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  • 4 weeks later...
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Well it's been a while, but I'm finally back. My editing program crashed, but I got back on it!

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I'm hoping to start to get more into characters, and some fun stuff will be the next few issues, but we're, believe it or not, already almost to a fight!

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This is good! I love the angle you take the pictures from, and the dialogue is great. However, I think that the story is somewhat lacking- we need a plot, some characters!

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Very nice Zeph! I like this one very much, they get better and better! :pir-cry_happy:

@skinny boy, I think clucky in the last line is thinking "Ha! Sucks for you!"

@Zeph Ive sent you a pm BTW :wink:

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Oooh, little jokes inbetween plot and character intros. I like it. Your sense of humor is very fun. I look forward to where this takes us. Great work. Keep it up and screw those people who don't read it. They don't know what they're missing. :pir_laugh2:

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Okay, no one seems to respond to these, but I'll keep on updating anyways!

that's just because I missed it! I like your little comic^^

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Oooh, little jokes inbetween plot and character intros. I like it. Your sense of humor is very fun. I look forward to where this takes us. Great work. Keep it up and screw those people who don't read it. They don't know what they're missing. :pir_laugh2:

Thanks Savvy, that means a lot coming from a master like youself!

  • 3 weeks later...
  • 4 months later...
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I know chickens can't speak but how about thought-bubbles? Because that last (epic) scene would have been so much funnier if there was a little thought bubble saying 'way ahead of you!' or something to that effect. I don't know. I'm just a piece of toast.

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