Chro Posted May 30, 2013 Click the image above to view the photo set on flickr. Here's another MOC, built in January of this year. This is Taxir, a flying warrior. Again, no real backstory, though I think of him as an Iron Tribe Glatorian (with experimental flightpack tech, of course). Feedback is appreciated. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pocketmego Posted May 30, 2013 Not bad. I'd add some more sky blue elements, if you have them. Other than that I think clawed fingers and (MAYBE) a bit more bulk around the waist. Between the Blue Mask and the orange crotch. It needs....something. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chro Posted May 30, 2013 (edited) Not bad. I'd add some more sky blue elements, if you have them. Other than that I think clawed fingers and (MAYBE) a bit more bulk around the waist. Between the Blue Mask and the orange crotch. It needs....something. Yeah, I was working with very little light blue when I made Taxir... I agree about the colors. Why claws, though? He's scifi, not beastly... Edited May 30, 2013 by Chro Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pocketmego Posted May 30, 2013 I was thinking Talons, like a predator Hawk. Think HawkMan or even better Hawk MEN from Flash Gordon. It just feels (to me) that it would compliment the blades on his arms for quick swoop from the sky melee attacks. But, ignore it (of course) if it conflicts with your vision. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chro Posted May 30, 2013 I see what you mean, I guess. But as I said, I was going for a streamlined, spacey look, sort of like a jet fighter rather than a giant bird. :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pocketmego Posted May 30, 2013 I see what you mean, I guess. But as I said, I was going for a streamlined, spacey look, sort of like a jet fighter rather than a giant bird. :P Fair enough. :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Leewan Posted May 31, 2013 (edited) Nice, you have very good building skills ! The color scheme is original and interesting, that's a good point. But the proportions seem a bit off, for example the torso looks too long, and the shoulders are too low (it especially shows on this pic). :/ Edited May 31, 2013 by Leewan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chro Posted May 31, 2013 You're right, the proportions are a bit off, I think the torso is too long. The shoulders are actually not that bad (at least in my opinion), but they are a little bit low, because I wanted to attach both the HF armor to the chest, and the Nuva armor to the shoulders... I couldn't attach the Nuva armor from the back because the wing rig was there. Anyway, thanks, Leewan. :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
