Hi InsaneJames, it has been brought to our attention that the backstory of your entry is substantially a copy of that of the protagonist in the Kick-Ass film and comic.
As you should have noticed when reading the rules:
Category B - Build-a-Hero
Create a custom figure of a new hero character that will fit into Batman Universe, create a vignette for it and write a backstory for him. The custom character must be out of your own imagination. Characters already portrayed on any media will not be accepted.
Maybe this was not totally clear to you (in which case you could have asked for clarifications), but it includes character backstory.
Please re-write the story, and re-take better pics while you are at it. As the current entry is to be considered a WIP, you have the chance to do it. If you do not make the changes in the backstory, your submission will be disqualified from the voting, according to the rules.