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33. zorro3999 - You have been sentenced to death by immurement! 20. Matn - Governor's End 7. Fat Tony - Pirate's End 1st How cruel!! It's the cery cruel idea and a well buield MOC that made up my decision. 2nd Funny story. Well build, and good pictures! 3nd actually I think this is the most well build MOC in the entire contest and it's funny too, but there's not much pillaging going on. Only killing a pirate. It's a very gloomy entry. I really like it. But it's only a third place since there's too little pillaging. There was many great entries and I really had some hard choices to pic the three MOC for my votes. It was a great contest and it was fun make my entry. Great work you staff members of EB!

Nice entry. uhh.. and so bloody! I really love the soldier who is blown to pieces and blood all over it. It's so nice. The rock is nice. Possible improvements Instead of those western guns you should give you figs some rael pirate weapons. I also think you should give the dead soldier either a hat or some hair. How about a story? How come the pirate is shooting the man? How did the soldier end up in tha gallow? Some kind of introduction of your entry would eb nice too. You just start posting pictures. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Good luck with the contest

Naah.. not really.. Niether did I. but you know what? That's very pirate-ish. We go for the gold.. ehm.. raft as pirates. YARR

Thanks a lot all of you. Uhh.. I'm so excited Looking forward to recieve it.. uhh.. I think I'm gonna do a review of this unique eurobrick raftset

Ehm.. I think I've made 20 feedbacks today. But I'd like someone to check it, just be sure. I can't claim a price if I'm only half done So now I just hope that I'm the first.

Off course they are happy. Who wouldn't be with a loot like that. The shop looks nice with all kinds of different stuff for sale. The lady in the shop lucks scared. Thats very suitable for the sight before her eyes. The lanterns looks good. Possible improvements There's not much death about it. There's pillaging but I'd like a trail of blood after the pirates. Maybe an arm in the chest or something. The western guns aren't good in pirateMOCs. Replaced them with the real pirateguns if you have some. Give the black pirate a headgear. He deserves it. I think it would look good if you added a pirate more carrying something. Maybe just weapons. but another pirate would make the other two looks less "alone". Your pictures are very blurry. Can you do something about it? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Now go get this MOC from average to awesome. Good luck with the contest.

The classic piratestory. Nice that someone made it for the contest. Very simpel but I like it that way. And in this category there's not space for the complicated stuff. The treasure looks nice. I'd like the gold. Good idea to make sure that the captain is the only one who knows the whereabouts. I like that one of them has his hands over his head. "surrender you scallywag" The background of the moc makes it look really nice! Possible improvements Give the captain some epaulettes. He's already got the hat The two poor workers are pretty standard. I think it would be nice if you had some custom made pirates. One of the pirates are smiling. Thats not the expression for a situation like that. Have you got any scared-looking faces? If so replace it with the one smiling. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It's a nice little entry. I like it a lot Good luck.. arrrhhhhh

Yeah.. give him the whip. Make him beg.. It's evil but not in the high-class evilness. It's almost common The deck is great and so is the mast. You have chosen the head for the poor redcoat well. He doesn't look too happy. The left clothes on the deck is nice. Good detail. Possible improvements Give the captain a captains hat! And also some epaulettes as others have suggested before me. The beard is good though. What is that pirate in the mast doing? He's shaven AND he's smiling?? Point is: give him a more pirate-ish head. He sure looks too nice and glad. I'd given the man in the top of the mast a hat. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That's all for now. Good luck with the contest.

That's not a nice way to do things! The pirate must be a coward.. but well.. on the other hand it's pretty pirate-ish to do I think. The blood effect on the floor is good and it's great that there's such a long distance from body to head :pir-skull: The hallstand is very nice and so is the fireplace. It shows this si someone in the navy. All the room is well made and there's many good details. The "fish" is a funny detail. It's a very ninja-like assasin you've got. I like it Possible improvements I'm not at all fond of the new swords TLC has made, so I think you should give the assasin a cutless instead. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Guess that's all. Good luck with the contest.

Zorro it's a masterpiece in cruelty! It's a simpel and yet unbelieveable cruel way to kill people. The pirate looks clearly unpleased. I think I'd do the same in that situation. The soldier almost looks like he's enjoying it. How evil :pir-skull: Possible improvements I know it's difficult, but I would add a soldier guarding the prisoner. he can escape as far as I can see. If he attacks the mason with the hammer He's free to go. But I know there's a very little room there. so maybe you could make him sit intop of the MOC. With a gun in his lap. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ On of my favourites for the category. Keep up the great work and good luck.

Sure that's what I call a bad day. Nice name chosen to the MOC The long flame is very nice. I like that you've made the islanders the "pillagers" in this MOC. It' somehow pretty rare in this contest. The skeletons shows cruelness. Nice! Possible improvements Fir-trees and palms are not growing the same places I'm sure. I think you should try to look the ground look more rough. Some small rocks and elevations would do the job I think. I would leave out the pirate in the rock. There's no purpose for them to be there. Not compared to your story anyways. So either remove them, or integrate them in the story. A bit more blood wouldn't hurt ~~~~~~~~~~ Good Luck with the contest

Yak.. That's kinda groose. Like the idea. It's really cruel and nasty. The piratechair is nice. Possible Improvements I think it would look nice if you added a lantern or candle on the table Is it possible to find a more "hungry" head for the pirate. It would look great. not sure what kinda head that might be though. Except for that the only thing is, that I think you should put all your pictures in the first post. With the space allowed you cannot make this any better. ~~~~~~~~~~ I somehow lost my appetite. Good luck with the contest.

Nice "jungle" MOC. Poor soldier having to fight a pirate with that small knife :pir-skull: The roof is nice, though I wouldn't live in the hut when it's rainseason The way the hut is build in rocks palms and other plants. Possible Improvements First of all this is a contest for pillaging. There's not so much pillaging going on in you MOC. There's not evena single drop of blood. I want blooooood. That would make it more suitable for the contest. What is the westernguy doing in there? Even if you haven't got any more "real" soldiers you could make him more pirate-ish. By giving him som epaulets and a tricorne he would be much more right for the period. And speaking of epaulets: I think your other soldier should have his in another colour. I'd prefer yellow or blue for the red guards. The picture where you're showing the inside of the hut is very dark, and it's almost impossible to see what's in the hut. You should retake that one so it's lighter. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You MOC has got some potential, but you gotta work with it to make it real evil and fit for the contest Good luck.

From Bad to good this MOC is awesome! It's really really great. So many details. unfortunatly they it's difficult to catch the all in one single pics for judgement. especially when the MOC is this size. So where shall I start in this wonder of a MOC. The cannonsmoke is nice. Makes a good actioneffect. The tower is so nice. I really like it. So detailed and well choosen colourscheme. When the contest is over I think you shoudl give us an presentation of the ship. it looks nice. The head-shaped cliff if brilliant. Nice idea! Well.. to be honest I think I'm gonna stop here. I could go on forever about this MOC. It's packed with details and I cannot think anything bad to say about. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Good luck with the contest

Wauw! You've used a lot of interesting and new building technics. I just LOVE the dead soldiers made to ground meat. And the cutless covered in blood is also well made. well.. I'm always glad when someone is make lots of blood in these MOCs for the contest Those beams are fabolous! Really nice and detailed. You always seem very inventitative in you MOCs and this I definitely not a exception! The roof too is a nice technic and is well made. The pirates looks happy and pleased with themselves.. Just how I like it. The chandlier is great, but I find it a bit odd to have a chandlier on a balcony. Possible improvements Somehow I think the root (I guess that's what it is) look wierd. I think a normal palm would look better, but that's just my personal opinion. Apperently you like it as it is I'm not so fond of the round tan bricks on the ground. I suppose they are placed there to make it look rough but I think some stones would do the job better. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In generel a very very wellmade MOC. But I wouldn't expect anything less from you. Keep up your great work. And good luck with the contest.

Hahaha Poor guy.. Different and yet evil way to kill people. Your torso for the pirate is well chosen. It looks kinda dirty and makes me think that he's been down in the sewer crawling around.. ehm.. yummy.. The face is wellchosen for the soldier. The second i was shot in the **** I think I would have the same expression. The new soldier torsos are great and I like you've given him his bag and ggun as well. And that he has stoved in away like that. The toilet almost looks cosy with the small torch there - like a little home And the toilet is very nice too You've got a great MOC there, and since you've already have improved it there's much left. But: Possible improvements I think it would look great if you could place somekind of vegetation hanging down from floor into the sewer. That would make it even more groose to be down there. You'd get that sticky thing in your head ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Great entry with a funny twist. Good luck with the contest.

You are definitely right, but unfortunatly I haven't got any of those But it sure would look better with a scared face like that.

A very different entry than all the others in the contest. I like it. It's very creative. The "dream" is really nice. The motions and feelings is wellmade I think. You running man is great. The way you have shown the dream is very invetitative. Possible improvements Have you considered adding a even smaller "cloud"? 1x1 round brick. If you could make the smallest of your "clouds" white instead of tan I think that would be great. You blanket at the bed is good, but I think you should tile it with a 1x2 and a 1x1 instead of you 3 1x1. That would make less "cracks" and make it look smoother. The best solution would be a bed that was a bit longer, so you could tiel it with a 1x4 tile. You haven't used you picture max. I'd like to see a picture of Ned for instance. ~~~~~~~~~~ Very different entry - in the good way Good luck lad.

Nice to see the loyal, and yet cruel, side of the pirate. Nice entry. I like the cliff it looks good. The soldier in the water is great. And his expression is well chosen. The hole MOC is filled with details.. very good. Your story is good, and your comments on each photo is nice too. You've got a lot of close ups and that is great I think: It makes it easier to see the details. You aggressive attacking monkeys are funny And you've got blood.. WEEEE Too bad you couldn't fit this in the medium category, 'caus it is pretty small for the big category. Possible improvements The 3rd picture has some odd colours and is very blurry because the focus is on the men in the barrels. Maybe you could retake that one. The last picture is difficult to see the details for two reasons. First it's from above and froma long distance. And second the cellar is all black. It makes it very difficult to see details and shapes. I think you should remake the cellar in grey (if you've got enough). Otherwise you could mix black and grey. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Otherwise I think it's a nice entry. Good luck with the contest.

That looks very unpleasant! prefect the kraken is nice, and the cave is a good way to hide the body. It's a funny idea, reminds me of a story in the norse mythology. The presentation of the involved "persons" is nice. I always like when I can see all the minifigs in a good angle. Possible improvements Somekind of seaanimals would be good. even though the Kraken might be feared. A crab og a seasnake on the bottom of the ocean. Some vegetation. Somekind of seaplants. That would make it more detailed and better IMO. As legoking suggest adding a treasure, some goldcoins or even some gems would be a nice touch. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Looks nice. Keep up the good work. And a good luck with the contest.

Really nice entry! One of my personal favourites for the small contest! I love story, and the setup is great. The desk looks nice and detailed. It's tiled and everything. The gold coins is a nice touch. The minifiges are great. Custommade, and the heads a very appropriate. The governor sure looks unpleased and the pirate looks evil. Sorry.. there's nothing here that can be improved. It's an absolutely fabolous entry! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Good luck with the contest - but I'm not sure you need it

What a nice entry! The fort is really beautiful! I like it a lot The smoke from the cannons is a nice touch. Possible improvements You pirateship looks good in the shape, but I would make another colourscheme. Right now it's almost difficult to see it because it has the same colour as the sea. Give the ship another colour than blue. I'd like to see some more blood. Maybe a soldier who has his head blown off. The beach and shoreline is good.. except for one thing.. I think you should try to make some shallow water. But this off course is only possible if you've got some light blue bricks. But it sure would look good. I'd like some close ups. And you've only given us 3 pictures. Why not use the max of 6? I think you should add a story about this attack too. That would make it more interesting. You say yourself that you're gonna give it another background when you're done. And that would help the presentation too. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Looks good. I'm looking forward to the final result Good luck with the contest.

Grrr.. you've stolen my idea - even before I build it. But well.. it's great so it doesn't matter I really like the fuse. The vegetation of the MOC is good. The palm is great. The house is nice and the roof makes it look old and used. Great You've got blood It's great that one of pirates are running and looking scared. Possible Improvements I've never been a fan of the flesh-coloured minifigs. So in my opinion you should replace them with yellow heads and hands. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Well I think that's all... Good luck with the contest

Wauw! What a MOC! There's much of killing and pillaging going on here. Great! The cannonfire is really good. And the mansion itself is brilliant. Beautiful building. And teh vegetation on the wall is a good detail too. Possible improvements I think it would be great if you could make some bloodstained walls.. oh wel.. just a little blood somewhere on the white wall I'd leave pic. no. 3 out. It's not a good angle. Maybe you should leave the 5th picture as well. I'd like some more close ups instead. We've got a good overview of the scenario, but I'd like a some close ups. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Well.. that's all I think: it's a really great MOC! Good luck with the contest.

Interesting MOC. And how cruel A simple but yet effective cruelness. The water underneath the streets is a nice touch. The curtains in the window is very nice! Possible Improvements The streets looks, as both Zorro and Erdbeereis said, a bit dull. So adding some like barrels, lanterns and stuff would definitely make your MOC better. I'd make the man in the window more either pirate- or soldier-ish. His dress now is just black. Which also makes it difficult to see him. Give him another lighter torso, that would help. Maybe you could tile the roof. That would make it look better. Your terrified women have the same head. I think you should change one of the to another. The one in the blue could maybe be crying or sad in another way, if you've got a head with that expression. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Make some improvements, and I'll be back Good luck with the contest