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Good job Tereglith! I like all the humor in it it actually made me laugh! But... I agree that the underground part should be more exposed. :pir-sceptic:

Welcome Tereglith to the boards! I've seen you on Flickr but I am glad you have came to the Euro side of the brick!

I think our characters will get along perfectly! They seem to have similar interests. And yes please change your name to something else I'll give suggestions. Zeke, Kaz, or Will perhaps?

Sorry but did you really have to do that?

Did you look at the other pics? And the answer to your question is whenever the shadow creatures awoke they kidnapped the king. I was expecting more comments so that is why it took me so long to answer.

When is JD gonna start the 3rd chapter?

You guys just don't get it do you? The passage of the squid is the gateway to Atlantis! It makes perfect sense! Okay the monsters are trying to lure them away from the gates by scaring them then when the dives find the gateway to Atlantis they create Neptune's sub to explore! P.S Guardian of the deep is the shark.

Am I the only one that noticed the non printed metallic silver agents armor?

I say we kill him in one of the posts!

I am listening to Jose Feliciano Link.

:hmpf: This is old news and it has already been posted about twice this is the third! Please at least read already existing topics to make sure this hasn't already been posted!

What prize?

Whoa!!! Did you make that? What is it? Whatever it is it's awesome!

Okay so about a month before any sign of an Atlantis theme I started making up my own the story goes... After the residents of Atlantis were turned into monsters by their own greed and technology Zeus turned them all into what they were inside shadowy hollow monsters and then banished them and their enormous city to the bottom of the ocean. Soon the City was found by a species of peaceful merpeople whose king kindly banished all of the shadow creatures into a deep sleep in a small "Forbidden" part of the city and encased Neptune in stone so they would not corrupt their own city with their greed. A few hundred years later their king mysteriously disappears. And the Atlantians awoke their bodies mutated and covered with seaweed they have know memories of anything that came before other than they want revenge and to take back their city! So eventually Atlantis is split in half to separate the two by a huge unbreakable wall. A shadow creature soon finds a large generator similar to one in the other side of Atlantis and turns it on. Now they have all their technology back to do with as they please! But what do they do with their technology you ask? Make super intelligent cyborg creatures and highly advanced human animal hybrids to take their city back! But soon the merpeople find out that they are keeping their king so they make their own armor and vehicles to keep them from doing any harm to their peaceful city! Okay so basically both teams will have gladiator type armor and their own style of weapons. The good guys colors are metallic silver, pearl gold, and light bluish gray. And the seaweed demons colors are dark green, black, and dark bluish gray plus a hint of brown. I have already made a generator for each side with spinning action a squid chariot for the good guys and a cyborg crocodile eel and angler fish (I can't get good pics of the angler but I'll try later) and a temple built by the shadow creatures to protect the Neptune statue.Here are my favorite vehicles from each team to give you a taste there is a link at the bottom that leads to my Flickr account where you can see more pics. More photos here on flickr!

Suddenly the scorpion type bot slithered to the back of the creature by a tentacle connected to the monsters back. "It.. it was just a puppet." Said Melody stunned. "Um.. guys?" Said C.C. "Not now techboy!" Said Zach. "I think I see the core on his tail!" Said Melody. The group rushed over to the thing. "Oh you want this don't you?" Said the creature holding out a glowing device. "I'll give it to you for the Detectix! Oh please pardon my manners I am Drone one I have created the 2nd gen life forms. Amazing creatures aren't they?" Said Unit one. "Those are no lifeforms you useless excuse for a robot!" Shouted Jack. "Robot? I am no robot! I am a God!" Said Unit one. "You are no god you are not even alive!" Said Zach. "Oh I love a good fighter! Maybe instead of processing you like your friends I will give you the opportunity of being lunch instead!" Said Nit one followed by an evil cackel. Jack blasted a hole in what looked like unit one's torso. "I got the core quickly let us destroy it!" Said Jack blasting apart the core. Jack turned around looking at the gap in unit one as is healed as fast as it appeared. "Why did you do that!?!? Do you ever think before your actions!?!" Screamed C.C louder than anybody has ever heard him before. "What I just saved the day?!?!" Said Jack. "Don't you see that he let us have it? That was actually a lock to limit the creatures power! I tried to tell you before but Zacharoni and cheese here wouldn't let me finish! His circuitry goes throughout the entire building!" Said C.C. Suddenly the cranes hanging from the ceiling began to move towards our heroes and the floors began to move. "This place is a living building and you activated it! You've doomed us all!" Said C.C. Feel free to post now!

Well you said that that thing was a mutant not a robot! Mine is acctualy a robot that just looks like zephon.

"we're here!' Said C.C as they parked the car on the roof of a building. "This is disgusting!" Shouted Zach looking at the parts of the building that was made out of organic human material. "hey I think I found a entrance!" Said Melody. "Cool let's go inside!" Said Mark. Slowly the team crawled inside the entrance to the factory where the core was hidden. Suddenly a strange scorpion like 2nd gen came and told them to leave immediately in an unusually sophisticated voice. "please leave now I am the keeper of the core and I do not wish to harm you leave now or you will perish" Said the strange humanoid. Jack quickly shot a hole in its torso with a beam. "That seemed easy." Said Jack. "Yeah too easy!" Said C.C connecting a wire to the robot. "Haha! I am afraid it has only just began!" Said the sophisticated voice again. "Huh? Where is that voice coming from?" Asked Clyde. Suddenly the lights turned on to reveal a huge robot and several cranes and doodads hanging from the ceiling. "Right here!" Said the creature. The creature seemed to be surviving off two jars of alien looking organs. "come and get me" Said The creature. Sorry guys I'll finish it tomorrow when I get home from school so please don't post for just a little bit longer! thanks!

No plot changes that I can think of but just a heads up one of the creators of the 2nd gens will be guarding the core is that okay? I already made a model of the 2nd gen monster and I even customized some parts for it. He kind of looks like a 2nd gen mixed with Zephon.

Hey guys I have a big post coming up tomorrow to lead to JD's ending of the chapter so please don't post anytime between now and then thanks!

We don't need this topic just vote right here!

C.C reached into his back-pack. Huh? Asked C.C. It's gone! What's gone? Asked Robert. The computerbug! It's gone! Said C.C. Wait I can probably find him with the Detectix. Hey! Don't you need to drive this thing? Asked Melody. Oh It's been on autopilot this whole time! Said C.C. Well then why have you been messing with the steering wheel? Asked Zach. Because then it looks like I know what I'm doing! Said C.C. Know give me the Detectix! Okay. Said Melody handing him the Device. Huh apparently he is stuck on... ADAM! Said C.C. So what can you do? Asked Eskallon. Well I cannot hack into his system but I can find out some information. Said C.C. Location-U.S.A earth. Model-A.D.A.M Directive- To destroy. Creator- Dr. Brian. Said The Detectix. Dr. Brian?!?! Shouted C.C. Wasn't he in the letter!?

Hey everybody! I was just wondering why you made up your character how you did. Did you base them off somebody? Did you have the character in something else before? Is your character anything like you? I was just wondering thanks!

Everybody was running except for C.C. He stepped on one then kicked a large one causing the legs to fall off. There is nothing to afraid of! Said C.C Kicking one of the bugs that was previously on e of the largest. They have become brittle since the explosion and practically destroy themselves! And the larger ones were completely detonated in the explosion. Said C.C picking up shiny bits of rubble. Hah! Said Melody but her smile quickly turned to a frown as she saw the general glaring at her. Do you know how much damage you have costed us young lady! Screamed the Sargent. Um actually she destroyed them I built them! Said C.C not really focusing on much of anything other than the Detectix. I will rip you limb from limb for this you stupid kid! Screamed the Sargent. Then C.C grabbed some wish-bone shaped thing out of his back-pack. Hold this. Mumbled C.C handing the thing to Mark. And hold it right here. C.C Quickly pressed a button on the detectix causing a cord to whip out of the Detex and connect to the bone thingy. Then a bright light shined from both of the points of the bone thing and shined into General, Nag eyes. General fell to the ground inert. Then C.C grabbed both devices and stuffed them in his pack. Okay lets go. said C.C. Did you... Kill him? Asked Jack. Oh no no no no no! I simply stunned him he will wake up in about 2 hours. said C.C. You would not believe what kinds of things this thing can do! Said C.C. Now let us go get Bob! Said C.C. We have a lot to tell him! Said Mark. YG-49 the brutes are not like that at all. first of all they are made of scrap metal, second of all they are menacing, third of all they are not alive!

like what the rabbit said take your time you don't have to say sorry it's nice of you to do this at all! I asked some other lego drawer if he did requests for sig-figs and he told me that for prints they are $15.00 and for an actual drawing they are like $40.00 or something so this is nice no matter how long it takes as a wise man once said "some people can eat louder than they can talk" "You cannot rush perfection!"

Lets be realistic here. We all know that none of those will ever be made. I think they should make Lego video games of themes like PM, SP3, agents, and Atlantis! But lego only does games for licensed themes.