Eskallon Posted August 19, 2009 Hi all I guess I shold get straight too the comic but if you have any thoughts about this please comment. If anyone has read up too the end, thanks for reading. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Luke McAwesome Posted August 19, 2009 The comic is good, but there are a couple of things you should try to work on: 1) Maybe give the guy with the visor some hair to cover his "other" face? 2) Try to work on the punctuation, it got really confusing because I couldn't really understand what they meant. 3) Try to prefocus the pictures. This is kind of hard at some times, and I have trouble with it too if it's a cramped space. For example, in my series, TTOTLM, I have a boat-load of pics that turned out terrible because where I was taking pics was too cramped. Take this in consideration, it might help a lot. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Eskallon Posted August 19, 2009 Thanks for commenting Striker, I will be following all your suggestions and improve the comics to come in the future. Oh and for anyone else interested the next comic will be up in a week and a bit as I am going on vacation tomorow. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
