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#1 WhiteFang

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Posted 01 April 2009 - 03:33 PM

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In a far distant planet of Lenore located in the outer rims which is out of the Republic boundaries, the Republic Army decided to dispatch the renowned platoon that specialise in Reece, Search and Rescue operations. It was none other than the 23rd Lenix Riders platoon, lead by Jedi Knight that live by the code name “DarkFang” .

Noone knew neither where DarkFang came from nor his origin, but was rumored to be one of the secret padawan that was trained under Master Yoda, which eventually came to adopt. Unfortunately, he was exposed to the dark side and was able to restrain himself with the help of many Jedi Masters suppressing the will of darkness by using the ancient Jedi Temple Chant.

DarkFang, along with the few Clone Troopers are selected to form the 23rd Lenix Riders, and was tasked to locate a missing Jedi Master, by the name of Jun Koon which was rumored to be captured by the infamous, ImperialShadows. No one knew what happened to him, except that the tracking beacon in his Jedi Starfighter ended in Lenore, while chasing ImperialShadows. This is the beginning of Dark Fang's new adventure, which will change his life forever....


Right now, let's take a close look, at this rider, "Lenix 1"
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Side View of "Lenix 1"
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Rear View of "Lenix 1"
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Upon arrival, DarkFang has discovered a lightsaber....

Who could it belong to?
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#2 Snake...SNAKE...SNAAAAKE?!

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Posted 01 April 2009 - 03:39 PM

I feel the speeder is a bit akward for a republic speeder (too many guns and too boxy) but you have a general concept of the engines and this is a fine start.
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#3 WhiteFang

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Posted 01 April 2009 - 03:50 PM

View PostSnake...SNAKE...SNAAAAKE?!, on Apr 1 2009, 11:39 PM, said:

I feel the speeder is a bit akward for a republic speeder (too many guns and too boxy) but you have a general concept of the engines and this is a fine start.
Thanks for your feedback. I am not very sure what is the Republic Speeder's definite standard, but I look at various designs and tried to customise and build something similar. Well, I wanted to have a much stronger weapon arsenal for its leader.  :grin:

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Lord Kenneth Valise, Level 1 Knight, 28yrs old human
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Inventory: One potion, a Greatsword (WP: 3) and a Shield (SP: 2)


#4 Snake...SNAKE...SNAAAAKE?!

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Posted 01 April 2009 - 04:52 PM

as any commander can tell you, that's always acceptable. :grin:
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Posted 01 April 2009 - 05:03 PM

Well, I don't usually comment here, but that's one great MOC here! )  :classic:  :thumbup:
A very sturdy-looking speeder with some very nice story. ) It doesn't look too big, or too small, it looks menacing enough, but at the same time, quite elegant. )
Well done, sir! )  :wink:  :thumbup:

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Posted 01 April 2009 - 05:21 PM

View PostThe Penguin, on Apr 2 2009, 01:03 AM, said:

Well, I don't usually comment here, but that's one great MOC here! )  :classic:  :thumbup:
A very sturdy-looking speeder with some very nice story. ) It doesn't look too big, or too small, it looks menacing enough, but at the same time, quite elegant. )
Well done, sir! )  :wink:  :thumbup:
It's very nice of you to take your time, to visit here, and comment on my very first SW MOC.  :tongue:

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Posted 01 April 2009 - 07:23 PM

A Jedi with a dual blade red light sabre?
Isn't the Siths normally the ones using red dual blades (and single blades for that sake) :tongue:
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Posted 02 April 2009 - 10:39 AM

Looks quite good but I think you should take out those rifles as it looks a little bit weird.
Also I think they're are too many engines. But it still looks quite good :thumbup:
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Posted 04 April 2009 - 02:10 PM

Oh my; she's got a big rear end! :tongue: I want to see this one take on ImperialShadows!





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Posted 07 April 2009 - 04:50 PM

View PostKimT, on Apr 2 2009, 03:23 AM, said:

A Jedi with a dual blade red light sabre?
Isn't the Siths normally the ones using red dual blades (and single blades for that sake) :tongue:
Great MOC Darkfang. :thumbup:
Eh, I am aware of this SW fact, but I thought it will be a little creative to manipulate a little, by changing its origin to the dark side. Well, it may look a little inapproriate though.  :tongue:

View PostSiegfried, on Apr 4 2009, 10:10 PM, said:

Oh my; she's got a big rear end! :tongue: I want to see this one take on ImperialShadows!
No problem! I will crush his speeder anytime. We can always pit ourselves in those grand prix similar to F Zero or Grand Pod Race, but in this case, it will be our speeders in actions.  :laugh:

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My name is Wilhalm Bloodaxe and I am back to be part of the Ragnarök Now Redux.

Lord Kenneth Valise, Level 1 Knight, 28yrs old human
Power: 4 Health: 10/10 Gold: 10
Inventory: One potion, a Greatsword (WP: 3) and a Shield (SP: 2)





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