Palathadric

Comments, etc are in red. It's a neat perspective. I like it, Scorpiox. Sorry, if I seemed rather strict. I am just responding with what I would have put. I think I am correct, but I'm not actually from an English speaking country, so... I will post my own work one of these days, and believe me, it will need a lot of corrections.

I gulp. "Oh, well, that's great to hear, I guess. "Was that the first quest you went on?"

"It's rather difficult to determine your height while you are seated." "Oh...um...I guess I won't be hurrying to start a dispute with anyone anytime soon in that case. So, you are into that sort of thing, then?"

I figured as much, I just wanted to be sure. They should definitely be posted later. Oh, by the way, Sandy, shouldn't the Ziegfried's become the "House of Sinners" or something?

Where is he hosting the side quests?

I have one question C3POwen. You use both LDD and LDraw. What would you say are the benefits of using LDD? I worked with it for a while, but found it very slow, and quite unwieldy in comparison to, say, SR 3D Builder.

"An elf with a beard!" I mutter to myself. "Never heard the likes of it, much less seen it in all my years!" Hearing the elf's last comment, I reply, "Mysterious? ...I suppose so. "Wise? ..." I trail off. "How did you cool down the dispute between the Lion Knights and your cousins? Pay them off? If that's the case, I can start a dispute too," I offer hopefully.

"Ooops, I didn't notice the ears, it must be because your hat is hiding them somewhat." "However, the beard it what caused me to believe you could not possibly be an elf. I have never met an elf with a beard before, if you don't mind me saying so."

"You are an Elf?" I gasp. "Pardon me, but I would never have thought in. I was certain you were human or perhaps even a dwarf. I do not know if you've heard of me, but I am a hermit, only recently came back from quest #... well, we were hunting a Draugr...undead stuff, you know. I killed him in the end. I collected this helmet and this shield from him, but do not fear. They are well sanitized and purified from any pollution his vile spirit may have brought upon it."

Really?!? I would never have guessed. That depends entirely on how many scum there are.

The second one is my favourite. I'm glad she got her dislocated shoulder back in place.

Oh, okay, I didn't realize that this is what you had intended. Then it's It definitely is easier if you read it out loud. It may be a bit confusing for some.

It's far too scanty for Pretzel's liking. He will definitely have to shun you. I do prefer the old Alexis, but I wouldn't say this one is too horrible...I've seen worse. Hey, why doesn't everyone post the various stages their figure went through so we can look at each one, and determine which one was the

And if he waits that long, we'll know he's scum. Master Corobb, I do think that it may be a good idea to wait until voting is opened or a bit before that to reveal your information, if you have it. If others think differently though, I do not mind receiving it right away either.

I am too tired to seriously critique it now, but it looks quite interesting at least.

Hopefully, it won't be too much longer, since Plo Koon, forgive me if I got the wrong name, is the only one left to vote. I don't know whether you should release the information right away or later on. I guess just go with your feeling.

I see I'm late to the party, but the last wisher is the most remembered, right? Happy birthday, Shadows!

Congratulations, EB, for being "The place to be!"

"I am suffering down here, as I assume you know, but not just because of the intended torture. The sickness your people make poisons me, I can only regenerate so much. And I prefer not to die in this dead land." Release me from these bonds, and I will take you to my people. I will not help you nor your nation's soldiers attack my people, I will not let you attack my people. But I will take you to appeal to them to release your friend. If you should free me and not harm a single Phonnu or one of our (contacts?), when I will do this. I will not lie, the path to my home is not easy, it will take time to prepare for it. But I promise that if you follow those roles, I will get you there. Agreed? Is this correct? The only problem that I have with it is it seems just like someone is speaking English, only with a horrible accent. It was a little tough reading through, although if one reads it quickly one can grasp it fairly easily too, in my opinion.

It was a pleasure voting for you...I mean, playing with you.

I revive from my unconcious state in time to hear Benji's jubilant words. I roll my eyes. I open my mouth to say something, but then I shut. The young heroes will always be chosen before the elderly. Hirers these days just don't look at experience as much as they used to. They look instead to brashness, speed, and those hasty thing which I could hardly call qualities. Nevertheless, it is no wonder that "heroes" like Benji get chosen before others. I turn to bid farewell to Alexis, but she is already gone. Ah well, I muse, she at least seems to have some light in her compared to the darkness that surrounds me. I look around me and spot a sagacious looking man still rambling about chocolate milk. "Friend," I say, cutting off his unending monologue, even though I wince as I say this word. "I see that you did not arrive too long ago. What news bring you from other lands?"

Um...I actually think there is still 24 hours remaining...let me check... Yep, 24 hours, and damn, I just realized that once again I am too late.

K-Nut!

What?!? When did you become a Knight? And since when have you had a Padawan of your own? You went straight from being a Padawan to being a sith as far as I can remember. But I guess you should be the expert in your own history. Oh, come on! You could have at least considered me.

Well, you do a very good job of it.