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[MOC] Mini Venator


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#1 Eskallon

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Posted 16 August 2009 - 07:24 AM

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#2 Rocky

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Posted 16 August 2009 - 07:31 AM

The overall design looks good and well represents a Venator. The ship looks rather plain though. You might want to add blaster turrents (guns) to its sides as the real Venator had and some other details. I love the background you put in the picture! Good job  :classic:

#3 Commander Flash

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Posted 16 August 2009 - 02:22 PM

Seems like you missed some major aspects:
Shape: Needs to have the iconic Venator shape, and remove the things on the side
Tower: Needs another one, and both should not be so steep
Blandness: Could use some detail, like something for the open circle fleet symbol, and the cannons on it.

Once those aspects are fixed, it will be a bit closer to the actual.
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#4 Eskallon

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Posted 16 August 2009 - 05:05 PM

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