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Poll: Favorite Page (9 member(s) have cast votes)

What's your Favorite Page(s)

  1. Page 1 (2 votes [18.18%])

    Percentage of vote: 18.18%

  2. Page 2 (3 votes [27.27%])

    Percentage of vote: 27.27%

  3. Page 3 (2 votes [18.18%])

    Percentage of vote: 18.18%

  4. Page 4 (1 votes [9.09%])

    Percentage of vote: 9.09%

  5. Page 5 (0 votes [0.00%])

    Percentage of vote: 0.00%

  6. Page 6 (1 votes [9.09%])

    Percentage of vote: 9.09%

  7. Page 7 (2 votes [18.18%])

    Percentage of vote: 18.18%

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#1 Zepher

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Posted 07 October 2008 - 09:29 PM

Well, here it is in it's fullness!  Issue One!  Issue two's first installment hits the stands tomorrow!

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Also, vote on your favorite page(s)!   :thumbup:
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#2 Lego12

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Posted 07 October 2008 - 09:38 PM

I thought that the last one was the best. It had the most action in it. BTW, the comic needs to move a little faster....or people won't read it. :classic:
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#3 Zepher

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Posted 07 October 2008 - 09:41 PM

I have to disagree with you.  A comic has to be a paced.  I have about 4 pics to both further the storyline AND to come up with a pun.  I've got to hit both.  The begging of comic's are also very slow compared to the rest.  Don't believe me?  Check out Reasonably Clever!  Or Grunts (though that doesn't have a story to build, it's just funny...)

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#4 Zorro

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Posted 07 October 2008 - 09:56 PM

You are right Zepher. You need to keep "tension" in your storyline or you will loose your readers, and you can't let the story go too fast because then it is finished in a few days and that's no good for us either... :look:  So I think you are doing very well as it currently is.

BTW: page 2 all the way ! That is IMHO, one of the funniest pages I've read on this forum, from the same comical level as 'The Walrus and the Whacker" Those are sooo funny as well.
I like that...duckchickenbird of you. Mind if I build one myself?

I am looking forward to the next episode, Zepher.

#5 kill will

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Posted 08 October 2008 - 03:13 AM

No. 1 all the way! "This isn't promising." LOL. Nice job Zepher, can't wait for issue 2!  :thumbup:
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#6 Zepher

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Posted 08 October 2008 - 11:03 PM

Thanks all for your support.  First part of issue to will soon be up!

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