[SR-MRCA] Long John Bronze (4A) Capture

[dr_spock]

A successful MRCA run. Long John Bronze (4A) was captured by the Sea Rats.

"We surrender.  Your ship looks like a tasty chocolate cake with strawberry frosting. We can not resist."

Long John Bronze Ship by dr_spock_888, on Flickr

She appears to be crewed by tall Amazons with sharp bronzed blades? Maybe they are related to Amara.

Captured license has been MOC'ed.

 

 

[Kwatchi]

I am at a loss for words.

 

 

[Legostone]

Cool colourscheme, and seeing that head at the bow sure makes it intimidating (I think the mouth opening and revealing a gun would be really cool though:P). Now, while I like how low it is in the hull, I'm not the biggest fan of your stern, I'm sure you can add a couple more details to it. I also think it could use a bit more of an overall curve, right now it is a pretty square ship(I think even just hinging everything above the prefab lower stern inwards going only a single stud inwards would help tremendously). I also think your lanteen yard is facing the wrong way - shouldn't the higher end be in the back? ;)

[Kolonialbeamter]

I just love your way of story telling - minimalistic, but super effective - and fun! Oh, and the ship is nice, too. If you want to improve some things, stick to what LS said