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Here's a LOTR moc I made of the forges in Belegost, which was a huge Dwarve kingdom in Beleriand before it sank (long story). First and foremost this is the Moc I am most proud of so some feedback on how it looks would be awesome.

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Here's an overall view.

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A closeup of the front.

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Closeup of the arch, and weapons rack.

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One side.

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The other side.

The arch is loosely based on the one from the lonely mountain (although its certainly not the same).

C&C would be absolutely awesome, thanks for viewing.

Posted

Well done. Reasons to be proud!

I only think you used to much different Colors for your floor, but I really like the rest!

Posted

Great job on the arch and the forge :thumbup:

I agree that the floor has a little to much colours, but it's hard to say which are to blame for that. Maybe it's because there seems to be no pattern other than diagonal line symmetry. I like the hexagonal fire places, but the studded bottom shouldn't be visible, you could add more flames for instance. It's walls would probably look better if they were a little more SNOTted.

I hope you this constructive criticisme is useful to you :classic:

Posted

Overall this is a good design. The floor colors may be a bit much but the angular layout is nice. A little more fire would fit the size of the pits better but that's not a big deal. It certainly looks like they're getting things done. Good work.

Posted

Thanks for the feedback, yeah I got a little desperate with the tiles as I started running out of colors I was originally using, and I probably should have filled in the furnaces completely with fir.

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