Commander Beltar

I have a request for a MOC I am working on, can someone please make this figs head to like the other Grey Squadron Members? To be specific: Lt. Telsij or Ekelarc Yong. Bonus if you could (stretching it) figure out how to design Telsij's or Yong's helmet...Please do so. Telsij and Yong are the most important for me at the moment. I think a good skin tone would be standard flesh according to bricklink. Thanks, even if you just do one of these few, I'd be very grateful! ~Beltar Edit: Removed two requests as they weren't important actually.

Hmm...Forgot to comment here..But yay! We won! Thanks for hosting this wonderful episode! There where some great builds on both sides, but congratz to all the top players too! Also, I'd like that tag please ~Beltar

Wonderful freebuild. Your greebles on the walls and the story is excellent! Basically, the overall build is awesome.

Welcome to the Imperials! Annddd: I forgot to post my freebuild here. Again. Freebuild 10.1: Flatline Reflection

The story so far: First Day Aboard the Avenger At The Table-Before The Storm Rescue Mission Reassigned Eliminating The Competition Target Practice “Here we go again…” Evac Escape A Quick Transaction "Black Sunshine" Repel and Retreat Flatline Reflection Beltar had just returned from the Suprosa, when he tried to help Sarge escort Borris to the med bay, but was cut short by a few med officers, and a soldier informing him he had to go to the debriefing. The debriefing was boring, but detailed the extent of each persons’ mission, and how well they fulfilled it, then they asked for any pieces of equipment recovered from the Suprosa, but Beltar did not turn the disk in, and perhaps the Commander noticed as Beltar walked out, fiddling with the disk in his hand as he went towards the med bay. Yet no one stopped him. Beltar was staring blankly into the nurse’s face. He had been sitting in this chair for at least 30 minutes. He lost count. Beltar got here late, while the Sarge got to cut a corner and go directly here to help Borris. But now he’s at his debriefing. Who knows what’s going on there. Beltar was remembering how in such a short time, Borris became one of Beltar’s best friends in the Empire. The nurse’s comlink rang. She listened through her earpiece, she gave a sigh and responded: “Yes sir. And the patient is…Well. You know. Almost…there.” The nurse then began to walk towards Beltar and said, “Well. The Sarge and one of the Generals has called you in. I don’t know why. Might have to do with you not turning that…disk in, or with TK-821’s Condition.” Beltar gave a nod. But he didn’t want to move. The nurse asked him to get up again. Beltar didn’t. He was replaying the moment when Borris was shot. And how did they not see the rebels a few meters ahead…And just other outcomes of the event if they had just paid more attention. The nurse then gave him a nudge, and he sprang to his feet, now fully awake, and he just started to walk off. Beltar turned his head and thanked the nurse for what she was doing, with the most mundane voice he had. The nurse seemed to be annoyed with this, but Beltar just kept walking without a care in the world... The nurse turned to the doctor and said, “Alright let’s see what we can do. It’s looking bad.” The doctor agreed. They began treating Borris again, when a piece of equipment malfunctioned, but they proceeded to try, after a couple minutes, they stopped to get something else to attempt to help Borris. Perhaps they didn’t try everything though, because as Beltar closed the door while exiting the hallway next to the room, he heard the flat ring of a malfunctioning piece of equipment. Or what he hoped was a piece of malfunctioning equipment. . . -End- Thank you for reading/looking at this freebuild. Pics are a little blurry/grainy because a storm just rolled in today. (At least it’s raining…) Also I tried to make this build/story in a more serious tone, also, I really liked WickNole’s color choice for his build, so I decided to use it here, as it reminded me of some of the medical places in TCW. As always, C and C welcome! ~Beltar Edit: Forgot to say again: Please Judge this Freebuild!

Thanks! Thank you! Some of the mini details like the droids where some of the really fun parts to build! Thank you Nom Carver! Originally the layout would have been very different, but some guys gave me suggestions in the Comm Channel. It was a lot of fun to add in references to everyones build, as it meant I'd have to make it fit with what everyone was doing while not looking to forced! The funny thing is, that's actually the opposite side of Borris's head from a previous build! Thank you Sgt. Kirana. I shall report to the debriefing immediately. ================================== Thanks for the kind words, yes, I see what you mean by it looking a little too much like a mountain, perhaps one day I'll revisit it and make a better one, but this one was good enough for me... Thank you! Thanks Josh! Yes...so close, it is... I see all your points of what could have been better, I actually am really terrible at greebles, so I should practice those, I'll try to remember that for future builds. Thanks! ~Beltar

That ship is simply awesome. I don't know how you build ships like that, especially sturdy ones, I'm terrible at those kinds of things! I laughed with all of ZW's problems! The hangar and ship has some great details and patterns!

Your lighting adds a fantastic touch, I really like the different wall patterns you used throughout the build! Oh, and the orders/story are really great, especially ZW's

This build is superb! Great take on a non-gray looking imperial area, all the details you put in are fantastic!

Nice entry! perhaps if you just capped it off with some greebles or tiles, that could've helped because parts of it look a little unfinished, but still nice build!

Huh, I never really thought about using the existing stickers.... Great use of those, also, you might want to make your photos a tad bit smaller, I don't know if those fit in the restrictions..

Nice looking build, I like all the antennas sticking out of the hull, and your posing of your fig is good too.

I love the atmosphere you created with this build, and the build and story themselves are wonderful!

Some Rebel entries... This is a great looking entry, the room looks awesome! Your story is nice, and that computer room, really reminds me of the Jedi Temple surveillance room from Episode 3.

Awesome build! Nice blast door as Tyrus said, and I am really fond of the wall patterns!

Great little freebuild, even though there isn't I do like the story, and the hyperdrive looks great!

If I didn't say it before, that ship is awesome! Looks like its based of the Coruscant gunship if I'm not mistaken? Also, great job with the floor pattern and greebles along the sides.

The story so far: First Day Aboard the Avenger At The Table-Before The Storm Rescue Mission Reassigned Eliminating The Competition Target Practice “Here we go again…” Evac Escape A Quick Transaction "Black Sunshine" Repel and Retreat With Beltar’s recent involvement with break-away organizations of the Black Sun, Beltar decided to cut his vacation short. Now we find Beltar with his team boarding the Suprosa after being briefed by none other than Commander Lucas Kirana, and being deployed one of the Empire’s top pilots, Artizan. But Beltar and his medical team may have gotten here a little too late to repel the enemy forces…As they head towards their objectives, it seems the Rebels may have gotten to the computers first. --Around 15 Minutes Ago-- Rebel Transmission: “We are boarding the Suprosa, we should be landing on what appeared to be a major computer station that should have direct access to the main databanks" Imagine this picture has space and more Suprosa hull. The Imperial Officer below heard the hissing of something strange above him…when suddenly he saw the spikes of the rebels modified Dorch-Class boarding ship run through the ceiling of the computer station! He thought he may have been safe, but then he saw the rebels cut an opening right above him… Rebel Commander: Alright boys! Get ready to move! Duros Rebel: We are ready to move in commander. Weequay Rebel: I’m all set. Human Rebel: Sir we are all ready. Remember that you two need to secure the hallway to stop any Imperial advancement. The rebel commander acknowledged this with an nod, and had his team drop below to suprosa surprise the officer beneath them. Hahaha! Terrible joke! Rebel Commander: You! Download the information onto this drive! Imperial Technician: I…I have no idea what you mean! The Rebel officer pointed the gun closer... And held out the disk in one hand. Imperial Technician: On-On second thought…I think I may have something for you. --Presently--Imperials--Location: 2 Corridors from Boarding and Escape Hangars-- Now we join our heroes who have just reached their first checkpoint, before the teams split up, but here they find an injured Storm Trooper, TK-941, and Beltar rushed to his service, instantly administering pain reliever to the soldier. As he treated this soldier, he noticed Lord Tyrus, one of the Shadow Troopers that was following them vanished. Hopefully he was following his objective. TK-941: Thank…you…They-They surprised my unit…My unit is a group of cowards! They all ran but me… Beltar: Save your strength soldier, the ship at the hanger should have more medical equipment that could help you. Sarge signaled the rather out of place Storm Trooper, ZW-461, to get TK-941 to the back-up ship awaiting at the hangar. TK-941: You’ve got to be kidding me lad! An Alien in storm trooper armor? Your unit has set the bar real low for the Empire! Sarge: We all can’t have the best units you know…Those aliens really don’t make us look uniform… Sarge’s eyes followed the nervous Zabrack as he got closer and started helping the wounded soldier get on his feet. Beltar himself never really understood why the Imperials hated having Aliens in their ranks, and Life Day has recently passed, a very alien centered holiday, it seems to annoy many Imperials...Sarge then turned around to speak to Kodan’s Team of pilots who were fixing a leaking power converter before heading off to the bridge, in an attempt to regain complete control of the ships movements. Sarge: Alright, I assume this is where we split up, you take Corridor AA1134 Left, we will head Right, and hopefully we can finish our jobs and get off this lost ship and hopefully we will be able to repel these rebels without any setbacks. Kodan nodded, and signaled us to follow. We eventually broke loose at the Corridor, and embarked on our path through these almost maze-like halls on the Suprosa. Beltar: Those stories about this ship being huge...It’s true. All of it. You know I just had to make another joke with FA. Sarge: Yeah, I was actually stationed here for a day because I transferred right out after seeing these hallways…Worst day on the job. Ever. As they continued down the winding corridors, they had almost arrived at their objective, when they came across a Gonk and Mouse droid: Beltar: What are these guys doing here? Sarge: I…I don’t know, Borris, this is on you, you’re the only one here who can understand these guys. They shouldn't be here. Unless they got lost. Borris gave a short laugh, then he began listening to these droids tales. Borris: Well, EG-89 tells me we got some rebels up ahead. And the mouse droid says. Wait. Their preparing to fire? How do you k-- Without warning, a shot hit Borris on the back of his helmet, Sarge and Beltar instantly rushed to the sides of the hallway. Beltar could eye 2 of them, one was about to come out of the door, but turned back instead. As this happened, the GNK droid waddled away while the mouse droid stayed to watch the show. Beltar: We have no cover out here! Sarge: Rush them, I’ll cover and then I’ll deal with Borris. Got it? Beltar nodded, and Sarge yelled: "Now!" Beltar instantly sprang forward, getting the upperhand on the sitting rebels. After some quick shots, Beltar realized and said to himself: “How did we not see these guys moving down this hallway?” Then he looked out of the corner of his eye and saw Sarge was already treating Borris. It seems Sarge really took this job and his unit very seriously. As long as they weren’t aliens it appears…And it looked like Beltar had to do a hopefully easy job, by himself…Beltar rushed into through the door, gun raised. Rebel Commander: Ha! We have the upperhand! The download just finished, move and I’ll shoot. Beltar gave a slight movement on the barrel of his blaster to signal the officer to get down. And as fast as a the Rebel Alliance falling into a trap, Beltar shot both of the two rebels, they lay on the ground dead. Beltar then realized, “these may be the first Rebels I’ve actually killed….Strange…It’s an odd feeling…” He then walked over to the officer and helped him up. Beltar: Is there any way to wipe this computer? And possibly the other databanks? Imperial Technician: Yes and no. We cannot wipe other databanks on this ship, but we can set up the manual override, just pull down that handle on the wall…And thank you. Beltar handed the Officer his gun while he pulled down the lever. The light on the computer went from green to red. It worked! But then Beltar saw that the Rebels did download something important onto the disk, as its display screen showed it was full, and it was attempting to decrypt the files. Beltar picked it up and just wondered, what was so important that we had to keep these Rebel’s from getting? Instead of breaking it apart…he just held it...He didn’t know why, but he just did. Beltar: Alright, we should get moving back to the escape ship. Hopefully it hasn’t left yet. Imperial Technician: Understood. Hope you took care of that disk. Too much valuable information to be fall into the Rebel’s hands. Beltar showed it to the officer in his hand, and the officer just smiled. To Beltar, this seemed rather odd. As they walked out, Beltar realized that Borris’s condition was serious. Beltar took off his med pack, unfolded it, and attacked it to the other pack. Sarge and Beltar then moved Borris’s body onto it and picked it up without saying a word. Sarge: Well. His condition is very serious, I’ll need better equipment. You, tech-officer. Imperial Technician: Yes? Sarge: Watch our backs, will you? And mouse droid…Hit me if rebels are coming in that way.Huh? Why I trust you? I don’t know…Well this is one fine setback, but at least we accomplished our goal. Repelling these guys. Beltar: Yeah, but this is also a retreat at the same time. They back-tracked their way to through the long and winding hallways to the back-up transport’s hangar, only to find it missing with a soldier laying against the wall unconscious and ZW no where to be seen. Beltar: Wonderful. Maybe we can hitch a ride home with Artizan when all troops are recalled. Unless Kodan and his team succeeds. -End- More Pictures in the spoiler: There are some more closeups of certain shots on my flickr, thanks for reading/looking at these lots of pictures! This build underwent many changes…I was going to greeble the walls behind all of the build to make it more presentable as a whole, but I ran out of parts… Of course. The Rebel ship is based on the droid boarding ship from TCW, if anyone wants some detail pics, just ask. .I also couldn’t resist sneaking in a Force Awakens line in….hehehe…Only 3 weeks away, wow! Note: Any builders mentioned should be a way to tie them in, if it changed when they post their build, I'll edit this post. As always, C and C Welcome! ~Beltar Edit 1: Fixed Story Link after Builder Posted

Soo to add to the whole NPC discussion...would I be allowed to bring Sarge and Borris along on this mission? With what I have planned, it doesn't really make sense to have just one medical personal come aboard with the team. ~Beltar

Just noticed I've been eligible for awhile now...I think. May I please get one of these lovely tags? ~Beltar

Thanks for doing this again! Here's my entry: A tree! In space? In space, many astronauts like to trim their Christmas Tree to look like a cartoon-ey rocket ship. And during Christmas, Santa comes around and leaves presents wrapped in wonderful old gray under the tree! You ask where does he store all of the presents? In his big air tank of course! ~Beltar

Thanks! Thanks Lucas! Posing minifigs is a fun thing for me to do for some reason.. Thanks Tryus! I really focused on those for weird angles and sizes based off of vintage cars. Thanks too, Josh! Yeah, I thought that too, but I couldn't find some good greebly (or other) parts to fit in those spots that look odd... But I think it was good enough for me to complement those speeders. (It actually is unfinished as there is that one missing Tile that fell off! ) ~Beltar

Agent 46 is now Deathly afraid of Banjos. Agent 46 has been fired. ~Beltar

Come one, come all! To the Islander Feast Preparation Day! But beware! If you are not one of us, or a lonely castaway, run, run, swim, and swim as fast as you can! Or else, you’ll find yourself on our Chopping Board! ======================================================== These Unlucky Souls got lost after some soldiers had sunk their ship. Although they’ve been at sea for a couple days. They still have enough meat for us! They’ll be tasty! “BACK I SAY, BACK! You will taste just fine. Now wait your turn!”-Translated From Islander to English. Look at their faces! Lovely! They taste the best when they die scared! Ooo! Lovely! That’ll be a good portion of our meal tomorrow! “Hear the cries of that poor soul! HEAR THEM!” Our great leader watches the coast scanning for more meat while his bride dries off a Leaf Skirt Look at the fear! Look at the blood! Welcome to your fate, the Chopping Board! =============================================================================== Yes, I did try to make this sound like an insane person…I have lots of experience with that back at AG… Text in the post isn't all that good...I almost completely forgot the deadline was tomorrow! Always, hope you liked this build for PTV! C and C welcome! ~Beltar

Just realized, I forgot to post freebuilds here! Both pics are links to the builds. Please judge both of them! (Even if the first isn't the best, I might not have time to do 3 more, so might as well get it in...) ~Beltar