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Great job! There are somethings you can improve to make it look more realistic! I think you can add smoke coming out of the chimney! On to the next one, I agree with the strawberry teacher that you should add black tiles to the roof. The black studs sticking out is very distracting.By the way, an you show us more pictures like the rear view, top view and others. After all, to see the full detail and potenetial we need to see more pictures.Speaking of pictures, can you resize the pictures please? The black line at the top is very distracting and draws attention away from your Moc.A great Moc with a nicely organused chaos! Great job :pir-skull:

Great entry there! This is very creative and different from other MOCs. There are somethings I think you can improve on though,would you mind retaking the pictures as the crumpled cloth at the background is very distracting. I suggest you put normal paper as the backdrop. Speaking of pictures,add a bit more lighting too as your picture is quite dark.By the way,your girl's faces are magnificent but you said that the guy was in horror! That does not seem like horor to me, if you can can you change it to the scary face expression. If you dont have the face you can also get decals from the minifig custmisation forum or kamonians decals. One last thing, can the roof be tiled? The studs sticking out is very distracting.Since you added a frog and a lily pad which I personaly think is a nice touch. Can you add more lily pads to make it look more realistic? That would be great!That is all and may lady luck be with you :pir-skull:

This a complicated Moc, however it has a lot of horor in it! But there are somethings I think you should improve on. There is another room from your moc of which you have not taken a photo of yet. This is of vital importance as we are not able to see the full potential of your Moc if we dont get to see the details. It is like painting a picture, the overall picture looke good but it is the details that make it look its best.Speaking of pictures, can you resize your pictures please? The black line above it is very distracting. After all, your Moc is creative but your presentation must be good. Even if other people's Moc is better, if your presentaion than it will bring you quite far! About presentation,yourpirate minifig looks a bit weird. I feel that the red legs and the red pad does not match his torso.Of course this is in my opinion.That is all and may lady luck be with you. :pir-skull:

Can I still join beacause if I can than I would like to join too!

Great Entry oDDerFisken! I love the way you drowned your pirate in the thing they love most! Money! There are some things I feel that need to be corrected though! The first oone is that there are some cracks between the walls of your little studio. Although they are small cracks. Cracks like these can very easily distract people. The next one is thatYour minifigs faces are too standard which makes your moc look a bit dull. I think you can add a horrified face to the poor minifig drowning in this riches. You can also make your pirates faces look as if they laughing at the teeror of the poor guy. I understand that you dont have enough lego faces to change the expression. You can always go to the minifig custmisation forum or kaminian decals and ask for a decal of those faces for your lego.By the way,Would you mind resizing your pics to a 480x640. Not because I want to make trouble for you but the black line above the picture when the picture is oversize is quite distracting. Although your MOC is good, you need a good presentation to show your effort. You could have an excellent MOC but if your presentation is bad. It will not do as well.Well that is all, may lady luck be with you :pir-skull:

pr0,Will,JD and Bpac walked through the empty hallway... Will:"It seems to be so quiet now. I wonder where all the droids went." JD:"Bpac, can you go to the small droid opening there and scan the database for an attack?" Bpac:"Right!" Bpac ran there and scanned the base." Bpac:"Well, the rest seem to be undetectable. As in, playback videos show them entering but than they dissapeared. I cant find them through here. However, this sector is for information storage. All the CIS data is here. Including their highest security details, ship scamatics and even more!" pr0 pondered for a moment and realise this will be of advantage! Later though... pr0:"Bpac! Lead us the way to the Databanks and upload yourself to get all the information we need. " Bpac:"Everything?" JD:" Yup, everything!" Will:"What about the rest?" JD:"Even though we destroid the communication jammer, it seems they are in a very hidden and covered spot so much that I cant recieve reception." pr0:"Right than, looks like we will have to wait than. Anyway, the information Bpac uploads might just give us an advantage on the CIS." Bpac:"Ok than! Lets go!" They walked along more corridors towards a big door... JD:"This is big!" Will:"We could start throwing bombs at it!" Suddenly the dorr opened! Bpac:"Or I could just slice into the network and open it!" Than Bpac uploaded himself to the big computer and filled himself with knowledge! It took a few minutes before he finished uploadng and than he disconected from the computer. Bpac:"Guys! I can see everything! As in this computer by itself is a programming pdate so big I will know everyhting that is going on!" pr0:"As in you can monito their channels?" Bpac:"Yes! This is totally....wait! we need to get out of here now! There are a few magna guards on the way!" JD:"Ok! Lets go!" However, as they ran towards the door! The magna guards were just outside goingto open it. pr0:"Guys in here!" Will:"In an air vent?" JD jumped and so did Bpac... JD:"Do you have a better idea?" Will:"No!" With that Willl jumped and pr0 shot the air vent tight and crawled away into the darkness...

Hi! sorry for asking but why isn't the warlus for sale? Because I would get if it is

You are right about that Darkbrckz but they only need to make new molds! Not machines and each mold only cost $2000 dollars to make. With the amount of lego they sell around the world the price shouldn't increase that much! Even during bad times, they should make it cheaper! Anyway, thanks for the updates! Wow! 11..99 for a battle pack!

Sorry for double posting but the pics are done By the way, these Mocs are not mine but I have photoedited them. Sorry for not mentioning earlier. The dmaged venator fell out of the sky, and our heroes braced themselves for impact... Will:"Ok! I think thats done! We should be crashing soon! I think this is a good time to go!" Bpac:"We just lost the engines! Our front shield is burning up and wont last! Our power is running out!" pr0:"Bpac! Convert all power to our bottom shield! Once that is done lets go!" JD:"pr0! Bad news! Our jetpacks have been taken away! How are we going to get out of here?!?" pr0:"Damn! The admiral must have took them by mistake! I am so going to kill him once I get off this!" JD:"Sure! But lets get off this first!" Will:"No time to think of a plan! Just brace for impact!" pr0:"Strap yourself to your seats! Get ready!" The ship pierced through the shield and started to burn... pr0 reached out to the force and tried to stop it! But he couldn't... than a mysterious person appeared! Stranger:"OOF! Get off this hip now!" Will:"Skipper? Is that you?" Skipper24:"Yes! I wont live for long, just get off this thing!" pr0:"How?" Skipper24 passed pr0 a small ball... Skipper24:"This ball will create a small delfector shield around you! You wont get hurt for about 30 seconds than it will go off!" pr0:"What about you?" Skipper24:"I am very badly hurt and half dead! Dont jeprdise the mission because of me!" pr0:"I cant leave you here!" Will:"Hurry up! Lets go!" Skipper24:"No, the ball can only carry a certain amount of people! Leave now!" pr0:"I won't take this!" Skipper24:"I am already dead, no use talking to me..." Skipper24 than layed there and died... JD:"Time to go! Let's go now!" They got together, pr0 looked at Skipper24 and braed himself for impact... The venator hit the tower and everything exploded! JD activated the small ball and they were protected! Will:"Guys! We better move before this this goes boom!" Bpac:"According to my scans, we can bounce there!" They bounced to one of the small doors before the shield deactivated. Once it did they ran inside and shut the door! pr0:"Right, that was unexpected! But we lived! So, lets get going!" JD:"Ok! Bpac get a lock on Oky's location and lets go!" Bpac:"Got it! Lets go!" Will stayed there and looked at the door. Will:"Skipper always hated those clankers!" pr0:"He was a worthy warrior. Dont worry, he is in a better place now!" Will:"Heaven?" pr0:"I have no clue, anyway lets go!" Alright guys, your skipper24 has been killed in the venator! So, where are you guys? Really! :pir-skull:

This is a great idea! Good for you and congrats on your success on the organising of your event Wish my country had the same thing :pir-skull:

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Same here! Phase 1 clones rule

Great review Love the pictures

Wait, I still making pic for this part! pr0:"What do you meam how? Didnt I just explain to you!" Will:"Was too busy!" JD:"You are wearing your jetpack now right? Once we are near the base we jump out of the hole that we came through which is tight above us and we fly down. The droids will be too busy with the venator too notice us!" pr0:"Thank you! At least someone was listening!" They braced themselves, as any mistake they make will cost them their lives.

Good job Hickley !It is very funny and creative! It definetly made my day :pir-skull:

Great but sorry for asking but where is the pic? :pir-skull:

This idea is quite creative but it looks a bit weird to me.

I feel so happy that I feel like crying

I personally have the same opinion as Sinner I think that the new one looks better without them.

I chose the third option, but the TLC sets provide us with bricks neccesary and gives us the different techniques oh how to build it. from those techniques, we can improve and make our own MOC. From those mocs, The Lego company knows where to improve and what everyone likes. So it is mostly give and take

No problem Oky! The venator is so big even though some parts my break the ship will still be able to pierce through the shield and destroy the tower! Sorry, its suppposed to be jetpack! We are in a venator going to crash into a tower to destroy the communcation and shield problem! :pir-skull:

Haha! Our youngest member in Eurobricks has turned 1! :pir-skull: Happy birthday!

Thank you for your help

Thanks for the heads up Wow! They are still here! Do they visit monthly or yearly? :pir-skull:

great find but what is it?