The Crazy One

I KNOW I MISSPLET ASSASSIN, I AM USING A CRUMMY KEYBARD. Good evening, this little excerpt is a teaser for my new story, ' The Assassin '. It takes place in the dieing years of the Galactic Civil War, when the war was at its fiercest, with traitors on every side. This transmisson came from the last moments of Rebel Fleet Commander, Larz Lysander, and his fleet. ++ This is commander Lysander, does anyone read me? ++ ++ Copy that, this is private Carry, I am on B deck ++ ++ It is good to here a familar voice, now Carry, you must make it to the Bridge, the ship is in ruins, I am alone. ++ ++ Yes sir, I will make it ........ ++ ++ Carry? Do you copy? ++ ++ Er....yes, I just though I saw something....++ ++ Just make it to the Bridge, now. ++ ++ Yes sir, oh my go....* screams * ++ ++ Carry!!! Do you copy?? Do you read me?? ++ ++ Hello Lysander. ++ ++ Who is this? ++ ++ You know me well, but I will not tell you, you shall see soon enough. ++ ++ No you wont, Bridge lockdown activated. ++ ++ Nice try, but you are too late. ++ ++ What do you mean? ++ ++ I'm already here. ++ ++ What? No........you!! ++ ++ Yes, long time no see Lysander. ++ ++ You wont get away with this, Admiral Ackbar, this is my final transmisson, the assasin is here, and the fleet is decimated, get Skywalker, he will....... ++ ++ Brave, but foolish, you are now going to die. ++ ++ Transmisson ends. ++ All comments welcome gentlemen, I am happy for any ideas on how to continue. In the next insert, pictures will be added. The Crazy One.

And I think I might abide by it. I really like this new theme, more so than PM. Thanks

I love the sets, such beautiful crafting, I just can't decide: Power Miners, or Atlantis, or both??

Absoulutely stunning. Maybe a bit off shape from a normal Vorox, but who cares, still amazing.

Wow, these sets look amazing. I have to say, I will be picking them up soon. One thing, what the hell does squirting monsters with water have to do with mining???

I love the way these sets are going. This is really making up for this year, beautiful Rock creatures. I love it EDIT: Quick request, can any one PM me the pic from the first post, I can't find it, and it's annoying me.

I have to say, I am dissapointed with these sets, but they are kinda cute, so I'll let it pass, I might pick up Vezon, his face is priceless.

edit: ignore, stupid comment, i didn't read.

Pretty good. Could do with a little imporvements but on the whole, nice.

Yeah, I am pretty sure that's right.

He might not have known it was old.....okay, I am going a little far in his defence but you have to make a little allowance with these things. I have never seen this commercial, so I have no idea if its new or old, so I am happy that he brought it to my attention. I think this topic should be closed now as it has just become an argument over an '' old '' commercial.

What an appropriate reply. Great review though, I just got her, nice set on the whole.

Don't be too hard on him. I share the same view on this as ADHO15, he did have good intent when posting this, and it is clearly a Red Shock Trooper patern on a Stormtrooper, and as no one else had pointed it out before, he did good to point it out to us, I certainly wouldn't have noticed. And he is right, there weren't any sets with this figure in, so there wasn't any proof it wasn't going to be used at a later date. Thanks FORCES for pointing this out to me, as I might have a go at making one now.

Great review. I love Greedo , shame I missed that dude. Also that Sandtrooper and giant lizard where also greatly missed, I hope they do a remake of this set. With more of the Cantina Element as KimT said. ThE CraZY OnE

Aaaa no, we can't have clones, noo, nooooo!!

Yup, the vehicles are there.

Sounds intersting, looking foward to more info.

Thank you, wait a few more months for the next topic though.

Fair point, but it was meerly a suggestion.

I have an idea it's a bit sketchy, but i will fill it out in time. It basically follows Mata Nui's journey off Bara Magna and his incounters. Chapter one : The Glatorian and Agori, after defeating the Skrall, build a craft for Mata Nui to leave the planet on. Farewells are said, and Mata Nui departs from his new friends. Traveling through space, his craft encounters some trouble ( what the trouble is is to be confirmed ), and violently crash lands on a near by planet. Among the wreakage, a small expeditionary party ( element : air ), discover the desimated body of Mata Nui, torn apart in the crash. The tribe rebuild him. ( Haha, see how I did it, it means he is the same character, but with a new design. ) The new species are a highly advanced race, divided into 6, beautiful cities, here's the catch, they are all at war. The tribes: Air: Striving for peace, their new discovery might be the key to world unity. Fire: The tribe that started the war, they are a cruel race of blood thirsty cannabels, who don't care for anyone, or anything. Stone: A very powerful tribe, they are warlike beings, towering over others, and decimating their oponents with ease. Water: A race of intellegent amphibians, they are not troubled by the war, but will fight when threatened with unflinching courage. Earth: A cowardly tribe, hiding in the shadows, but, the are highly advanced in weaponry, and when out of running space, will unleash their fury open their opponents. Ice: A cold hearted race, they show no mercy on their enemy, and their fighting technics are precise, and devastating. How it all started: In the begining, there was a magical being, powerful enough to contend with Mata Nui. He created a world, with a highly technological society of super beings. He gave them a limited source of magical stones, to be used as power, for their growing empires. But the fire tribe was too greedy, the harvested the rocks, until there was next to nothing leaft. The other tribes to action, they raided the fire tribes city, entering through the mighty walls separating the cities. What they found was a decaying city, rotten corpses hanging from the windows. The party went further in, they were ambushed, by a new race of mad beasts, blood dripping from their bodies, the fire tribe had been sent mad by the awesome power of the rocks. The party was devoured. The magical being turned away in shame, horrified by the chaos. The rest of the tribes fell into panick, the fire beasts were loose and their God had abandoned them. In the confusion many members of each tribes were wiped out. The remaining suply of rocks was destroyed in a epic battle in the giant cortyard between the cities. Now, in a age of stife, each tribe struggling to get enough resourches to last a week, and so raids started on eachother, each tribe attacking at night and stealing the stones. In this stale mate, Mata Nui might be the only chance of survival for this dieing race..... A quick description of the planet. This world is divided into 7 sections, one equally sized portion for each tribe, with a massive courtyards inbetween each city, filled with the corpes of dead comrades. So what do you think? It's a bit sketchy in parts, but still, I think I might try and fill it out to make a little seris. There might be some spelling issues, it took me ages, but my computer keys are old, and don't always respond. Okay, I know i didn't follow the main idea already in this topic, but I really wanted to share my idea with you guys, and i needed to get it into writing. P.S: Hey, is anybody willing to design the cannabels for me? I would like to try and build them, but my model is a bit scrappy, I am hoping someone could fill me out with some prototype drawings for me to create.

That mining base is pretty insane, I love the look of it, I saw it in TRU yesterday, but....yeah, couldn't afford it. Got that Cyrstal King dude instead.....not the best set in the world.

They are really good. Only one thing, I wouldn't have drawn that set, a more complex one would have been more intersting. 10/10 on skill though.

Oh yes please, as soon as you see it, please tell us the appearing characters, though I hope they all get some screen time. EDIT : Or atleast PM me incase other people are looking foward to the surprise.

Those are pretty amazing, the Daleks are much improved. Well done.

Bought him today. Wow, he is a great set, I was lucky though, I was leaving as a dude brought in a whole load of Bionicle restokes, of the new Summer wave, what a bit of luck, I also picked up the small M.N and Ackar.