[Comic] Hidden Pasts (A DC Comics story)

[greg3]

Hi

Here's the first part of my latest superhero story to be set in my fictional town of Ballabreek. It's set a few months after the events in my Batman v's Red Hood story and as always is a combination of the official stories and my own ideas... enjoy!!

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As always, comments are very welcome. Part 2 should be up soon!! (I'm also hoping to get a few more origin type stories done over the next few months so watch this space!!)

Thanks for looking!!

[Ninja_Bait]

Cool comic!  The set design and posing is really good and it has a classic comic story.  My one suggestion would be to move the speech bubble tails so that they don't connect to the characters' mouths.

[greg3]

Finally got around to Part 2 (unfortunately I had trouble with the Comic Life app I was using so lost a lot of the pics I'd already taken - I can't correct the various typos I've spotted in part 1 either!) Anyway, I've managed to cobble something together and here it is... hope you like it!

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Thanks for looking - comments are always welcome (hopefully the wait for part 3 shouldn't be so long!!)

[Robert8]

Cool story! Really interesting. I don't know the original story so I wonder if Ra's al Ghul will show up. Seems like the kind of story right for him to appear

As for feedback, I should say mixing yellow minifigures with fleshies look kind of odd, but other than that, everything is awesome

 

Thanks for sharing 

[greg3]

Thanks for the comment... it's not really based on an official story - those origin stories were just way too complicated!! Instead it's my own take on the origins of several heroes/villains!!

Also, the mix of yellow/flesh minifigs isn't ideal I know but the minifigs are a mixture of Licensed figs and citizens from my town layout (which provides most of the locations)

Anyway, part 3 should be along soon!! (I hope!)