A rotten carrot ruins a young lady's day.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/sirdano/sets/72157621671279049/
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=4006463
http://mocpages.com/moc.php/138492
Not a bad MOC, but the boards should be brown, not bley.
Some more debris on the floor would be good, too.
Now, as for the story, it's highly inaccurate.
Dano would never lock someone up in an abandoned building, nor would he leave his prized axe leaning against a wall so far out of reach.