-JD-

Hi. Could you make some Smallville decals for me? They are: Green Arrow torso and legs, Clark red jacket with blue t-shirt (and his face as well!), Doomsday (monster), Lois head and body Thanks!

AWESOME ENDING!!!! So, are we at the start of the whole story? I think we should continue! Please?

Thok, pr0 and Adam landed in a corridor. They saw JD(p) lying on the floor in front of them. Then Jim and the group ran out of a door next to them, followed by Grevious and the mutants. Jim: What? pr0:What?! GG: WHAT!!!!! That sorts out the time travel! Back to the present! The bounty hunter has escaped as the portal leads into the present and will return later in the story to try and kill me.....again. LEAVE JD ALONE YOU SLIMEY PEICE OF BANTHA POODOO!!!! In the next season, will Order 66 take place, or will we stop the game before it happens? And if it does happen, will we carry on into the empire era?

Oky, my future self is half dead on the floor! In your post it looks like you think I am not half dead. Sorry if I am mistaken. Thok and co are going to run into the bounty hunter and Delso right? Considering it leads to the future. I hope.

My present self is through the portal. My future self was impaled. In my post, JD(f) tackled the bounty hunter and brought him back to the portal. I thought I made it clear.

JD managed to catch up with the BH. JD tackled him, broke his arms, and started pulling him down the corridor back to the portal. JD: You were hired by the empire to kill Jaina! BH: She pleaded with me not to kill you...after I broke her back and pushed her off the balcony. She must have fallen hundreds of metres.....pity I didn't cause more pain! JD: You peice of *censored*!!!! JD blasted both the BH's legs with his blaster. The BH screamed in pain. JD: Rodian slime! JD and the BH came to the opening in the wall. Oky: This is bad!!! JD saw the portal. JD: Tell Delso I said hi. JD threw the BH past GG into the portal. Jim: Your rampage ends here! GG: I think not. After all.....you republic agents always fail. In your hurry...you forgot someone. GG held up the present JD, who was still unconcious. He threw JD(p) into the portal. Oky: NO!!! JD: Right. Now you have REALLY

Hi everyone! Please DO NOT kill off the Bounty Hunter. I have some things planned for the next chapter! :pir-skull: Thanks! JD

The BH tossed Will aside after slicing across his chest, making a deep cut, and continued toward the others. JD managed to grab one of the vibroswords and they began to clash.

So what happened to the present JD? Did we leave him unconcious in the base? I also thought I should re-introduce the bounty hunter (BH) who tried to kill me, as I left him unconcious in the undergrowth earlier in the story. Jim: I think we will cope.....wait...whos that?! A dark figure appeared behind the magnas. BH: Kill them all. JD shouted at the hunter: JD: Looking for me? BH: GRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!! I will deal with you myself! He drew out two swords, which were capible of deflecting blasters and lightsabers. He laughed, and charged at the group, swinging the swords and deflecting fire. Jim: Ok. Wouwie, we may need help!

You talking to me?! Trees ROCK!!! They're cuddly. Nah. Kidding. Lightsabers do give of a poisonous gas. Read the comics. I could not remember the name of the gas though, so I put ozone. :pir-skull:

Sorry. I thought the dark jedi could be the same species as durge. I'll remove it. I suppose I was confused as well. Sorry again. Oky: Now lets not be hasty.... Garviel: Yeh, what he said... pr0: Let him go! Garviel was starting to suffocate from the ozone from Bequin's saber.

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Same here! Well....kinda. Yeh. I'll edit that.

JD(f) had taken a shot to the arm. Adam got a quick glance at JD and he smiled. Adam: Go on JD. Tell them what you did. JD(p): YOU! You're...me?! JD(f): Yes. I am. Except I'm the older and sexier version.( ) JD(f) got out his stun and mind wipe gun and shot JD(p), who fell unconcious. pr0: What does he mean JD? What did you do? JD(f): You will never know. Adam: He betrayed you all! Oky: What?! Uh oh! JD was under the dark jedi's control as well! JD: He offered me so much...I could not resist. Oky: Thats not you talking! Its the dark jedi! JD picked up his chaingun. He pointed it at Oky. JD: She meant so much to me. Oky: Whos 'she'? JD: The one person I have ever loved. She was killed...by the empire....he promised he would bring her back! Oky: HE LIED ABOUT WHAT HE SAID!!!! JD: I never thought I would do this. BDAM BDAM BDAM! Oky dodged the bolts, and tackled JD. There was a scuffle.

The future JD sees his present self, so he reacts. then we beat up magna guards. I was following on from pr0s post. GG: YOU!!! JD(both): Oh no! Hey...WHAT??? Stop copying me! GG: Now there is two. All the more pleasure for me! The communication ended. Jim: We didn't turn the cameras off! He knows where we are. Oky: Get ready! GG: Too late! *cough cough* The gang turned. GG leapt from out the darkness at the present JD. He grabbed his throat. Both JDs gasped for air. The future JD collapsed. GG: Long time....no see! GARRRR! He threw JD(p) into the wall. JD fell to the floor and GG ignited his sabers. GG: This is the end for you my friend! JD has too many enemies. He destroyed a super weapon of GG's and they fought. JD won by blasting GG's right arm. As you can see, the visions the future JD had are coming true. Will people die? Only time will tell!

Don't make me the traitor! I'm good! I FOUGHT THE EMPIRE!!!! JD(f): Wait a second....WHAT THE HELL AM I DOING HERE! Adam: What?! JD(f): ME! Adam: Huh? JD: HIM!!!! Adam: Well, technically, he is the present JD. JD(p): Who's the angry guy shouting and pointing at me? Jim: Well...he's- JD: HEY! DON'T SAY!!!!! Jim: Why? JD(f): THIS SHOULD NEVER HAVE HAPPENED! DON'T YOU KNOW? Jim:No. JD(f): oh great. Jim: Huh? JD(f): I've been having visions of things that never happened. The hunter is from the future and he never should have come throught to this timeline! It never happened to me! JD(p): HOW do you know about him?! JD(f): Shut up you! There are time machine duplicates! Gizor Delso hired the hunter, in the future where I came from, to kill me. He attacked the wrong guy! Delso is another nemisis of mine so they worked together. WE MUST MINDWIPE.....HIM! JD(p): What!? ME!? Jim: Oh dear.... There was a pause as the gang realised what had happened. Then more magna guards arrived.

Not you! The present JD. The bounty hunter should never have come back through time! Not meaning to be rude, the post I made is quite serious and will affect us all so I suggest that someone should make me tell everyone else about it, because bombing a tower is not as important....kinda. PS, I'm doing GCSE coursework so I need to concentrate! JD

JD wondered how his present self was. His own arm still stung, but he could cope. Then things suddenly made sense. The bounty hunter….he is from the future! But how? GIZOR DELSO! The Imps were tracking him down before he, JD, came into this timeline. So there must be loads of time machine prototypes! JD started to panic. Then he started to see things….Oky Wan…and Adam…..dying in front of the dark Jedi…Bequin! And Wouwie and pr0….fighting desperately against Grevious and some magna guards. But How? He must be seeing what the present JD will see….then he realised…HE is the key to all this! He had to tell Oky Wan! DUN DUN DUUUUUN!!!!

Wow. I love it! I especially like the cockpit!

Oky-The present has changed due to my arrival because of the outing I went on earlier in the story. What I did will be revealed later, as it is suprising . pr0-Ya. I got it. Lets say he is Rodian (like Greedo from episode 4). He is the leader, he loves heavy weapons and used to make money by assasinating senators. JD thinks he has killed all the members. Really, two escaped. They are probably in the leader's ship on Felucia.

The future JD woke. He examined his arm. It was there, fortunately. Clone: Welcome back!

JD (present).... He woke up. The bounty hunter was dragging him through the undergrowth. His arm was limp. He knew he had to escape. He picked up a rock, turned over and threw it at the hunter's neck. He fell unconcious. JD got up and ran. He burst out of the bushes and saw a CIS base, tripped and fell into a startled Oky Wan. Oky Wan: You son of a nerfherder! GET OFF!(lol)

My present self will be a CW clone with blue arms and the chaingun, just incase anyone will do pics. Present JD... He lay there in a pool of blood, ( ) trying desparately to keep concious. he looked to his side and saw his arm was twisted and mangled. He started to see things. Shapes. He felt his pulse slowing. He saw a cloaked figure looking down at him. Everything went black. Gory post! He saw a cloaked figure looking down at him. Everything went black. Comparison: The cloaked figure is my nemisis by the way. Basically an entirely black armoured bounty hunter. Don't kill him though. He will be in the story for a bit.

JD walked to pr0. JD: Somethings wrong. pr0: Huh? What? JD: Look. JD held out his arm. It was fading away. pr0: What's that?! JD: Somethings happening! My present self....he must be fatally wounded, or dying. AAGH! JD fell to the floor. pr0 knelt beside him and removed JD's helmet. JD: You need to find my present self.....before its too late! pr0: But...where is he??!! JD: Over the-- JD passed out. I hope this is an ok twist. I thought earlier when I joined that some of you will meet my present self later on. And this kinda fading away thing happens in loads of adventure stories . Anyway, hope its ok.

JD:WE NEED TO GET OUT OF HERE NOW! pr0:WHAT? Why? JD: Trust me. The droids are about to nuke (or the star wars equvilent) our position! pr0: You know this how? JD: I am from the future. Right now my present self is over that hill tearing droids to pieces, and any moment he will fall to the ground and see a huge mushroom cloud rising from this exact spot. pr0: He sounds serious. Shall I listen? He is on my side, right? Yes. Give the order. OK. Trooper. Evacuate, NOW! GET TO THE GUNSHIPS! A few klicks away.... Droid: FIRE THE ULTIMATE! Droid 2: Roger Roger!