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#1 Zepher

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Posted 12 August 2010 - 09:30 PM

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Editor's Note:  This is a choppy episode in my mind for a number of reasons.  The first is that I edited it over a long period of time.  The second is that there are parts of it I really like, and parts I really don't.  I'm not taking about story here, but editing.  I'm still getting back into the swing of editing photos, and it clearly shows.  On the other hand, a lot of shots, unedited, are very nice, and quite a few others, edited, really make me happy.  Comment as always!

Edited by Zepher, 13 August 2010 - 04:11 PM.

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#2 Ninja in a Barrel

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Posted 13 August 2010 - 05:50 PM

Wow, great job! I've been keeping up with this since the begining, and I must say, it is great! A few panels had some text over the pictures, making it a little hard to read :wacko: , but everything else is awesome. Keep up the great work. :sweet:

#3 Eskallon

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Posted 13 August 2010 - 05:56 PM

This chapter of the story was good. :thumbup:

However I did notice that the sets are a little dusty this time so maybe a quick dusting is needed. The effects look pretty good and I like the deserty effect parts. The story itself is so very interesting and now I am really excited to find out what actually happens. When will we find out?

Thanks
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Edited by Eskallon, 13 August 2010 - 05:56 PM.


#4 Zepher

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Posted 20 August 2010 - 02:06 AM

Thanks for the comments all.  I'm away right now, and still will be tomorrow.  I think early September will hold another episode.  Thanks for the replies, keep them coming.

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#5 Dan the Brickman

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Posted 23 August 2010 - 05:51 AM

Now Im gonna have to go back and read the others to get caught up.... seems like an interesting story.

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#6 Stardusty

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Posted 28 January 2011 - 08:51 PM

Since it appeared on Storyatures I am reading it with joy.

Only thing that I don't like are:
- white text sometimes is in the same color with background :cry_sad:
- short parts :cry_sad:

Keep brickin'!
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#7 Zepher

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Posted 29 January 2011 - 06:14 PM

Thanks for the bump!  I'm hoping to continue the story shortly, actually.  Be on the look out!

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