If You Win You're Still A Rat

[Zepher]

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Editor's Note: This is a choppy episode in my mind for a number of reasons. The first is that I edited it over a long period of time. The second is that there are parts of it I really like, and parts I really don't. I'm not taking about story here, but editing. I'm still getting back into the swing of editing photos, and it clearly shows. On the other hand, a lot of shots, unedited, are very nice, and quite a few others, edited, really make me happy. Comment as always!

Edited August 13, 2010 by Zepher

[Ninja in a Barrel]

Wow, great job! I've been keeping up with this since the begining, and I must say, it is great! A few panels had some text over the pictures, making it a little hard to read , but everything else is awesome. Keep up the great work.

[Eskallon]

This chapter of the story was good.

However I did notice that the sets are a little dusty this time so maybe a quick dusting is needed. The effects look pretty good and I like the deserty effect parts. The story itself is so very interesting and now I am really excited to find out what actually happens. When will we find out?

Thanks

Eskallon

Edited August 13, 2010 by Eskallon

[Zepher]

Thanks for the comments all. I'm away right now, and still will be tomorrow. I think early September will hold another episode. Thanks for the replies, keep them coming.

[Dan the Brickman]

Now Im gonna have to go back and read the others to get caught up.... seems like an interesting story.

[Stardusty]

Since it appeared on Storyatures I am reading it with joy.

Only thing that I don't like are:

- white text sometimes is in the same color with background

- short parts

Keep brickin'!

[Zepher]

Thanks for the bump! I'm hoping to continue the story shortly, actually. Be on the look out!