Stormbringer Posted May 26, 2011 (edited) Sometimes you'll never know what lies hidden beneath the desert sea of Egypt. A group of explorers and hunters are searching for egyptian treasure in the unknown charts of the desert that could be hidden under the immence pressure of sand below. Doctor Martin and his daughter are leading the expedition in search for the Lost Tomb of Pharozar. He also hired a team of hunters to safeguard them to their destination. A huge storm takes off, and a golden point is revealed from the layers of sand. With luck in their sights, the team rushes to the site and begins to dig in hopes for vast riches and archaeological discoveries. Or will they find a curse instead? Leading Hunter: "Why don't you be of some to use Doctor Bob and help us dig? After all, I don't believe YOU are paying me and my buddies?" Doctor Martin suggests that the golden point is actually the very tip of an obelisk. The digging would take at least several weeks to complete, as the team were already hard at work. "Why are you taking your time? You think we're on a vacation? Dig faster!" Finally a clearing is made and the entire obelisk is dug out. But something lies hidden beneath that holds something unexpected and terrible for our hunters. As the team unearths the tomb, skeletal remains appear from the sand. Right at the foot of the stone, there was large stone tablet blocking access to the tomb. But they had to move quickly for the sun was going down. As the team were investigating the tomb, Doctor Martin analyzes the bones. The hunters emerged from the tomb, furious that they couldn't find anything of value. But Martin was still focused on the skeletal remains. Doctor Martin said: "This must be a clue to the secrets of Pharozar!" But the others were skeptical and were about to leave. However... Little do they know of what lurks behind as a monster looms over them. Having been abruptly awoken by the hunters, Mummified Raptors are forced out of their slumber, now hungery for fresh "flesh". Uh-oh, poor Bob... and everyone else. The End. I combined two themes. Pharaoh's Quest and Dino Attack. Enjoy. For the full details of the story go to my Mocpages Edited May 26, 2011 by Stormbringer Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Commander Keller Posted May 26, 2011 Haha neat! Very cool idea with the unearthing. I like your fire pit as well. Raptors look cool! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Decale Posted May 26, 2011 Aha I love the abrupt end^^ I like your story-telling and how you build the hole in the sand little by little. The 8-bit SNOT obelisk is very nice. Good job, Stormbringer! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Yatkuu Posted May 26, 2011 Wow, that's a pretty massive excavation for a bunch of guys using only shovels! A strange mix but a great MOC nonetheless! I just wish we could see what is in that tomb! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
White Cat Posted May 26, 2011 Yeah, I like the raptor, too. The only downside that I can find is the pillar seems lacking detail. Still an impressive moc though Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lightningtiger Posted May 26, 2011 'Stormbringer', you are a story telling and MOC building genius.....well you gotta be to do both ! Fantastic disappearing sand dune and the surprise in the end.....like oh, man what a way to go....in the stomach of a raptor ! Brick On...and please more 'Stormbringer' ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
XimenaPaulina Posted May 27, 2011 A very entertaining series of MOCs Stormbringer! I love the sequence of the builds, it must've taken you some time to complete this with all the building and taking photos in between. A great story from start to finish, excellent work once again! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
InArchitect Posted June 5, 2011 I love the brick-built raptor that you used! This is a great little story you have made yourself. Is that a red grape vine that you used for flesh? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stormbringer Posted June 5, 2011 I love the brick-built raptor that you used! This is a great little story you have made yourself. Is that a red grape vine that you used for flesh? They're cherries that are bunched together to look like guts. Yummy! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Big Cam Posted June 6, 2011 Oh my gosh, the story is so well laid out. I love the unearthing of the tower. Really well done, and your pictures are crisp and clear. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Masked Builder Posted June 6, 2011 I think I commented on this on MOCpages but I'll comment again. This is such a great MOC! All of the little details and the story is just great. Keep up the amazing work! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
icy brick Posted June 21, 2011 This is so cool and beautiful ! and give me a head full of thoughts...... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AnthonyFallen Posted June 22, 2011 Wow! Really great stuff man! :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hoboman Posted June 26, 2011 That was cool. I loved the "Dino" that showed up. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mr. McDuck Posted June 27, 2011 Nice idea, nicely did. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hueybricks Posted July 8, 2011 Haha, that was great! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mr_Malfoy Posted July 9, 2011 This is hilarious! I love the way you set up the story. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
