The Star Wars Comic Game-Season One

[JimBee]

Thanks for that input, WhiteFang. If anyone is confused about what is okay and what is not here, just check the Board Guidelines at the top of every page on EB, or the rules in the first post in this topic.

Pr0, I'm afraid I have to agree with Da Death Star, perhaps you ought to change your post a bit so that the clones used only rockets and other quick explosives, and that not all of the droids were destroyed. that would be way to easy!

Also, why all the reinforcements? This is supposed to be a mysterious mission, and not many know about it besides the players and troops involved. Okay, so there's a bunch of ships fighting in Felucian space, let's try to keep it that way, please.

I will have digitally enhanced pics up soon, for my previous post later tonight.

EDIT: Okay, the photo editing is not doing anything for me, so I'll just keep it basic. Check my previous post for the pics.

Edited November 7, 2008 by JimButcher

[Adam]

Thanks!

Edited November 7, 2008 by Adam

[pr0visorak]

Erm, Jim that is why in the pictures I left some of the droids not touched and that I said the cries of the remaining droids. For the rest when I say cries I mean like you know droids have those deactivationg sounds. You are still supposed to fight you know. Sorry if I did not include that... For Will, detonation packs and mines can be very fastly placed on the floor. You can just throw them anywhere which is why they are so portable. And there is an eastern island story? I will now edit the post.

Edited November 7, 2008 by pr0visorak

[JimBee]

Oh, I see, I thought you meant mines, as in underground explosives. I knew what you meant by those sounds that the droids make. By the way, Adam is saying that he wants someone (in his group) to explain things to him. The Easter Island thing was a joke.

[pr0visorak]

Ok Jim! Thanks for the update. Well Adam, lets start from where you left. You were right that I was in the trees or plants or watever. Than you and I had a nice lightsaber duel. Than you won and we walked off talking about how I got the force and stuff like that. We soon reached a droid outpost which was captured by Will and Garviel. Garviel recieved a message that was supposed to be given to Benquin from Count Dooku. Than Bequin somehow got the message and sent a battalion of droids after the outpost. Than I got the clones to put detonation packs all around the land. Jim,Oky and thok hijacked an MTT and started shooting droids. Than we warned them, they escaped and I blew the whole plave to smithereens using the detonation packs,leaving some droids still intact and ready to fight. Than Bob came with reinforcements and will fell through a trap door. Well thats all you missed so far.

Edited November 7, 2008 by pr0visorak

[-JD-]

JD:WE NEED TO GET OUT OF HERE NOW!

pr0:WHAT? Why?

JD: Trust me. The droids are about to nuke (or the star wars equvilent) our position!

pr0: You know this how?

JD: I am from the future. Right now my present self is over that hill tearing droids to pieces, and any moment he will fall to the ground and see a huge mushroom cloud rising from this exact spot.

pr0: He sounds serious. Shall I listen? He is on my side, right? Yes. Give the order. OK. Trooper. Evacuate, NOW! GET TO THE GUNSHIPS!

A few klicks away....

Droid: FIRE THE ULTIMATE!

Droid 2: Roger Roger!

Edited November 7, 2008 by Jammiedodger714

[Wouwie]

''Radar man, do you spot an open place on the ground?!'' Wouwie asked.

I personally like this pic

''Euhm...I shall check it right now.'' He answered.

''Rex, can you take the duty of leading the second battalion?'' Wouwie asked.

''I shall do my best.'' Rex said ''Shall I take the non-battle ready troops?''

''Sure, shall we'' Before Wouwie could finish his sentence, the Venator made some weird moves.

''What the hell happened!'' Rex shouted.

''We were hit again!'' A clone shouted above the noise of alarms and stuff.

''Euhm...Wait.'' Wouwie said ''Control room to Communications, do you copy?''

''Go ahead Control.''

''Can you direct me to Oky Wan in ARC-170 645 Alpha?''

''I shall try it!''

''Okay, Rex, go to your men and contact me when you are there''

''Copy that''

[simonjedi]

So JD, theres 2 versions of your character right? Present you (the one we all know, from hoth) that's fighting droids outside the outpost, and there's future you talking to pr0

Garviel was sitting on the ground with Sergeant Alpha, he was helping him treat the wounded from the short yet bloody counter attack from the separatist forces, he was glad that they attacked after everyone else had met up. He doubted he could defend the outpost with a squad of troopers.

Zak ran towards him "Sir, message from Pr0, we have a problem" he said handing him the comlink

"Loken here, Whats the matter"

Pr0's voice was barley audable "According to JD the Seps are about to annihilate this position, we have to get out of here now!"

Loken swore "There isn't enough time to bring the gunships for my area, go without me, i'll get all the clones I can to the bunker."

"Ok good luck Garviel, Pr0 out."

Loken stood up "Alpha get as many people as we can into the bunker, it should be heavily shielded against anything the Clankers could throw at us."

"Yes sir, LISTEN UP, unless you all want you're body parts scattered around this courtyard. I suggest we get into that bunker. Grab what you can carry but make it quick."

{3 minutes later}

Garviel was the last to enter the bunker, he heard the shells whizzing towards them. The quick responses from the troopers had managed to save 30 troopers plus the equiptment. He sealed the bunker and prepared for the worst.

[Oky]

Oh come on - an atom bomb?! Aren't we taking it a little too far here, guys? As Jim said, this was all supposed to be secret mission! Oh well, I guess it's too late to go back now...

So JD, theres 2 versions of your character right? Present you (the one we all know, from hoth) that's fighting droids outside the outpost, and there's future you talking to pr0

Actually, it's his future self that you know from Hoth and who is talking to Pr0. He helped you and Adam defend Echo Base from the empire and then came back to the present together with you, remember? You never met his present self, and he is the one fighting droids far away.

What bunker are you talking about btw?

Edited November 7, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi

[Da Death Star!]

Um,guys?In case you haven't noticed,Will is in a previously unknown room beneath the outpost that PROBABLy isn't ray-shielded or whatever protects from bombs and stuff!On second thought,if its secret,then that PROBABLY means that the CIS would have ray-shielded it,so never mind.(Nice curveball ya threw Jammiedodger )

Will got up and grunted.He had a feeling that something bad was about to happen,so he hid under a nearby table.He heard a giant explosion.Will waited for half an hour to come out.He peeked his head out,and his mouth dropped open.There was the remains of the outpost(Along with the roof of the hidden room)and a mushroom cloud dispersing.Will crawled out and stood up.He ran over to a giant rock that had smashed through the floor.He looked down and saw a staircase leading deeper into the ground."I'm gonna wait to check that out,LATER"Will mumbled.Then he climbed onto a rock,then climbed onto another,then another,and finally climbed onto what was left of the outpost.Will rolled over onto his back and breathed a sigh of relief.He got up and turned around.He spotted a Bunker in the distance.Will looked around,he couldn't see any bodies,so that meant that the others were okay."Well,if there anywhere,they'd be there"Will said to himself.

But what about Jim,Oky and Thok?Or did they get into the Bunker with everyone else?It looks like the room that Will was in had ray-shielding that was old-tech.

[simonjedi]

Oh come on - an atom bomb?! Aren't we taking it a little too far here, guys? As Jim said, this was all supposed to be secret mission! Oh well, I guess it's too late to go back now...

I thought it stopped being secret when the republic arrived in force, and you, jim, thok and pr0 captured a MTT/ vaporize an entire invasion force. Although it sort of plausable the seps would bomb the outpost, it has become a staging area for the republic, they don't know about us. I'd rather the seperatists use something other than a nuke though.

Actually, it's his future self that you know from Hoth and who is talking to Pr0. He helped you and Adam defend Echo Base from the empire and then came back to the present together with you, remember? You never met his present self, and he is the one fighting droids far away.

ah, i thought it was different because it would make "hoth" JD about 45 at least.

What bunker are you talking about btw

Bunker is just another term for the bit where Me/Will transmited the message to you. slightly retconing it, but i didn't expect a fething nuke.

Edited November 8, 2008 by simonjedi

[Oky]

I thought it stopped being secret when the republic arrived in force, and you, jim, thok and pr0 captured a MTT/ vaporize an entire invasion force.

Exactly. That's where things started to get out of hand.

Bunker is just another term for the bit where Me/Will transmited the message to you. slightly retconing it, but i didn't expect a fething nuke.

Ya, ok, that's what I thought you meant. Thanks.

Will got up and grunted.He had a feeling that something bad was about to happen,so he hid under a nearby table.

Well, according to PSAs of the 50's, hiding under a table does in fact protect you from a nuclear blast.

But what about Jim, Oky, and Thok?Or did they get into the Bunker with everyone else?

Not exactly...

A few minutes earlier:

Jim, Thok, and Oky Wan stayed hidden behind the giant plant where they had been during the explosion of the detonators. A few droids were still roaming around looking for them. Suddenly, Oky's comlink beeped. Oky answered, and a few whistling sounds came out of the comlink. "It's the R4 unit from our ARC 170! He says he has a transmition from Wouwie's cruiser" Oky told the others. "Tell it to record the message," said Jim, "We don't have time for that now." Oky did as he was told. Once he had hung up, he said: "Why, what is it, Jim?" "Look!" Jim pointed at a large hover transport, driven by droids, with an even larger missile on it, that moved slowly toward the communications outpost. "Are they crazy?!" Thok exclaimed. "They can't honestly be planning to nuke the place!" "You better believe it." Jim said grimly. "We can't outrun that," Oky Wan said, "we need to find a place to hide!" He looked around. There was a crashed freighter lying amongst some oversized plants not far from them. "Over there!" Oky Wan called. They all ran over and entered the wreckage. Inside, they looked for something that could protect them against the rays. After a minute or so, Oky Wan found the solution to their problem: a refrigerator! ( ) "Are you nuts!" Thok said outraged. "Don't worry; I've seen this in a movie once!" Oky Wan assured him and emptied the inside of the fridge with a few moves of his hand. They all got in, and not a second too early. Once Oky had closed the door, they could hear a loud noise, and the next thing they knew, they were flying through the air. They landed hard and were flung out of the fridge immediately. Slowly, they got up, and to their pleasant surprise, they seemed to have landed right in front of the outpost. They sighed in relief when they saw Garviel, Adam, Pr0, and a few clones coming out of the remains of the outpost, unharmed. At last, they were all reunited!

Get the reference?

Anyway, can we please stop all the ridiculous Easter Island, giant army, and atom bomb stories and start taking the storyline of this game seriously? Thanks.

Edited November 8, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi

[pr0visorak]

Wow! A nuclear/atomic bomb! I dont think there is such a thing in the star wars galaxy.They would just fire lasers from space to the ground. That was how sith desroyed planets or certain parts of it during the old republic. And Oky it has to be a leaded refrigerator By the way Oky, he said he fell to one of the lower levels. After all Atomic bombs are big but if yo are in one of the lower levels. You can survive but it has to be a very low and deeper levels.

pr0, Garviel, Adam,Loken and the other troops left the outpost to see Oky, Thok and Jim.

pr0:"Well, we thought you might have died there."

Than pr0 looked at the refrigerator.

pr0:"You saw the classic Indiana Jones didnt you?"

Oky:"Ya, nice movie too."

Oky, thorn and Jim got out of the refrigerator.

Oky:"Well commando, report!"

pr0:"We have no caaualties sir. We only have some injured troops sir, but they will do fine. They can walk, shoot, throw and kill."

Oky nodded his head satisfied with the outcome.

pr0:"Wow! And I thought my bombs for the sepretists approaching the outpost were imppressive..."

Adam:"Right, so erm. Lets get going."

pr0 looked around and noticed something a miss. He thought carefully before realising something important.

pr0:"Where is Will?!?"

Everyone looked around but to no avail, Will was not there.

clone:"Sir! Looked there!"

pr0:"Clones and Arcs get into positions now. I want all targets aimed at him immediatly!"

Adam:"What is it?"

pr0:"It looks like we got company..."

A figure started to approach the outpost, he looked familiar to many but no one was willing to take the chance.

[JimBee]

Funny reference, Oky Wan, but I believe it's called a "supplement cooling storage unit" in Star Wars terms. And really guys, I agree with Oky Wan, try and stay within the "story guidelines", as I've mentioned time and time again. Thanks.

Jim got out of the cooling unit. He was a little scrambled up from being tossed around, but otherwise unhurt. He checked that Oky Wan and Thok were in the same condition. After getting up, the three saw Adam, Garviel, a man that they had never met before, and a few clones standing in front of them.

"Hello, I'm Pr0," introduced the stranger. Jim looked him over. He was young, but seemed like a well-trained soldier. He nodded in response.

"Listen, guys, time's running out, we need to stop that time machine. The first mutants have probably already been sent into the past, since the CIS want to get this done ASAP," said Butcher. "We should resume the normal plan, although it's going to be even harder than we anticipated before. Since the battle in space and here on the planet, the CIS bunker has probably increased their security ten-fold".

"How worse can this get?!" asked Thok.

"Oh, it just got a lot worse," replied Pr0 as he looked to the distance. The rest of the group turned around and saw a whole new attack force heading towards them. At least it wasn't as big as before.

"We're going to need a lot of help on this one..." said Butcher, almost to himself.

"Don't worry, I got reinforcements," said Bob almost comically as he emerged from the bunker.

[Wouwie]

''Pilot, land close to the open spot, asap!''

''Copy that sir!''

''Wouwie? I'm ready!'' Rex said through the Comm link.

''Me to. Prepare to land and execute special assault order 235 Alpha. ''

''235 Alpha, got it!''

Wouwie looks on the radar and sees that there is no droid activity close to Oky and the rest.

''Hmm....Airborne Squads Alpha 3 and Charlie 4, take 2 RGS'.''

''Copy that''

''You'll receive more details in-flight.''

''Pilot, change in orders, land when we're in-flight!''

''Yes sir!''

''Wouwie to Communications, Wouwie to Communications, do you copy?''

''We're here.''

''Do you got any reply on the message to Oky?''

''Nope'' The clone answered..

''Hmm...Does anybody down there has an comm link?!''

''Yes...I hope..''

''Try to connect me to them! ASAP!!!''

He was running to the hangar bay when he stumbled into Alpha 3.

''Good to see you sir!'' The commander said.

''Good to see you to commander. Okay, this is the plan:

We got around 10 human survivors, which must survive. We got an incoming droid force which is C-4 first priority. You guys come with me to the survivors and help them with our mission, which is top secret!''

[Lt. Col. Thok]

Thok looked at his weapon forlornly. It wasn't in the best shape (four planets in five days does a lot to a gun). He unclicked the safety, and set the gun to rapid fire. He aimed, pressed the trigger....

Thok: It's stuck.

Jim: Hmmm?

Oky: What's stu- oh. CRAP!

Thok tried it again. The trigger was stuck fast. He dropper it, and drew his sidearm. This battle was going to suck hard.

[Da Death Star!]

"Hey,hey!Don't shoot!"Will called to his friends.Then he noticed more droids showing up,and took out his Blaster pistol and vibrosword."Long time no see,Jim!"Will called over the blaster fire.Then he spun and ducked out of his hiding spot,and ran,firing all the way,to another peice of rubble.He peeked around the rubble,and saw a few of the droids newly smoking.

This would be a prime-time to have him explain where he wandered off to .

[-JD-]

JD walked to pr0.

JD: Somethings wrong.

pr0: Huh? What?

JD: Look.

JD held out his arm. It was fading away.

pr0: What's that?!

JD: Somethings happening! My present self....he must be fatally wounded, or dying. AAGH!

JD fell to the floor. pr0 knelt beside him and removed JD's helmet.

JD: You need to find my present self.....before its too late!

pr0: But...where is he??!!

JD: Over the--

JD passed out.

I hope this is an ok twist. I thought earlier when I joined that some of you will meet my present self later on. And this kinda fading away thing happens in loads of adventure stories . Anyway, hope its ok.

[Bob]

"Look to the sky everyone!" Bob said.

The group looked up and saw at least 20 gunships starting to land. Two gunships had AT TE's with them.

"I'd say thats enough for ya..." Bob said.

[pr0visorak]

I thought this is a secret mission. Why are there so many gumships? Oh well, too late to go back now...

pr0:"Over the what!?!"

Adam:"Its no use, we need to find his present self."

pr0:"Right, ok. I will take 4 of my Arc's with me to rescue JD. The rest of you should continue with your mission. Once I get JD I will comlink you to meet at the rendevue point. Besides that anyone wants to come?"

Silence filled the air after that...

pr0:"Right than, no one wants to than. Okay than, Bob can you pass me one of your gunships and lend me about 4 more of your men."

Bob:"Done!"

pr0:"Right than, any idea on where JD is at?"

Silence felt the air once more...

Adam:"I remember now, remember! He said before the explosion that he was over that hill!"

pr0:"Right, thanks for the reminder!"

Bob:"Your ship is here pr0! And good luck!"

pr0:"Arc's get Jd's body and put it in the bacta tank. We need to stabalise him so that he wont be dead before his past self is."

The Arcs noded and brought JD to the bacta tank.

pr0 saluted them before leaving in the gunship to find JD, wherever JD was. He couldn't be far...

Back on the other planet that pr0 came from...

Clone:"Sir, the ships that have been requested are here and they are ready for engagement as requested."

Commander:"Excellent! Now we just need to wait..."

[Oky]

I thought this is a secret mission. Why are there so many gumships?

Right you are! Seriously, guys, what's wrong with you? It was only a few posts ago that we said that there shouldn't be any more large armies arriving!

[Wouwie]

You can't blame me! I only come with 2 gunships

''Okay guys...Ready?''

''We're ready!'' The clones said.

''Charlie 4, do you copy me?''

''Yes sir''

''You know what to do right?''

''Destroy the incoming droid force?''

''Yep. Go for it!''

''Copy that. Over and out!''

''Pilot? Go to sector Echo Fox 212, there are some people that could use our help!''

''Your wish is my command, Wouwie'' He said with a smile on his face.

''I hope they're still alive...''Wouwie thought..

They flew out of the hangar bay into the deep space to the jungle of Felucia...

I'm coming to save your sorry behinds

[-JD-]

My present self will be a CW clone with blue arms and the chaingun, just incase anyone will do pics.

Present JD...

He lay there in a pool of blood, ( ) trying desparately to keep concious. he looked to his side and saw his arm was twisted and mangled. He started to see things. Shapes. He felt his pulse slowing. He saw a cloaked figure looking down at him. Everything went black.

Gory post!

He saw a cloaked figure looking down at him. Everything went black.

Comparison:

The cloaked figure is my nemisis by the way. Basically an entirely black armoured bounty hunter.

Don't kill him though. He will be in the story for a bit.

Edited November 9, 2008 by Jammiedodger714

[pr0visorak]

A few minutes before that happened...

Clone pilot:"Sir! We have a soldier down. He seems to be a.... clone!?!"

pr0:" Well, we need all the man we need. Land us right beside him."

Clone pilot:"Yes sir!"

The gunship landed right beside the clone and pr0 got out of the gunship.

pr0:"Clones, get the other bacta tank ready! Arc's, secure our position and make sure that there no enemy get near here."

The Arc's nodded and secured the site. pr0 walked to the body and examnined it, it apeared that they were too late. This clone was dead.

pr0:"Clone and Arc's pack it up, this one is dead..."

He took out the clone's helmet and to his surprise...it wasnt JD. pr0 examined it closely and noticed something unusual.

A poison dart...

pr0:"Arc's correct me if I am wrong but darts like these only come from bounty hunters right? And that it is a toture weapon, lets you see haluciantions and lets you tell the truth for a while. Than it kills you."

The Arc's nodded their head.

pr0:"Well, that is disturbing... Clone get that body and pass me his helmets video feed."

Clone:"Sir, not all of us had this you know! We had the option to put a camera or not. Most of us didnt, what makes you think this guy is so special?"

pr0:"Because I say so!"

The clone nodded and looked through the dead clone's helmet. True enough, a small disc emerged.

pr0:"Nice job! I will take that and watch it!"

pr0 snatched it away and put it into his helmet to see the video. And what he saw wasnt pleasent.

In the video...

Bounty hunter:"Well clone! You are going to die anyhow so would you rather die slowly or fast."

The clone kept silent.

Boubty Hunter:"Right than..."

The bounty hunter injected the dart.

Bounty Hunter:"Right, now tell me everthing you need to know about JD..."

Back to life...

The video stopped by itself and said that it was a manual shutdown. pr0 did not like this at all, he needed to get this to Adam, Jim, Oky and the others. Than he had an idea, the only way to find this bounty hunter was if his weapons speacalists back in his ships could get an identification on this.

All i need to do is just find out which shop or dealer this came from and ask who bought it. No time for thinking now. It was time to take action...

pr0:"Clone, send a message to Adam and tell him I wont be here for a while. I will be going back to erm get something. Pilot once the clone transmits the message, fly us to these coordinates immediatly. I hope you are a good flyer because you are going to need it!"

The clones followed and soon he was in space, flying through a large battle. He hoped his ships were still there though, who knows what could have happened...

[Da Death Star!]

pr0?The droids have already attacked us,and your LEAVING?!Besides,Oky said no more side plots.

"Jim!"Will shouted."I found something in the outpost!"Or whats left of it.Will thought grimly.He fired a few more shots.He looked around the corner,and saw no more droids approaching.Will sighed with relief."Glad thats over.He heard one of the clones say.About fifteen minutes later,they had all regrouped."Where the hell are pr0 and JD?"Will Questioned."Anyway,I found a hidden room under the outpost,and a hidden staircase under that that leads deeper into the ground,I was planning on checking it out after I found you guys"Will explained."Oh,by the way,I found this on the way here"He said as he pulled out the key."Any idea what it is?"