Guss

poor little rat... I think this man will be alone on this island soon :P nice entry ^^ but I don't really see the cruelty of pirates, maybe put an evil face to him and a knife in his hand.. it will show the cruelty there will be in a few moments ^^ anyway, I like your little island^^

I think this battle pack is a little expensive, but the minifig ,their heads and weapons and stuff are very very nice! but because of the price, I'll rate it " average" ^^

thanks Lego12 and CPT Jr, I hesitated a long time on the buildings colours, I wanted a three coloured building, but I had no idea WHAT three colours I'll use (red -tan -brown ? no .. light grey- white- tan ? ... no .. blue red yellow ? NO ! ^^ ) ! I'm glad you like it ^^

I think it's a really nice moc for a first attempt .. wait .. no that's a really nice moc ! not only for a first attempt ^^ I like how you used technic parts.

nice copter ^^ 9/10 for me ( because I'm tired, I'll not say 10 :P , but I think that's 10/10 )

hello and welcome ^^

Hello and welcome Gladiator ! you're from Indonesia ? wow! that's farrr from where I live!

a friend of me used to say that I look like the little mouse called " Guss " in the Disney's movie " Cinderella ", it was 10 years ago.. now, everyone call me Guss, My girlfriend, my friends, my mother , my cousins, the family of my girlfriend... but my real name is David ^^

yay let's sing ! I love your little moc ^^ really nice!

thanks Thomas, I don't think that it's better than you, but I promise that in the final version there will be more blood ^^ zorro, my girlfriends thanks you for your kind words ^^ no, I never visited Belgium , well, I went to "Spa-Francorchamps" when I was young .. really young ( 2 years old ), so I don't remember ^^ where is, and what is FACTS ? ^^ Erdbeereis1 : yes that's a horse skeleton with some horn ^^ I thought about this detail but I was building the ship, so my girlfriend built it, she wanted to ^^

It looks strange, but I like it, nice vehicle

nice roadster ^^ I prefer the first version of the front^^

omg, amazing

Errffff bad luck :/ I really have no Idea how to remove it .... maybe "febreze" it everyday, but it seems that you already tried :/

ahahah, wel laughed a lot with my GF reading this^^, is it a kind of reverse engineering ? XD and I don't think she'll look like this, she's not blonde :P if you want more data to create your digital model, check this : http://www.cosplay.com/member/80657/ it's her ( Yes she likes cosplaying) ^^ thanks a lot erdbeereis1 I'll try It tomorrow, it's a good idea! plus I found some light blue plates... in the chess set! ^^ I didn't notice there were some!

thanks Sandy, that's just the "background" the .. "décor" ( can I say that in English ? ) , I'll try to make something original... but off course with all the talented builders here, I'm pretty sure I'll not make a moc that can win... I just came out of my dark age, and I don't have the talent to make a "amazing" moc, but at least I'll try ^^ hehe I'll wait to see your village then ^^ so I can put it down :P I'm joking ^^ Fluyt : thanks ^^ the technic bricks is temporary, there will be a burning building here ( I just put this bricks to avoid loosing my flames. ) , bubbles ? hey that's a nice Idea ! I was planning to put some wreckage , but I didn't think I can put bubbles, thanks !

Oo I love it , I like it shape, I like how you built a nice interior, and the hangar :wub: , 10/10 for me.

sorry she's mine, and she'll never be on the market again . unfortunately I just have a few light-blue tiles... so I ll try to manage something but .. I don't really know how I'm going to do! this boat is not finished, I think I'm going to make it looks like it just sinked , like if it was destroyed by the pirates. you're right, I have no hulls and not a lot of pirate stuffs and I really want the BSB ^^ ( but I don't really think I can win.. but who knows, with good advice like yours ^^ ) I was thinking to add a steering wheels, but I'm still looking for a way to makes it looks nice ^^ I really think the same, I'm going to modify it ! I tried to makes it black or grey, but I still prefer it brown, make it look like they did a wooden roof, and you'll notice that the roof inside the lighthouse is grey, as if it was built with stones, to make it more solid to support the high part of the lighthouse. well.. I just noticed that I didn't make a picture that shows the inside of it 6)add more minifigs , but I'm sure you know that, you stated it is a work in progress.... yes of course^^ there will be something like 15 minifigs I think , maybe more and there will be a lot more details when It will be finished ^^ anyway , thanks for all your advices and for your kind words ^^

excellent, I love the hut ^^ and ... wath kind of pieces are the bullets ? never saw it before Oo

Vig. 27d I edited this post, HERE WE GO for the final round ( maybe ) ! I / The entry So, this is it : I know it looks Messy, but I tried to make a pillage at it best! and for me, a pillage IS a messy thing! I also wanted to make it as if it was a part of a huge scene going on, a part of a way taller island, so I made it to have some details on each sides, I'm sorry too, but I can't really shows all the details in 6 pics... if you want to see more, just ask ^^ ( I put a bed in the jail on the lighthouse, I detailled a little the place where there is the marine canon , there is a skeleton cow on the ground etc etc etc... but I really can't show everything in 6 pics^^ ) ADDED: if you want to see how this town looked like before the attack, here it is ( this is not the entry! the entry is lower ^^) : One week ago.... Background of the scene 3 days ago, the marines captured Mickael, on of the strongest man and a close friend of "Captain Whitebeard" , he was searching in this city to gather information about a legendary ruby that is supposed to be hidden somewhere in this little village... The captain Whitebeard and his crew are now attacking a little village, first, he want to free Mickael, secondly, he decided that if he can't search for the treasure peacefully, he'll burn this village entirely until he'll fin it, plus, this little village is badly defended by a very little garrison, more an outpost than a garrison ( no more than 6 men), so he's pretty sure to win. Meanwhile the marines were preparing to transfer Mickael to see the Governor, on another island, because he needs to Interrogate him, just when the pirates attacked ! Overview overview of the attack, you can see a sank ship they shot while they were quite far, to avoid the marines to respond to their attack. They attacked exactly when the marines were preparing to transfer the prisoner , so they took them by surprise. Tavern in the tavern of the docks, we can see that two men of the crew, John and Oswald, closed the door and they are going to... hum.. I think you can guess by yourself, the poor lady Deborah and Abigail can't do anything, they tried, but with a broom and a teacup, that's hard to defend.... to the right of the tavern we can see that the tricks that Denis and his father Karl wanted to do on Bob was bad timed, Denis has been killed before his father was able to drop the water on Bob, well.. it kind of worked.. Bob will be wet soon.. We can also see a character I didn't introduced hiding in a room, a shovel in his hands, it's Nick. Professor's house here we can clearly see Nick, at the left of the pictures, and inside the professor jester's house, the professor Jester died, Timmy "the boy" killed him, then he searched for treasures or things he can sell in the house... but didn't find anything, so he went out.. happily for Gustav, that was digging in the cave, looking for the ruby, Timmy didn't find the trap under the professor's bed... but Gustav just saw some blood falling from the trap.. so he step back a little, and now he don't really know what to do^^ you can also see Kyle the hermit , between the two houses, trying to escape from Timmy, crawling, with a bad wound on his head. the beach and the forest on this pic I'll describe only the upper part, the lower part will be described with the next pic ^^ , on the top left we can see the prisoners escaping, the old pirate is stealing a weapon to fight, while Mickael is using the chain he was imprisoned with as a weapon to kill Imperialscout, the islander tried to run away but the commander was waiting for him and just cut one of his arms, aouch ! To the right we can see Annia fighting with Tom, while her husband Whitebeard his running to help her, killing Dreamweb on the move. On the beach James killed the old jack, and now he is achieving Dave. You can also see, in the Lighthouse, that Mike is loading a canon, a little too late, Wirt, on the boat, was faster. the town square On this picture, we can see a lot of things, we can see Zorro3999 on the dock, drunk because he lost his favourite hat , he is trying to go and fight the pirates, but .. he stopped to vomit^^ Lower on the picture we can see kyle the angry merchant, who took a barrels and tried to extinguish the fire, but while he was running to the beach with the barrel he took on the dock ( the barrel was used to extinguish the fire on the boat ) Spearman Toni stopped him with his spear, poor kyle.. Lower again, to the left, we can see MR and Mrs Johnson, Mister johnson was shoot by a pirate, and now his wife has just been shot by Nesson, while she was crying her lost husband. Just bottom Nesson, we can see Erdbeeris1, just hit by the Balthazar 's rifle butt, just after this one killed Sergio, that lye on the ground. we can also see Joe, burnt to death while he was trying to escape from the fire. to the top left we can see the stranger fighting against Jenny, and totally on the bottom of the pic there is Timmy who stole the Kyle "the hermit" 's arbalest , and now he is watching him crawling in attempt to runaway.. he likes to see people crawls in their blood. behind the tavern , on the dock , we can also see Pedro drowning the mayor Bartholomew. the lighthouse we can see on this last pic , on the top, another character I didn't presented, because I forgot, it's a man that lives in the village and like to take a nap on the top of the lighthouse,his name is Pierre, the attack woke him up, he have been shot before he can even yawn.. now he's bleeding to the ground.. on the lower part of the lighthouse, we can see paul, one of the marines, he was shot by the pirates too.. we can see clearly on this image that Wirt was faster to shoot than Mike ^^ full gallery: here thanks for viewing, and I'm really sorry for my baaad english^^ but I wanted to describe what was going on on my moc, anyway, You don't really have to read if you don't want to^^ my pics of the wip are always available here II / The characters here are the characters that are on my entry, they are divided in 4 categories: the pirates ( 13 minifigs) the soldiers ( 5 minifigs) the prisoners (3minifigs) the civilians (21minifigs) (click on their names for images) 1/ The pirate. They are the "Whitebeard" crew, they are pillaging this village for some reasons, see the background ^^ let me introduce them : Captain Whitebeard age: 44 weapons : 2 sabers. He is the captain of the crew, cruel, intrepid Annia "the whip" age : 38 weapons: a gun and a whip. She is the wife of the captain Whitebeard. One legged Wirt. Age : 35 weapon : a canon he is the one that always stay to guard the boat. Timmy "the boy" age: 14 weapons : an axe and a gun. He is the youngest members of the whitebeard's pirates. Toni "the spearman" age : 25 weapons : a sabre and a spear. jenny "one armed girl" age : 20 weapon : a sabre she lost her arm in an accident, now she have a wooden fake arm that she painted in white.. to make it look likes it was just her clothes. Nesson age : 31 weapons : a gun and a torch James age : 28 weapons : a spear he is the Toni's student Bob, Balthazar, John, Oswald Pedro ages : 25-35 weapons : sabre for bob, a sabre and a rifle for Balthazar, 2 guns for John, a gun and a sabre for Oswald, a sabre for Pedro . They are the crew men of the whitebeard pirates. 2/ the soldiers the soldiers based on this little village , they just captured Mickael and kept him in the little prison under the lighthouse, with an olldd prisoner that is here for many years and an islander they captured 1 week ago. Here they are : Commander Daven age : 48 weapon : a gun and a sabre he is the commander here, it's a veteran well trained and he fought many times against many pirates. mike age : 28 weapon : a canon he is loading.. a little too late^^ Paul age : 26 weapon : a rifle Tom "angry veteran" age : 42 weapons : he was repairing the wheel of the canon ( he finished just when the pirates arrived ) , so he kept the hammer he used as a weapon, and he found an axe Imperialscout age : ask him :P weapon : a rifle. 3/ the prisoners they were imprisoned in the little prison under the lighthouse. Mickael age : 34 weapon : the chains he were imprisoned with^^ this is a man of the Whitebeard crew, he also is a good friend of WhiteBeard himself, he is well known for his cruelty. Old pirate( real name unknown ) age : unknown , but old^^ weapon :none, at the moment^^ He is imprisoned here for years.... he doesn't even want to escape from here anymore... The Islander (real name unknown) age : approximately 20 years old. weapon : none He tried to steal some fruit in the village, he has been captured easily. 4/ the civilians Abigail age : 35 weapon : a cup of tea she is the owner of the tavern. Kyle " Angry Merchant" age : 46 weapon : a barrel this is the merchant that sells various things on the docks, he is known for being always angry... now that his shop is on fire, he really have a reason to be angry ^^ Bartholomew age : 44 weapon : an axe this is the mayor of this little village. Sergio "the Italian" age : 32 weapon : a shovel he is the assistant of a famous cook, he went here to buy various things at the various things seller kyle, when the pirates attacked, he found a shovel. Denis and Karl ages : 13 and 34 weapons : none , and a barrel full of water. Denis love to play tricks with his father kyle, but unfortunately , Kyle is actually ill, he must stay at home, they thought about a way to do some stupid things anyway, and when the pirates arrived, Denis tried to do what they thought to one of them, well.. at least he tried^^ Dreamweb age : ask him :P weapon : a saber. Dreamweb went here to see if it was a good décor for his comics :P Erdbeereis1 age : ask him:p weapon : a skillet ( is it the good word ? Or it is Cooking pan ? ) he went here with Sergio to buy things , and he is not shaved ! ( sorry I don't have the right head XD ) Gustav age : 25 weapon : pickaxe he is the assistant of the professor jester, he helps him to dig because Jester is old and can't use a pickaxe for too long. Joe age: 38 Weapon : burnt peoples don't need weapons. he burnt with the Kyle's shop, he tried to exit but the door was blocked by Nesson, who enjoyed to see him burn. Kyle " the hermit" Age : he seems to be old weapon : an arbalest he usually lives in the mountain but he comes once a month to town to buy useful things for his hermit life...this month he came the bad day ^^ Lady Deborah age : 22 weapon : a broom she is the daughter of the mayor, she wanted to visit Abigaelle when she met the pirates, she found a broom on the tavern. Jack age : 55 weapon : a fishing pole. jack is the lighthouse keeper, he is the one who light it at night. Professor Jester Age : 61 weapon : pickaxe he is a famous archeologist that went here (and also bought a house) because , as the pirates, he heard about a famous treasure, he found something by digging under his house with his assistant, now he is trying to protect his discovery. The stranger age : ?? weapon : a strange sword. A traveler that has nothing to do here, even his skin color is strange^^ Dave age : 41 weapons : none he is an explorer who wanted to make a stopover here.. Zorro3999 age : ask him ^^ weapon : a sword... and a glass :P he lost his hat.. he was so sad he started to drink to forget.. Mr and Mrs Johnson age : 41 and 44 weapons : none Mr Johnson is a fisherman, Mrs johnson came to the dock to see him. Nick age : 12 weapon : a shovel Pierre age : 31 weapon : none, he was sleeping character's gallery : here thanks for watching (or reading ^^) critics, advices, and every comment welcome!

I really need it, it seems to be a really awesome set

improve it ? I don't really know how to improve it, I think it's a really nice moc ^^

me too, my favorites is the pizzeria ! the others are great too , very good job

great job ^^ as expected from you ! I love it , good luck for the contest! ^^

I bought one in a supermarket ( Manor ) here in Switzerland , and there is 3 set yet, I think if you look at the supermarkets around , you'll find one ^^ ( if you're lucky enough ^^ )