want at least one person on lookout just in case there is some Rebel activity near here… Commander Weisson: *Cough* Beltar? Thank the Emperor…How’d you end up on medical duty? Beltar: Aw come on Jace, of course I’d be here! You save someone from the Coruscant Underworld, gotta return the favor sometime! Now let’s get you up. Sarge: Come on men! Load TK-1313 on the stretcher. Let me help the Commander up! Sarge: Alright, Beltar, get the pain reliever, that should help. *Scout over Comm* Sir! Rebels approaching! Get outta there fast!* Sarge: Roger that, Team 2 report. *Team 2 Report!* TK-4712: Sir, Y-Wings incoming! PULSAR BOMBS! RUN MEN RU- *Team 2 REPORT!* TK-3478: Sirr…. Get out while you can….Everyone but Rak and me is dead…GO! Arg, REBELS INCOMIN! *static* Sarge: Wonderful…We gotta move NOW! Tell Kirk and the scout to take the camp down and to stay low with that walker! Tell them about the bombers! Sarge: Come on men, come on! Move it! Later: *After returning to base camp and being attacked by some Rebels here and there* Pilot: This is Imperial Evac Barge 25, prepare for our landing! Sh*t, Y-Wings inbound, better get here quick! Sarge: Roger that Clurg!! Pilot: All right, Kirk is magnetized. Let’s go home! *SSD Massacre, coming in for a landing* Thanks for reading! Hope you enjoyed the build and story! (Again sorry for the bad photo quality and please judge this freebuild!) C and C welcome! ~Beltar

Please transfer all of my 180 credits to NuckElBerg please. Thanks! ~Beltar

Thanks! I told you Jeb would do more in my story line...! Thanks man! Er....It just somehow works Also, it's for D09, side note: I didn't realize we took D09, I assume it was because of the Challenge points... Thanks pombe! Thanks SpacerSteve! Glad you like it! ~Beltar

I've got lots of deals over the years at garage sales, flea markets, and online. But no one's probably going to believe this...but I just bought a UCS Imperial Star Destroyer (10030) for $150 and the Monster Dino (4958) for $5. Just thought this was worth posting. ~Beltar

Location: D04 Magrathera Tags: Military, Civil The moment that all some have been waiting for! ============================================================================================================================ *static* Begin Log, Chapter 1, Part 015, *Beltar has been wandering corridors for some time now* … Madame K: Welcome Mr. Beltar, have a seat. Beltar: … Beltar: You must be the-the- M ad-Madame Kawashita in-in charge of the K.A.W.A.S.H.I.T.A. division? I knew this was a trap. You locked certain corridors Madame K: Right you are. I believe you know who that woman in that chair is? Beltar: So-Sorry to disappoint but I don’t know. (Woman in chair): Aw, I feel almost insulted! Well, I guess you did have memory loss… Madame K: Mr. Beltar, meet Lauren A. Beltar. Beltar: WHAT. THE. ACTUAL. HECK. Beltar: I’LL TAKE YOU ALL ON FOR THIS! Madame K: Well, you are alone. Beltar: Who said anything about being alone? Madame K: What do you mean? Beltar: You locked corridors, but not computer sockets...Computer? *Over an inter-com* This is Computer: 38.5% Of Kawashita Base Programs Over-Ridden Madame K: NO! Shame, you will have to die now. Beltar: NEVER!...Computer? Madame K: Looks like your computer is having trouble getting past certain firewalls. To bad…Looks like you will have to take us on alone… *Explosion at the door way* Robin: He is not alone. Hello my friend! Beltar: Robin? Robin: Yes! I escaped with some help. And my hat is here! I also found these new goggles in their storage! Beltar: Who helped you? Robin: Oh, yeah, I brought them too! Kraig: You were expecting maybe, Squirrel Girl? Jeb: The offer is still up by the way. Beltar: I’ll consider it again later….WAIT, KRAIG! Kraig: YE-HA! Madame K: Wonderful, Sonja, Please protect Mrs. Beltar. Don’t let your personal attachment get in the way. *An all-out fight started* Jeb vs Rom Jeb: Take that you Kawash*t! (I needed to use that eventually) Madame Kawashita Vs. Robin Robin: My dear, I can’t fight y- aye-aye-aye. That HURT! Madame K: It’s supposed to fool! Beltar Vs. Pilot Beltar: To-to thi-think that when you saved me it was all for this! Pilot: … Eventually, Lauren Beltar decided to join in after stealing the staff from her sister, and a sibling battle began. Lauren: I’ve always been better than you! Sonja: Well, look where that got you! And who! An INSANE MANIAC! Lauren: You know, the only reason your in Kawashita is because of ME! With the ENGINE! Kraig Vs. Rodrigo Kraig: I never see this much action! Not even in the Mail Room! And there’s lots of action in there! Rodrigo: AHHHH! Kraig: I Thought you wanted action? (Forgot what build to link to here..) Rodrigo: I did. SPARE ME! Kraig: heaheaheaheahea! ... Nu’q: Come on man…Time to pick a side. Nu’q: You. Nu’q: Or you. Close Log, Chapter 1, Part 015 kszzz ============================================================================================================================ Hey, no more extra pics! There is one, but it’s a slight variation of a picture, so I just left it in the photostream on flickr. Back to longer stories hopefully! And this build is better than some of my recent builds. Also, this is a Part 1 of probably 3. Finally a look at Lauren, a huge fight, and Kraig is back! Who will Nu’q Shoot? Find out next time! (Same Bat-Channel, probably not the same Bat-Time!) And as always, C and C welcome! ~Beltar Edit: Story Error...

I think I'm the crazy one I guess my character is rubbing off on me! I forgot it restarts on Sunday.. I guess this is just a free build then. ~Beltar Edit: Changed it to a freebuild... I have completely forgotten what day it restarts...

Edit: Condisder this a Freebuild Please. Location: D04 Magrathera ============================================================================================================================ *static* Begin Log, Chapter 1, Part 014.5, A light? A-building…. AW COME ON! YOU’VE GOT TO BE KI-I-ID-D-IN-G Me! IT’S KAWASHITA! I’D R-A-AT-TH-E-ER IT BE OCTAN OR PIRATES! This stuttering is..k.k.ill.in..g me. I…I..g-g-ot no…choice tho-ugh… This will suck. Ah, good Ol’ Romily. Wouldn’t be surprised if he lost his job after nappin’ allowing me in! HA! Oh wait, gotta be quiet… Well Rom, I could easily drop this a little closer and take your life and make one less opponent for the future….*Clarity Moment* But...I-I—got enough blood on my hands at this time… And this form of death doesn’t have enough………honor….*Loses Clarity* Well, next time you won’t be so..so…so..l-l-u-uc-uck-y. You won’t survive our next en-en-coun-count-er. WAIT, HOW DOES THIS THING WORK! Wait. Beltar, quiet. UGH. I think this is an eye scan? Badge scan? DNA scan? Let’s just hope this doesn’t trigger an alarm in any sy-sy-syst-em… By God. This is gonna be one heckuva day. Close Log, Chapter 1, Part 014.5 kszzz ============================================================================================================================ Can you believe it? No extra pictures for once! Wow! I’m so proud of myself! Hope you liked this build and installment in Beltar’s story/decent into madness! Build and story is still on the low end…But I have something that I’m whipping up that should be great and at least better than this build! And as always, C and C welcome! ~Beltar

Really great build, I love that TIE Bomber! The story is really great, and that room is awesome! I love how you made the floor not completely flat, I also like all the other details around like the furniture, (A electronic outlet or Air Conditioning?), and the bathroom. All these little details around really add to the build! ~Beltar

Great new freebuild! Love the story, and how you move from one part of the build to another with the pictures and the text. Also, great job on the bridges and speeder! They look awesome! ~Beltar

Location: D04 Magrathera Tags: Beltar in Exile (Got nothing….) ============================================================================================================================ *static* Begin Log, Chapter 1, Part 014, Exile. My good old friends…Ha-haven-haven’t talked to yall in a wh-while. I got nothing to live for at this point. I’ve been betrayed by Kawashita. Dumped here by Octan. And MANTIS caught me in a bad mood. Ever had the idea to hold a sword too your neck and drop it? No? You are not in my sh-sh-shoes then… Ha..Ha…Ha….Then there’s: r-ra-ra-ra-rats. Rats…Rats…Wondrous Rats… Hehehe….Computer? That old piece of ju-ju-jun-junk? I…decommissioned h-hi-him. I still got his memory di-di-dis-disk…But I considered myself alone even before I…deactivated…him. Hehe! I will beat these machines….ugh… What. The. Absolute. ****. Is that a Robbinhood Rat? This is one s-s-si-sic-sick planet…It really ca-c-can change m-m-my mi-n-d. What…is…ha-hap-happe---happening to m-e… This is one sick planet. This is one sick planet. This is one sick planet. This is one sick planet (This was supposed to go all the way to font size 1, but pasting it is restricting me...) *Silence* Epilogue: I-i-s….t-t-th—tha-that…a…s-se-sett-settle—settleme---settlement. People. Who is my unlucky victim today? Close Log, Chapter 1, Part 014 kszzz ============================================================================================================================ Overview of the build in the spoiler: Back to completely insane Beltar! I didn’t have time nor a good enough Idea for category B…So I whipped this up as fast as I could, also the reason the picture quality is worse… Hope you liked this build and story! Even if the story is definitely shorter than what I've done before like Tappudansu, at least there's far less pictures! And as always, C and C welcome! ~Beltar

Great freebuild! Really love the way you captured the moment in this build, the little details like the pipes and canisters really help the scene fit together! ~Beltar

Nice little build! The speeder looks great! Nice borders too, and the terrain looks great! ~Beltar