Commander Laquiet

Very nice! I like every detail. Good work.

Very, very neat creation. Castle is full of detail, and trees are always nice. Great work!

Incredible. This is most certainly one of the best MOCs I have ever seen, if not the best. This creation is a step up from your others, which are also fantastic, and the church masonry work is one of the best techniques around, but I am more impressed by your landscaping - the amount of greenery you fit into this MOC is wonderful. Brilliant.

Very good work! I really like the design of your buildings, and it's always nice to see good colour incorporated, which you have done really well. Good job!

Very good so far! I like the whole entry, from the office itself to the nice use of the plant leaves as some sort of ivy. Great work.

Outstanding! This is truly a magnificent entry! The rocky face is beautifully built, and the ladder is a nice touch. The ship itself is something else - not having 'correct' hull pieces doesn't detract from the quality of this ship at all. Very, very nicely done. Once again, fantastic entry! Good luck!

Great ship so far! Really like the headrails, very nice technique. Colour scheme looks very good, too. Can't wait for updates.

Very nice! I like the concept of the entry and the story, and the landscape is very well done. The only thought of improvement I have is to perhaps move the parrot in the palm tree somewhere else - maybe onto the rock formation with the other parrot, or even just a bit lower into the foliage of the tree. It just looks out of place to me, sitting right at the top. Other than that, a very good entry! Good luck!

Fantastic, brilliant design! The 1x1 studs look great, and the stained glass is wonderful. Very, very good work!

Very nice work here! The stern and bow look great, the yellow piping looks really good. Can't wait to see the finished product!

Fantastic MOC, everything is laid out perfectly. It is not crowded, but not empty either. Plants really add something. Can't wait to see the diorama you mention! Great work.

Very nice work! I like the castle-ish feel to it, and the colour scheme works very well. Good work!

Thank you very much!

Thanks for all the input - I have now edited the post to show the 'new' version. I have basically rebuilt the scene, with larger rock formations on both sides, more foliage and branches on the tree, and a small stream running through. I have changed the story of the scene too - they have stopped for lunch! Many new details have been added. Enjoy!

Thanks for all the positive and constructive comments! By 'the thing' I think you mean the dead tree stump. The tan bricks with studs on top are to represent fungi - but I'm still not sure whether this works or not. Thanks. These are all very good ideas! I understand what you mean about height difference - it could look really good. The rock would look better bigger, but I also have to juggle it with space as the size is only 16x16. Thanks again! I think, as it has been mentioned before, that I will add some variety into the sizes and shapes of the petals and fungi. More foliage on the tree would be good as well. I especially like your suggestion of workers hats as mushrooms, I could create a mushroom patch! About the faces - you are right, it is weird them all having the same face, hadn't really thought about that. Will work on this. Thanks for all the great comments!

Brickshelf Thanks for viewing!

Fantastic entry, the landscape work is incredible. Great work! 'Thrown together' ?! This is masterly! The only thing I can see that you could possibly have worked on was adding a bit more variety of color in the rock face - some lighter grey would be good. But that doesn't detract at all from the creation itself - very good work.

I voted for blue and white. It has one great thing that only a few other ship's sails have - no large central emblem! Is it possible for someone to add the sails of the new Imperial Flagship? I would have voted for them.

Thanks. It looks like a good map.

Great new pictures! Thanks! Is it a new map?

Absolutely fantastic! The sails look great - no large emblem printed in the centre!

Wonderful MOC! I especially like all the minifigures added to it - a MOC looks much better once minifigs are incorporated. Once again, great MOC!

Thanks for all the comments. I saw the epaulettes wing design in a creation by SlyOwl.

73b I have made a small vignette - Onward, to Glory. It depicts several redcoat soldiers forging onwards through desert terrain, while their officer urges them on. Thanks for viewing!

Very well done ship - stern looks wonderful. Tumblehome looks great, as does the colour scheme. Good work!