Legoking

Opinion This is a confusing story plot to understand, but it is good. I like the dock and can tell you put a lot of effort into making this MOC. I like how you made the gang-plank. What is funny is that the British officer is walking off with the pirate’s treasure. I liked you added humor to your MOC in particular. Of course, you added the rainbow parrot. It is always good to have that in a MOC. Three other things I noticed that I liked. The bird you have created, I liked how you used the banana as his nose. Nice use of fruit. The torch the pirate is holding, is that custom made? If so, great job creating it. The last thing is you used a rubber band as a sword sling. You thought outside of the box that time. Possible Improvements 1) Maybe you could have had the British officer picking up the treasure that he stole. That is pretty much it. I don't have anything else to suggest about your MOC. Overall- I think this is a great MOC and a possible winning entry. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion This is a good MOC. In your description, there is dialogue between the two. Nice thinking. Also, your idea for your MOC was very good and smart thinking. This is what actually happened to pirates in those days. The affect of closing him up is nice. I like the expression on the pirates face. It says I will get you for this. I personally would have chosen the blue coats instead of the red coats because I think the blue coats are better. The barrel with the tools is also a nice addition. Possible Improvements 1) I think you could add some gold coins on the ground or add something else to it because it looks plain. 2) Why do you have a blue lamp post there? Do you have any black or gray ones because that would go better with your MOC? 3) Maybe you could add a rainbow parrot, put a snake on the roof or a rat on the roof. 4) You could have the pirate pointing a gun at the officer. Overall- This is a good MOC. After you make some improvements and add some detail to it, it will look much better. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

I like this very much. Are these for sale?

This looks great. I just downloaded it and I can't wait to read it!

I would like to join if there is space.

I can see the pictures, but there are no pirates on the island?

I like the Imperial trading post better. But I need to buy both of them.

That can't be real? That is amazing!

Thomas B. you can't have a ship in a small PTV, only in large PTV entries.

Opinion Nice MOC. I like it a lot. Your story plot is very nice and it fits the description. The head floating in the water, nice touch. I like how you made the beach a little bit higher than the water. Smart thinking Buttons. The little shack that you made for the pirate is great. I like how made the shack by adding leafs and having the pirate flag ontop of it. That shows that you don't want to mess with him because he is a pirate. On the island, I like how you have a little fire going and a treasure cheast behind him. I like how you added the rainbow parrot in your MOC. Always makes a more piraty scene. The thing I like the most is your shack because it looks so good and looks like to me you put a lot of effort into making this. Possible Improvements 1) Your first picture is a little blury. Maybe you could retake the picture. 2) Are you sure that is this 16x16? It looks like it might be more than 16x16. If it is bigger than 16x16, you could get disqualified and that would not be good. All you have to do is change your heading to PTV contest Large instead of Medium. 3) Maybe you can add a shot of the inside of the shack. Picture Related You know you could have your pictures in the topic instead of having it linked. All you have to do is go to the picture on brickshelf. Click it until you only see the picture. Than you copy the URL and click this. Once you have clicked this, you can paste the URL and click ok. Then your done. Then is should look like this: Overall- This is a great MOC. I really like the shack. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

These are really good. I could use these for my ships and forks. Thanks

I like how you did little bios on each character in your MOC. Your MOC is going along great. The pirate ship that you created is great! Are those custom sails or did you get them off the websit? You just have amazing detail. The dock leading onto land is really good. The beach, nice affect by slanting it. Your buildings are very well done. I like that you included so much minifigs. That always makes the MOC better. The fire in the middle of the street and the forest in the back left. Perfect! I like how you made the pirates on the street stealing treasure. Also, your pictures on the inside of the buildings are great! This is like a town center and I would love to own your MOC and add it to my collection. Possible Improvements Well, there is not much for me to say, but I do have one thing in my mind. 1) The only thing you could add is some blood. Other than that, it is perfect. Overall- You have done a great job on your MOC and I see you put a lot of effort and major detail into this MOC. I think you have a pretty good chance of winning. LegoKing

Your kidding me right? This is amazing. I really like how you made the tiles on the roof out of flippers. Smart thinking. Question How long did this take you to make?

It is a good entry. All I am saying is to be a bit more gory than funny. Thats all.

Opinion Very creative MOC Scop. I can't believe you fit nine pirate minifigs onto this small base plate. That is amazing. I like the whole battle scene and how the pirates are stealing from the governers house. You have the right idea for this contest Scop. I see lots of detail that I like. Chains rapped around everywhere, wine glasses, treasure cheats and dead pirates on the ground. Perfect!!!! Your story goes great with your MOC. I really like the pirate that is on the top with a minifig head on his knife. Possible Improvements 1) You can take a couple more pictures of your MOC and take close-up shots. 2) You could also add some more blood to your MOC. On places like the ground or ontop of your MOC where the parrot is. 3) You could add some more bricks and make the door entry bigger so you could have some more room to add more detail or minifigs. 4) Also, on the ground, you could add some smooth tiles to make your MOC look better. Overall- This is a great MOC and some minor improvements would make this an even better MOC. I think you have the right idea for this contest and you will do fine. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Opinion Wow, I am impressed on how you fit this entire building into such a small entry. I like how you made two stories and a roof with a skeleton hanging by a chain ontop of it. I like the beard on the pirate. It practically covers his whole torso. The skeleton on the bottom floor with the sword stuck through him, sweet. I also like the tile placement and how you arranged them. On the second level, I like the spilled gold effect. Up to the roof. I see you made you roof slanting upwards. Nice touch. Also, nice chimney with the skeleton pirate hanging off of it by a chain. Nice effect. Possible Improvements 1) You can take more pictures of your MOC and also include some close-up shots on the treasure cheast. 2) You could add a pirate or two and have a battle because I can't really tell what is going on. 3) Another thing is that I don't see any blood at all in your MOC. 4) In your story, you say the pirate came into a house and everyone was killed. I would try not to have humor in this contest. Overall- This is a great Moc. Great use of space and creativity. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

I like your MOC. It has a halloween effect.

I like your review on this battle pack. But I think that this battle pack was over priced. $12 for this? I am not paying that much for 5 knights.

Nice. I like your MOC. How long did this take for you to draw?

I like your review on Brutaka. Was this reveiw in the Reviewers Academy?

Nice pirate contest entry lego12. Lots of things to talk about. I see you used detail to the extreme and also looks like you spent lots of time creating your MOC. The story that you wrote goes great with the pictures. I like the tower you made. It is mostly black. The cage at the bottom of the tower is great. The spear that is stuck through the cage door is perfect. Also, you chained the cage door shut so the islander can't get out. Nice touch! The expression on the islanders face that is in the cage fits his part in the scene. The battle on the ground is very bloody with lots of dead islanders, skeletons and pirates. I like the parrot on the ground. Nice addition! There is quite a fire on the ground too. Towards the top of the tower, dead skeletons are poping out and I like the that the tower has lots of fire on it. On the top, the king islander is stabbing a pirate, nice. I also like the monkey that is carrying the pirates head. I like it very much. Possible Improvements 1) Since this is a Large-Contest entry, you should probably make your MOC a little bit bigger. 2) You could make the base plate a litte bit bigger, so your battle on the ground would not be so crowded. 3) You could also make your tower a little bit higher and wider. 4) Maybe you could add some water or a beach to your MOC, just to have it. Overall- This is a great entry. Your entry is very gory and bloody. I like that. You have followed the rules for the contest and I congratulate you for that. I wish you the best of luck! LegoKing

Nice. I like the sniper rifle the best!

These are all amazing. My favorites are the painball gun, bazooka and MGL. When can I buy them?

This looks like a great set to add to my collection.

I like what I see. You made this with great detail. It looks very good. I can't wait to see the finished product!