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Avohkahs' Sparks

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  1. Nice chapter. Good idea with the necklace.
  2. Well, BZP is shut down because of it, so at least they're trying to fix it.
  3. Me too, except mine had said two members!
  4. Cool! Thanks for posting in my topic.
  5. The new comic is good, I just wish we could get a little more of Malum.
  6. Wow.
  7. That's a good chapter. P.S. I finished my story!
  8. He arrives at the end of the next book, which the next comic continues from.
  9. Who's the best character in the game?
  10. I would say A is the best choice. Any suggestions for what I should do with the story of my entry?
  11. Thanks. What does KUTGW mean? Oh, and how is chapter four coming?
  12. Thanks. Do you have any suggestions of something I should add? P.S. Can you tell me my word count?
  13. You're really good at this! You only edited a little bit, and it was so much better! Unfortunately, I already changed the story, and it won't fit in. If you want to read the new and improved version, it's right here. Sorry.
  14. No, Vultraz is normally $20.
  15. Okay, but since we already have a green Skrall, I would suggest blue. P.S. Can you help me revise this paragraph? I need a reason for Regna to kill the Skakdi, and it has to involve Nalice, but I don't like the reason I already have. "All of it. So much fire. So much death." Toa Nalice cradled herself as Toa Regna stroked her armor. When they reached the village that had sent them a distress call, they had found it completely in flames. All them Matoran were dead. Everyone had died, even the Rahi. Toa Nalice had been in a state of shock since. Toa Regna knew why she was like this. Nalice had dealings with the Skakdi in the passed. They had burned down her entire home village, just like this one. He couldn't bear to see her like this. He loved her, so her enemies must be destroyed. Even though she would never remember it, he kissed her on the forehead and moved out.
  16. Sorry, I was kind of busy. I had a huge school project AND I caught the flu! But I will make it. Do you want it to be blue or green?
  17. I like it.
  18. I like it!
  19. Sounds about right except I would switch Kaxium with Baranus.
  20. I wonder if you can split up the Kaxium vehicles...
  21. Considering you need a 21st Skrall, I think the second one is the best idea.
  22. Too bad there aren't any purple pieces...
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