Darkdragon

How stable is that curved staircase as pictured? Would it really need a ledge to support it at the top, or are there other supports we can't see?

"I'll take 2 Grand Tonic and a Pheonix Essense. Here is a Big Pearl, i just need 4 gold back please."

Since you are still waiting on grading from Hinckley, why don't you go ahead and enroll in Dynamic Paneling

"Oh, well if you know him, that's great then." She looks over at the golden chest with some trepedation. "Yes...I do have a golden key. I'll go see if it fits that chest." Cinna goes over to try and unlock the goldent chest.

Totally agree with all of this. Staying quiet and just trying to survive is no way for a team player to play - whether scum or town. I see it much more often with vanilla townies than other roles, but even have seen scum team members do this to the point that they don't even post/engage on the writeboard/pm. The game is teams, no matter your role. It's up to everyone to do everything they can to work for the team and skating by silently hoping your team wins and you survive is the wrong way to do it.

"I'll open this gate, be ready in case this guy decides he is tougher than all of us combined." Cinna laughs lightly but stops as soon as she sees Namyrra head over to the golden chest. "Namyrra...be careful, it could be trapped." She shivers remembering the sand traps. "Be very careful." Cinna heads over to the cell to let the prisoner out.

Nice!

That's usually for the best.

"You're probably safer in there for now!" Cinna yells to the prisoner just before continuing her attack on the star. Darkness at Hairy Star from the back row.

Darkness at Hairy Star from the back row.

Welcome to BF&CA, it's great to see your enthusiasm here! I like your idea for the comic and what you have posted is a great start. A few things about this project could be improved though, so I'll just dive right in. One of he main things that catches my eye is that you have a bunch of rectangular pictures with some actual text near them. It reads more as a regular forum post rather than a comic. I'd suggest for fixing this, you look at taking the Dynamic Paneling lesson. Def will be able to help you out with layout and adding some pizzaz. The other item that really stands out to me here is the fact that all your photos are square and many times cutting off the thought and speech bubbles. Don't be afraid to break those borders! Let those bubbles jump right out and just make some whitespace around the image to handle it. A simple change like that really help with the excitment of the panels. To start you out, I'm gonig to assign one more lesson in addition to what you've already signed up for. I'll keep this list updated for you when you complete something or another teacher assigns you something in relation to this project. Personalized Curriculum Adding Dialogue to Comics Passed Character & Theme 1: Basic Story Arc and Characters Passed Dynamic Paneling

Ok, where should I start? The dino weapons/armor are amazing. The ship landing gear is perfect. Bones bones bones! The whole concept, I just love it!

My den! It's a pretty bad set, no denying that. It has a great name though!

Following Hybros

Excellent work! [bloggedcp][/bloggedcp]

Attacks Unrestrained with Darkness from back row.

ooc: oops. Attacks Unrestrained with Darkness from back row.

Attacks Unrestrained with Darkness from back row.

Cinna tries to heal herself again.

Oh no!!! Also, i'm registered and hotel booked. Surprisingly yesterday both room types were available but today (24th) the King bed rooms were sold out. So if you're waiting to book, you might miss out on the hotel if you don't do it ASAP.

Welcome to Eurobricks! I love your comic and glad to see you around here.

Cinna will do as Hybros requested

"Should we go get Jun?"

Turn 1: Darkness spell at Giant from the back row. Turn 2: Darkness spell at Giant from the back row.

Turn 1: Move upstairs Turn 2: Take a Grand Tonic