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Cryos

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  1. I'll keep this short, sweet and funky. Asphalt. How you did it I don't know. But thank you for being patient and tolerating my sparce activity. I was really thrilled by the questing experience as a whole, which is a big green check on my list. However, the dungeon crawl style didn't really resonate with me if I'm being honest but it's just a critique. The non player characters did their job as NPCs. Give the heroes a purpose to do what they're doing, guide them and reward! Though as far as personas go none really left a mark except for the Spider Queen. (or as Kelim says, 'queen bitch' ) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ++ The Overall Experience Crafted for the Players + NPCs Weren't Dysfunctional + Enjoyable Writing Style -NPCs may have done their job too well. -Dungeon Crawl Style might not have been the most effective for storytelling. You could have easily booted me from this quest, but I'm glad you didn't because I thoroughly enjoyed myself. As far as first quests go, this one was a groovy~ ::I'll update this post to include the rest of the cast, including Muradin::
  2. The dwarf spots Kelim in the corner of his eye as he takes the staff-ax "Aye, ye know how to use one of those things?" Muradin remarked, seeing how unwieldy the shield seemed when the large man picked it up.
  3. The dwarf held the dagger in two hands, simulating an overhead blow with a much larger weapon. Giving the toothpick a face of disgust before placing it back on the wall. "Oi wish! No it wasn' a ball of fire that took my eye." Muradin paused his speech with a grin, "If ye really must know, a Jotun can't be trusted with an' ax! An' that's all I gots to say about that." He began weighing the wind blade in his grip.
  4. OoC: I wasn't the most active on the quest so I'll wait until the end of the day to choose. Muradin gestured to his milky left eye, his tone heavy "It ain't as fun as it looks." after feigning a beat of seriousness he flashed a smile and tossed himself over to the weapons on the back wall. Examining each ones' sales price lethality.
  5. The dwarf smiled white under his black beard throwing his head back in laughter. "Now yer speakin' on somethin' that makes some sense!" Muradin's face settled into contentment. "Aye, beetles to beer. I wouldn' 'ave it any other way."
  6. The dwarfs face remained visibly disgruntled. He decided best to remain silent.
  7. Muradin's face gradually crinkles with the every second his hammer is absent. Kelim's assuring nod doing little to quell the dwarf's temper. He spoke through angry slurred teeth, "We coulda taken yer lousy 'pets' down jus fine" He removed his flask from his lips, the dwarf just realizing it had been empty for little over an hour now "An' stop usin all them big words at me. I assume they fightin' words, you littl' provocation." He spat, placing the drink back into his mouth.
  8. Ooc: Sorry about my absence, went to Florida for vacation and it slipped my mind to give a warning. That one's on me, my bad. Muradin's weak eye scanned over the group of men that stand before them, a bead of sweat running down his temple, a rare sight for the usually levelheaded dwarf. "I ain't givin' none of these 'bird buddies' my hammer," He mumbled under his breath without breaking eye contact with a floor tile. Looking up at Rethinal, "Eh..no offense, of course."
  9. Muradin pockets the smoke bomb away, almost positive he wasn't going to need it. "Ye, keep yer staff," Muradin waved his hand away, "In my experience eastward is as good as any other direction." The dwarf as he put his personal flask to his lips.
  10. Muradin repeats his attack,
  11. "Any of yer wouldn't 'appen ter carry some lightin' in yer magic pockets would ye?" He glanced at each member of the party sarcastically, "No? Well i'll be damned."
  12. The dwarf, psyched up on adrenaline, becomes airborne. Throwing a soaring elbow at Wild Bore Beetle B
  13. Muradin attacks Spider C from the front row.
  14. "I say stop bein' a bunch of ninnies." The dwarf readies his greathammer, expecting the rest of the party to do the same.
  15. "Pah," The dwarf grumbled, lowering his brow at Calamity. Unamused. "I actually 'av an idea," Muradin said as he waddled toward the chest, adjacent to Kelim. "this box jist needs some 'dwarven ingenuity'."
  16. "Might as well git used to it," The dwarf remarked as he began removing his armor and replaced it with his Chiton Breastplate.
  17. "Yerright... an' thanks for the assist back there." The dwarf said grudgingly as he took the pickax. He clutched the hole in his chest plate where the carrion's horn had bored itself into, trailing behind the group it was apparent the dwarf was having difficulty keeping up with the party, more than his pride would reveal.
  18. Sorry if my absence has caused any difficulties, I should be back for good. :] "Oomph!" The dwarf exhaled as he continues his attack on Carrion 1
  19. The dwarf looks bewildered as the spiders dissolved in the gust of wind* Terry unleashed. "You mage folk ain't 'alf bad." He remarked at the dissolved arachnid bits in the room as he poked a spider leg with the pommel of his hammer, "Ye gotta wonder 'ow these buggers 'eld all those belongings. Heh."
  20. OOC: I may disappear off the map for a bit, so if I don't reply to a battle in 24hrs Mencot can control Muradin. "Whattdya mean, 'you folk'?" The dwarf joked through a strained tone, as he brought his hammer down on Spider 1 from the front row.
  21. The dwarf twisted his helm back, as it had turned 180 degrees from the "light" tap Kelim had thrown. He could now see the rest of the party had gathered in the room directly ahead of him. Following through the doorway after them. The dwarf, with no subtly, punched the large man in the kneecap. "HEH." No one baps Muradin Falstad and gets a way with it. he thought to himself.
  22. "Go on our 'fearless leader', get on wit' it." The dwarf mocked. The Magus had said something to him...something something south. Feeling particularly oppositional today, or night, he decided to add on to that. "But if it was up to me, I'd 'ead northward."
  23. "Oy!" the dwarf exclaimed as the portal blazed into existence. He followed the party, being careful to not touch the flames. He was a little less than happy about dealing with all this 'voodoo juju' magic. More in one day than he's experienced in his entire life.
  24. "I think the ugly bugger's laughin' at us," The dwarf grumbled.
  25. The dwarf remains standing tall (comparatively), only tightening his grip around his hammer. -snip- -snip- -indistinguishablelocustoidgibberish- The dwarf speaks to the rest of the party as Kelim weeds through the pleasantries with the ambassador. "I'd like ter know what de 'ell we're at an' de the bleedin 'ell dat tin' is." though directed at the troop, he ended up saying it louder than any voice has spoken in the hall, yet. Terry exploded, "what the bleedin' 'ell..." He thought outloud... The dwarf slowly reached for his flask to not bring any attention to his self, but he double checked the bottle too make sure laddie hadn't somehow guzzled it. Maybe drinking just a wee bit, it was only natural.
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