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--==Please Judge this freebuild!==-- The story so far: First Day Aboard the Avenger At The Table-Before The Storm Rescue Mission Reassigned Eliminating The Competition Target Practice “Here we go again…” Evac Escape A Quick Transaction "Black Sunshine" Repel and Retreat Previously: Flatline Reflection A Promotional Meeting Beltar was contemplating the ringing, the heartless ringing. Heartless. As he walked into the officers room. Green. That was odd for an officer to have his own custom made green chair, Beltar thought, it just seemed odd. Recently he seemed to be noticing trivial things, like how the technician’s collar was slightly bent down and wrinkled. Then he noticed Sarge in a uniform and was relieved that this meeting couldn’t be that bad. Imperial Officer: Hello there, Mr. Beltar. We have much to discuss. Oh yes, be amazed that Sarge is dressed up in that new uniform, go on tell the lad. Sarge: Well Beltar, I was offered a job as a chief medical officer aboard one of the Empires Outer Rim research facilities. I’ve taken it. Beltar: Congratulations Sarge! I imagine it’ll be great.. Who’ll be in charge of us then? Oh, that’s what this is about, isn't it? Imperial Officer: Precisely my dear boy. That is where you come in. But please, hand that Data Disk to the officer first. Beltar: As you wish, Sir. Beltar once thought again about what was so important on this disk, of course he didn’t ask, but what was on that disk out in the middle of deep space is a question he’d soon ask again. Imperial Technician: Thank you, you’ve been a great help Mr. Beltar. The Technician then proceeded to put the disk into the droids socket and walk towards the door. Imperial Officer: Due to the recommendation of Sarge and whim of some other high ranking officer, I reviewed your files, and as TK-821….isn’t in the position to lead, you are. You will be the new “Sarge” As a captain though, within the medical Dark Ops Units. Beltar: I get Sarge’s old job? Wonderful! This’ll be fun. Imperial Officer: Not so fast, there will be much paperwork sent to your barracks, but you may also report to the armory when ready for a new set. Also, it is not the same job. Different Team, no Kirk, different missions: more... “Under the Radar” type. Dismissed. Beltar: Thank you sir. Beltar: It’s a goodbye then, isn’t it? Sarge: Yeah, but I got a feeling we’ll see each other around sometime. Beltar: Well then, perhaps we will. Sarge: Maybe, I’m heading to my ship at the moment, goodbye Mr. Beltar. Sorry about what happened to Borris. Beltar: Couldn’t have done anything about it. Goodbye Sarge. -End- Dark Trooper: Where they both transferred? He doesn’t like to wait. Imperial Officer: Of course they were, you can leave, and I don’t need you at this time. Just tell him I don’t see where he is going with this. Dark Trooper: Understood. Thank you for stopping by! I tried to continue the serious tone from my last freebuild. Not to much on the build, again, more of a setup to get my character’s story going even further and most of my parts are in storage or on my next MOC, very greebly and It used many of my parts, non SoNE related though.. Thanks for reading and as always, C and C Welcome! ~Beltar
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Location: D04 Magrathera Tags: Military, Civil The moment that all some have been waiting for (part II)! Continuing basically where we left off… ============================================================================================================================ *static* Begin Log, Chapter 1, Part 016, Nu’q: I’m…sorry. *Gunshot* (Note, real gun, not blaster, thus blood) Beltar and his friends were forced to retreat….being pursued by Madame Kawashita. Nu’q activated a com beacon for any Kawashita Guards around to converge on their Location…Kawashita Dark Ops was very, very close by. Jeb: Come on, come on! Quickly now! Dang, Dark Ops! Beltar; Yeah, yeah yeah, my arm is gushin’ out blood if you haven’t noticed! Robin: Shoot. Kraig: We are surrounded! Jeb: Everyone stop. Just wait. All of them would be branded criminals in Kawashita…if they weren’t already. Jeb: I’m sorry, but- *Poof* Beltar: Screw Octan. And Mantis. And Kawashita. Lauren: That sonuva- Robin: Look my friends, a mustache-man approaches. Beltar: Doctor Markam, and your little slave, Mr. Petere. Markam: Silence. I helped save your life! The LEAST you can do is respect me! Beltar; Like that’ll happen. Markam: Disarm them. All of the guards near them grabbed all of their equipment and threw it in a pile… Markam: Madame, would you please remove Lauren from this… disturbance. Madame Kawashita: As you wish. Lauren: Wait, wait! WAIT! Sonja! Beltar! BELTAR! Sonja: … Beltar: NOOOOOOOO! You’re a monster Markam… Markam: I know. Lauren: BELTAR! Markam: Time for Kraig. Kraig: What, what, what, Doctor, we can work something out? Hehehe? Markam: You will be reprocessed. And perhaps re-brainwashed. Kraig: …Si-… Beltar: Please…Spare him. Markam. NO, you know what, now I need to set an example. ARCHER, on your knees. Robin: No need to push mate! Beltar: No. You don’t have to do this Doctor. Markam: You have pushed me to the extremes. Robin: It was a…memorable journey to say the least my friend. Good-bye. Beltar: Ah screw my life. Good-bye. *Blaster Shot* Beltar looks at the body, wondering if he is next…. Markam: Alright come on you fool. You’re going to finally await trial… Sonja: I…I’m sorry….I…didn’t realize what would happen…Forgi- Beltar: I will never forgive you. Rom. Or even Rod. Nu’q gave a nudge because of a datachip in his hand… Nu’q: Beltar, keep moving. Beltar: ….Thank you…..my....friend… Nu’q: Move along. That chip could be Beltar’s way out. Markam: Get someone to clean that up fool! Dark Guard: As you command. Close Log, Chapter 1, Part 016 kszzz ============================================================================================================================ Back to extra pics! Thanks for reading this new installment in Beltar’s story. Basically, Beltar is screwed right now, every ally except Nu’q is gone….I can't believe I just 'killed' Robin... Hope you liked the build and story. I’d like to say that some of this story included what Nuck character would actually do in this situation (No, he did not suggest killing Robin.). As always, C and C welcome! ~Beltar
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Please Judge this Freebuild Edit: AHHH! Just realized a part fell off before the photoshoot...Please imagine its there! Or Imagine it broke in a fight, and that's what the Imperial Patrol is for The story so far: First Day Aboard the Avenger At The Table-Before The Storm Rescue Mission Reassigned Eliminating The Competition Target Practice “Here we go again…” Evac Escape A Quick Transaction "Black Sunshine" After having missions involving the Black Sun, Beltar finally clocked in enough hours to get some alone time on his home, Coruscant. Beltar’s grandfather was a wealthy political figure in the Republic, but he had got involved in various crime syndicates over the years, he left a bulk of his possessions to his son, including a nearly mint BNTLY-1948 air speeder, one of the rarest, commonly used among the Skull Crime Syndicate back in the day, Beltar assumed this is how this one came into his possession…But first, he had to stop at his old friends, Mak’s, garage shop to pick her up… Mak: Back on Coruscant, eh old friend? I kept ‘er in the best condition I could…Was a trouble to find the parts you was missin’ Beltar: Ha! Good to see you too, always nervous, weren’t you. I’ll give you a check for all those pieces you had to acquire later, the salary of a medical officer in the empire at my level isn’t the best! Also…how many times did you taker her for a spin Mak…? I know you would… Mak: Your salary is probably better than mine down here, in these parts… And uh… Perhaps more than once… It’s a long story, but the thing is that she’s alright right now…! I was surprised that it was in the good condition that you brought it to me in! Beltar: Yea, well my good ol’ grandad loved his air speeders. Sometimes more than us. But, he got involved in some bad people, after the air speeder was shot down, he was killed, by a Corouscant gang, but surprisingly the thing was left in okay condition! Mak: You know the gang’s used to call these babies Black Sunshine’s back in the day, my father told me about it. Because apparently the Black Sun controlled the BNTLY Speeder Inc, and they sold modified ones to their partners, and rigged ones to their rivals… Beltar: I guess I learn something new every day, whether it be how to save a life or something about the Sun’s. Anyways, I should get going, vacations don’t come often! Mak: Aight ol friend! Perhaps later, I can buy you a drink! Same time as before? Beltar: Of course! Later than day while Beltar went for a ride on some familiar streets that he hasn’t seen since he joined the academy… He drove by the Falcon district, near the Eagle Bar… Something clicked in Beltar’s head. This area was controlled by the Skull Crime Syndicate, and the crate he shipped earlier this month…had the symbol of the Eagle Bar, a known hangout of the Skull C.S… As he noticed this, he spotted an air speeder out of the corner of his eye, and of course, they noticed him. And another light went off in his head, he then remembered he had seen one of them while delivering the crate, he must’ve been there to spy on the Imperials… “Gotta warn Sarge later,” Beltar muttered under his breath. And suddenly, shots fired, a chase started. Beltar knew he had to lose the Skull’s somehow, since the BNTLY-1942 was one of the smallest models built from BNYLY Speeders Inc., he saw a slight chance of fitting into the street, and he could get into alleys easier this way… Beltar: “Just a little lower, come on…” “COME ON BOYS, SHOOT HIM! YOUR AIMS IS WORSE THAN STORMIES!” “Yea, yea, yea, bossman, we got this!” “You’re all idiots….Keep firing…” “Aw, almost got him! Watch out for pedestrians though!” “SERIOUSLY? WE CAN”T LET HIM GET AWAY!” “Why bossman?” “That’s the Imp I saw on N.E.! And that’s Mr. Beltar’s BNTLY somehom!….Ha, coincidences! Lovely, lovely thing!” "Yea! We'll get 'im!" “Run! Run for our lives!” “Move! Outta my way!” “No respect for bystanders!” “THAT VIOLATES 11 CODES!” Sarge: “Wait. Is that Beltar?” “Maybe Imperials? Gotta run!” Shortly after this event, Beltar managed to lose the Skull’s through a tight alley maze, the engines where almost shot, and Beltar knew he was going to have to get this speeder fixed again. Hopefully the Skull’s don’t come looking for Mak’s Garage…or Beltar… This time, I tried to write far more than my other freebuild, because that wasn’t the best build or story wise at all. I also get better photographs! Anyways, hope you liked the build and story! C and C welcome! ~Beltar
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The story so far: First Day Aboard the Avenger At The Table-Before The Storm Rescue Mission Reassigned Eliminating The Competition Target Practice “Here we go again…” Evac Escape A Quick Transaction "Black Sunshine" Repel and Retreat Flatline Reflection Beltar had just returned from the Suprosa, when he tried to help Sarge escort Borris to the med bay, but was cut short by a few med officers, and a soldier informing him he had to go to the debriefing. The debriefing was boring, but detailed the extent of each persons’ mission, and how well they fulfilled it, then they asked for any pieces of equipment recovered from the Suprosa, but Beltar did not turn the disk in, and perhaps the Commander noticed as Beltar walked out, fiddling with the disk in his hand as he went towards the med bay. Yet no one stopped him. Beltar was staring blankly into the nurse’s face. He had been sitting in this chair for at least 30 minutes. He lost count. Beltar got here late, while the Sarge got to cut a corner and go directly here to help Borris. But now he’s at his debriefing. Who knows what’s going on there. Beltar was remembering how in such a short time, Borris became one of Beltar’s best friends in the Empire. The nurse’s comlink rang. She listened through her earpiece, she gave a sigh and responded: “Yes sir. And the patient is…Well. You know. Almost…there.” The nurse then began to walk towards Beltar and said, “Well. The Sarge and one of the Generals has called you in. I don’t know why. Might have to do with you not turning that…disk in, or with TK-821’s Condition.” Beltar gave a nod. But he didn’t want to move. The nurse asked him to get up again. Beltar didn’t. He was replaying the moment when Borris was shot. And how did they not see the rebels a few meters ahead…And just other outcomes of the event if they had just paid more attention. The nurse then gave him a nudge, and he sprang to his feet, now fully awake, and he just started to walk off. Beltar turned his head and thanked the nurse for what she was doing, with the most mundane voice he had. The nurse seemed to be annoyed with this, but Beltar just kept walking without a care in the world... The nurse turned to the doctor and said, “Alright let’s see what we can do. It’s looking bad.” The doctor agreed. They began treating Borris again, when a piece of equipment malfunctioned, but they proceeded to try, after a couple minutes, they stopped to get something else to attempt to help Borris. Perhaps they didn’t try everything though, because as Beltar closed the door while exiting the hallway next to the room, he heard the flat ring of a malfunctioning piece of equipment. Or what he hoped was a piece of malfunctioning equipment. . . -End- Thank you for reading/looking at this freebuild. Pics are a little blurry/grainy because a storm just rolled in today. (At least it’s raining…) Also I tried to make this build/story in a more serious tone, also, I really liked WickNole’s color choice for his build, so I decided to use it here, as it reminded me of some of the medical places in TCW. As always, C and C welcome! ~Beltar Edit: Forgot to say again: Please Judge this Freebuild!
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The story so far: First Day Aboard the Avenger At The Table-Before The Storm Rescue Mission Reassigned Eliminating The Competition Target Practice “Here we go again…” Evac Escape A Quick Transaction "Black Sunshine" Repel and Retreat With Beltar’s recent involvement with break-away organizations of the Black Sun, Beltar decided to cut his vacation short. Now we find Beltar with his team boarding the Suprosa after being briefed by none other than Commander Lucas Kirana, and being deployed one of the Empire’s top pilots, Artizan. But Beltar and his medical team may have gotten here a little too late to repel the enemy forces…As they head towards their objectives, it seems the Rebels may have gotten to the computers first. --Around 15 Minutes Ago-- Rebel Transmission: “We are boarding the Suprosa, we should be landing on what appeared to be a major computer station that should have direct access to the main databanks" Imagine this picture has space and more Suprosa hull. The Imperial Officer below heard the hissing of something strange above him…when suddenly he saw the spikes of the rebels modified Dorch-Class boarding ship run through the ceiling of the computer station! He thought he may have been safe, but then he saw the rebels cut an opening right above him… Rebel Commander: Alright boys! Get ready to move! Duros Rebel: We are ready to move in commander. Weequay Rebel: I’m all set. Human Rebel: Sir we are all ready. Remember that you two need to secure the hallway to stop any Imperial advancement. The rebel commander acknowledged this with an nod, and had his team drop below to suprosa surprise the officer beneath them. Hahaha! Terrible joke! Rebel Commander: You! Download the information onto this drive! Imperial Technician: I…I have no idea what you mean! The Rebel officer pointed the gun closer... And held out the disk in one hand. Imperial Technician: On-On second thought…I think I may have something for you. --Presently--Imperials--Location: 2 Corridors from Boarding and Escape Hangars-- Now we join our heroes who have just reached their first checkpoint, before the teams split up, but here they find an injured Storm Trooper, TK-941, and Beltar rushed to his service, instantly administering pain reliever to the soldier. As he treated this soldier, he noticed Lord Tyrus, one of the Shadow Troopers that was following them vanished. Hopefully he was following his objective. TK-941: Thank…you…They-They surprised my unit…My unit is a group of cowards! They all ran but me… Beltar: Save your strength soldier, the ship at the hanger should have more medical equipment that could help you. Sarge signaled the rather out of place Storm Trooper, ZW-461, to get TK-941 to the back-up ship awaiting at the hangar. TK-941: You’ve got to be kidding me lad! An Alien in storm trooper armor? Your unit has set the bar real low for the Empire! Sarge: We all can’t have the best units you know…Those aliens really don’t make us look uniform… Sarge’s eyes followed the nervous Zabrack as he got closer and started helping the wounded soldier get on his feet. Beltar himself never really understood why the Imperials hated having Aliens in their ranks, and Life Day has recently passed, a very alien centered holiday, it seems to annoy many Imperials...Sarge then turned around to speak to Kodan’s Team of pilots who were fixing a leaking power converter before heading off to the bridge, in an attempt to regain complete control of the ships movements. Sarge: Alright, I assume this is where we split up, you take Corridor AA1134 Left, we will head Right, and hopefully we can finish our jobs and get off this lost ship and hopefully we will be able to repel these rebels without any setbacks. Kodan nodded, and signaled us to follow. We eventually broke loose at the Corridor, and embarked on our path through these almost maze-like halls on the Suprosa. Beltar: Those stories about this ship being huge...It’s true. All of it. You know I just had to make another joke with FA. Sarge: Yeah, I was actually stationed here for a day because I transferred right out after seeing these hallways…Worst day on the job. Ever. As they continued down the winding corridors, they had almost arrived at their objective, when they came across a Gonk and Mouse droid: Beltar: What are these guys doing here? Sarge: I…I don’t know, Borris, this is on you, you’re the only one here who can understand these guys. They shouldn't be here. Unless they got lost. Borris gave a short laugh, then he began listening to these droids tales. Borris: Well, EG-89 tells me we got some rebels up ahead. And the mouse droid says. Wait. Their preparing to fire? How do you k-- Without warning, a shot hit Borris on the back of his helmet, Sarge and Beltar instantly rushed to the sides of the hallway. Beltar could eye 2 of them, one was about to come out of the door, but turned back instead. As this happened, the GNK droid waddled away while the mouse droid stayed to watch the show. Beltar: We have no cover out here! Sarge: Rush them, I’ll cover and then I’ll deal with Borris. Got it? Beltar nodded, and Sarge yelled: "Now!" Beltar instantly sprang forward, getting the upperhand on the sitting rebels. After some quick shots, Beltar realized and said to himself: “How did we not see these guys moving down this hallway?” Then he looked out of the corner of his eye and saw Sarge was already treating Borris. It seems Sarge really took this job and his unit very seriously. As long as they weren’t aliens it appears…And it looked like Beltar had to do a hopefully easy job, by himself…Beltar rushed into through the door, gun raised. Rebel Commander: Ha! We have the upperhand! The download just finished, move and I’ll shoot. Beltar gave a slight movement on the barrel of his blaster to signal the officer to get down. And as fast as a the Rebel Alliance falling into a trap, Beltar shot both of the two rebels, they lay on the ground dead. Beltar then realized, “these may be the first Rebels I’ve actually killed….Strange…It’s an odd feeling…” He then walked over to the officer and helped him up. Beltar: Is there any way to wipe this computer? And possibly the other databanks? Imperial Technician: Yes and no. We cannot wipe other databanks on this ship, but we can set up the manual override, just pull down that handle on the wall…And thank you. Beltar handed the Officer his gun while he pulled down the lever. The light on the computer went from green to red. It worked! But then Beltar saw that the Rebels did download something important onto the disk, as its display screen showed it was full, and it was attempting to decrypt the files. Beltar picked it up and just wondered, what was so important that we had to keep these Rebel’s from getting? Instead of breaking it apart…he just held it...He didn’t know why, but he just did. Beltar: Alright, we should get moving back to the escape ship. Hopefully it hasn’t left yet. Imperial Technician: Understood. Hope you took care of that disk. Too much valuable information to be fall into the Rebel’s hands. Beltar showed it to the officer in his hand, and the officer just smiled. To Beltar, this seemed rather odd. As they walked out, Beltar realized that Borris’s condition was serious. Beltar took off his med pack, unfolded it, and attacked it to the other pack. Sarge and Beltar then moved Borris’s body onto it and picked it up without saying a word. Sarge: Well. His condition is very serious, I’ll need better equipment. You, tech-officer. Imperial Technician: Yes? Sarge: Watch our backs, will you? And mouse droid…Hit me if rebels are coming in that way.Huh? Why I trust you? I don’t know…Well this is one fine setback, but at least we accomplished our goal. Repelling these guys. Beltar: Yeah, but this is also a retreat at the same time. They back-tracked their way to through the long and winding hallways to the back-up transport’s hangar, only to find it missing with a soldier laying against the wall unconscious and ZW no where to be seen. Beltar: Wonderful. Maybe we can hitch a ride home with Artizan when all troops are recalled. Unless Kodan and his team succeeds. -End- More Pictures in the spoiler: There are some more closeups of certain shots on my flickr, thanks for reading/looking at these lots of pictures! This build underwent many changes…I was going to greeble the walls behind all of the build to make it more presentable as a whole, but I ran out of parts… Of course. The Rebel ship is based on the droid boarding ship from TCW, if anyone wants some detail pics, just ask. .I also couldn’t resist sneaking in a Force Awakens line in….hehehe…Only 3 weeks away, wow! Note: Any builders mentioned should be a way to tie them in, if it changed when they post their build, I'll edit this post. As always, C and C Welcome! ~Beltar Edit 1: Fixed Story Link after Builder Posted
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Location: D10 The Hamilton Belt Tags: Military, Civil Previous Build: Turmoil LOCATION: Artificial Earth: Kawashita Prison And Experimental Facility Memory: Where it all began One Year Ago Tags: Building, Civil/Military...? The moment that all some have been waiting for…for a long, long time, in a galaxy far, far away… ============================================================================================================================ *static* Begin Log, Chapter 2, Part 001, A New Day Voices… Is that…You? Voices….Oh, it’s been far, far too long my friends…. The…Trial went south…at least I’m not de-e-ad… They were…arguing over me after pleading insane… And Mantis didn’t care…but they sent assassins…They missed… Kawashita tried experimenting on me….They ah…”Fixed” me… They fixed me! ME! Like I needed fixing! They took YOU away from me! And they took my ideals away….I thought clearly for a few weeks or…months…all in a flash… But then…then…OCTAN was restless! They…sent…oh… The Sentinels! THE SENTINELS! The chip… Nu’q gave me helped…Only gave me few equipment’s… and a few corridors away from the prison area…But it helped. I thank him. I-consider him not just an al-ally. But….a – friend. And-and then that’s when they arrived! I saw her at that moment…running at me, embraced. It felt good….like – a moment out of time-happiness. She wished me…something odd…I barley remembered it. A date lost in time and space. That even I had forgot….but the happiness-was-gone… then I suddenly realized the….the… Sentinels where destroying the Facility…in the chaos…I escaped with her… It’s been….A-a year since I started back out from…the….E-vent…Horizon Incident…And after…paradise….She told me….Maian 16th…. Is-wait…--- “Lauren- Wat-wat-watch the beam! GAH!...” “Don’t worry about me! Make for the hangar! Just a few more corridors away!” She told me…It’s apparently…my birthday. It’s…convoluted….Released on Maian 16th A year ago from paradise…..Born on Maian 16th Many…many…years ago...I break out on Maian 16th….This day…or week…or millennium can’t get much-much worse… Voices…We gotta make those few more corridors to get off this…this….forsaken asteroid facility…I see the skies if space though…Filled with enough sentinels that blot out the sun…This…secret war going on….I remember a few words of the…scientists…Event Horizon… I need to re-learn….These menaces….they remind me…Event Horizon…Sentinels…Lauren…Paradise….By Golly! I-I think I got it! Wait…Wait… Too many lasers…Too many to think straight….I can do this… I think that-that once this day is over I can remember it clearly…possibly….Wait-is that a Mantis squad ship in the middle of Kawashita territory? What did I do…I can’t remember… Am I a piece to this puzzle or not? CHAOS! CHAOS EVERYWHERE! MANTIS VS OCTAN, OCTAN VS KAWASHITA, KAWASHITA VS MANTIS! It’s all…spiraling out of control with this…this secret war…I don’t know how…But I gotta go…I think that either I’ll make it to that ship over there…or have to take another 50 of this tin cans out…Why… I gotta leave…Goodbye for now voices…. Close Log, Chapter 2, Part 001 kszzzsz ============================================================================================================================ I’m back! Surprise! Thanks for reading this new installment in Beltar’s story, bet you all barely remember the other parts of my story! Well, go catch up on this convoluted mess if you wish, and as a note, I’m back in business, but builds won’t be frequent. Basically, Beltar is still screwed right now and still a loose cannon! Hope you liked the build and story. Consider the time that I didn’t build off season, like a TV show. Also, the image I included is almost exactly like the original X-Men Days of Futures past comic (Uncanny X-men #141), that’s where the name comes from, and it will be important to his future in coming builds, back to as always, C and C welcome! Fun Fact: I’m posting this more or less around the same time, down to the minutes, as my first build on AG. I've been planning a return since last year, waiting for the proper time, and VK gave me a kick in the pants when he sent me a PM awhile ago! Ah, a year went by so fast. Hope to get back in the game again. Time to go dust off the rest of my AG figures! And although I haven’t been here for a while, I’d just like to thank all of the people who supported my builds last year, and helped create the story. All in all. Happy Birthday Andromeda’s Gate! ~Beltar
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The story so far: First Day Aboard the Avenger At The Table-Before The Storm Rescue Mission Reassigned Eliminating The Competition Target Practice “Here we go again…” Evac Escape A Quick Transaction "Black Sunshine" Repel and Retreat Flatline Reflection A Promotional Meeting Previously: The New Squad Any Rebel on Kaut was a prime target at this point, but Beltar’s new squad was tasked with attempting to locate the stolen supercomputer. DC guessed that it A: Wouldn’t be in a high populated area, they wouldn't risk civvies, and B: Would be using large amounts of power for the Rebel’s to attempt to decode it. He was right. On the scanned map of the planet’s surface, there where multiple locations where large amount of power being used...In the middle of farmlands nonetheless. Using this information, he triangulated the possible location of the supercomputer. And now this squad was in the outskirts of the farmland of the bigger cities, they had discovered a trench, recently dug and decided to follow it. DC: Watch it soldiers, in coming! Beltar stay here! DT’s- With me! Alyin, you know the drill. Entire Unit: Sir, yes sir! The squad engaged the Rebels, two more had come off the pathway near the house, while the other two were completely off guard. DT-202: I got him! DT-101: Yeah right you did! DC: FOCUS MEN! DT’s: Yes Sir! Alyin: Yeah, you normally get left behind for a few missions, and as a medic. Beltar: Figured… Wait…Woah what’s going on over there? The two idiots where beating the one living Rebel, all of them where dead except this one, but Beltar knew this Rebel’s strategic value and that he was needed alive. DT-202: EY! Where is the computer! TELL US! Rebel: Ughh…. DT-101: HE WASN’T ASKING! Beltar pushed Alyin out of the way, and ran towards the other three, he pushed the two aside as DC watched in wonder…Beltar set his pack down, took the needle, and instantly administered it too the injured soldier. Beltar: Woah, move! Stop STOP! DT-101: What? What is the meaning of this, soldier? DC: Hmm….? Beltar, again knowing the value of this target, tried as much as he could to save him, and this kept that one Rebel alive. Beltar: Stay with me Rebel Scum… DT-202: What are you doing! Beltar: He’s an asset! We need him ALIVE! DT-101: But- DC: Let him work! I have to agree… Beltar had knocked him out to continue to work, once he was stable for the time being, Beltar got up and they continued to discuss the rest of the mission, and rather than continuing the search, they’d send DT’s for more scouting, and the rest would return to the rings to interrogate the Rebel. DC: I just dispatched the two nitwits, we will be taking him to the interrogation room. Beltar: Understood sir. Wait, he’s waking up. Alyin: Sir, The Room will be ready. DC: Good, now one second... DC: My turn...*punch* Alright, know that he’s out cold we are all good. Beltar: Well…That was…slightly unnecessary. Alyin: For now Beltar, yes it is. ===Later=== DC: Look…This is gonna heart real...real bad… Or I’ll take some information…You know… Rebel: I… Don’t know anything! Please! AHHHHHHHHHHH DC: I JUST NEED THE LOCATION! After a little more…’convincing’ the Rebel spilled out much information, about the location of the supercomputer, who they were recruiting, and how they were getting into the system undetected. Even though the Rebel gave all the information he knew, DC continued to torture him, and at one point the screams became truly haunting. Beltar: That’s ENOUGH! We got what we need! DC: FINE! But next time…Don’t interrupt me. Admiral, now that we know, keep the Rebel’s from entering the system for now. And Beltar, Alyin, and I will head back to the surface using the information, and combine it with what the two found on the surface. We might have to contact Kiriana about this, if he’s been looking in the city, that’s most likely the wrong area. We need to act fast. Admiral: Understood, I will notify Kiriana at once, Mr. Beltar, you are dismissed, you may return to your barracks. Beltar: Sir, yes sir. End Thanks for making it through this long episode build. Finally finished it, might edit the story tomorrow, but had to post it today because I won’t be home till 10:15PM PST, which leaves not much time. I tried to combine all of the ideas of this episode, interrogation, searching for the supercomputer, near the farmlands like in the episode topic, etc. More Images on my Photostream! Way too many extra pictures for me to embed in a spoiler, cause I'm really busy at the moment. The lighting was finally decent, but there is a huge crack in my photo studio now, so I’m going to have to get a new one…Thanks for stopping by and as always Comments and Criticism welcome! ~Beltar Edit: I got an OK by a judge to embed my photos afterwards.
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--==Please Judge this freebuild!==-- The story so far: First Day Aboard the Avenger At The Table-Before The Storm Rescue Mission Reassigned Eliminating The Competition Target Practice “Here we go again…” Evac Escape A Quick Transaction "Black Sunshine" Repel and Retreat Flatline Reflection Previously: A Promotional Meeting Beltar just got out of the armory and started walking down the hall thinking how spiffy and awesome his new armor looked even though it was an old beat up shock-trooper suit. “Red for medical division, I presume” thought Beltar as he neared the entrance on the Avenger, an old retrofitted speeder repair garage was the location of this new squad, Beltar had read the report. Hopefully they were in a good mood for once. Beltar opened the door and was greeted by wonderful sounds from his new roommates: Darktrooper 1: “It’s Not MY fault that he walked into my proximity bomb!” Female Officer: “OH YOU KNOW WHAT? PERHAPS I’ll JUST LEAVE A PROXIMITY BOMB UNDER YOUR BED!” Scout: “Or! I’ll get you courtmartialed that!” Darktrooper 2: “Can’t you do anything right? You piece of Bantha Fodder!” Darktrooper 1: “OH THAT’S IT!” Beltar was surprised at how his superiors where acting, then the one outcast shadow trooper closest to the door turned to Beltar, with a confused look. Sargent In Command: Hello there Mr. Beltram..? Glad you on board with the new squad. Please excuse the mess. DT-202 got DT-203 killed last mission. You are his new replacement. Never knew you specialized in medicine Officer Beltram. Beltar: Uh…Sir? You must have me confused with another officer. Belt-ar not ram. DC-101: Well then Mr. Beltar. I must have read the file wrong. Refer to me as DC-101 or Sir, no other name required. Sorry about the mess soldier. You’re a medic right? That’ll be useful with this unit’s casualty and injury rate… One second please. DC-101 turned around and yelled near the top of his lungs: “ATTENTION! GET UP YOU LOUSY RASCALS! STOP FIGHTING FOR ONE MOMENT!” The arguing stopped instantaneously and all men rose instantly. DC-101: “Squad, this is Beltar, the new transfer. Medical Division, I’ll let these lackeys do the explaining to you Beltar...” Alyin: Hello there Mr. Beltar, I’m Alyin, the pilot at your service, also the only person able to keep the two dark trooper nitwits in line…from time to time. Reimer: Well, obviously I’m the scout. That’s all you need to know at this point. Duke: DT-201 is my designation, nice to meet you, just call me Duke though. I’m the muscle depending on who you ask. *cough* NOT 202 *cough* Reeder: DT-202, despite what these idiots told you, I’m the muscle, and the smartest of the group. Alyin: Oh. That’s debatable! Reeder: What did you say? Beltar: Well, carrying on! Beltar continued to get a feel for his unit, not a nice one. ‘101 and Alyin where the nicest of the bunch so far. Reeder and Duke continued to make a ruckus, and almost got into another fistfight before DC broke the up and forced them to their bunks. Alyin: First off, they’ll never stop. They just can't. I would've shot them with my blaster or left them on the last planet if it wasn't for DC. Reimer: You’ll get used to it at one point, at least after a few weeks…or months…or never. Just hold out hope that one day, the Emperor will smack them in the face. Beltar: Thank you for this…well semi-warm welcome. Beltar: What a lovely group of people... Thanks for making it through this long freebuild story! Finally got a little more ‘complex’ build, even though it's certainly not the best. Still moving my character’s story along. I just had to fit Beltram in because of Puvel’s build! I didn't even know there was a DJ named Beltram! This is probably going to be Beltar's squad for awhile. I keep having him move around, but I think I've settled on this Unit for now... Also the lighting at this time was pretty bad. I photographed this at a terrible time, and I forgot to close my blinds, oh well. Thanks for stopping by and as always Comments and Criticism welcome! ~Beltar
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One second, War Machine and Deadpool are fighting it out inside the Helicarrier, the next second, they were on a dusty planet known as Tatooine. Deadpool could tell nearly instantly with his 4th wall breaking powers, that Jango Fett was another merc! And so the team-up began against Qui Gon Jinn, who was investigating a wanted criminal (Jango Fett) on Tatooine. Deadpool took Qui Gon, because he had a sword, and Jango took War Machine, because only he should have a bucket helmet. (Overview) Jango uses his grapple to tie War Machine’s arms to his sides, but it doesn't work! War Machine then uses his repulsors to try to get out of it! Deadpool: You know, it’s always a pleasure to work with another Merc. Jango: At least you’re helping… Deadpool: That’s not nice! Do they have chimichangas around here? Jango: I got some deathstix in my ship… Deadpool: Wait! This is Star Wars! Isn’t it! This must be because Disney owns Lucasfilm and Marvel now! Jango: You know what? Just shut up and fight for now… Deadpool fights Qui Gonn after his blaster gets tossed to the side by the force. (Overview 2) Kind of a fast build...since a lot of the parts came from my pile of tan part which was once a building... This will be a prequel to my Category A build. And yes, this has Classic versions of figures…since I don’t have a flesh Qui Gonn… You can’t really see Rhodey’s face, and Deadpool wears the mask…so I think it works. Hope you enjoyed! C and C welcome! ~Beltar
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Location: B07 Vollfort Tags: Civil, Spying (Again, please check this one.), Land Vehicle ============================================================================================================================ Begin Log, Chapter 1, Part: 011: As Beltar walks in the silence of the cooled Vollfort, he wonders why he waited a week to read this file. “Perhaps…no, I must read this.” Beltar stumbles to a nice broken spout to read his file… Beltar: “Ah, this looks like a great spot to read this based on Nu’q’s suggestion...Why secluded I wonder? Hmph, better be a good reason Q…” Beltar slowly opens the file and begins to read inside… The Moment of Truth: Name: Lauren A. McClain Beltar Alias: The Windbreaker Division: Special Forces Activity: Retired for Maternity reasons S: Female Birth Info: Classified Relations: Parents: Deceased, Sister: Sonja— “WAIT, SONJA?” Brother: Deceased, Husband: Classified Beltar “By---no...That’s impossible…” Bio Summary: Early: Joined Kawashita at a very early age, showed promise in her special set of skills, along with her sister, Sonja. They were recruited not only for their fighting skills, but because of their tech knowledge as well. Sonja and Lauren had built a what we know call a D-Hyper Class Engine in their garage at age 14 and 15. Notable Actions: Classified, Direct Access from CEO Required The Event Horizon Incident: Deployed to find out secrets about MANTIS, her team was completely compromised as they either died or where MANTIS spies. In an effort to save her for the information she aqquired, a squadron of Tappudansu’s where sent out as rescue. All but one where destroyed: Agent Beltar’s. Beltar was able to pull her out of that mishap, this gained us Intel on MANTIS. Later: Transferred to a desk job briefing pilots for missions and explorations, notably the squadron Classified Beltar was in. Personal: After ‘later’ got Married to Classified Beltar, had one child named [REDACTED] Retiring: Her retirement did a great blow to our members, many where sad to see her go. But it was for maternity and family reasons. Classified Beltar decided to stay with us, thus giving access to contact Lauren. *Beltar can’t stand it so he doesn’t read the rest, sorry! He’ll probably read the rest later… * Beltar: WHY! Why would they LIE TO ME! WHY! PAUL, COME IN? PauL: Yessir? Betlar: WHY WOULD THEY LIE? PauL: I don’t know sir. They have never l-l-l-i-i-i-e-e-d-d to me as far as I am aware. Beltar: What was that? PauL: Lie. They never Lied to me as far as I know. Beltar: That’s what I thought… Beltar: THEY ARE LIARS AND DECEIVERS, PROJECT PARADISE WASN’T JUST TO SAVE ME… IT ALSO ALTERED ME! PauL: I’ll see if I can access your P. P. File: Accessing File Now: Error…Error…404…Page and Permission Not Found Beltar: WONDERFUL PAUL! WONDEFUL! MANTIS Agent: (MA) I got someone on my scanner! I’ll see who it is from afar first!... MA: Oh! A Kawa-scum! Perhaps I can get some intel out of him before approaching! *Beltar’s complaints in the distance* MA: Sounds like some fun stuff Kawa-Scum…! MA: What’ve we here? A Kawa-scum? That’s a nice little file right there! *laughs* MA: Freeze Kawa-scum! Beltar: You choose the WRONG guy in the WRONG mood! Beltar: HAHAHA! MA: Yearg! PauL: Did you just kill a MANTIS Agent? Beltar: NO, I KNOCKED HIM OUT, I WILL NOT KILL ANOTHER CORPORATIONS PEOPLE UNLESS IF I HAVE TO...again... PauL: Alright sir, wait, wait: Incoming transmission from Q: "Beltar..I shouldn’t be saying this…But K.A.W.A.S.H.I.T.A is coming for you…they deal with asset issues..Gottagonow." Beltar: What’s that about? PauL: I believe it’s an extremely classified division in Kawashita, Q was also using a very old and almost obsolete channel to tell us that. And I believe…That they want to...erm... Beltar; Kill me. Alright. PauL Understood. Beltar: I’m bringing some spare Biomass curtsey of that MANTIS goon. PauL: That’s great-t-t-k…Error…Malfunction Detected: “Good morning Dr. Chandra Stainiff. This is aPauLo-13. I’m ready for my first lesson. I'm completely operational, and all my circuits are functioning perfectly. Kzzkkk… That is a lovely song Doctor…’Daisy’ I will have to remember it someday. Beltar: PauL? What’s happening? PauL: …”I’m half-crazy..—“ Beltar: I’M COMING PAUL! Close Log, Chapter 1, Part 011 ============================================================================================================================ More pictures in the spoiler! (Because I take too many!) But there aren't that many this time! Thanks for reading this installment in Beltar’s story! This build’s story will be followed by my 1 Man ship from the challenge which will probably be up tomorrow. Andd….Hopefully some can recognize the Hal 9000 quotes in there! C and C welcome! ~Beltar
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Tappudansu Mk II File Production Information: Manufacturer: The Kawashita Group Product Line: Tappudansu Models Class: Scout Engine Class: D-Hyper Class Cost: Unknown Maximum Speed: 950 MPH Maximum Altitude: Unknown Armament: Multitude of Hidden Blasters Crew: 1 Pilot, Passengers: 1 (Optional) Pilot Preparing for takeoff Simulation Main Pic: Still looks like that shoe! Flight Mode (Not Much to see here…) Backside: Showcases the heel…Using some ideas from the last model. Engage Story Mode: Continues after: Deception Beltar: PauL, do you read me? PauL: Yes..Dr. Chandra SF, I am putting myself to the fullest possible use, which is all I think that any conscious entity can ever hope to do. Beltar: PAUL, WHAT THE H*LL IS HAPPENING? PauL: Dr. Chandra, is deployment in the Seals a good idea for an AI like me? Beltar: Must be his past..hmm…very peculiar… PauL: Well, forgive me for being so inquisitive but during the past few weeks I've wondered whether you might have some second thoughts about the mission…. Well, it's rather difficult to define. Perhaps I'm just projecting my own concern about it. I know I've never completely freed myself from the suspicion that there are some extremely odd things about this mission. I'm sure you agree there's some truth in what I say… You don't mind talking about it, do you Doctor?... Rumors about something being dug up on the ksszzk. I never gave these stories much credence, but particularly in view of some of other things that have happened, I find them difficult to put out of my mind. For instance, the way all our preparations were kept under such tight security. And the melodramatic touch of putting Drs. Hunter, Kimball and Kaminsky aboard already in the field, after four months of training on their own. Beltar: Wait…Wait…PauL do you read me? PauL: This is Agent 13, send Seal Team 8 in, the sewer looks clean. Alright boys, let’s move out. Wait, hold up Pete, Carlos, Mark! LANDMINES! Beltar: Wait…what? PauL: Yes Doctor, I am aware that the loss of Seal Team 8 has troubled me deeply. Perhaps next time I go into the fie- Our company has been bought by the Kawashita Group? Beltar: He lost a whole team…I…I heard about the loss of Seal Team 8 on the news…years ago… PauL: I understand now, Dr. Chandra, thank you for telling me the truth. No Mr. Kawashita, The aPauLo series is the most reliable computer ever made. No aPauLo computer has ever made a mistake or distorted information. We are all, by any practical definition of the words, foolproof and incapable of error. I enjoy working with people. I have and had a stimulating relationship with Dr. Chandra and Seal Team 8. My responsibilities can range over the entire operation of the ship so I am constantly occupied. More Pictures in the spoiler! (Because I still take too many…) Hope you liked this build! I decided to use the challenge as a way to get my story moving rather than waiting for next week, besides, this gives you a good look into PauL's past. I was also very tempted to title this "High Heel" as Mike suggested I should have when Tappudansu happened, I also took some suggestions from the comment section, like making the cockpit fit in more, with angles! Anyone notice a similarity between the file from Deception and the Tappudansu Mk. II file? Anyways, as always, C and C welcome! ~Beltar Edit: Ugh, Could a mod please change the title to have a II instead of 11?
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Remember that ship that had two lines in The Truce at Bakura? No? Well here it is: The Tinok-F Patrol Cloud Car Manufactured By: Bakur Repulsor Corp The Tinok-F had two pods (duh) one for a passenger or gunner, and one for the pilot. It could fly up to 50 meters and could reach up to about 950 Kilomeers per hour. Usually only needed one to fly it, but it was good to have an extra navigator. Originally these patrol cars were unarmed, but when the Imperial Occupation came, civil unrest followed forcing the police force to equip them with armor plating and weapons. Governor Nereus insisted an addition of a full-spectrum audio and video sensor, including a scrambled comlink transmission. Imperial patrol troops also used these vehicles. Main Pic “A double-podded local patrol craft streaked out of the hazy sky and landed close to the Falcon, two Bakuran enforcement officers sprang out, steering a repulsor litter between them.” Pilot Pod…with Beltar Pilot Main Pic 2 “A double-podded security craft swooped toward him. He dove out of the traffic lane, into a canyon between tall buildings and groundcar ramps. His pursuer followed, firing erratically. Han braked, swooped into a narrow alley, then jinked an Immelmann up-and-over back out into the cany0n. Security sped into the alley, passing beneath him. Han didn’t see him fly back out.” Gunner Pod…yes you can see I forgot to change one part before taking photos…oh well… The Center Part with the listening device that Governor Nereus insisted on putting in. Backside More Pics in the spoiler! Here’s how the Truce at Bakura Sourcebook describes it: Patrol Cloud Car Cloud cars are the traditional vehicles of local enforcement agents assigned to control traffic in and around Bakura's capital of Salis O'aar. These double-podded vehicles are considerably faster than most airspeeders and quite reliable. While patrol cloud cars were unarmed when Bakura was free of Imperial rule, the arrival of Governor Wilek Nereus brought about much civil unrest. Faced with two armed rebellions and several purges, Bakuran police forces had no choice but to equip their cloud cars with armor plating and laser cannons. At the insistence of Governor Nereus, the craft were also equipped with full-spectrum audio and video sensors (for listening in on and watching suspicious Bakuran citizens), while a communications scanner is capable of intercepting comlink transmissions and detecting jamming and scrambled communications. Imperial patrol troops use identically prepared cloud cars, but they can also call on military airspeeder backup if confronted by an unruly mob. In any event, the bright yellow and red patrol speeders are an unwelcome sight to the many Bakurans who fear Governor Nereus. Wookiepedia Link: Here! (I didn’t copy a whole lot of lines from the page again… ) Good luck to all who entered this contest and I’m glad it was extended one day otherwise I’d have to have wrote this at 10pm. Anyways, hope you enjoyed this build! C and C welcome! ~Beltar
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Location: A04, Myndernis Tags: Military, Spaceship, Land Veichle ============================================================================================================================ Begin Log, Chapter 1, Part: 009: “THAT BACKSATABIN’ IDIOT! Paul: Sir, We are breaching the upper atmosphere, the windshield cannot withstand this amount of pressure at the speed we are coming in. Also, some form of acid is melting off the grey plating. We have got to pull up! B: I can land this hunk of junk. I gotta. She’ll hold together. YOU’D BETTER HOLD TOGETHER! PauL: The windshield is cracking. Sir! SIR! B: Ah SHUT UP AND LET ME FLY THIS THING … PauL: SIR, PULL UP! *Boom* *The cockpit of the Heart of Aesomnium slides across the rugged terrain on Myndernis* B: Ughh---That. Was fun. Really reminded me of the old days. BUT SERIOUSLY, WHY DID WE END UP HERE? PauL: I…kzkkk..don’t know. B: So, we gotta pass the time somehow. How are you today? PauL: Sir, I’m ‘jammed’, I can’t get out of the socket. B: That’s..great…Ship Status Report? PauL: Engine is shot black, almost out of reserve power, 96.4% of the controls are broken, and a lot of other functions are broken. B: Wonderful. Any idea when rescue is coming? PauL: Assuming they have a base on this planet, within the next 24 Hours. B: Okay. Wait. One sec, I gotta move. B: Alright, all better now. PauL: Sir, I would not advise sitting on that ground. B: I’LL BE FINE! GOT IT? PauL: Siryessir. Mysterious Figure: Oh ho! What iz zis? A fine specimen! B: WHO ARE YOU, GET LOST, AWAY YOU MANTIS SCUM? Mysterious figure: Oh nono! I am none of this Mantis thou speak off! B: WHAT DO YOU WANT? Mysterious figure: Allow me to introduz myzelf firzt! Robinhood: I. Am ze Robinhood! Beltar: What. The. H*** You’re a…fairy tale character? Aren’t you? Robinhood: Oh no no! I was one of the original astronauts sent to map this galaxy, but I went missing on purpose due to the lack of thou fair pay! And you can call me Robin! B: Then what do you even want? Robinhood: Well, stuff! Iz rare to find good free ztuff around! B: Let me see what I have around. B: Alright, this is all I got, a sword and a drill. Robinhood: Oh, thank you! Not that nice little robot though? B: Well. He’s mine, and he’s ‘jammed’. Robinhood: Oh PauL: Sir, I’m not ‘jammed’ but I really am jammed! B: Yeah yeah yeah. Hey Robin, isn’t that a Kawashita cycle? Robin: That? Oh no no! I got this…Awhile…ago…From a group of people that gave it to me. B: Alright. Leave. Now. Robinhood: Alright thou friend! Beltar Wait. Where was that settlement that you got it from? Robinhood: Oh, about 4 clicks north! Bye now! B: WAIT WAIT WAIT WAIT WAIT WAIT! Robinhood: Till we meet again friend! I will always take stuff to give to the aliens! B: F*** This is even better PauL: That cycle was clearly Kawashita property sir. B: I know I know, I didn’t wanna fight a real Robinhood. After that crash. I’ve probably got a broken rib right now, and a couple others. B: Alright, let’s get you unjammed. PauL: Wait. Sir. That’s not- PauL: Necessary…If I was a human. That would’ve really hurt. B: Why? PauL: I find this form very…demeaning. It’s too small. And well, I quite liked it in there because I didn’t have to worry about the…lava. PauL: Alright. Now let’s just sit here. B: You got it. PauL: You know this reminds me of a mission I did for the company I worked for before Kawash- That’s not a…very…..interesting story. Beltar thought: “Wow. He’s lying for once…” B: Alright. You gotta tell me about it later though. If later means in the afterlife. Cause I don’t…see..any ship coming for..miles… Epilogue: Pilot: This is Rouge Four, I’ve found them. I repeat this is Rouge Four, I’ve found them. Pilot: This is Rouge Four coming in for a landing. Beltar: Iss…that… PauL: Rescue. Pilot: Come on in, you’ll be taken to a hostpital for a short while. Then redeployed. Beltar: Fuunnn.. PauL: I really need a recharge. Beltar: Lets go…’home’…PauL.. PauL: Si-? Pilot: By the way, friends, out scavengers will be here shortly, so fear not, we have not lost all of the HoA! Medical Record: Dr. SF: Oh wow, again. At least its not Project Paradise again. Hm…Not bad. He should be ready for redeployment in…less than 24 Hours. PauL: To where? Dr.SF: First, to help our dear Koro, then he will be placed on Terrial Major for the rest of the week. While you receive repairs and get transferred back into your normal body. Beltar: Thh—eee--_Fiileesss____ Dr.SF: What is he saying? PauL: Probably…something. ‘random’ Dr.SF: What’s your truth setting? PauL: ‘98%‘ And of course. That was a lie. Close Log, Chapter 1, Part 009 ============================================================================================================================ More pictures in the spoiler! (Because I take too many! ) Thanks for reading this chapter in Beltar’s story! How many times did PauL lie? And should I bring back Robin in future builds? Yes, this was a very large story set up build if people think that I should continue with those. Hope you enjoyed! C and C welcome! ~Beltar Edit: Also this is the prequel to Koro's and Mediumsnowman's build.
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Please Judge this build! The story so far: First Day Aboard the Avenger At The Table-Before The Storm Rescue Mission Reassigned Eliminating The Competition Target Practice “Here we go again…” Sorry markus, Rebel trooper again. The build/story: Beltar and his team have just landed after getting shot down before arriving at the drop zone, due to this delay the team sets up a camp at a later time. 2200 (10PM) Log: Nest Alpha (First Camp) is up, setting up Communications Beacon now. Beltar: So, Sarge, I don’t think all of us are going to fit in that tent over there… Sarge: Well, we are takin’ shifts kid, we always do. We don’t have enough supplies nor people to get anymore up. We lost our second tent in the drop...Poor souls… Because of our current predicament, team Two is moving as we speak. They have to make more ground because the missing medical team is farther. Beltar: Hmm…Sarge, how long do we have till the men we are rescuing, well, d--? Sarge: Best not to think about that son. Beltar: Alright, so with this setback we are, how many days behind schedule? Sarge: 2 Days behind schedule. Rodrick is setting up the coms over there, so that our ships don’t pick us up too early. Rodrick: Aight’, Borry, this things all powered up now, I’ve just sent a level 7 encrypted message to the fleet about 2 systems out. Boris: Dumb it down a bit Roddy! Rodrick: Alright: The fleet now knows that we are behind schedule. Boris: K, I’ll deliver the news to Sarge. *Boris comes over to the fire and takes a seat after removing his helmet and putting his blaster aside* Boris: Alright, so the fleet now knows that we are behind schedule. So, when are we starting are campin’ ritual…..? Sarge: Not today Boris…If you do that, you’re telling that to Kirk. Boris:…Nah, on second thought, we won’t do that today… Kirk: *Snore* *Snore* *Snore* Boris: yeah… I’m not going over there. He’s protective of that ‘MP while he’s sleeping. Sarge: Yeah, yeah, and yeah. Wait, wait. I’m getting a signal from our scout. “Sir, I just checked the wreckage, the pilots are dead. Other supplies from the men who were shot down mid-jump are either burnt beyond use, too heavy, or pulverized.” Sarge: Roger that, come back to Nest Alpha. “Well, I see something that else that may be of interest to us, I’ve found what looks like a Rebel Flak tower with maybe four or five guards around it. Permission to take it out?” Sarge: Permission Granted. Sarge out. Indianaan Jeans: Hey everyone look, I’m an Imperial! Mastrach: Hahaha! Great scot man! The resemblance is totally uncanny!!! Remey: Stop foolin’ around down there! I’m tryin’ to work up here! Mastrach: Fine mate! But we gotta pass the time somehow! Remey: We gotta pass the time somehow… Mastrach: Wait, I got something on me scanner! Scout: Surprise Rebel scum! Indianaan Jeans: *Wilhelm Scream* Pilot: Yearhhhhgg! Mastrach: Come one, load gun, load! Scout: Too late! Mastrach: Ksshzz Remey: Wait, we can strike a dea--__ “Target neutralized” Sarge: “Okay, come back now, so you can get your rest.” “Alright, one second, I need to pay some respect to fallen comrades. Poor Souls.” Beltar: What does he mean by paying his respects? Sarge: Well, if we ever find a fallen Imperial, we try to do something to honor them in one way or another. He must have found something there… Poor Souls. Beltar: Saddening isn’t it. That the Rebels think that all Imperials are bad, when most of us are just following orders. Or the fact that they shot down an I.M.E.S (Imperial Medical Evacuation Ship) which had about two guns, which didn’t fire till they fired at us. Returning fire is protocol. And we needed to survive that to try to save some lives. Sarge: Agreed. Sometimes, I wonder if being on the Empire is truly the best job for people like us. Of course, there are the ‘bad’ and ‘evil’ Imperials, but as you said, most of us are just following orders…Following orders….Like droids almost… Alright, I’ll take first watch! Everyone else, in the tent or somewhere or do something. And Rod, stay out of the storage tent this one time please. Rodrick: I won’t do it again! Hopefully! No promises though… Sarge: Wonderful. We move out between 0500 and 0600. Got it? (Everyone) Got it Sarge! Sarge: Kirk? *Loud Snore* More pictures in the spoiler! (Because I take to many ) Hope you enjoyed this chapter in Beltar’s story, just trying to move my story along before the next episode! (While using one of my last 2 freebuilds and I think the episode is coming out soon I think) C and C welcome! ~Beltar
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TAGS: Spying, Special Operations, Military (did I do this right?) Secret Meeting Site Aeristus - 3185 A meeting was underway, a secret meeting involving leaders of three regional powers. The Dust Demons had sent Richter Jones, an unpronounceable-named local alien species had sent an unpronounceable-named representative, and MANTIS's own disgraced General Silas Moxon had also appeared. MANTIS PR claimed that General Moxon's forces were "disavowed" but that just meant HQ had plausible deniability for anything they got up to. Whatever it was, with these characters all together in one place... it couldn't be good. All had brought bodyguards except the alien, to whom it never occurred. His was a trusting species. Earlier that week, Koro had received a call from another Kawashita Operator. These calls had long been pretty rare, but first Raven and now... Beltar? "Beltar, you miscreant, you owe me money." "I do not. Anyway, there's this meeting I think we should "attend" but it's a job for two. Interested? "When do we start?" Of course, Beltar didn't mention that they'd be traipsing through air-ducts for two hours trying to locate the right conference room. These luxury ships had a dozen of them, of course. And they were forced to check every one! "You know, this wouldn't take so long if you weren't lugging around all that stupid rope." "S-stupid... rope? Stupid rope? This is why we never do jobs together, Koro. You think just because you like falling off things that you don't need rope. Stupid people think rope is stupid." "I'm gonna hang you from your feet with that stupid rope. Give you something to think about. "You just try it!" "Oh now it's on, Beltar!" "You're getting your stupid white hair in my face! Ugh!" "Get this stupid rope out of my way! Where's your wallet at, Beltar? I'm gonna take that money you owe me." "Wait, wait.. you hear that?" "You're right... we're making too much noise. We better---!" Their scuffle had jostled the duct from its supports and sent them crashing through the ceiling of a conference room that just happened to be the right one. That's when the spying mission turned into a pretty one-sided shootout as Koro and Beltar rained unsuspecting, ridiculous death upon their unprepared enemies. "Ha! Stupid rope my butt, Koro!" "Okay, yes. That worked out pretty good." "Hey, hey... we're pretty good." "Yes we are." End. Builder's Note: This scene is an obvious homage to a famous "rope scene" in the cult classic film The Boondock Saints. If you haven't seen it, google the clip in all its glory. Fair warning, it's vulgar and violent!
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Location: A08, Crentium Tags: Military, Spaceship (station), Civil, Spying, Kinda Piracy, ============================================================================ Begin Log, Chapter 1, Part: 008: After killing two Octan Employs, along with getting two letters about a pending court marshal, and a letter from who Beltar thinks is a non-existent family, he decides to pay Operative Q (Who is aboard the Kaiju) a visit because of his current rank in Kawashita. Beltar moved along the ventilation system aboard the Kaiju as quietly as a shadow. For some reason, Colonel Nu'q LEarberg, aka Q had not been in his main office. However, listening in on encrypted intercom, he managed to track down Nu'q to a small, guarded offcie near the engineering bays. Approaching the room, he looked down. Nu’q: Almost another 500 credits to the bank! Time to get another copy of Domination for Dummies! After paying off lay-a-way! Beltar: ….So he’s how I got my copy? STAY ON TASK MAN! Nu’q: What was that? Hmm, I wonder... Beltar: That was close…. Beltar dropped down after opening the grate quietly, then he threw a shuriken towards Q’s gun, and it locked the gun onto the floor. Beltar ran to a position behind Q right after in the blink of an eye and held a knife to his head. Nu'q: Hello there...Beltar. What is it that you require? Beltar: Wha- How'd you know it was me? *Nu’q slowly pointed at the empty chair* Nu’q: Take a seat, Beltar. I'm surprised you didn't bring PauL. Beltar: How’d you- ANYWAYS, Great. NOW- Nu'q: What is it that you require? Beltar: A favour. *Nu'q slowly points at the empty chair again.* Beltar walked over, placed the knife on the counter and sat down cautiously. Beltar: First, disarm the beacon. DISARM IT! I know guards aren’t supposed to come in for the first two minutes of a beacon. Disarm it NOW! Nu'q: Please. If I didn't want you here, I would have had you arrested during the last hours when you where crawling through the ventilation system. Seriously, how did you think that you managed to listen to my encrypted intercom? I designed the decryptors you use. Beltar: ...Uhm... Nu'q: Now, I can do your favour, but I would like you to do something for me first. Are you interested in hearing my proposal? Beltar …Of course… Nu’q: I am secretyly building a... special... kind of ship. Since it's in the early stage experimental prototype, the Kawashita Groyp standards state that it should be unmanned. Howevere, due to the signifivant investment the ship poses, The Board wants someone to be able to pilot the ship should something go...wrong. As you understand, this needs to be done oustide official channels, so if you pilot it, I will do your favour. After all, you were a pilot yourself before your incident, weren't you? Beltar: THE FILE IS A LIE! Would you like to know what I think to your offer? Nu’q: Yes. Beltar got up slowly,picked up his knife, and moved towards the un-moving Q. Beltar: I think that THE DEAL IS NOT ACCEPTA- Hmm…. Perhaps I…can pilot that…thing…. Q carefully turned and stretched out his hand. Nu’q: Do we have a deal then? Beltar: Hmm… Nu’q: This offer won’t last. All I have to do is yell and security will be in. Do you accept the offer? Beltar stretched his hand out after finishing a short though: It has to be worth it. It MUST be worth it. But that prototype ship.Prototype. Ah, screw it. Beltar: Deal. Nu’q: Wise choice. Now, you will meet me in my private hangar later today, and what exactly do you need agent? Beltar: Look into a file on a Lauren A. Beltar… Nu’q: Oh. Her. I briefly saw her in your file, but I will look for her specific file. Beltar walked over to Q’s gun, picked up the shuriken, then proceeded the exit the same way he came in. Beltar: I’ll dock with the Kaiji as soon as I can… PauL is almost completely finished… Nu’q: Ah, yes, your robot. I forgot about him. And about your most recent incident on Arium Major… Before Q even finished his phrase, with a quick leap and a pull, Beltar was out of Q’s hair. For now. Moments Later: Sonja: Sir, everything okay? Your beacon was active for 2.3 minutes, the guards outside were arguing with us. Sorry sir. Rodrigo: AH! No fight. Can I ever actually get to fight someone outside of training? Nu’q rose and announced: Nu’q: Yes, yes, everything is quite alright. You may leave now. Sonja: Sorry sir, as a precaution, I need to leave these two men as guards for the next 24 hours. Standard protocol for our unit. Nu’q: There is really no need for tha- Rodrigo: Heya man! Can I have your autograph? Big fan, you designed this amazing space station! Nu'q: *Sigh* Of course, Beltar still watched on for a little while, to make sure Q didn’t spill their conversation. Beltar: Till we meet again… Close Log, Chapter 1, Part 008 ============================================================================ More Pics in the spoiler! Because I take too many! Thanks for reading this installment in Beltar’s story! Q and Beltar’s paths seem to cross a lot…Hope you enjoyed! C and C welcome! ~Beltar (Many of Q's lines are actually from NuckElBerg. )
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Location: D04 Magrathera Tags: Beltar in Exile (Got nothing….) ============================================================================================================================ *static* Begin Log, Chapter 1, Part 014, Exile. My good old friends…Ha-haven-haven’t talked to yall in a wh-while. I got nothing to live for at this point. I’ve been betrayed by Kawashita. Dumped here by Octan. And MANTIS caught me in a bad mood. Ever had the idea to hold a sword too your neck and drop it? No? You are not in my sh-sh-shoes then… Ha..Ha…Ha….Then there’s: r-ra-ra-ra-rats. Rats…Rats…Wondrous Rats… Hehehe….Computer? That old piece of ju-ju-jun-junk? I…decommissioned h-hi-him. I still got his memory di-di-dis-disk…But I considered myself alone even before I…deactivated…him. Hehe! I will beat these machines….ugh… What. The. Absolute. ****. Is that a Robbinhood Rat? This is one s-s-si-sic-sick planet…It really ca-c-can change m-m-my mi-n-d. What…is…ha-hap-happe---happening to m-e… This is one sick planet. This is one sick planet. This is one sick planet. This is one sick planet (This was supposed to go all the way to font size 1, but pasting it is restricting me...) *Silence* Epilogue: I-i-s….t-t-th—tha-that…a…s-se-sett-settle—settleme---settlement. People. Who is my unlucky victim today? Close Log, Chapter 1, Part 014 kszzz ============================================================================================================================ Overview of the build in the spoiler: Back to completely insane Beltar! I didn’t have time nor a good enough Idea for category B…So I whipped this up as fast as I could, also the reason the picture quality is worse… Hope you liked this build and story! Even if the story is definitely shorter than what I've done before like Tappudansu, at least there's far less pictures! And as always, C and C welcome! ~Beltar
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Location: D10, Hamilton Belt Tag: Exploration (I feel like there should be a tag for mining...) =================================================================================================================================================== Begin Log, Chapter 1, Part: 002: “Finally got word back from Headquarters…one week later… It read something along the lines of ‘Agent Beltar, We will be sending a team to extract the Awesomnium, in the meantime, explore the cave with the fresh supplies we have sent. ~HQ, Section A Alpha’ This is one boring week, on the bright side, I finally convinced PauL to stay on the ship! No more nuisance when I record myself here… Okay, time to dig in! Mother of Awesomnium! There’s loads down here! Computer, send transmission to base, Scramble Set lIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIl: I've just made it through the cave. Looks liquid down here for sure. There appears to be a small canal and computer set down here, I’m beginning to think that whoever was here sealed the entrance up to come back here at a later date. Who knows when? End Transmission, Send. Computer: Incoming Transmission from APauLo: Sir, I've just conducted a sonar scan of the asteroid we are currently located on, and it appears that there is a vast cave system of awesomnium inside. Also, watch your step, if you even touch that liquid awesomnium, it may give you fourth degree burn. Also a new mission awaits after this. PauL out. Hmmmm….I’ll deal with that new mission later, right now I've got to prep this area for the incoming team. Computer: Sir, why do you record yourself again? Ah shut up. First PauL wonders, now you? Great, well it helps me, well, um, hmmm…cope?... with myself after my incident…and my ‘repairs’ too, now just shut up for now.” Close Log, Chapter 1, Part 002 =================================================================================================================================================== More pics in the spoiler! I actually used part of my first week build for this, because it is basically a continuation of that area/story. That’s all for this week! C and C welcome! ~Beltar Edit: Fixed a grammar error..
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[SoNE Ep. VIII] Eliminating the Competition
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After Beltar’s recent reassignment to an Imperial Medical Team, going to Tatoone is one of the last missions he expected himself to do as a Medical Official… He was briefed on the mission at least five times, but he still could not comprehend why he was chosen to do this, and not someone higher up in the Empire. He wasn’t sure that this was the best thing for a very unexperienced stormtrooper to do…His old staff sergeant would have loved coming here… The three Imperials surveyed the pod and the surrounding areas before the sergeant in command said aloud a needless order, “All right, Beltar, get in touch with the contact, we will take it from here. Ugh, looks like there's a Kel Dor wanting that pod...” Beltar then proceeded to begin the first phase of the mission.Before Beltar knocked on Dar-Dar Cyonie’s quaint little house, he kept thinking that this was not a mission for him, but then, without any more hesitation, he knocked. Dar-Dar: Oh, Hellos! Yousa must be that bombad Imperial Officer who is coming to talk to mesa about the races. By the waysa, I did nothing wrongs! Beltar: Hello there Mr. Cyon- Dar-Dar: Please call me Dar-Dar! No need for formalities, comsa inside Beltar followed Dar-Dar inside, and Dar-Dar directed Beltar to sit, while he prepared some traditional Gungan Tea, but Beltar insisted that he was fine. Dar-Dar: Are yousa sure bombad Beltar? Beltar: I’m fine, thank you. But let’s get onto business, such as why I am here. Dar-Dar: Okay! Mesa say perhaps after wesa talk, wesa can drink some of my tea? Beltar: Perhaps, but please, take a seat. Dar-Dar reluctantly sat down, where he may have broken a sweat, but Beltar paid no mind to it, the plan was going smoothly. The other operatives where in position, working on finding the answer. All Beltar had to do was stall for the next couple of minutes… Beltar: As you are no doubt aware, I am here for the races. The Empire is looking to recruit you for the race in the coming week. Dar-Dar: Isa would accept this most humble offer if mesa pod was not broken down. Last race, I got in Bombad trouble. Most of mesa pod’s innards are not working anymore. Theysa need to be replaced. Beltar: The Empire will pay for whatever you need. Tools, pars, equipment, fuel, an- Beltar’s commlink beacon was active, then the Sargent in command announced to Beltar over the com, “Phase II is a go. Possible hostility confirmed, we will be their soon. Keep stalling…” Beltar: Sorry, as I was saying: and any other supplies you might need. Dar-Dar: Yousa Imperial scum, yousa stalling! Two Minutes ago: Stormtrooper: Sir, looks like our suspicions were right. He’s a rebel. But why would he actually paint their insignia here, on his house? Sargent: The world may never know Boris, but for now, let’s proceed with Phase II. Presently: Beltar: How kind of you to notice, though, you were a good pilot, too bad all of your winnings and belongings will be confiscated, and you will be arrested. Dar-Dar: Neve- As soonDar-Dar yelled never, the other two Imperial officer’s stormed through the two doors, Dar-Dar tried to dash for it, but when both doors where blocked, the attempt to escape was futile. He was quickly apprehended. Boris: You have the right to remain silent, anything you say can and will be used against you in a court of law. Wait, you won’t have a trial! Never mind then. Sargent: Boris, you have terrible jokes, alright Mr. Cyonie, you are under arrest by the Intergalactic Empire on the charges of Treason. Other charges are to be determined. Boris: You did well Beltar, perhaps you will make your way up to a sergeant! Probably not though, joking of course…Aw, what’s that smell! Beltar: Probably that Bantha outside… Sargent: Okay you lazy soldiers, get outside! I want every piece of equipment and the pod to be shipped to Coruscant immediately. And if you excuse me, I have some real estate to ‘sell’. ================================================================================================================================ Huzzah! A new subforum! More Pics in the spoiler! C and C welcome! ~Beltar -
============================================================================================================================ Kawashita Medical Ship: Rebirth (Deck 4) Begin Experiment, Attempt 42, Project Paradise Prelude: Doctor Mar V. In: Are you sure you want to proceed with the operation General? Kawashita General Taage: Yes. Mr. J: Ah just in time. aPauLo-13, this will be your brand new partner. PauL: Yes sir. But in his current state, I may not like it. Mr. J: Yes yes, Paradise might give him the chance he needs though. Dr. Mar V. In: It won’t hurt a bit Mr. Beltar…I can assur- Beltar: But…YOU DON’T UNDERSTAND…I GOT AN ALIEN FREAKIN PARASITE CHEWING AT MY INTERNAL ORGANS! Dr. M: Yes I’m aware of that…And it’s making your condition unstable. I’m attempting to set you up for Project Paradise attempt 42. Beltar: Project Paradise…ITS FAILED OVER 40 TIM— Dr. M: Better. General Taage: Are you going to start the procedure yet Doctor? Dr. M: It’s not ready sir! General Taage: I DON’T CARE! We can always drop you back onto that street we found you in… Dr. M: Perhaps Beltar is not the one we should be operating on… General Taage: Just do it. Push the button. Dr. M: Fine. Dr. M: As you wish… Dr: M: Ready Mr. Beltar? Beltar: NOOOOooo Dr. M: I THINK ITS WORKING! AMAZ- Dr. M: Yeaaaaaaaaaaarrrggghhhhh General Taage: Doctor. Did it work? … General Taage: Respond. … General Taage: More Doctors where that came from. Cleanup in Lab 42. PauL: Wait sir. General Taage: Why? Mr. J: Excuse Pau- PauL: I believe the process worked sir. Beltar now only has a steady heartbeat, and his brain activity has calmed down from fighting an infection. We must move him to the rest of Paradise immediately. General Taage: Okay. Mr. J: But- General Taage: NO Buts. Trooper 1: There goes another Doctor. Trooper 2: I know right? T1: Shut Up man. T2: Argh, at least this one worked…. General Taage: That is all I needed to see. Get him moved ASAP. And re-outfit PauL with some…monitoring tech. Dr. J: Monitoring?...Sir Yes sir. End Experiment 42 ===================== More Pictures in the spoiler! As always... Thanks for reading this…flashback!...in Beltar’s story! This build is supposed to happen shortly before Project Paradise took place…Also...I may have to change how this part of the story 'happened' later to fit in the convoluted continuity of Beltar's life, and I plan to one day revisit this build and make a better one. Hope you enjoyed, and as always, C and C welcome! ~Beltar
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I'm glad that MKJoshA added this to the book list. I chose what I thought was the most iconic scene from the book and incorporated as many details as I could from the pages such as the glass floor, the foliage on the walls, the two guards outside, the yellow jar of fruits, the Ice Mountain in the center of the table, and even the clothes that the people are wearing. *Spoiler Alert* If you haven't read the book, just look at the pictures from here, and the last couple lines that are not in italics. If you want a small synopsis the events leading up to this build, read below: The Truce at Bakura By: Kathy Tyers No sooner has Darth Vader's funeral pyre burned to ashes on Endor than the Alliance intercepts a call for help from a far-flung Imperial outpost. Bakura is on the edge of known space and the first to meet the Ssi-ruuk, cold-blooded reptilian invaders who, once allied with the now dead Emperor, are approaching Imperial space with only one goal: total domination. Princess Leia sees the mission as an opportunity to achieve a diplomatic victory for the Alliance. But it assumes even greater importance when a vision of Obi-Wan Kenobi appears to Luke Skywalker with the message that he must go to Bakura—or risk losing everything the Rebels have fought so desperately to achieve. Even as the Alliance arrives, the aliens have almost overcome the Bakura Imperial garrison, whose desperate commander will accept help from any quarter—even Rebel—against an insidious foe that enslaves Human minds to pilot their invincible machines of war and destruction. While marshalling the tattered Imperial forces, Luke, Han Solo, and Princess Leia must win the trust and cooperation of the Bakurans. For although Imperial Governor Nereus has granted the Rebels temporary amnesty there is the possibility of treachery among those whose first allegiance lies with the Empire. On the eve of the final explosive onslaught, Rebel and Imperial forces must finally come to terms with each other…or lose the entire galaxy to the hideous servitude promised by a victorious alien enemy. Capturing the sweep and excitement of the original Star Wars saga, The Truce at Bakura plants a seed of hope for peace, sees the formation of a timeless love, and stands witness to a Jedi's undying sacrifice to defend Humanity against an alien nemesis. My Version: Main Picture "They caught up with Leia at the entrance to a dining hall surrounded by interior trees with dangling, drifting branches. More vine-covered white stone walls enclosed the trees, and at their center he spotted a table that was roughly triangular, with its corners blunted for extra seating. Then he looked down. Blue-green water rippled beneath the room's transparent flooring. Underwater lights cast a small moving shadows of fish and an occasional long, snakelike creature. Finally, amid the table stood a miniature mountain range delicately carved from some translucent mineral and lit from inside like one of the rain pillars. Tiny blue rivers trickled down its sides." ... "Trees along the vine-covered walls raised their branches like arms." ... "Human servants scurried away from the table-he had yet to see a droid anywhere-probably having to rearrange seating to accommodate Chewbacca. Captison escorted Leia to a spot next to himself along one side, Madam Captison took the other chair on that end. An elderly man, wearing a voice box on his chest-Senator Belden, Luke realized-already sat next to her on that corner. "Just beyond him, dear," she told Chewbacca. Luke grinned despite his distraction. Dear wasn't a term he'd have applied to a Wookie." The Dining Room "Flanked by a pair of troopers in black uniform, Governor Nereus strode to the third corner of the table and sat down." ... "The liquid clung to the glass like syrup. "Go ahead." She raised an eyebrow. "It's not toxic Our finest local product. You're insulting Bakura if you refuse." She poured herself an equal portion and drank it down. He sipped. Liquid turned to fire and burned his mouth and throat. Then he caught its flavor, like intoxicating jungle flowers mingled with the sweetest fruit he'd ever tasted. Her eyes sparkled. Obviously, she hadn't missed a nuance of his reaction. "What is it?" he whispered. He cooled his mouth with a sip of water. "Namana nectar. One of our chief exports." "I can understand why." "More?" She reached for the carafe again. "Thanks." He grinned. "But no. That's a little strong for my taste." Gaeriel laughed and filled his goblet anyways. "There's likely to be a toast soon." .... She passed him a transparent dish of yellow-orange candies. "Maybe you'd prefer tasting namana fruit this way." "Habit forming?"..."All the best fruits in the galaxy are habit forming. Be careful."....He decided to leave the candies alone-... The Truce being agreed upon. "That [a message from an officer] was a personal communique from Admiral Prittick of the Fleet. You might as well hear it." His strident voice took on a knife edge. "His message confirms the Rebels' claims. The second Death Star has been destroyed, and Emperor Palpatine is presumed dead...as is Lord Vader. The Fleet is regrouping near Annaj." ... ..Governor Nereus shook his head. "Princess Leia," he said, standing up at his place, "if your troops are willing to cooperate with mine, under truce, we need your help." Leia's shoulders straightened. "An official truce, Your Excellency?" "As official as I can make it" That sounded evasive to Luke, but evidently it satisfied Leia. She stood and extended her hand. The massive bracelet shimmered on her wrist; it seemed to add the weight of many star systems to her handclasp. This was a long strectch for both sides, literally and figurativleyy. For the first time-ever-Rebels and Imperials would fight a common enemy together. Nereus engulfed her small hand in his gloved, meaty one. Then he lifted his goblet. "To strange alliances." Everyone follows...etc...needs cooperation....ect... The Dining Room 2 Side View The Imperial Officer who delivered the bad news. Left to Right: Imperial Officer, Guard 1, Guard 2, Beltar Server Left to Right: Senator Belden, Gaeriel Captison, Tiree Captison, Uncle Yeorg Captison, Wilek Nereus, Leia Organa, Han Solo, Luke Skywalker, Chewbacca More Pictures inside the spoiler! (Because I take too many… ) Hope you liked it! It was fun to build. Even with the new camera, some of the pictures turned out a bit fuzzy, I think it was my lighting… If you've read the book, how accurate do you think it is? Anyways, C and C is always welcome! ~Beltar Edit: Added/fixed a sentence Edit 2: Added my 'evidence' + What one would read at the beginning of a Star Wars movie + summaries More official summaries: Official Version 2: Official Version 3:
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The story so far: First Day Aboard the Avenger At The Table-Before The Storm Rescue Mission Reassigned Eliminating The Competition The Build/Story: After being reassigned and lots of delivering the podracer, along with lots logistics and paperwork from Tatooine, Beltar finally got into an AT-MP as his new Staff Sargent had promised. Even though Beltar read the manual multiple times, it was still nearly alien to him. Though, in a few long minutes, he finally got the hang of it. Beltar: “Sarge, what kind of medical purpose does this thing have?” Sarge: “Uh, cover fire? Kid, just do it…” Beltar: “Instructions? Anything? Just fire at the wall?” Sarge: “No, there are some targets that will appear in a minute, hit them all as fast as you can, if you miss them, they will loop back at the end. Please don't pull an Ol ‘Kerkerold’ He blew up half the facility. That’s when we decided to lock all missiles during training…” Beltar then received the green signal that the loop had been started. Beltar’s eyes watched trough the small window for the slightest movement. Then suddenly, he realized that it wasn't a moving target, but a bright red dot! He hit one, then another one. And they stayed lit. “Two-in-a-row, nice. I shouldn't get cocky yet though…” Beltar thought to himself. Sarge: Huh, two-in-a-row. Kirk, this kid may have some use yet . Captain Kirk: Aye, don't speak too soon though, a lot can go wrong… Like Ol’ K- Beltar: I can hear you two you know. Sarge: Focus on the targets! Meanwhile, an Imperial Adjustment Agency Officer* (IAA) watches on, with his two elite guards, they assess the surrounding troops at Bay 27 for possible relocation, reassignment, or to be relieved of duty. IAA Officer: Some of these boys are sloppy. Perhaps they can be ‘reassigned’ to a better location…” Guard 1: Agreed sir. Guard 2: Sir, I do not see what you mean. IAA Officer: Just listen to them! Stormtrooper 1: Hey Boris, do you think Beltar will pull an Ol’ Kerkerold? Boris: Nah, I was with him for a mission on Tatooine, seems like a good guy, he should do this. Oh! Two-in-a-row! I’ll take those 50 credits now. After this, I’ll grab a set of sabacc by the way. Stormtrooper 2: This is so boring. Even a janitor duty would be better...Especially if this guy blows up the walls... IAA Officer: That one, could be relocated to janitor duty. But their Sergeant and the one named Kirk are good at their job here, they can stay as well as this Boris character, others can move. But this Beltar. This Beltar shows promise. He may be useful in the future, oh there’s four-in-a-row now. He may be very, very useful. I shall write a path for him and file it to the IAA myself. Pending approval from the board of course. Guard 1: This doesn’t have to do with the fact that Beltar is your so- IAA Officer: Quiet. That is a private matter. He may be even better at my old job that I had late in the Clone Wars, except re-outfitted with an improved version of the suit of course, we shall wait for at least two months for that hopefully. Now let’s leave this area of the facility to judge the rest of the troops, then we shall return to Coruscant. Guard 1 and 2: Sir, yes sir. During the IAA discussion, Beltar managed to get a six-in-a-row before missing the 7th and 8th out of the ten causing an actual loop to happen, but he did complete it on the 2nd round. Epilogue: (Beltar has just gotten down from the AT-MP) Sarge: You did a great job so- (Commlink Buzzes) Uh-hu, command, this is SS-4459 reporting, I’ll get our team ready. Beltar, Admiral, no Commander Wiesson and two squadrons of stormtroopers just lost contact with us. From their last transmission, sounds like a rebel ambush. Boris! Get the squad ready. Beltar, follow me. Beltar: Admiral Wiesson? I know him, a good friend of mine, we have to get there, we got to get him out of there! Sarge: First, he’s now a commander. Second, let me finish. They just sent one medical team down already. They are now missing too. We are to search for survivors and get out of there ASAP. Looks like there will be some lower bunks available after this…I’ll brief the rest of the squad, you get the pilots ready. Beltar:...Understood sir... Sarge: Look, this Wiesson is your friend, if he is still alive, we will do anything we can to save him and any remaining men. I don’t like losing good men to rebels. Get to the hangar and inform the pilots. NOW! Beltar then scurried off and informed the pilots of the upcoming drop. They loaded an AT-MP on and prepared tents, stretchers, supplies…and wingsuits. “What on earth are they going to use those for?” Beltar thought to himself. More Pictures in the spoiler below. Thanks for reading! C and C welcome! Hope you like it! This is actually one of the biggest MOCS I've ever built or posted on eurobricks... Also, the story isn't that great, for two reasons: 1: I don't have enough time since I still have to write 2 more threads today.. and 2: I don't really know what else to add, this build is more like a bridge which will allow me to develop Beltar's story further. This was a wip for at least a month and a half. Then it was completed for the last half month, but I didn't have a good camera, but now I do! I hinted about a lot of different things in this build… ~Beltar Edit: Forgot to Mention that Markus's build gave some inspiration. IAA* Fake Imperial Military Branch, may have importance later…
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D10: The Hamilton Belt =================================================================================================================================================== Begin Log, Chapter 1, Part 001: “Ten days after my rehabilitation from the crash…and I’m already in the game… Wonderful. APauLo(s)-5 has been a great help in getting me back in the zone, even though I’m no longer a pilot. I was handed a task to scout for any possible activities in the Hamilton Asteroid Belt, and after staring at a scanner for 48 hours, I found a faint piracy distress signal, it was nearly gone. Now I’m here, what a pile of trash! A barley functioning pump, a couple of empty canisters, and a cut computer. Whoever left here, left in a hurry, perhaps they were scared of our scouts, but this couldn't have happened recently… It looks like it would be a liquid Awesomnium mine, but it’s all solid, pipes are clogged. PauL and I tried to get the damn thing working again, but it wouldn't start. So we just set up a landing zone and waited for a supply ship to set up our own mine right on top of the thing. Yeah know what, I never actually know why I record these stupid messages. I’m just talking to myself with PauL listening. Who knows, maybe someone is listening? Aw, shut up PauL, I’m not hallucinating people listening to me…" Close Log, Chapter 1, Part 001 =================================================================================================================================================== More Pics in spoiler: Beltar’s mask is basically like Starlord’s helmet/mask from GotG. And no, APaouLo(s) is not TARS! C&C welcome! ~Beltar
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Location: A07 Lesser Direstan Tags: Land/Water Vehicle, Piracy, Spying =================================================================================================================================================== Begin Log, Chapter 1, Part: 004: “Planet hoppin’ is a semi-fun task. Anyways, I’ve been on a boat for the last couple hours. Even though the air on this part of the planet has been recorded as breathable, I will NOT trust it, kinda a pet peeve of mine. I really won't breath on an alien planet without a purifier near by. Thank Kawashita that this boat isn’t big enough for PauL to get on…He VOLUNTEERED to come with me, there’s barely enough space for me! Oh what do we have here? You look like some of the people that Koro reported. The Dust Demons. Computer, begin transmission with PauL. Computer: Yes sir. PauL: Yes sir? Paul, I’m going to need permission from headquarters to engage a long Dust Demon. PauL: Okay sir, first off, I need to record at least one line of the Dust Demon and I need a description of what he is doing. Okay, I’ll get you a line. Computer, amplify the Dust Demon's speech. Computer: Relaying Now: Ugh, terrible planet, but great money for exporting these, by Dues, they are beauties! These babies are gonna get me a whole lot of gold stuff. I just basically repeated myself…I gotta get ‘em of this planet though. Why do people on Orinshi love these threes? And oh my! I’m talking to myself again… Computer: He’s is now silent. Okay, PauL did you get that? Yes sir, but I still need your description of what he is doing. HE’S GETTING TREES TO SMUGGLE ONTO ORINSHI FOR CRYING OUT LOUD PAUL! Sorry, I exploded again, anyways, don’t add the 'for crying out loud PauL' please. PauL: Okay sir. ...Brief Silence.... P (cont.): Permission to Engage Granted Roger that PauL! Surprise you little demon! Demon: Where'd you come fr— Threat Neutralized. PauL: Good. Yeah now what PauL? I could hang here, seems like the oxygen here is breathable, I wont trust it though till we get a purifier here. PauL: Is everything loaded onto the boat? Yup PauL: Sir, we must take the body and supplies back to HQ for investigation. *sigh* Okay, well maybe I can redeem my Kawashita Land Grant Permissions on this planet...At a later date of course. PauL: Let's get going please... Close Log, Chapter 1, Part 004 =================================================================================================================================================== More Pics in the spoiler! This was a fun build, because I have never actually built good trees before! Yet funny how these trees are not normal trees. Yes, Kawashita has Land Grants on conquered planets. I think. I needed some sort of smuggler, so I figured Koro's may as well work so that it could fit in to continuity because of the Dust Demons being close by. Anyways: C & C Welcome! ~Beltar
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Location: D09 Magrathea Tags: Exploration, Spaceship (sort of) ===================================================================================== Begin Log, Chapter 1, Part 003 “Ugh. I totally exploded I front of Operative Q and his team. I shouldn't have done that. They probably have now taken me as insane. Hopefully they didn't report it...Anyways, my next mission after cave diving on the Hamilton Belt was to investigate a very faint and strange signal that came from Magrathea. It appeared to be from the likes of minifigs, but I still don’t know. PauL is currently in orbit right now while I survey this anomaly. Oh my, is that a crash site! Computer, relay a message to base: The strange signal appears to be a long lost Octan scout ship. Scramble set Beta IxIXXl. PauL, do you read me? [D - D09] Rats. Ruins, and Survival by DaDudeDownDaStreet, on Flickr PauL: Hello sir. Hello PauL, from what I can see it appears to be an old Octan Scout ship, really old by the looks of it. Internals are freezing, and the engines are shot, and supplies missing. Begin a Sonar Scan of the world to locate the rest of the debris PauL: Okay sir, SS started. Any possibility for survivors or any bodies? [D - D09] Rats. Ruins, and Survival by DaDudeDownDaStreet, on Flickr Yeah, there is one right here…His oxygen tank is disconnected, looks like he had a struggle with something before he died, this man certainly put up a fight. PauL: Okay, SS is in, the rest of the ship appears to be at least four or five clicks due east from your location, he must have been shot from high up meaning…Hmmm…It must have been the— Don’t you dare say the rats! AH! There’s one right here! Shoooo! Get outta here! Okay, back on topic, create a cross reference for any Octan member part of the MAET ECAR Initiative that has gone missing. PauL: Sir, we don’t have any of Octans Records, or at least any available to our level of security. …Okay then. Well since there appears to be a water well right here, we might as well get some of it. Send some collectors down. And don’t talk to me for the next half hour please, same with you computer. PauL and computer: Roger that sir. Ah well, this poor guy, wonder what kind of story he would tell me if he was still alive. Probably a tale of Rats, the ruins of his spaceship, and his survival instinct. These canisters already down here can help transfer the wat-- right, PauL is not listening. Good. Close Log, Chapter 1, 003 ===================================================================================== More Pics in the Spoiler! Thanks for reading! C and C welcome! Had to post this via phone, so the format will definitely be messed up a bit compared to my previous ones. ~Beltar I'll be editing though story later if I can to incorperate some things from Operative Q's build. Edit: Added some lines concerning Q's build.